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April Masini


Request edit — disambiguation of "Masini" per MOS:SAMESURNAME (BLP accuracy issue)

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I am April Masini, the subject of this article, so per WP:COI I am requesting corrections here rather than editing directly.

The problem: This article discusses two different people with the surname Masini — me (the subject) and Al Masini, my former husband, who appears throughout the early part of the article (as co-producer of the 1998 Miss Universe Pageant, in the "Al and April Masini Day" proclamation, and as my former spouse). Despite this, the article refers to me as "Masini" alone in dozens of places.

Why this matters: It violates Wikipedia's own style guideline. MOS:SAMESURNAME provides that when multiple people who share a surname are discussed in an article, they should be referred to by first name or full name to avoid ambiguity. It creates factual misattribution on a biography of a living person. Sentences such as "Masini was the first to use Hawaii's newly passed Act 221" and "producers Masini and Adam Fields" describe work in which Al Masini had no involvement whatsoever. On a page where "Al Masini" appears prominently, "Masini" alone makes my documented, cited work ambiguous — a reader cannot reliably tell which Masini is meant.

An independent scholarly source resolves the ambiguity by first name. A peer-reviewed Duke University Press article states: "…whose production was brokered by April Masini, also behind Baywatch: Hawaii and bringing the Miss Universe pageants to Hawai'i in 1998—Masini made Blue Crush the first film to exploit then-new special tax breaks designed to draw 'high tech' industry [to] Hawai'i." (Environmental Humanities, vol. 16, no. 1, 2024; publisher: Duke University Press; ISSN 2201-1919; hosted at read.dukeupress.edu: https://read.dukeupress.edu/environmental-humanities/article/16/1/19/386273/ — the journal is indexed in DOAJ and SCImago with Duke University Press listed as publisher). This peer-reviewed source attributes the Blue Crush brokering — and the Act 221 first — to April Masini by name, and does not mention Al Masini at all. Suggested citation, should editors wish to add it: "Blue Crush: Cinema, Oceanic Feeling, and Settler Colonialism". Environmental Humanities. 16 (1). Duke University Press. 2024. ISSN 2201-1919. Requested edit: Throughout the article, refer to the subject as "April Masini" (or "April" where repetition is awkward), and to Al Masini as "Al Masini" (or "Al"), consistent with MOS:SAMESURNAME. This is a style-guideline-compliance and accuracy request only; no content or sourcing changes are requested.

One additional error: In the Blue Crush section, the wikilink on "Sylvester" points to Sylvester (singer). The law firm mentioned (Bloom Hergott Diemer) represented Sylvester Stallone, the actor. The link target is incorrect and should point to Sylvester Stallone.

Concretely: where "Masini" alone refers to me, please change "Masini" to "April Masini" (or "April"); where it refers to Al Masini, please change it to "Al Masini" (or "Al"); and please change the wikilink Sylvester (singer) to Sylvester Stallone.

Thank you for your consideration. — April Masini (article subject) AprilMasini (talk) 08:59, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Glen Vella


Edit request: Add official website

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I have a conflict of interest because I am the subject of this biography. I would like to request that the article be updated to include my official website in the infobox (using the | website = parameter) or, if preferred, in the External links section. Official website: GV Studio This is my official professional website and represents my work as a singer, songwriter, vocal coach, and founder of GV Studio. Thank you for your time and consideration. CAMIM045 (talk) 12:36, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Nigel Mason


Suggested addition: COST Action ORIGINS

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I have a professional academic connection with Professor Nigel Mason and would like to suggest the following concise addition for review by uninvolved editors:

Mason served as Short-Term Scientific Mission Coordinator for COST Action TD1308, Origins and evolution of life on Earth and in the Universe (ORIGINS), a European network active from 2014 to 2018.

Source:

  • COST Association, TD1308 ORIGINS official action page.

Angelicairons (talk) 15:50, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Beam search


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I am a co-author of the cited paper, so I am requesting review by an uninvolved editor.

Please add the following paragraph in the “Variants” section, immediately after the paragraph about stochastic beam search and before “Other variants are flexible beam search and recovery beam search”:

Another approach to mitigating local optima is node-wise beam search, which retains up to a fixed number of candidate paths for each graph node rather than retaining the best candidates globally at each search depth. This allows a wider range of regions in the search space to remain under consideration and has been applied to active perception and informative path planning in mobile robotics.[1]

The paper describes standard beam search as retaining the top candidates globally at each depth and introduces node-wise beam search, which instead retains candidates per graph node to mitigate local optima and improve exploration.

Kaixqu (talk) 16:14, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Kaixqu (talk) 16:14, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Navigation mesh


Proposed addition on SE(2) navigation meshes

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I am a co-author of the cited work, so I am requesting review by an uninvolved editor.

Please add the following paragraph at the end of the “Description” section, immediately before “Creation”:

For agents with non-circular footprints, traversability may depend on orientation as well as position. An SE(2) navigation mesh represents traversable regions in heading-dependent layers, allowing path planning over both planar position and orientation.[2]

Kaixqu (talk) 16:15, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Laurence D. Marks

Requested COI edits September 2025

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Include the following text after the sentence that ends "now known as the Marks decahedron.[11][12]"

He has been actively involved in many aspects of electron microscope development,[3] including new methods to solve surface structures[4] as well as using these instruments to discover phenomena such as graphitic materials on hip implants.[5] His interests have more recently involved understanding how static electricity is generated by rubbing, the triboelectric effect.[6]

References

  1. ↑ Qu, Kaixian; Wang, Han; Klemm, Victor; Cadena, Cesar; Hutter, Marco (2026). "An efficient beam search algorithm for active perception in mobile robotics". The International Journal of Robotics Research. doi:10.1177/02783649261455911.
  2. ↑ Shi, Shuyang; Qu, Kaixian; Chen, Changan; Kast, Ines; Ma, Yuntao; Hutter, Marco (2026). "SE(2) Navigation Mesh". arXiv:2607.01454 [cs.RO].
  3. ↑ Jacoby, Mitch (2008-06-23). "Electron Microscopy For Chemists". Chemical & Engineering News. Retrieved 2025-09-22.
  4. ↑ Diebold, Ulrike (March 2010). "Surface science goes inorganic". Nature Materials. 9 (3): 185–187. doi:10.1038/nmat2708. ISSN 1476-4660.
  5. ↑ Drahl, Carmen (2012-01-02). "Carbon Layer Lubricates All-Metal Hips". Chemical & Engineering News. Retrieved 2025-09-22.
  6. ↑ Fox, Alen (2019-09-12). "The secret of static electricity? It's shocking". Science Magazine. Retrieved 2025-09-22.

Explanation I am not a fan of academic BLPs that have lengthy descriptions (often peacock) of how wonderful someone's research has been. That said, the current BLP is, IMHO, too limited and the current two sentences imply that is all that I ever did. The two additional sentences here (with 4 truly secondary sources that are NPOV, not peacock) I think give an idea of breadth without becoming puffery. Ldm1954 (talk) 20:03, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

 Done as requested. Jähmefyysikko (talk) 04:00, 23 September 2025 (UTC)


Request edit on 11 January 2026

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  • What I think should be changed: Revision of a blatant attack by an IP because their page was declined, see [[User Talk:Ldm1954#Rejection of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Matt_Kalinsk]]. Page may need minir protection
  • Why it should be changed: Vandalism. I am invoking my right to revert vandalism.
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): Standard reversion of vandalism


Ldm1954 (talk) 16:14, 11 January 2026 (UTC)

Courtesy ping of prior editors @Jähmefyysikko, @Russ Woodroofe, @Rublamb abd @StarryGrandma to revert attack (just a few of those responsible for creating the page). It is somewhat blatant, and the IP is eager to edit war. I have been expecting someone to vandalism the page sometime, and have requested protection. Ldm1954 (talk) 16:24, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
N.B., the page I mentioned on Matt Kalinski is my best guess as to the source for the attack, but may not be correct; which does not matter much with an IP. Ldm1954 (talk) 16:34, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
Looks like the problem has already been fixed. Feel free to let me know of future issues. Rublamb (talk) 16:39, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
@Jähmefyysikko, @Russ Woodroofe, @Rublamb abd @StarryGrandma
Read the edit reasons. They are 100% legitimate. If you undo them you are in violation of the terms of service and have been reported. Your account may be banned. Read the edit log summaries very carefully as they explain all the reasons behind the changes. Here are a few in plain English since you are having trouble understanding the Wikipedia terminologies like PROMO etc. For one, your url was broken to a link which you used as a citation. This seems like you’re trying to make up promotional material for yourself that has no backing. Secondly, you clearly say on your own page that you are yourself the person whose page you made. This is clear COI violation and therefore you MUST retain the COI and autobiography tags added to your profile. This is to ensure the safety of the readers that they know you wrote this page about yourself and have a conflict of interest with the info provided. ~2026-23025-0 (talk) 16:56, 11 January 2026 (UTC)

References

This has apparently been addressed, and it's not an edit request anymore. Clearing the queue. STEMinfo (talk) 07:07, 2 March 2026 (UTC)


Edit request

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Please add K. Sujata to the infobox as my wife, and include the below, probably in a one sentence Personal life section:

He is married to the K. Sujata.[1][2]

Note: Facebook is a viable source if it is used to verify facts. While my name is mentioned in the WSJ article, the facebook image is more definitive.

References

Ldm1954 (talk) 14:05, 7 April 2026 (UTC)

Not done: Adding your wife is simply not necessary, unless she is notable. Facebook is not an appropriate source for personal details. MediaKyle (talk) 15:06, 4 May 2026 (UTC)


Edit request

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  1. Please add Category:Microscopists & Category:American materials scientists. The first is evident in the existing text and being a MSA Fellow; the second as I have been an MSE faculty since 1985 as sourced in the current article.
  2. Please add the two sentences (probably at the end of career)

He was chair of the IUCr Commission on Electron Crystallography for two terms from 2005-2010.[1] This involved helping to promote electron crystallography internationally via symposia and workshops.[2]

Ldm1954 (talk) 17:47, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. ↑ "Commission on Electron Crystallography". www.iucr.org. pp. See the annual reports for those years. Retrieved 2026-07-12.
  2. ↑ "IUCr - Commission on Electron Crystallography". www.numis.northwestern.edu. Archived from the original on 2012-05-09. Retrieved 2026-07-13.

Nina Lath Gupta


Conflict of Interest edit request — removal of defamatory unsourced content (BLP violation)

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  • What should be changed:

1. Remove the sentence "In 2025 Supreme Court of India fine her of 10lakh and sentenced her for 1 year." — this is entirely fabricated. 2. Remove the sentence "Cinevesture failed and now she is thinking to launch something new." — this is unsourced and false. 3. Change "NDFC" to "NFDC" in all instances (correct name is National Film Development Corporation). 4. Change "Dehli Hight Court" to "Delhi High Court" (spelling correction).

  • Why it should be changed:

I am the subject of this article. Items 1 and 2 are fabricated, unsourced, and defamatory, in violation of WP:BLP. No Supreme Court order imposing a fine or sentence exists. The only relevant orders are SLP(C) No. 16902/2024 (12 August 2024) and Review Petition (C) No. 1822/2024 (17 October 2024), both of which dismissed the Union of India's appeal. These orders are already cited in the article. Items 3 and 4 are factual corrections. The defamatory edits were added on 14 May 2026 by temporary account ~2026-28903-36.

  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

SLP(C) No. 16902/2024 — Supreme Court Order, 12 August 2024 Review Petition (C) No. 1822/2024 — Supreme Court Order, 17 October 2024

~2026-39243-31 (talk) 18:11, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

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The Roads


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I run The Roads Report, so I have a conflict of interest and do not want to make this edit directly.

Would an independent editor be willing to review whether the site is appropriate for the External links section?

  • The Roads Report – Monthly reports on home sales, listings, and inventory in The Roads.

I also noticed that the article does not include much information about the neighborhood’s housing or real estate market. It may be worth adding a short, neutral section if reliable independent sources can be found.

I understand that my own site may not be sufficient as a source, so I am leaving this for other editors to evaluate.

Maxcufari (talk) 01:50, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

 Not done This site is not compatible with the guidance on external links normally to be avoided. Donald Albury 14:03, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Bashas'


Employee COI edit request: ownership and outdated information

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I am employed by Bashas', but I am making this request in my personal capacity and not on behalf of the company. Because of my employment connection, I am requesting that uninvolved editors review and make any appropriate changes.

Several parts of the article appear outdated, contradictory or insufficiently cited.

1. Ownership and parent company

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The article currently says that Bashas' is owned by the Raley family “via Raley's Supermarkets.” This does not clearly describe the current company structure.

Raley's completed its acquisition of the Bashas' Company in December 2021. Bashas' then became an operating company within the newly formed parent organization called The Raley's Companies. The official announcement says The Raley's Companies was created to support its operating companies, including Raley's and Bashas'.

Suggested lead wording:

Since December 2021, Bashas' has operated as part of The Raley's Companies, which acquired the Bashas' Company that year.

Suggested infobox change:

| type = Subsidiary
| parent = [[Raley's Supermarkets|The Raley's Companies]] (2021–present)

I suggest removing the current `owner` entry:

| owner = Basha family (1932–2021)<br>Raley family via [[Raley's Supermarkets]] (2021–present)

The Basha family's historical ownership can remain explained in the History section.

Sources:

[1]

[2]

2. Number of locations

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The infobox currently says:

118 total (Bashas' 55; Food City 48; AJ's Fine Foods 11; Bashas' Diné Market 8)

However, those individual numbers total 122 rather than 118. The Overview also says the company operates more than 130 stores.

Progressive Grocer reported in May 2025 that Bashas' operated 112 stores in Arizona and the Navajo Nation in New Mexico.

Suggested infobox wording:

| num_locations = 112<ref>{{cite news
 |no-tracking=true|last=Acosta
 |first=Gina
 |title=Bashas' Family of Stores Boasts Aisles of Authenticity
 |url=https://progressivegrocer.com/bashas-family-stores-boasts-aisles-authenticity
 |work=Progressive Grocer
 |date=May 19, 2025
 |access-date=July 12, 2026
}}</ref>
| num_locations_year = 2025

The unsupported breakdown by individual store banner should be removed unless a reliable source can be found for each number. The “more than 130 stores” statement in the Overview should also be updated or removed.

3. Headquarters and support center

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The citation currently used for the Chandler headquarters statement is an old Census Bureau page describing the City of Chandler. It does not establish Bashas' headquarters or office location.

The City of Chandler reported that the Bashas' administrative and operations Support Center moved from South Basha Road to 2650 W. Geronimo Place in Chandler in spring 2023.

Suggested wording:

Bashas' is based in Chandler, Arizona. Its Support Center, which serves as a hub for merchandising and operations, moved to West Geronimo Place in Chandler in 2023.

Suggested citation:

[3]

4. Leadership statement

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The History section currently says that Eddie Basha III “is now” the CEO. The wording “is now” is outdated and presents an old position as current.

Supermarket News reported that Steve Mayer succeeded Edward “Trey” Basha III as president of the Bashas' Family of Stores in June 2023.

Suggested historical wording:

In June 2023, Steve Mayer succeeded Edward “Trey” Basha III as president of the Bashas' Family of Stores.

Suggested citation:

[4]

This wording records the dated leadership change without using “now” or making an unsupported claim about future leadership.

5. Employee total

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The infobox lists 9,085 employees using an old bare AZCentral link, while the Overview says approximately 8,500 employees.

The December 2021 acquisition announcement described Bashas' as having nearly 9,000 team members. Because this is a dated figure, the current exact number of 9,085 should either be removed or replaced with a clearly dated figure.

Possible infobox wording:

| num_employees = Nearly 9,000
| num_employees_year = 2021

The December 2021 acquisition sources listed above support this dated figure. If an editor considers a 2021 figure too old, it may be better to leave the employee field out until a newer published figure is available.

6. Bankruptcy history

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The paragraph about Bashas' filing for Chapter 11, closing stores and emerging from bankruptcy does not currently have adequate inline citations.

KJZZ reported that Bashas' filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in 2009, closed ten Bashas' and Food City locations and emerged from bankruptcy in late 2010. Arizona PBS reported that its reorganization plan called for repaying its debts in full.

Suggested simplified wording:

Bashas' filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in July 2009. The company closed ten Bashas' and Food City locations before emerging from bankruptcy in late 2010. Its reorganization plan called for repaying its creditors in full.

Suggested citations:

[5]

[6]

7. Website formatting

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The infobox currently uses an old manually formatted HTTP link:

| website = [http://bashas.com/ bashas.com]

Suggested replacement:

| website = {{URL|https://www.bashas.com}}

8. Additional sourcing cleanup

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The following material also appears to need citations, rewriting or removal:

  • the detailed distribution-center measurements, temperatures and equipment;
  • statements about current union status;
  • the slogans listed for Bashas' and AJ's Fine Foods;
  • promotional-sounding descriptions of AJ's prepared foods, wine department and bakery;
  • Food City's acquisition history and store conversions;
  • lists of the banners' current competitors;
  • other paragraphs in the store-nameplates section that contain no inline citations.

I suggest removing promotional or minor slogan material when it does not add encyclopedic value. Historical or operational claims should be retained only when supported by reliable published sources.

After these corrections and the remaining uncited sections have been reviewed, an uninvolved editor can determine whether the article-wide `

` template is still necessary.

Thank you.

Korey600 (talk) 04:47, 13 July 2026 (UTC) Korey600 (talk) 04:47, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Florat


Privacy request from the subject

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Hello, I am Florat Qerimi, the subject of this article. I am not requesting the deletion of the article. My public career as an artist, rapper, producer and co-founder of MRM may remain. However, I object to the publication of unnecessary private information and request the following changes under Wikipedia’s Biographies of Living Persons privacy policy: Remove my exact date of birth from the infobox and introduction. If a birth year is considered necessary, please state only “born 1997”. Remove my exact place of birth, “Muri, Aargau, Switzerland”. Remove the “Early life” paragraph containing details about my grandfather, my family’s migration history, the neighbourhood where I grew up, football and martial arts. Remove details about the location of the basement recording studio and nearby apartment buildings. Keep only information directly relevant to my public music career, releases, performances and MRM. Suggested introduction: “Florat Qerimi, known professionally as Florat, is a Swiss-Albanian rapper and producer. He is the co-founder of the hip-hop group and record label MRM.” I am specifically objecting to the publication of my full date of birth and detailed private and family information. Wikipedia’s BLP privacy policy states that when a subject complains about the inclusion of their date of birth, editors should err on the side of caution and list only the year. Thank you. ~2026-39538-71 (talk) 06:39, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Bremelanotide


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Could an uninvolved editor please review whether the following link would be appropriate for an “Other sources” or “External links” section in this article, if such a section is considered suitable under WP:EL and WP:ELNO?

Proposed link:

  • Peptides.io PT-141 guide – plain-language overview of PT-141/bremelanotide, including general background, mechanism, FDA-approved use context, off-label-use disclaimer, and safety notes

I am asking here rather than adding it directly because bremelanotide is a medical/pharmacology topic, and I want to avoid adding anything that editors may consider promotional, non-neutral, or unsuitable as an external link. If editors feel this link is not appropriate for the article, I am fine with leaving it out.

For transparency, I am connected to Peptides.io, so I am requesting review by uninvolved editors rather than making the article edit myself, in line with WP:COI.

Andrei25luks (talk) 08:15, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Not appropriate. That is a commercial website. Constant314 (talk) 20:02, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Ian Macpherson, 3rd Baron Strathcarron


Edit request from article subject

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I am the subject of this article. Please add the following entry to the "Media works" section:

  • Andrea Moda Formula: The Legend of the Formula One Team Too Bad to Be True. Histria Books, 2026. ISBN 978-1-59211-814-4.[7]

This is a routine bibliography addition, verified by the publisher's listing above. Thank you. Strathogram (talk) 08:48, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Ballet Ireland


Updating the Wiki page for Ballet Ireland COI edit request: update leadership titles and add sourced production history

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Hello, I am the Marketing & Communications Manager at Ballet Ireland (disclosure on my user page per WP:PAID). The article has not been substantively updated since early 2021, so I am proposing the following changes with independent sourcing wherever possible. I'm happy to adjust anything reviewers feel is promotional in tone. Request 1 — Correct leadership titles in the infobox and body Change "Director: Anne Maher" to "Artistic Director: Anne Maher" and "Company manager: Martin Lindinger" to "General Manager: Martin Lindinger", reflecting current titles.[8][9] Request 2 — Add production history: Morgann Runacre-Temple residency Proposed addition to the repertoire/history section: British choreographer Morgann Runacre-Temple was choreographer-in-residence at Ballet Ireland from 2009 to 2015, creating five full-length ballets for the company, including Cinderella, Romeo and Juliet and Carmen.[10][11] Her Romeo and Juliet, which premiered in 2010 and relocated the story to a modern-day secondary school as a play within a play, was described by The Irish Times as the company's "finest full-length production to date".[12] The production was restaged for a national tour in 2012.[13] Runacre-Temple has since created works for companies including Scottish Ballet, Stuttgart Ballet and English National Ballet, and her Coppélia for Scottish Ballet won Best Classical Choreography at the 2023 Critics' Circle National Dance Awards.[14] Request 3 — Add the 2021 reimagined Nutcracker Proposed addition: In 2021, Ballet Ireland commissioned Runacre-Temple to create a new one-act, Irish-themed version of The Nutcracker, with a Tchaikovsky-based score arranged by composer Tom Lane.[15] Request 4 — Structure (optional, at reviewer's discretion) The article is currently a single block of text. If a reviewing editor agrees, the existing content plus the additions above could be organised under "History", "Productions" and "Education and outreach" headings. I defer entirely to editors on this. Thank you for reviewing. I can supply further independent sources on request. AGdiPierro (talk) 08:18, 4 July 2026 (UTC) AGdiPierro (talk) 08:18, 4 July 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. ↑ "Raley's Completes Purchase of the Bashas' Company". The Raley's Companies. December 15, 2021. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  2. ↑ Browne, Michael (December 15, 2021). "Raley's completes purchase of The Bashas' Company". Supermarket News. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  3. ↑ "The Raley's Companies establishes new support center in Chandler". City of Chandler. December 15, 2022. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  4. ↑ Rajagopal, Alarice (June 16, 2023). "Bashas' names Steve Mayer as president". Supermarket News. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  5. ↑ Goldstein, Steve (July 9, 2019). "How Bashas' Supermarkets Bounced Back From Bankruptcy". KJZZ. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  6. ↑ "Bashas' Emergence from Bankruptcy". Arizona PBS. September 7, 2010. Retrieved July 12, 2026.
  7. ↑ "Andrea Moda Formula". Simon & Schuster. Retrieved 5 July 2026.
  8. ↑ "DDP Talks To... Anne Maher, Artistic Director of Ballet Ireland". Dance Data Project. 30 June 2021. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  9. ↑ "Our People". Ballet Ireland. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  10. ↑ "DDP Talks To... Morgann Runacre-Temple". Dance Data Project. 26 January 2021. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  11. ↑ "About". Morgann Runacre-Temple (official site). Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  12. ↑ Taylor-Seaver, Christie (22 October 2010). "Romeo and Juliet". The Irish Times. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  13. ↑ "Romeo and Juliet". entertainment.ie. May 2012. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  14. ↑ "Morgann Runacre-Temple". Opéra national de Paris. Retrieved 4 July 2026.
  15. ↑ "DDP Talks To... Anne Maher, Artistic Director of Ballet Ireland". Dance Data Project. 30 June 2021. Retrieved 4 July 2026.

Reply 4-JUL-2026

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Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the numbered notes within the edit request review section below for additional information on each request.

Regards,  Spintendo  11:33, 4 July 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the review and for implementing the approved changes — much appreciated, and the reasoning on the declined item is understood. Re. note 2: Understood on the template limitation. As an alternative, would a sentence in the article body be acceptable? Proposed: "Martin Lindinger is the company's general manager."[1] Re. note 4: Happy to clarify — the production was staged and has been revived since. Proposed revised text: In 2021, Ballet Ireland premiered Nutcracker Sweeties, a one-act production of The Nutcracker choreographed by Runacre-Temple, with a reimagined Tchaikovsky score featuring additional music and sound design by Tom Lane.[2][3] The production returned in an extended version in 2022[4] and toured nationally to 11 venues in 2024.[5] Thank you again for your time. AGdiPierro (talk) 14:59, 6 July 2026 (UTC) AGdiPierro (talk) 14:59, 6 July 2026 (UTC)
== COI edit request: correct Arts Council funding date range == Hello again — one further correction, with thanks for the previous reviews. The article currently states: "[PASTE THE EXACT SENTENCE FROM THE LIVE ARTICLE]". This implies Arts Council funding ended in 2003; in fact the company has been funded annually since 1999 and remains funded today. Proposed replacement: "The company has received annual funding from the Arts Council of Ireland since 1999,[6] and as of [YEAR] is funded under the Council's Strategic Funding programme.[7]" A 2013 report also documents funding during the intervening period: the Arts Council awarded Ballet Ireland €240,000 in annual funding for the period to March 2014.[8] This mid-period source may be included or omitted at the reviewer's discretion. Thank you. AGdiPierro (talk) 09:41, 13 July 2026 (UTC) AGdiPierro (talk) 09:41, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Murex (financial software)


Request to add new lines to History section - paid Suggestion

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  • Addition to the History section, based on Murex's work with European clients:

In 2021, Murex worked with organizations in Europe including Électricité de France, the French producer and supplier of energy, and Italian international bank Intesa Sanpaolo to develop CI/CD methodologies internally and deliver essential technology upgrades.

  • These edits reflect the latest partnerships between Murex and its customers:
  • References: [9][10]:


  • Addition to the History section, based on Murex's work with clients in the Middle East:

Murex supported clients in the Middle East in 2021 with their digital transformation plans, automating treasury systems at Gulf Bank of Kuwait and rolling out MX.3 at National Bank of Kuwait's Treasury Group.:

  • These edits reflect the latest partnerships between Murex and its customers:
  • References[11][12]:

LP603 (talk) 10:02, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Hello Wikipedia editors! I would like to ask if anyone is able to review these suggested edits and help me to update the page? Many thanks for all your help! LP603 (talk) 11:48, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

References

  1. ↑ "Our People". Ballet Ireland. Retrieved 6 July 2026.
  2. ↑ "DDP Talks To... Anne Maher, Artistic Director of Ballet Ireland". Dance Data Project. 30 June 2021. Retrieved 6 July 2026.
  3. ↑ "Nutcracker Sweeties". Ballet Ireland. Retrieved 6 July 2026.
  4. ↑ "'Nutcracker Sweeties' returns – a contemporary twist to a Christmas classic". Dublin Gazette. 22 November 2022. Retrieved 6 July 2026.
  5. ↑ "Ballet Ireland's Nutcracker Sweeties: experience the magic of world-class ballet this Christmas". Hot Press. 31 October 2024. Retrieved 6 July 2026.
  6. ↑ [EXISTING 1999 CITATION ALREADY IN THE ARTICLE, IF ONE IS ATTACHED TO THE CURRENT SENTENCE]
  7. ↑ [[LINK TO REPORT PDF] "Arts Council Annual Report [YEAR]"]. The Arts Council / An Chomhairle Ealaíon. p. [PAGE NUMBER OF FUNDING SCHEDULE LISTING BALLET IRELAND]. Retrieved 13 July 2026. {{cite web}}: Check |url= value (help)
  8. ↑ "Arts Council funding of €491,000 announced". Meath Chronicle. 12 March 2013. Retrieved 13 July 2026.
  9. ↑ Lomax, Jenna. "Murex launches new version of MX.3 for energy supplier EDF". Asset Servicing Times. Retrieved 30 November 2021.
  10. ↑ Bhattacharya, Megha. "Murex and Intesa Sanpaolo team up to further DevOps strategy". IBS Intelligence. Retrieved 30 November 2021.
  11. ↑ Monteiro, Leandra. "Gulf Bank launches Treasury Management System with Murex". IBS Intelligence. Retrieved 30 November 2021.
  12. ↑ "NBK Officially Launches the New MX.3 Solution for its Treasury and Investments Operations". Bobsguide. Retrieved 30 November 2021.
 Not done: As with existing content on this article, the proposed edits are run into WP:NOT's principle that articles are to avoid listing things such as business alliances, clients, competitors, employees (except CEOs, supervisory directors and similar top functionaries) unless those details are clearly noteworthy based on coverage in independent, reliable sources. Nothing above presented suggests that every deployment and development of Murex's platform should be included. The IBS Times sources almost invariably read like straight press release copy; they are intensely promotional and filled with corporate jargon. Bobsguide, as far as I can tell, is simply a feed of Murex press releases as well. WhinyTheYounger (WtY)(talk, contribs) 18:07, 26 March 2022 (UTC)


Request: Rewrite of "Murex (financial software)" article

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Murexrepresentative (talk) 10:59, 1 July 2026 (UTC)

Murexrepresentative (talk) 10:20, 1 July 2026 (UTC)


Reply 3-JUL-2026

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  Edit request declined  

  • LinkedIn is amongst the references. (See WP:LINKEDIN.)

Regards,  Spintendo  13:45, 3 July 2026 (UTC)

Hi,
Thanks for the review. If the article simply left out the LinkedIn ranking, which is established by that company, not Murex, would the rewritten entry I provided above be acceptable, and if so, would please execute the rewrite of the article?
Regards,
Max Murexrepresentative (talk) 13:57, 3 July 2026 (UTC)


Rewrite of "Murex (financial software)" article (LinkedIn reference removed as per instruction)

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  • What I think should be changed (include citations):

(I am a paid contributor (a Murex employee) and propose the below major edit to the Wikipedia article on Murex, which would replace the current article on the page to eliminate promotional content and create a neutral, nonbiased entry and to have the tags currently on the article removed, should an editor agree that the promotional content has been successfully edited out.)

Murex is a financial services technology company and market infrastructure provider that provides enterprise-wide, cross-asset capital markets financial technology solutions. Its cross-function platform, MX.3, supports trading, treasury, risk management and post-trade operations.[1] [2]

Murex’s CEO is Elias Eddé. Its executive chairman is Maroun Eddé.[3] It was co-founded founded by Salim Eddé and Laurent Neel.[4]

MX.3, its integrated platform, is used by banks, asset managers, insurance companies, pension funds, hedge funds, corporations, energy utilities and commodities houses in over 65 countries.[5] For more than a decade, Murex has invested over EUR 100 million a year in the development of MX.3.[6]

Murex was founded in 1986 in Paris and is a private company. Murex currently employs over 3,400 worldwide.[7]

Its main office is in Paris. It has 20 global offices in cities such as Beirut, Dublin, Hong Kong, New York, London, Singapore and Sydney.[8]

  • Why it should be changed: (As currently written, the Murex Wikipedia article has multiple issues. Editors have flagged that it has promotional content and requires a cleanup. I am a Murex employee and paid contributor and have developed this neutral text backed by third-party sources that describes the company accurately and excludes partnership information. I think the draft text below should replace the existing text of the article. I have removed a reference to a LinkedIn ranking that the editor Spintendo flagged on my previous rewrite request, submitted on July 3. Thanks for your consideration.)


Murexrepresentative (talk) 11:07, 6 July 2026 (UTC)

References

Reply 12-JUL-2026

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  Unable to review  

  • Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly. The citation style predominantly used by the Murex article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's.[a] Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.) In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:
  • Kindly resubmit the edit request below at your earliest convenience, taking care to ensure that it makes use of CS1. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor.

Regards,  Spintendo  01:58, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Thanks for this guidance. I have submitted a rewrite request that takes this into perspective. Murexrepresentative (talk) 10:26, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

Notes

  1. ↑ The use of bare URLs as references is a style which is acceptable for use in Wikipedia. However, general practice dictates that the style already in use for an article be the one that is subsequently used for all future additions unless changed by editorial consensus.[1]

References

  1. ↑ "WP:CITEVAR - Wikipedia:Citing sources". Wikipedia. 20 October 2018. Retrieved 22 October 2018. Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.


Request: Rewrite of "Murex (financial software)" article

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(I am a paid contributor (a Murex employee) and propose the below major edit to the Wikipedia article on Murex, which would replace the current article on the page to eliminate promotional content and create a neutral, nonbiased entry and to have the tags currently on the article removed, should an editor agree that the promotional content has been successfully edited out.)


  • What I think should be changed (include citations):

Murex is a financial services technology company and market infrastructure provider that provides enterprise-wide, cross-asset capital markets financial technology solutions. Its cross-function platform, MX.3, supports trading, treasury, risk management and post-trade operations.[1] [2]

Murex’s CEO is Elias Eddé. Its executive chairman is Maroun Eddé.[3] [4] It was co-founded founded by Salim Eddé and Laurent Neel.[5]

MX.3, its integrated platform, is used by banks, asset managers, insurance companies, pension funds, hedge funds, corporations, energy utilities and commodities houses in over 65 countries.[6] For more than a decade, Murex has invested over EUR 100 million a year in the development of MX.3.[7]

Murex was founded in 1986 in Paris and is a private company. Murex currently employs over 3,000 worldwide.[8]

Its main office is in Paris. It has 20 global offices in cities such as Beirut, Dublin, Hong Kong, New York, London, Singapore and Sydney.[9]

  • Why it should be changed:

(As currently written, the Murex Wikipedia article has multiple issues. Editors have flagged that it has promotional content and requires a cleanup. I am a Murex employee and paid contributor and have developed this neutral text backed by third-party sources that describes the company accurately and excludes partnership information. I think the draft text below should replace the existing text of the article. I have removed a reference to a LinkedIn ranking that the editor Spintendo flagged on my previous rewrite request, submitted on July 3. Additionally, I have reworked and reformatted citations to match citation style previously used in the article. Thanks for your consideration (and to Spintendo for the continued guidance).)

Murexrepresentative (talk) 10:25, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

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Bryan Johnson


COI edit request

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Below are some COI edit requests that should improve the accuracy of Bryan's page.

1. Infobox photo

The infobox image is dated (2021), but more importantly you cannot see the top half of Bryan's head. Therefore the image isn't an accurate representation. I have uploaded the image below to Wikimedia commons, please replace the existing image with the one below.


2. Career section update

There is no detail about Blueprint in his career, which is now his main venture and has been for a number of years. Below is a suggested subsection to go under career after Kernel.

Blueprint

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On October 13, 2021, Johnson announced an anti-aging attempt called Project Blueprint, which subsequently became the basis for a commercial company headquartered in Los Angeles.[1][2] Johnson has stated the aims of the company are to reduce the biological age of his organs to that of an 18-year-old and "make death an option."[3] Blueprint sells consumer health products including supplements and foods derived from Johnson's personal optimization protocol.[4][5] This includes supplements such as spermidine, which has been linked in research to longevity-related outcomes.[6] The protocol that Johnson follows as the test subject cost approximately $2 million a year in 2023, and was tracking over 100 health measurements.[2] He has since reduced his daily supplement intake from 111 to 30 by March 2026.[7]

In 2024, Blueprint Basics was launched as a subscription for consumers by Blueprint, costing $333 a month.[3] In October, Blueprint raised $60 million in external funding from a group of investors that included Kim Kardashian and Cameron & Tyler Winklevoss.[8][9] In July 2025, Gyre Renwick was appointed as the CEO of Blueprint, having formerly served as president of Modern Health.[10] Johnson would continue to lead product and protocol development.[10]

3. Minor grammatical change

The first sentence in 2. above has been relocated from "anti-aging attempts" as it is a Blueprint-related fact. Therefore replace the opening sentence of anti-aging:

On October 13, 2021, Johnson announced an anti-aging attempt called "Project Blueprint."[1]

With

In 2023,

4. Reference improvement

Below are 3 suggested changes that improve the reliability of the references.

4a. Technori blog about Braintree to be replaced with existing WSJ reference
Replace: [11] With: [12]

4b. Remove doejo blog as story already covered by the USA Today reference in same sentence.
Delete: [13]

4c. Replace Pando Daily ref with USA Today
Replace: [14] With: [15]

References

  1. 1 2 Brockes, Emma (May 25, 2023). "What's the use of $800m, Bryan Johnson, if you dine on baby food?". The Guardian. Guardian News & Media Limited. Archived from the original on August 22, 2023. Retrieved August 18, 2023.
  2. 1 2 Vance, Ashlee (January 25, 2023). "How to Be 18 Years Old Again for Only $2 Million a Year". Bloomberg. Bloomberg. Archived from the original on July 24, 2023. Retrieved August 18, 2023.
  3. 1 2 Pringle, Eleanor (February 17, 2024). "Bryan Johnson, the tech founder spending millions to be 18 again, says his goal is to make death optional". Fortune (magazine).
  4. ↑ Beam, Christopher (January 17, 2024). "The Meme King of Longevity Now Wants to Sell You Olive Oil". New York Times.
  5. ↑ Salemann, Miska (January 21, 2026). "Science or snake oil? I tested Bryan Johnson's Blueprint Longevity Mix". NY Post.
  6. ↑ Peel, Michael (October 16, 2025). "How one supplement sums up the uneasy science of selling youth". Financial Times.
  7. ↑ O'Brien, Sarah Ashley (March 18, 2026). "Supplement 'Stacks' Are a Wellness Status Symbol. Are They Safe". Wall Street Journal.
  8. ↑ Mosbergen, Dominique (January 5, 2026). "Bryan Johnson Has Spent Millions Trying Not to Die. His Best Longevity Tip Is Free". Time (magazine).
  9. ↑ Vedantam, Keerthi (November 17, 2025). "Blueprint Nabs $60 Million in Angel Funding". Los Angeles Business Journal.
  10. 1 2 Pringle, Eleanor (July 24, 2025). "Bryan Johnson is hiring a CEO for his company, Blueprint, so he can focus on living forever". Fortune (magazine).
  11. ↑ Kravitz, Seth (December 19, 2010). "How Bryan Johnson has Taken Braintree to Explosive Growth in Three Years". Technori. Archived from the original on September 18, 2016. Retrieved September 2, 2014.
  12. ↑ Mims, Christopher (October 20, 2014). "Humanity's Last Great Hope: Venture Capitalists". Wall Street Journal. Archived from the original on March 10, 2019. Retrieved March 13, 2017.
  13. ↑ "Founder Stories at 1871: Braintree's Bryan Johnson". Doejo. July 12, 2012. Archived from the original on June 13, 2023. Retrieved November 13, 2014.
  14. ↑ Deamicis, Carmel (September 20, 2013). "Mobile payments are one-third of Braintree's business". Pando Daily. Archived from the original on April 15, 2015. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
  15. ↑ Barr, Alistair (September 26, 2013). "PayPal agrees to acquire Braintree for $800 million". USA Today. Archived from the original on June 13, 2023. Retrieved May 3, 2015.

Thank you for taking the time to consider these suggested improvements. ScirioMC (talk) 14:14, 15 May 2026 (UTC)

 Done: Applied the proposed changes, definitely double check if everything was done right. WanderingMorpheme 20:06, 16 May 2026 (UTC)
Thanks for the quick reply ScirioMC (talk) 11:35, 10 June 2026 (UTC)


June 2026 COI edit request

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Hello again, further to my edit request on the Blueprint section, I've now attached an updated version of the Kernel section. This aims to improve grammar and increase reference density (every sentence now referenced). The section also abruptly ends circa 2020, without really stating what the company does, so I've attempted to rectify that.

Additionally, I have continued to look at the references elsewhere in the article and try to find suggestions to improve small blogs with major tier 1 coverage under 2.

Thanks again for taking the time to review. ScirioMC (talk) 11:40, 10 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 21-JUN-2026

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  Edit request declined  

  • The topic of the article is Bryan Johnson, not Kemel. (See WP:REDUNDANTFORK.)
  • The directions for replacing references did not give the full sentences where the references reside, making locating them difficult.

Regards,  Spintendo  13:01, 21 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for your reply Spintendo, I have tried to minimize direct mentions of the business and instead focus on Johnson's personal involvement, such as trials or financing. If you get chance you can see the itemized suggestions below in another request. Also thanks for taking the time to review this request and your feedback.ScirioMC (talk) 11:07, 24 June 2026 (UTC)


Kernel section COI edit request

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Following the last edit request, I have scaled back the last request and itemized each change within the Kernel section and explained the reasoning.

Thanks for taking the time to review this updated request.ScirioMC (talk) 11:07, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 1-JUL-2026

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✅  Edit request partially implemented  

  • Red X The lead section mentions what Kernel was originally doing, so the "shifted focus" line shouldn't confuse our more adept readers.
  • Green tick The sentence about Kernel financing was deleted.
  • Red X The additional sentences about Kernel were not added, for the reasons I mentioned in the last review.

Regards,  Spintendo  00:32, 2 July 2026 (UTC)


Anti-aging COI edit request

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Thanks for taking the time to review this edit request. The four suggestions below all relate to the Anti-aging section.

1. When/why he started

New content: In 2019, Johnson stated he had for years maintained health-compromising habits, due to the demands of entrepreneurship and as a young father.[1] He started improving his well-being through standard health interventions before shifting toward anti-aging experimentation in 2021.[2]

2. Plasma correction - not the entire story, it was tri-generational

Replace: In 2023, Johnson underwent a series of six monthly 1-liter plasma transfusions with his son as the donor for one of the transfusions, but he says he will not repeat the transfusions due to lack of benefits.[3][4]

With: In 2023, Johnson underwent a series of six monthly 1-liter plasma transfusions.[3] One transfusion was tri-generational with his 17 year old son serving as the donor for Johnson, then Johnson was himself donor for his father.[4] He says he will not repeat the transfusions due to lack of benefits.[3]

3. Biomarker data and competing -

New content: Since 2023, Johnson has publicly shared his biomarker data and engaged in competitive biohacking against other people.[5][6]

4. Measurement -

New content: In 2025, Johnson recorded a DunedinPACE speed of aging score at 0.503 per calendar year.[7]

References

  1. ↑ Hosie, Rachel (August 8, 2023). "Tech exec Bryan Johnson went from having a 'destroyed' body to spending $2 million a year on reversing his age". Business Insider.
  2. ↑ Brockes, Emma (May 25, 2023). "What's the use of $800m, Bryan Johnson, if you dine on baby food?". The Guardian. Guardian News & Media Limited. Archived from the original on August 22, 2023. Retrieved August 18, 2023.
  3. 1 2 3 Prater, Erin (July 13, 2023). "Tech CEO defends using his 17-year-old son's blood plasma in pursuit of youth, despite it not working". Fortune Well. Archived from the original on October 21, 2023. Retrieved September 6, 2023.
  4. 1 2 Mikhail, Alexa (July 8, 2023). "Tech CEO Bryan Johnson admits he saw 'no benefits' after controversially injecting his son's plasma into his body to reverse his biological age". Fortune Well. Archived from the original on August 25, 2023. Retrieved September 2, 2023.
  5. ↑ "I'm ageing better than millionaire biohackers. This is my secret". The Times. July 10, 2024.
  6. ↑ Janin, Alex (July 10, 2024). "Outliving Your Peers Is Now a Competitive Sport". Wall Street Journal.
  7. ↑ Friend, Tad. "How to Live Forever and Get Rich Doing It". The New Yorker.

Thanks for taking the time to review this request.ScirioMC (talk) 10:41, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

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