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Proposed revised article text

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Richard Florizone (born 1967) is a Canadian physicist, academic leader, and policy advisor. He served as President of Dalhousie University from 2013 to 2018 and as President and Chief Executive Officer of the International Institute for Sustainable Development (IISD) from 2020 to 2023.[1][2] He is Special Advisor to the President and Provost on Global Futures at the University of Waterloo.[3]

Early life and education

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Florizone was born in 1967 in Prince Albert, Saskatchewan. He attended the University of Saskatchewan, where he earned a bachelor's degree in engineering physics in 1990 and a master's degree in physics in 1992. He subsequently completed a PhD in physics at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology.[3]

Career

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Early career

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Florizone held roles with Boston Consulting Group and Bombardier Aerospace.[3]

He later served as Vice-President, Finance and Resources at the University of Saskatchewan. In 2012, he was seconded to the International Finance Corporation of the World Bank Group as a senior adviser in public-private partnerships.[4]

During his tenure, he was involved in major institutional initiatives related to research infrastructure, health sciences, and campus development, including work associated with national research facilities such as the Canadian Light Source and the Vaccine and Infectious Disease Organization, as well as the expansion of student housing through the College Quarter project, which was identified as a major long-term development priority for the university.[5] He also co-chaired a provincial working group and spearheaded a proposal for a new Canadian research reactor to support medical isotope production.[6][7][8][9]

He was subsequently appointed President of Dalhousie University.[1][2]

Dalhousie University (2013–2018)

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Florizone served as President of Dalhousie University from 2013 to 2018.[1][2]

During his tenure, Dalhousie experienced growth in enrolment, fundraising, and research activity, including securing major initiatives such as the Ocean Frontier Institute—supported by the largest research grant in the university’s history—and contributing to the development of Canada’s Ocean Supercluster, together representing approximately $500 million in innovation investment in Atlantic Canada.[10][11][12]

His presidency included a widely reported controversy involving the university’s Faculty of Dentistry, which prompted national discussion regarding campus culture and institutional responses to misconduct.[13][14][15]

In 2018, he stepped down to lead the Quantum Valley Ideas Lab in Waterloo.[16]

International Institute for Sustainable Development (2020–2023)

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Florizone served as President and Chief Executive Officer of the International Institute for Sustainable Development.[17]

During his tenure, he participated in national and international policy discussions on climate and energy transition, including co-chairing the Electrifying Canada initiative, a business-led task force focused on accelerating electrification in Canada.[18][19][20]

University of Waterloo and advisory roles (2023–present)

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Florizone serves as Special Advisor to the President and Provost on Global Futures at the University of Waterloo.[3]

Additional affiliations

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Florizone is a Fellow of the Canadian Academy of Engineering and at the Balsillie School of International Affairs.[21][22]

He serves on the board of directors of the Canada Foundation for Innovation and has previously served as a director of MDA Space.[23][24]

He was named a Clean50 honouree and a member of the Clean16, recognizing leadership in sustainability in Canada.[25]

I note that many comparable articles for university presidents and organizational leaders include an infobox summarizing key roles and dates. I would welcome editors’ consideration of adding an appropriate infobox if deemed helpful.

~2026-24399-03 (talk) 19:03, 20 April 2026 (UTC) ~2026-24399-03 (talk) 19:03, 20 April 2026 (UTC)


Edit Request –Infobox / Lead / Organization

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NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for FleishmanHillard on behalf of SLB. I’m a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. These proposed edits are intended to help the article reflect that Cameron International is no longer an independently operating company following Schlumberger/SLB’s acquisition of the company in 2015.

Jon Gray (talk) 00:48, 21 April 2026 (UTC)


COI edit requests for early life, career

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Hi! I'm a COI editor, making some requests here on behalf of Emerson College, a client of mine. (Just noting this is separate from my work with my employer, Porter Novelli.)

  • In "Early life and education", update
Bernhardt was born in 1969 into a Jewish family.[1][2] He grew up in East Brunswick, New Jersey.[3] He attended Rutgers University, where he earned a B.A. in sociology and minored in computer science. He earned a Master of Public Health (MPH)[4] degree from Rutgers and the University of Medicine and Dentistry of New Jersey. Bernhardt earned his Ph.D. in public health from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill (UNC)[5] with an interdisciplinary focus on health communication.[6]
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Bernhardt grew up in East Brunswick, New Jersey.[3] He attended Rutgers University, where he earned a B.A. in sociology and minored in computer science. He earned a Master of Public Health (MPH)[7] degree from Rutgers and the University of Medicine and Dentistry of New Jersey in 1994.[8] Bernhardt earned his Ph.D. in public health from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill (UNC)[9] in 1999,[8] with an interdisciplinary focus on health communication.[10]
I couldn't find a good source for birth year or age; I swapped in the years he earned his degrees instead. Similarly, the first source for Bernhardt's religion is WP:RSEDITORIAL, which I believe is inappropriate for this use, and the second source does not include the level of detail given here.
  • I suggest breaking the "Career" section into subsections: "Early career" for the first paragraph, "Moody College of Communication" for the next two paragraphs, and "Emerson College" for the last two.
  • In the second paragraph of "Career", update
Bernhardt's tenure has led to the development of many new programs including a four-year honors program,[11] B.A. degree in communication and leadership[12] and a “study away” program in New York City known as UTNY.[13] He increased graduate student funding and the four-year graduation rate to 80 percent, among the highest on campus.[14] He's recruited more than 50 new faculty members and established new research centers, institutes and programs.[15][16] He's also prioritized issues of diversity, equity and inclusion and established the college’s first associate dean position with this portfolio.[17]
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Bernhardt's tenure led to the development of new programs including a four-year honors program,[18] a B.A. degree in communication and leadership,[19][20] and a "study away" program in New York City known as UTNY.[21][22] He increased graduate student funding and the four-year graduation rate to 80 percent, among the highest on campus.[23][22] He also recruited more than 50 faculty members and established new research centers and institutes.[24][25]
Some tense fixes, a few WP:NPOV wording tweaks, MOS:CURLY fix, adding archive url for dead ref link, adding secondary sources, removing the last sentence cited to a primary source.
  • In the third paragraph of "Career", update
The Jay M. Bernhardt Award for Staff Excellence at the University of Texas is named in his honor.[26]
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The Jay M. Bernhardt Award for Staff Excellence at the University of Texas is named in his honor. In 2023, the Moody College of Communication gave Bernhardt the Robert C. Jeffrey College Benefactor Award honoring people "who have given generously to the college with their time or resources", in recognition of his efforts to strengthen faculty and staff culture.[27]
Swapping in an independent source and adding more info from the source.
  • In the fourth paragraph of "Career", update
In June 2021, Bernhardt became the thirteenth president of Emerson College in Boston, Massachusetts, succeeding M. Lee Pelton.[28]
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In June 2023, Bernhardt became the thirteenth president of Emerson College in Boston, Massachusetts, succeeding M. Lee Pelton.[29]
Per the cited source, 2021 is not the correct date.
  • Also in the fourth paragraph of "Career", update
He has appointed notable leaders during his administration, including Alexandra Socarides as Vice President for Academic Affairs and Provost, and Matthew Boyce as Vice President of Enrollment Management.[30][31]
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He has appointed notable leaders during his administration, including Alexandra Socarides as Vice President for Academic Affairs and Provost.[32][33]
Adding a secondary source for the first part and cutting the second part. It may also make sense to cut this sentence entirely.
  • In the final paragraph of "Career", update
A month later, continued protests which also criticized Bernhardt's lack of response to these issues culminated on April 25, 2024, when Boston Police cleared an encampment in Boylston Place Alley, resulting in the arrest of 118 people, including many Emerson students, as part of the nationwide campus protests related to the Israel–Hamas War.[34][35][36]
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A month later, continued protests culminated on April 25, 2024, when Boston Police cleared an encampment in Boylston Place Alley, resulting in the arrest of 118 people, including many Emerson students, as part of the nationwide campus protests related to the Israel–Hamas War.[37][38][39]
Reading through all three cited sources, I'm not seeing any confirmation on the "lack of response" detail.

Thanks for your time! Mary Gaulke (talk) 18:20, 21 April 2026 (UTC)


COI edit requests for infobox, career, recognition

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Hi! As noted above, I'm a COI editor for Emerson College. Proposing some additional edits to this article, this time to add more recent information to the infobox, career, and recognition sections.

  • Add to the infobox:
| occupation=President of Emerson College
| boards=Emerson Board of Trustees
| main_interests=
  • Health communication
  • Health applications for digital technology
| workplaces=
  • Add to the end of the "Career" section:
In March 2025, Bernhardt announced "Extraordinary Emerson 2030", Emerson's five-year strategic plan. The plan identifies academics, collaboration, community engagement, and operational excellence as the college's four major priorities.[1] To support the collaboration priority, Bernhardt has added community spaces, including a game room, on Emerson's campus for students, faculty, and staff.[2]
Under Bernhardt's leadership, Emerson elevated its Department of Visual Media Arts to a school within the college, the School of Film, Television, and Media Arts.[3][4] In 2026, he appointed the first dean for Emerson Los Angeles, the college's campus located on Sunset Boulevard.[5]
Bernhardt also sits on the Emerson Board of Trustees.[6]
  • Add to "Awards and recognition":
  • 2025: Boston Power List of the 150 most influential Bostonians[7]

I really appreciate any feedback. Again, thanks for your time! Mary Gaulke (talk) 04:18, 1 June 2026 (UTC)


Edit request – FY2025 financial and operational updates

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Disclosure: I am a paid editor. I work for Bean Interactive, a digital marketing agency engaged by Equity Group Holdings to propose factual updates to this article. Full disclosure is posted on my user page per Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

All proposed changes are sourced from independent third-party publications as cited below.

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Opening paragraph

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Current text:

Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial services

provider headquartered in Nairobi providing retail banking and commercial banking services.

Proposed text:

Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial services

provider headquartered in Nairobi providing retail banking, commercial banking and digital financial services. As of the financial year ending December 2025, Equity Bank Kenya Limited reported total assets of KSh 1.04 trillion, a loan book of KSh 409.4 billion, and customer deposits of KSh 849.2 billion. [1] [2]

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Ownership section

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Current text:

The Equity Bank Kenya Limited is wholly owned by the Equity Group

Holdings, which has a customer base in excess of 14 million in six East African countries...

Proposed text:

The Equity Bank Kenya Limited is wholly owned by Equity Group

Holdings, which has a customer base in excess of 22.4 million across seven countries in Africa... [3]

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Branch network section

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Current text:

Equity Bank maintains a network of 190 branches across Kenya,

which includes 52 branches in Nairobi.

Proposed text:

As of December 2025, Equity Bank Kenya maintains a network of 221

branches across Kenya, supported by 328 ATMs and 42,634 agency banking outlets. The bank serves 14.1 million customer accounts in Kenya and holds a 13.6% market share of total banking assets, making it the second largest bank in the country. As of December 2025, 98.2% of all transactions are conducted outside the branch, with 88.4% conducted through digital channels. [4] [5]

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History section – Brand Finance addition

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Proposed addition (after the 2019 awards paragraph):

In March 2026, Brand Finance named Equity Bank Africa's strongest

banking brand, awarding it a Brand Strength Index (BSI) score of 93.9 out of 100 and an AAA+ rating, ranking it among the Top 10 strongest banking brands globally. Brand Finance simultaneously named Equity Kenya's most valuable brand with a brand valuation of USD 554 million (KES 71.6 billion), ahead of Safaricom, KCB Group, M-Pesa and Co-operative Bank. [6] [7]

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Governance section

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Current text:

The eight-member board of directors is chaired by Vijay Gidoomal.

Moses Nyabanda, serves as the managing director of the bank.

Proposed text:

The nine-member board of directors is chaired by Vijay Gidoomal.

Moses Nyabanda serves as the Managing Director of the bank. The board comprises the following members:

# Vijay Gidoomal – Non-Executive Chairman
# Moses Nyabanda – Managing Director
# Adema Sangale – Non-Executive Director
# Prof. Gideon Maina – Non-Executive Director
# Fredrick Muchoki, OGW – Non-Executive Director
# Samuel Onyango – Non-Executive Director
# Dr. Julius Muia – Non-Executive Director
# John Wilson – Non-Executive Director
# Dr. Ruth Kagia – Non-Executive Director
# Lydia Ndirangu – Company Secretary

[8]

MtKenyaReader (talk) 12:17, 23 April 2026 (UTC) MtKenyaReader (talk) 12:17, 23 April 2026 (UTC)

Hi, I just wanted to follow up politely on our edit request submitted on 23 April 2026 covering FY2025 financials, branch network figures,
Brand Finance ranking and Board of Directors update. All proposed changes are supported by independent third-party sources including
The Trading Room, The Cooperator, The Kenya Times, The Star and Capital FM Business. Please let us know if you need any further
information or clarification. Thank you for your patience. ~~~~ MtKenyaReader (talk) 12:35, 4 June 2026 (UTC)


Edit request – Q1 2026 financial updates

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Disclosure: I am a paid editor. I work for Bean Interactive, a digital marketing agency engaged by Equity Group Holdings to propose factual updates to this article. Full disclosure is posted on my user page per Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

This is a supplementary request covering Q1 2026 figures, separate from our pending FY2025 request.

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Opening paragraph

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Current text:

Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial

services provider headquartered in Nairobi providing retail banking and commercial banking services.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial

Proposed text:

Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial

services provider headquartered in Nairobi providing retail banking, commercial banking and digital financial services. As of Q1 2026, Equity Bank Kenya delivered a 21% year-on-year increase in Profit After Tax to KSh10.3 billion.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial [9]

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Ownership section

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Current text:

The Equity Bank Kenya Limited is wholly owned by the Equity

Group Holdings, which has a customer base in excess of 14 million in six East African countries.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial

Proposed text:

The Equity Bank Kenya Limited is wholly owned by Equity Group

Holdings, which has a customer base in excess of 22.7 million across seven countries in Africa.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial [10]

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Branch network section

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Current text:

Equity Bank maintains a network of 190 branches across Kenya,

which includes 52 branches in Nairobi.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial

Proposed text:

As of December 2025, Equity Bank Kenya maintains a network of

221 branches across Kenya, supported by 328 ATMs and 42,634 agency banking outlets. The bank serves 14.3 million customer accounts in Kenya and holds a 12.8% market share of total banking assets. As of Q1 2026, 98.3% of all transactions are conducted outside the branch, with 89.5% conducted through digital channels.Equity Bank Kenya Limited is a Kenyan bank and financial [11] [12]

MtKenyaReader (talk) 08:52, 10 June 2026 (UTC)

  1. "Equity Group Holdings Achieves Historic Performance in FY 2025 with Profits reaching KES 75.5 billion". The Trading Room. 2026-03-18. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  2. "Equity Group records historic KSh 75.5bln profit amid regional expansion". The Cooperator. 2026-03-18. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  3. "Equity Group Holdings Achieves Historic Performance in FY 2025". The Trading Room. 2026-03-18. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  4. "Breakdown of Equity Group customer base, branches and employees in East Africa". The Kenya Times. 2026-03-18. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  5. "Equity Group Holdings Achieves Historic Performance in FY 2025". The Trading Room. 2026-03-18. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  6. "Equity Bank becomes first Kenyan bank to join Africa's top 10 by brand value". The Star. 2026-03-23. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  7. "Equity named top banking brand in Africa". Capital FM Business. 2026-03-23. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  8. "Equity Bank Kenya – Leadership". Equity Group Holdings. Retrieved 2026-04-23.
  9. "Equity Group outlines tech-driven future after impressive Ksh. 19.1B Q1 net profit". HapaKenya. 2026-05-19. Retrieved 2026-06-10.
  10. "Equity bank registers tech-led growth in first quarter". The Observer. 2026-05-20. Retrieved 2026-06-10.
  11. "Equity Group outlines tech-driven future after impressive Ksh. 19.1B Q1 net profit". HapaKenya. 2026-05-19. Retrieved 2026-06-10.
  12. "Equity bank registers tech-led growth in first quarter". The Observer. 2026-05-20. Retrieved 2026-06-10.

MtKenyaReader (talk) 08:52, 10 June 2026 (UTC)


COI request to add infobox

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Hello, I'm a Pray.com employee operating as the company's representative on Wikipedia. I was wondering if it might be possible to add an infobox to this article. I've mocked one up, complete with a wordmark logo that I recently uploaded to Wikimedia Commons.

Pray.com
IndustryFaith-based media and technology
Founded2016; 10 years ago (2016)
FoundersSteve Gatena, Michael Lynn, Ryan Beck, and Matthew Potter
Websitepray.com

If an independent editor could take a look, I would much appreciate it. Thanks! JR at Pray (talk) 19:49, 12 February 2026 (UTC)

Done   MetalBreaksAndBends   (talk) (contribs) 15:50, 13 February 2026 (UTC)


COI request for article rewrite

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Hello, I've written a new draft for this article that I think improves it in a number of ways. I have kept nearly all the existing content intact, improving sourcing where possible. My draft also:

  • Revises and shortens the introduction a bit, relocating some of its content into the body of the article
  • Creates/relocates a few sections, so that not all non-introduction content is under the History heading
  • Adds several new passages to the History about the company's growth and evolution
  • Adds a passage about Pray's AI Bible, which is probably the most significant product we've launched in the past few years
  • Adds a few brief passages about notable partnerships with celebrities and the Trump White House

Below is the entire article draft. I'm completely open to working with editors on this piece-by-piece, but since my draft does contains significant reorganization of the existing article, I thought it would be a good idea to propose everything at once, so that the community can see the totality of what I'm trying to accomplish:

Thanks in advance to any editors who take the time to review this draft! JR at Pray (talk) 17:34, 23 April 2026 (UTC)


Proposed addition of existing Commons photo to infobox

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I am a close friend of the subject and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am requesting this change here rather than editing the article directly.

  • Specific text to be added:

Add the following lines to the infobox:

| image = James R Edwards.jpg
| image_size = 200px
| alt = Head-and-shoulders portrait of James R. Edwards
| caption = Theologian James Edwards
  • Reason for the change:

A freely licensed image already exists on Wikimedia Commons, and this article's talk page currently indicates that a photograph is requested.

  • References supporting change:

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:James_R_Edwards.jpg Sumeetgulati (talk) 17:59, 23 March 2026 (UTC)

Done Discourses on Livvy (talk · contribs) 00:57, 24 March 2026 (UTC)


Proposed cleanup fixes for lead and bibliography

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I am a close friend of the subject and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am requesting these small cleanup changes here rather than editing the article directly.

Would an uninvolved editor please make the following three cleanup fixes?

1. In the lead, please remove the broken anchor after "early church" so that the sentence reads: "His primary research interests include Biblical studies and the history of the early church, with secondary interests in the Reformation and history of the twentieth-century German Church struggle."

2. In the "Other books" section, please remove the stray "--" at the end of the 2009 entry for The Hebrew Gospel and the Development of the Synoptic Tradition.

3. In the 2019 entry for Between the Swastika and the Sickle: The Life, Disappearance, and Execution of Ernst Lohmeyer, please change the publisher from "Earmans" to "Eerdmans".

These appear to be straightforward formatting / bibliographic cleanup issues visible in the current article text. There are other requests but we need to crawl before we walk. Thank you. ~~~~ Sumeetgulati (talk) 18:52, 27 March 2026 (UTC)

Done Fiske (talk) 21:18, 27 March 2026 (UTC)
Thank you. Sumeetgulati (talk) 01:12, 2 April 2026 (UTC)


Requested biography cleanup and source refinement

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I am a close friend of the subject and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am requesting this here rather than editing directly.

Would an uninvolved editor please consider a modest, source-based cleanup of the biographical paragraph? The current article appears to support a slightly clearer and better-sourced summary of Edwards's academic background and Whitworth service.

Possible text: After earning degrees from Whitworth University, Princeton Theological Seminary, and Fuller Theological Seminary, and pursuing additional study at the University of Zürich and the University of Tübingen, Edwards joined Whitworth's faculty in 1997 after nearly 20 years at Jamestown College. He later held the Bruner-Welch Endowed Chair of Theology and is Professor Emeritus of Theology.

Possible sources:

Thank you. Sumeetgulati (talk) 22:17, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

Done with slight edits to the provided text. DiscoursesonLivvy (talk · contribs) 03:42, 15 April 2026 (UTC)


Requested lead and infobox occupation harmonization

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I am a close friend of the subject and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am requesting this here for transparency.

I plan to make a small, source-based harmonization at the top of the article so that the short description, infobox occupation, and opening sentence are consistent with the existing article content and sources.

Requested changes:

  • Replace {{Short description|American New Testament scholar}} with {{Short description|American theologian and New Testament scholar}}
  • Replace | occupation = New Testament scholar with | occupation = Theologian and New Testament scholar
  • Replace the opening sentence James R. Edwards (born 1945) is an American New Testament scholar. with James R. Edwards (born 1945) is an American theologian and New Testament scholar.

Supporting sources:

Thank you. Sumeetgulati (talk) 14:12, 16 April 2026 (UTC)

Done DiscoursesonLivvy (talk · contribs) 23:03, 16 April 2026 (UTC)



Requested lead and infobox rebalancing

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I am a close friend of the subject and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am requesting this here rather than editing directly without disclosure.

Would an uninvolved editor please consider the following source-based lead and infobox updates? These changes are intended to better align the top of the article with the broader career and works coverage already reflected in the article body.

1. In the infobox, expand "Notable works" from the current single title to a short representative list:

  • The Gospel According to Mark (2001)
  • The Hebrew Gospel and the Development of the Synoptic Tradition (2009)
  • The Gospel According to Luke (2015)
  • Between the Swastika and the Sickle (2019)

2. Add the following paragraph to the lead immediately after the current second paragraph and before the "The Hebrew Gospel and the Development of the Synoptic Tradition" section: "At Whitworth, Edwards served as Bruner-Welch Endowed Chair of Theology. His published works include commentaries on the gospels of Mark and Luke, Is Jesus the Only Savior?, The Hebrew Gospel and the Development of the Synoptic Tradition, and Between the Swastika and the Sickle."

Possible supporting sources:

Thank you. ~~~~ Sumeetgulati (talk) 02:06, 24 April 2026 (UTC)


Edit request — Correction to BroadwayWorld Awards wording

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Hello,

I would like to request a clarification in the Awards and nominations section. The current wording references being part of a “winning cast,” but the available BroadwayWorld listings now reflect nomination status only.

I propose revising the entry to read:

2023 BroadwayWorld Salt Lake City Awards – Nominated for Best Performer in a Musical for his role as Sebastian in The Little Mermaid.

I am disclosing a conflict of interest and will not make the change directly. Thank you for your review.

~~~~ FlordelizaGomez (talk) 09:09, 24 February 2026 (UTC)


Moving content from Refinitiv article to LSEG page

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Following discussion with Dormskirk I have closed the merger discussion. I would like to suggest the following content is moved from the Refinitiv article to LSEG's page, with the Refinitiv article then deleted.

This content would be contained within a newly created "Acquisition of Refinitiv" subsection of the LSEG page.

Content to be moved from the Refinitiv article or that to be newly added in this subsection is highlighted in bold. I propose that it would look as follows:

Let me know your thoughts! Adjjure (talk) 14:08, 22 April 2026 (UTC)

Moved as requested. Dormskirk (talk) 14:44, 22 April 2026 (UTC)


Requested Changes 1

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Thanks to Dormskirk for actioning the merge! I will now look to give recommendations for improving the general article, starting by looking to better distinguish between LSEG and its subsidiary, London Stock Exchange (LSE), where content on LSEG's page sometimes conflates the two entities.

To begin with:

1. Can I propose that a distinguish template is added, alerting readers that the page should not be confused with that of the London Stock Exchange's. It could read as:

"Not to be confused with the London Stock Exchange, which is a subsidiary within LSEG."

2. Can I suggest that the first three paragraphs within the 'History' section are removed as they are unrelated to the history of LSEG, instead providing a summary of the LSE between its founding in 1801 and LSEG's formation in 2007. It therefore is only tangentially connected to the history of LSEG.

The 'History' section would therefore begin with the sentence:

"In 2007, the London Stock Exchange acquired the Milan-based Borsa Italiana for €1.6bn (£1.1bn; US$2bn) to form the London Stock Exchange Group plc."

3. Can the two images of the LSE's former premises be removed. Again, these are unrelated to LSEG and are more appropriate on the LSE page.

Thanks again in advance for considering my request! Adjjure (talk) 13:38, 24 April 2026 (UTC)

I will let other readers comment, but I do feel the first three paragraphs provide a useful background. LSEG was not created out of nothing in 2007. Dormskirk (talk) 13:55, 24 April 2026 (UTC)
The disambiguation does not seem to be especially necessary as we already mention the London Stock Exchange in the first paragraph - and it's not like they're going to end up on the page with the longer name by mistake.
I agree context is useful; but we could probably lose the images.
One thing I will say it I'm a little confused as to how we have "LSEG Group Limited (November–December 2005)" in the infobox if the Group was founded in 2007. What happened in 2006? Morwen (talk) 12:50, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Dormskirk and Morwen, thank you so much for your feedback. I have drafted an alternative summary below for the formation of LSEG, which:
1. Streamlines the information already on the article.
2. Adds information about the London Stock Exchange becoming a public limited company in 2001;
3. And summarises the various takeover bids for the London Stock Exchange between 2003 and 2007.
Let me know if you think this is suitable!
The Group traces it roots to the London Stock Exchange, which was founded in 1801.[1]
Deregulation of UK financial markets, sometimes known as the "big bang", was introduced in 1986 and for the first time, foreign firms were permitted to buy UK stockbrokers.[1] In 1995, the Alternative Investment Market was launched, and in 2001 the exchange became a public limited company, London Stock Exchange plc, floating at £1.1bn.[1][2]
From 2003 to 2007, the LSE rejected various takeover bids from Deutsche Börse, Macquarie and Nasdaq.[3][4][5]

References

  1. 1 2 3 "Our history". londonstockexchange.com. Archived from the original on 17 March 2015. Retrieved 20 March 2015.
  2. Partington, Richard (20 July 2011). "Ten years on: The LSE as a public company". www.fnlondon.com. Financial News London.
  3. Basar, Shanny (13 December 2004). "LSE rejects £1.4bn Deutsche Börse bid". www.fnlondon.com. Financial News London.
  4. Treanor, Jill (9 December 2005). "LSE rejects Macquarie's £1.5bn cash offer". The Guardian. The Guardian.
  5. "LSE rejects £2.7bn Nasdaq offer". BBC News. BBC News. 20 November 2006.
This is to condense and replace the current paragraphs (I used some of the existing wording and sources):
The London Stock Exchange was founded in Sweeting's Alley in London in 1801.[1] It moved to Capel Court the following year.[1]
In 1972, the Exchange moved to a new purpose-built building and trading floor in Threadneedle Street. Deregulation, sometimes known as "big bang", came in 1986 and external ownership of member firms was allowed for the first time.[1] In 1995, the Alternative Investment Market was launched and in 2004 the Exchange moved again, this time to Paternoster Square.[1]
Between April and May 2006, having been rebuffed in an informal approach, Nasdaq built up a 23% stake in the Exchange.[2] The stake grew to 29% as a result of the London exchange's share consolidation.[3] Nasdaq has since sold its investment.[4]

References

  1. 1 2 3 4 "Our history". londonstockexchange.com. Archived from the original on 17 March 2015. Retrieved 20 March 2015.
  2. "Warnings in vogue at French Connection". Financial Times. Retrieved 8 March 2018.
  3. "Prospectus" (PDF). London Stock Exchange Group plc. Retrieved 8 March 2018.
  4. "LSE rejects £2.7bn Nasdaq offer". BBC. 20 November 2006. Retrieved 20 March 2015.
Thank you again. Adjjure (talk) 10:15, 2 June 2026 (UTC)
Sorry, but I cannot see what is wrong with the current wording. A bigger issue is that wikipedia is independent and we cannot allow the article subject to dictate the wording for cosmetic reasons. But, that's just my opinion. Dormskirk (talk) 10:22, 2 June 2026 (UTC)
Hi Dormskirk. I appreciate I have a COI, but I am approaching this with good faith; I just think the current wording has aspects which could be cut (i.e. the first LSE move to Capel Court in 1802) and omits others that provide context for later events (i.e. becoming a public company). I won't push again if you disagree, but I would like to put forward the following suggested changes which might make things a bit clearer to someone learning about the company for the first time, perhaps as a separate "Early history" H3 section before the Borsa Italia deal kicks things off in earnest. I am happy to be put right if anything is skewing promotional!:
The Group traces it roots to the London Stock Exchange, which was founded in 1801.[1]
The London Stock Exchange was founded in Sweeting's Alley in London in 1801. It moved to Capel Court the following year.
In 1972, the Exchange moved to a new purpose-built building and trading floor in Threadneedle Street. Deregulation of UK financial markets, sometimes known as the "big bang", was introduced in 1986 and external ownership of member firms was allowed for the first time foreign firms were permitted to buy UK stockbrokers. In 1995, the Alternative Investment Market was launched, and in 2004 the Exchange moved again, this time to Paternoster Square 2001 the exchange became a public limited company, London Stock Exchange plc, floating at £1bn.[1][2]
Between April and May 2006, having been rebuffed in an informal approach, Nasdaq built up a 23% stake in the Exchange. The stake grew to 29% as a result of the London exchange's share consolidation.Nasdaq has since sold its investment.
From 2003 to 2007, the LSE rejected various takeover bids from Deutsche Börse, Macquarie and Nasdaq.[3][4][5]
In 2004 the Exchange moved again, this time to Paternoster Square, where the current LSEG offices are still situated.[1]

References

  1. 1 2 3 "Our history". londonstockexchange.com. Archived from the original on 17 March 2015. Retrieved 20 March 2015.
  2. Partington, Richard (20 July 2011). "Ten years on: The LSE as a public company". www.fnlondon.com. Financial News London.
  3. Basar, Shanny (13 December 2004). "LSE rejects £1.4bn Deutsche Börse bid". www.fnlondon.com. Financial News London.
  4. Treanor, Jill (9 December 2005). "LSE rejects Macquarie's £1.5bn cash offer". The Guardian. The Guardian.
  5. "LSE rejects £2.7bn Nasdaq offer". BBC News. BBC News. 20 November 2006.
Thank you, I really do appreciate the feedback and time taken. Adjjure (talk) 16:33, 22 June 2026 (UTC)
Hi - This looks better, but I will let other editors consider. Dormskirk (talk) 16:41, 22 June 2026 (UTC)
@Morwen, you asked about the name of the group vs foundation from 2005. Nothing "happened" to the name in 2006, but the legal holding company became London Stock Exchange Group Ltd in November 2005, and was re-registered as London Stock Exchange Group plc on 7 December 2005. So there wasn't a separate change in 2006 — the only change was from Ltd to plc.
You can find the detailed filing history of the incorporation here, which includes the "Certificate of re-registration from Private to Public Limited Company" on 7 December 2005.
The holding company itself existed from 2005, but the London Stock Exchange only became commonly known as London Stock Exchange Group in its modern form after the merger with Borsa Italiana was completed in 2007. That's why 2005 appears for the company name, while 2007 is given as the foundation of the Group.
The 'Formerly' field of the infobox lists the original name Milescreen (which few people would recognise) then the brief "London Stock Exchange Group Ltd" stage. I can see why this might be confusing as an overview, if it were my call I'd suggest losing that parameter unless it's useful for wikidata.
I don't think this needs mention in the text I've put up for review in this thread (which I'd appreciate your thoughts on to see if you agree with Dormskirk's assessment), but I hope that clarifies the sequence of events! Adjjure (talk) 15:59, 26 June 2026 (UTC)
My question wasn't meant literally as "what events occurred in 2006" - but as pointing out there was a discrepancy. I don't see why we have picked the particular date we have in June 2006 as the date of founding - it's the date of this story here, but that was filed on a Saturday and talks about the "deal done on Friday" as something that is still to be confirmed by shareholders but if it goes ahead it will strengthen confidence in Italian business in European markets.. Morwen (talk) 17:02, 26 June 2026 (UTC)
Hi Morwen, I have opened a separate request for updates to the infobox in order not to get away too much from this request.
Regarding your question, I agree that the founding date should be changed to October 2007 following the completion of the LSE's acquisition of Borsa Italiana. Adjjure (talk) 16:26, 9 July 2026 (UTC)


Requested Changes 2

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I would like to put forwards some updates towards the infobox where some parameters contain out of date or contradicting information. Morwen, would appreciate your input if interested. May I suggest:

1. The "Formerly" parameter is removed. The holding company existed from 2005; however, the London Stock Exchange only became commonly known as London Stock Exchange Group in its modern form after its merger with Borsa Italiana completed in October 2007.

That is why the contradiction exists in which the company name appears for 2005, while 2007 is given as the date for the foundation of the Group. The "Formerly" field also lists the original name Milescreen, which few people would likely recognise and further is confusing as an overview.

2. As Morwen has pointed out the founded date discrepancy, could the founded date please be changed to October 2007? That is when LSEG came into being, following the completion of the acquisition of Borsa Italiana by London Stock Exchange.

3 For the “Divisions” parameter, "Capital Markets", "Post Trade", "Refinitiv" and "LSEG Technology" are no longer divisions. Could these four please be replaced by "Risk Intelligence" and "Markets" as per the LSEG "What we do" page?

4. For the "Products" parameter, the removal of stock exchange – a stock exchange is a regulated marketplace, not a product. Instead, would it be possible to add "Indices" and "Risk Screening", two other products LSEG offers. Indices are provided by LSEG's subsidiary, FTSE Russell, and risk screening by LSEG's Risk Intelligence division.

Proposed infobox:

London Stock Exchange Group plc
Formerly
  • Milescreen Limited (February–November 2005)
  • LSEG Group Limited (November–December 2005)[1][2]
TypePublic
LSE: LSEG
FTSE 100 Component
IndustryFinancial services
FoundedOctober 2007; 18 years ago[3]
HeadquartersPaternoster Square
London, England, UK
Products
RevenueIncrease £9.081 billion (2025)[4]
Increase £2.127 billion (2025)[4]
Increase £1.506 billion (2025)[4]
Divisions
  • Data and Analytics
  • Capital Markets
  • Post Trade
  • Refinitiv
  • LSEG Technology
  • Risk Intelligence
  • FTSE Russell[5]
Websitehttps://www.lseg.com/en

References

  1. "Privacy and Cookie Statement". London Stock Exchange Group. 2022-10-07. Retrieved 2024-01-23.
  2. "London Stock Exchange Group PLC overview". Companies House. 2005-02-18. Retrieved 2024-01-23.
  3. "London Stock Exchange Completes Takeover of Borsa Italiana". CNBC. CNBC. 1 October 2007.
  4. 1 2 3 "Annual Results 2025" (PDF). London Stock Exchange Group. Retrieved 26 February 2026.
  5. "What We Do". www.lseg.com.

Thank you again for considering! Adjjure (talk) 16:24, 9 July 2026 (UTC)


Edit Requests for April 2026

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I have suggestions for correcting inaccuracies on this page. I have a WP:COI as an employee of the Wyss Foundation and will submit these suggestions for review by neutral editors.

1. What I think should be changed:

In the Political Activities section, under “The Hub Project and Arabella Advisors” subsection please rewrite the first paragraph:

Change from:

In 2021, The New York Times reported that Wyss had "quietly created a sophisticated political operation to advance progressive policy initiatives and the Democrats who support them".[1] In 2015, the Wyss Foundation initiated The Hub Project, which seeks "to shape media coverage to help Democratic causes". The goal of The Hub Project is to help Democrats be more effective at conveying their arguments through the news media and directly to voters. It seeks to "dramatically shift the public debate and policy positions of core decision makers". The Hub Project engaged in paid advertising campaigns in 2018 that criticized Republican congressional candidates.[1]

Change to:

In 2021, The New York Times reported that Wyss had “quietly created a sophisticated political operation to advance progressive policy initiatives and the Democrats who support them.” According to the New York Times, Wyss had a role in the creation of an organization called The Hub Project, which was started “partly to shape media coverage to help Democratic causes.”[1]

Why: The existing paragraph mixes one sentence about Wyss with several sentences about The Hub Project’s goals and activities stated in the voice of Wikipedia. Most of that material is not about Wyss. Shifting the details of the BLP away from the biography to include excessive details about related organizations is coatracking. Per WP:COATRACKING,” “When a biography of a living person becomes a coatrack, it is a problem that requires immediate corrective action. Items may be true and sourced, but if a biography of a living person is essentially a coatrack, it needs to be fixed.” The suggested replacement states Wyss’s relationship to The Hub Project according to what can be WP:VERIFIED by reporting in the New York Times.


2. What I think should be changed:

In the Political Activities section, under “The Hub Project and Arabella Advisors,” subsection, please remove the second paragraph:

The Hub Project is part of Arabella Advisors, a leading vehicle for funneling "dark money" on the political center-left. The Hub Project is housed within the Arabella-sponsored groups the New Venture Fund and the Sixteen Thirty Fund. Wyss has donated $245 million to the Sixteen Thirty Fund and the New Venture Fund since 2016. The Sixteen Thirty Fund gives directly to political committees and pays for TV ads that back specific candidates and causes. In 2022, the FEC said the Sixteen Thirty Fund should be required to register as a political committee, which would require more disclosure.[2]

Why: The existing paragraph states: Wyss has donated $245 million to the Sixteen Thirty Fund and the New Venture Fund since 2016. But the cited source’s wording is that the funds collectively received $245 million donated by Wyss’ groups' since 2016. The current sentence converts “Wyss’ groups” into “Wyss” (the individual), which is a materially different claim. The rest of the paragraph isn’t about Wyss, but rather about the activities of Arabella Advisors and the Sixteen Thirty Fund - each of which have their own articles where that information could be included. This is another WP:COATRACK - if extended information about the groups is included on this BLP page, it would set a precedent for all kinds of detailed information about the groups to be added.


3. What I think should be changed:

In the Political Activities section, under “The Hub Project and Arabella Advisors,” subsection, please remove the third paragraph:

The New Venture Fund underwrites Acronym, which owns the Courier Newsroom, a group seeking to boost Democratic candidates through local news stories and advertising.[1] The Wyss Foundation has donated to States Newsroom, a nonprofit media group. Media watchdog NewsGuard said State Newsroom's journalism had been "bought by people with a political agenda".[1]

Why: Same as item 2. Wyss the person is not the Wyss Foundation, which has its own Wikipedia page. . This is another WP:COATRACK.

4. What I think should be changed:

In the Political Activities section, under “The Hub Project and Arabella Advisors,” subsection please remove the fourth paragraph:

In December 2024, the U.S. House of Representatives held a hearing on the threat of foreign interference in U.S. elections. While federal law prohibits foreign nationals from donating to political candidates, campaigns, or super PACs, there is a loophole allowing foreign nationals to finance ballot measures. The Sixteen Thirty Fund, largely funded by Wyss, has spent over $130 million on ballot measures in 25 states. In the 2024 election cycle alone, the group spent $37 million on ballot measures across the U.S. focused on topics like abortion and election law. After Ohio banned foreign spending on ballot campaigns, the Sixteen Thirty Fund abruptly stopped spending in the state.[3]

Why: The paragraph is sourced only to a RealClearPolicy editorial. Per WP:RSEDITORIAL, editorials are reliable primary sources for statements attributed to that editor or author, but are rarely reliable for statements of fact. The paragraph repeats claims made by the authors in the voice of Wikipedia and insinuates wrongdoing by Wyss, who is mentioned only once, by drawing tenuous connections between a fund he “largely contributes” to and the exploitation of legal loopholes. It then implies an unfounded causal connection “After Ohio banned… abruptly stopped.” WP:BLPBALANCE specifically warns against “claims that rely on guilt by association.” Per BLP “Contentious material about living (or, in some cases, recently deceased) persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced—whether the material is negative, positive, neutral, or just questionable—must be removed immediately and without waiting for discussion.”

5. In the Lead section, please remove the third sentence of the second paragraph:

In the United States, Wyss is a major donor of the Democratic Party.[4]

Why: The cited NYT source does not support this wording. The article does not state that Wyss donates to the Democratic Party as an organization (e.g., the DNC/state parties/party committees). Instead, it characterizes him as an influential figure among Democrats and as a donor to left-leaning / Democrat-associated groups. Labeling him “a major donor of the Democratic Party” is a materially different claim. Converting donations to Democrat-aligned causes to “donor to the Democratic Party” is a synthesis leap, not allowable per WP:OR. And per BLP, contentious material about a living person that is unsourced must be removed immediately. JQDC (talk) 23:31, 24 April 2026 (UTC)


Request edit: April 2026 CFPB final rule amending Regulation

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I have a COI declared on my user page (employed by NCRC). I am requesting an uninvolved editor review and, if appropriate, implement the following addition. I am not 100% sure of the right process so I am trying to do this the right way.

The article currently describes the regulatory regime as it stood before April 2026. On April 22, 2026, the CFPB published a final rule making three significant changes to Regulation B: removing the "effects test" and stating that ECOA does not authorize disparate-impact liability, narrowing the discouragement prohibition, and imposing new restrictions on special purpose credit programs (SPCPs) by for-profit creditors. The rule takes effect July 21, 2026 (90 days after Federal Register publication). This is a substantial change to ECOA's regulatory implementation and the article should reflect it.

I propose adding the following as a new subsection under "Amendments and regulatory development," following the existing "Section 1071 small business lending data" subsection. I have not edited the article directly given my COI; I drafted this in my sandbox at User:GeographerJay/sandbox.

Proposed text

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2026 final rule amending Regulation B

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On April 22, 2026, the CFPB published a final rule amending Subpart A of Regulation B.[5] The rule, which takes effect July 21, 2026, makes three significant changes to the regulatory implementation of ECOA.

First, the rule removes the "effects test" from Regulation B and states that ECOA does not authorize disparate-impact liability.[6] The CFPB's position is that ECOA's prohibition on discrimination "on the basis of" protected characteristics is intent-focused and does not contain the effects-oriented language present in statutes such as the Fair Housing Act and the Age Discrimination in Employment Act, where the Supreme Court has recognized disparate-impact liability.[6] The rule preserves disparate-treatment liability, including claims based on facially neutral criteria used as proxies for protected characteristics.[7] The change reverses a longstanding interpretation that dated to the Federal Reserve Board's 1977 amendment of Regulation B.[8]

Second, the rule narrows the prohibition on discouraging prospective applicants under § 1002.4(b). The discouragement analysis is now limited to oral or written statements (including images) that a reasonable person would understand as expressing an intent to discriminate, rather than statements or practices that merely create negative impressions or have indirect discouraging effects.[7] Targeted outreach to specific demographic groups is expressly not treated as discouragement of those outside the targeted group.[6]

Third, the rule restricts special purpose credit programs operated by for-profit creditors. For-profit SPCPs may no longer use race, color, national origin, or sex as eligibility criteria.[5] For-profit SPCPs using other permissible characteristics (religion, marital status, age, receipt of public assistance income, or exercise of Consumer Credit Protection Act rights) face heightened documentation requirements, including a written plan demonstrating need and participant-level evidence that each participant would not receive credit absent the program.[7] Nonprofit and government-authorized SPCPs are largely unaffected.[6]

The CFPB received approximately 64,500 comments on the proposed rule and finalized it largely as proposed.[7] Consumer advocacy groups, state attorneys general, and members of Congress signaled during the comment period that the rule would be challenged in court on Administrative Procedure Act and statutory-interpretation grounds.[8] The rule's effect on disparate-impact liability is limited to ECOA enforcement; the Fair Housing Act, state anti-discrimination statutes, and private ECOA litigation in courts that have not foreclosed disparate-impact theories remain available avenues for effects-based claims.[6]

Notes for reviewer

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  • I have not included quotes or paraphrases from advocacy organizations (including my employer) in the proposed text. The "consumer advocacy groups, state attorneys general, and members of Congress" reference is sourced to factual reporting on the comment period.
  • If a reviewer would prefer this be added as a new top-level section rather than a subsection, I'm happy to restructure.
  • The existing "CFPB v. Townstone Financial" section may also warrant a brief note that the Seventh Circuit's discouragement holding interprets the pre-2026 version of Regulation B; I have not proposed that edit here but flag it for reviewer consideration.

~~~~ GeographerJay (talk) 01:07, 26 April 2026 (UTC)

Doing... This all seems fine to me, however, I'm not sure that merely being employed by an organization that has an opinion on a specific piece of legislation constitutes a COI. I'm going to inquire elsewhere. If it does, I'll come back and implement this. RedBaron214 (talk) 20:36, 5 July 2026 (UTC)
 Done Based on AndyTheGrump's advice here, I've gone ahead and implemented this edit request, the sources seeming to check out and the content otherwise satisfactory. RedBaron214 (talk) 02:58, 8 July 2026 (UTC)


Proposed edits — BLP concerns, NPOV violations, and missing peer-reviewed research

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I am disclosing a conflict of interest per WP:COI and requesting that uninvolved editors review and, if appropriate, implement the following proposed changes to this biography of a living person.

Proposed Edit 1: Opening line Current text: "best known as the founder of uBeam, a company that claimed to develop wireless charging technology using ultrasound but did not succeed in producing a commercial product."

Proposed text: "best known as the inventor of ultrasonic wireless power transmission."

Rationale:

The current opening has multiple problems under WP:BLP, WP:NPOV, and WP:LABEL: (a) "Claimed to develop" is factually inaccurate and pejorative. The subject is the named inventor on 25 granted U.S. patents for ultrasonic wireless power transmission (source: Google Patents, J. Craig Venter Institute board biography). The U.S. Patent and Trademark Office does not grant patents for technology that was merely "claimed." This phrasing implies the technology was fictitious, which no reliable source supports. Per WP:PEACOCK and WP:LABEL, Wikipedia should not use loaded characterizations where neutral language exists.

(b) Defining a living person primarily by a defunct company is inappropriate under WP:BLP. The company in question changed its name to SonicEnergy and is reported to have ceased operations in 2024. The subject left the company in 2018 — nearly eight years ago — and has since co-founded Elemind Technologies, which has published peer-reviewed clinical research in Nature Portfolio journals and shipped a commercial product. Anchoring the biography's opening sentence to a company that no longer exists under its original name, rather than to the subject's actual body of work as an inventor, does not serve the reader and raises BLP concerns about defining a living person by a negative characterization of a former employer.

(c) "Did not succeed in producing a commercial product" in the opening line is editorializing. The article body already covers the company's history, criticism, and commercial outcome in appropriate detail. Frontloading the very first sentence with a failure characterization, before any mention of the subject's patents, current work, or recognition, violates WP:NPOV and WP:DUE for a biography of a living person. By comparison, the opening lines of biographies of other founders whose companies did not reach commercial success (e.g., many deep-tech and biotech founders) typically describe the subject's field of work, not the commercial outcome of a single venture.

The proposed language — "best known as the inventor of ultrasonic wireless power transmission" — is verifiable (25 granted patents, PennVention competition win sourced in the article itself, coverage in Fortune, NPR, USA Today, and the New York Times describing the subject as the inventor of the technology). The full history of uBeam, including criticism and commercial outcome, remains in the article body where it can be presented with appropriate context and sourcing.

Sources: US9094111B2 — Receiver transducer for wireless power transfer (granted patent, inventor: Meredith Perry) US20120299540A1 — Sender communications for wireless power transfer (inventor: Meredith Perry) J. Craig Venter Institute biography: "She has been awarded 25 patents with an additional five pending." Fortune (2014): "Meet the 25-year-old inventor working on wireless charging technology" SonicEnergy Wikipedia article: documents the company's name change and reported closure in 2024

Proposed Edit 2: Elemind section — update with peer-reviewed clinical trial and correct terminology

Current text: On February 6, 2024, Elemind emerged from stealth mode, with Perry saying that its wearable device could "stop tremor for people with essential tremors" and "induce sleep, faster than leading sleep drugs", as well as assist in memory formation and pain management, although no device image was released at that time.

Proposed text: On February 6, 2024, Elemind emerged from stealth mode, with Perry saying that its wearable device could "suppress tremor for people with essential tremors" and "induce sleep, faster than leading sleep drugs", as well as assist in memory formation and pain management. In June 2024, the company published a randomized controlled clinical trial in Scientific Reports (Nature Portfolio), reporting that acoustic stimulation delivered by its wearable headband significantly reduced sleep onset latency in adults with insomnia (p=0.0019), with 76% of participants experiencing improvement relative to a sham control. Third-party coverage of the study appeared in MIT News. Elemind's headband is now commercially available.

Rationale: (a) "Stop tremor" → "suppress tremor" corrects the quoted language to match published scientific literature. The subject's published research and public statements use "suppress," not "stop." (b) The clinical trial is a WP:MEDRS-compliant source. It is a randomized controlled trial published in a peer-reviewed journal (Scientific Reports, Nature Portfolio), indexed in PubMed (PMID: 38844793), and registered on ClinicalTrials.gov (NCT05743114). Third-party coverage from MIT News satisfies WP:SECONDARY. (c) "Although no device image was released at that time" is outdated trivial detail. The device has since shipped commercially and images are widely available. This clause adds no encyclopedic value and should be removed per WP:TRIVIA.

Sources: Bressler S, Neely R, Yost RM, Wang D. "A randomized controlled trial of alpha phase-locked auditory stimulation to treat symptoms of sleep onset insomnia." Scientific Reports 14 (2024). DOI: 10.1038/s41598-024-63385-1 MIT News / MedicalXpress: "Headband helps people fall asleep by aligning audio signals with brainwaves" ClinicalTrials.gov NCT05743114

I welcome feedback from uninvolved editors on both proposals. Berlinwhalel1989 (talk) 02:51, 31 March 2026 (UTC)


  • What I think should be changed:This article has been subject to ongoing edit wars and I am requesting page protection to preserve the current version against further disruptive, non-neutral edits. The prior version of this article contains multiple WP:BLP and WP:NPOV violations that I want to flag for administrators:

1. Non-neutral lead sentence: The opening reads: "best known as the founder of uBeam, a company that claimed to develop wireless charging technology using ultrasound but did not succeed in producing a commercial product." The word "claimed" implies dishonesty or deception rather than neutrally describing the company's work. Placing an editorial negative conclusion ("did not succeed") in the very first sentence of a biography of a living person violates WP:BLP, which requires that BLPs be "written conservatively" and "in a dispassionate tone, avoiding both understatement and overstatement." Leading with a negative conclusion in the opening sentence is inconsistent with this standard and gives WP:UNDUE weight to one aspect of the subject's career. 2. Editorializing the TEDx talk: The article states Perry "argued that engineers are inherently linear thinkers," followed immediately by "Commentators later contrasted these claims with the doubts raised by experts." The word "argued" is editorial rather than neutral (compare: "discussed," "described," or "said"). Characterizing her talk as making "claims" that are then debunked in the next sentence creates a non-neutral framing that is inconsistent with WP:NPOV. 3. Outdated and misleading editorial aside on Elemind: The Elemind section ends with "although no device image was released at that time." This editorial aside was clearly written to cast doubt on whether the product exists. As of 2024–2025, Elemind is a commercially shipping consumer product available for purchase, which makes this aside not only non-neutral but factually misleading to current readers. 4. Structural imbalance: The "Recognition and reception" section re-states criticism of uBeam that was already covered in the uBeam section, effectively doubling the negative framing. Meanwhile, the article contains no mention of Perry's peer-reviewed publications in Nature portfolio journals, her 8 granted patents (4 jointly with MIT), Elemind's £6.3M MRC research grant with Imperial College London for Alzheimer's and sleep research, her co-founding of Elemind with MIT and Imperial College neuroscientists including Ed Boyden, or her board membership at the J. Craig Venter Institute. This structural imbalance — heavy on criticism, light on verifiable accomplishments — violates WP:NPOV and WP:BLP. 5. Pattern of edit warring: This article has been subject to recurring edit wars over an extended period. I am requesting semi-protection or full protection to prevent further disruptive editing on this BLP article.

Why it should be changed: WP:BLP requires that biographies of living persons be "written conservatively and with regard for the subject's privacy" and that "contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced should be removed immediately." The prior version of this article violates these principles through editorialized language ("claimed," "argued," "did not succeed" in the lead), outdated information presented to cast doubt (the "no device image" aside), and structural imbalance that weights criticism far above verifiable accomplishments. The ongoing edit warring on this article further warrants page protection under WP:EDITWAR and WP:PP. References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

    • Perry, M. et al. — Peer-reviewed publications in Nature portfolio journals (verifiable via PubMed and Google Scholar under "Elemind" and "closed-loop acoustic neuromodulation")
    • USPTO records — 8 granted patents, 4 jointly with MIT (searchable by inventor name "Meredith Perry")
    • UKRI Gateway to Research — 6.3M MRC grant with Imperial College London, "Closed-loop auditory stimulation for sleep and dementia"
    • Elemind Technologies commercial product — available at elemindtech.com, commercially shipping consumer product as of 2024
    • J. Craig Venter Institute Board of Trustees — https://www.jcvi.org/about/meredith-perry
    • Elemind co-founders include Ed Boyden (MIT), Nir Grossman (Imperial College London), David Wang (MIT PhD), Heather Read (UConn) — verifiable via https://elemindtech.com/pages/about-us
    • Forbes "30 Under 30," Fortune "Most Powerful Women," Vanity Fair "The New Establishment," Fast Company "Most Creative People," Elle "Genius Award" — all previously cited in the article itself

Berlinwhalel1989 (talk) 17:05, 26 April 2026 (UTC)

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  2. Slodysko, Brian (4 April 2023). "Group steers Swiss billionaire's money to liberal causes". Associated Press. Retrieved 14 December 2023.
  3. Snead, Jason; Sutherland, Caitlin (24 December 2024). "Close the Loophole That's Allowing Foreign Nationals to Influence Our Elections | RealClearPolicy". www.realclearpolicy.com. Retrieved 30 December 2024.
  4. "Swiss Billionaire Quietly Becomes Influential Force Among Democrats (Published 2021)". The New York Times. 3 May 2021.
  5. 1 2 "Equal Credit Opportunity Act (Regulation B)". Federal Register. April 22, 2026. FR Doc. 2026-07804; Docket No. CFPB-2025-0039. Retrieved April 25, 2026.
  6. 1 2 3 4 5 Friedman, Christopher K.; McFall, Alexandra; Sowers, Leslie A. (April 24, 2026). "CFPB Finalizes Major Regulation B Overhaul: Disparate Impact Out, Discouragement Narrowed, and SPCPs Restricted". Husch Blackwell. Retrieved April 25, 2026.
  7. 1 2 3 4 Jackman, Stefanie; Sommerfield, Lori; Willis, Chris; Gess, Taylor; Page, Lane (April 22, 2026). "CFPB Finalizes Regulation B Subpart A Rule Largely as Proposed". Consumer Financial Services Law Monitor. Troutman Pepper Locke. Retrieved April 25, 2026.
  8. 1 2 Berry, Kate (April 22, 2026). "CFPB finalizes new ECOA rule in major fair lending pivot". American Banker. Retrieved April 25, 2026.


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Proposed expansion of biography with additional sources

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I would like to propose a substantially expanded version of this article. The full proposed text is in my sandbox at User:Thjortel/Merrelyn Emery draft for review. Summary of the changes:

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  • {{Infobox scientist}} populated only with verifiable facts.
  • New Early life and education section, including the subject's birthplace (Broken Hill, NSW), childhood at Menindee on the Darling River, and the full sequence of degrees (1960 BA Psychology UNE, 1964 BA Hons I Psychology UNE, 1986 PhD Marketing UNSW). Sourced primarily to de Guerre & Deering (2016), supplemented by the subject's CV per WP:BLPSELFPUB for uncontroversial biographical facts.
  • New Career section with the full ANU Centre for Continuing Education chronology (tutor and research assistant 1970–76, lecturer 1976–97), preceded by earlier teaching and demonstrator positions.
  • Brief Personal life section describing the partnership and marriage with Fred Emery, sourced to Bawden's Australian Dictionary of Biography entry on Fred Emery.
  • The 2014 W. Ross Ashby Memorial Lecture at EMCSR (Vienna), sourced to the conference organiser.
  • Four additional published books with full bibliographic data: A Choice of Futures (Martinus Nijhoff, 1976), The Search Conference with R. E. Purser (Jossey-Bass, 1996), Educational Futures edited with O. N. Baburoğlu (Sabanci University Press, 2000), and Future of Schools (Rowman & Littlefield Education, 2006).

Corrected

  • Doctoral field: the current article does not explicitly name the field, but the subject's own CV gives the formal degree as PhD in Marketing (UNSW, 1986); the topic of the dissertation — neurophysiological effects of television viewing — is described in de Guerre & Deering (2016).
  • The 1960 BA degree was missing from the previous version.

Removed / trimmed

  • Two paragraphs paraphrasing the subject's own framing of OST, which were sourced largely to the subject's own website and to a podcast interview. Per WP:BLPSPS and WP:NPOV, these are not appropriate sources for substantive biographical material. Replaced with a shorter, neutrally phrased Research section sourced to third-party academic literature (de Guerre & Deering 2016; Babüroğlu 1992).
  • The direct quotation "innately social animals…" sourced to a podcast.

Sources introduced

  • de Guerre, D. W. & Deering, P. (2016). A Practical, Contextual Social Science to Engage the World — Merrelyn Emery and Open Systems Theory. (Third-party academic chapter; primary biographical source for the subject in the published literature.)
  • Bawden, R. Frederick Edmund (Fred) EmeryAustralian Dictionary of Biography. (Peer-reviewed.)
  • Babüroğlu, O. N. (1992). "Tracking the development of the Emery–Trist Systems Paradigm." Systems Practice 5(3): 263–290. doi:10.1007/BF01059830
  • Emery, M. (1999). Searching: The theory and practice of making cultural change. Amsterdam: John Benjamins. (For her own published work.)
  • Emery, M. (CV, hosted by Amerin Pty Ltd) — used only for uncontroversial biographical facts (birth date, education, employment dates) per WP:BLPSELFPUB exception 1. Not used to source any contestable claim.

Self-published items retained

  • Did 9/11 change the world? (2021) and An Open Systems Science (2026) are listed in Selected publications with the self-published status flagged. The 2026 work is supported by an independent third-party mention at the Systems Community of Inquiry. If reviewers consider these unsuitable under WP:NBOOK, they could reasonably be moved to External links.

Conflict of interest disclosure I have a personal connection to the subject through professional correspondence and am therefore proposing changes here rather than editing the article directly, in line with WP:COI. I would appreciate review by an independent editor.

I am happy to break this into smaller individual proposals if a single bundled review is impractical.

Trond Hjorteland (talk) 12:32, 27 April 2026 (UTC)


COI edit request: expand Snibbs section

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COI disclosure: I am Daniel Shemtob, the subject of this article and a co-founder of Snibbs. I am submitting this as an edit request per WP:COI rather than editing the article directly.

Proposed change: Expand the existing "Snibbs" section with additional sourced details about the company's founding circumstances, product timeline, the Nancy Silverton collaboration, and wildfire-relief activities. Proposed replacement text for the Snibbs section:

Shemtob co-founded Snibbs, a footwear company that makes slip-resistant shoes intended for hospitality, healthcare, and other service-industry workers. The idea originated after Shemtob suffered a back injury from a fall in a restaurant kitchen, and he partnered with orthopedic surgeon Jason Snibbe and Haik Zadoyan to develop the product.[1][2] The brand publicly launched its first shoe, the SpaceCloud, in April 2022.[3] In April 2025, Snibbs released its first boot, the Pro,[4] and in October 2025 it released "The Nancy," a clog co-designed with chef Nancy Silverton.[5][6] Following the January 2025 Los Angeles wildfires, Snibbs partnered with apron-maker Hedley & Bennett on a relief collaboration,[7] and, according to Entrepreneur, by late 2025 had donated more than 1,000 pairs of shoes to hospitality workers through a community giveback program.[2]

Sources used: Footwear News (April 2022 and March 2025), Entrepreneur (November 2025), Sports Illustrated (April 2025), Eater (October 2025), Beverly Press (October 2025), and the Jewish Journal source already cited in the article. All independent, reliable secondary sources.

A note for the reviewing editor: where ref names in this request do not match the article's existing ref names, please feel free to rename to match the article's conventions. Happy to provide any additional clarification.

Thank you for considering this request. Delicata (talk) 04:17, 19 May 2026 (UTC)


Additional image

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Abdelmonem Bin Eisa Alserkal with Jesse Lee, chairman of Design Miami, at Zayed National Museum, at the launch of the planned Alserkal/ Design Miami 2027 collaboration.

I am undertaking some paid consultancy for Sutton Communications, who act for Alserkal.

Please add the above image, with the caption as show. If a source is needed, see . Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 10:54, 28 April 2026 (UTC)

Pigsonthewing, working my way through the COIREQ backlog today ... It's not clear where you want this image to be placed, or how it's relevant to the article. Can you please elaborate? Thank you, MediaKyle (talk) 20:15, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
Location: Anywhere that it fits.
Relevance: It will introduce one of Alserkal's connections, and to visually break up the text. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 20:28, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
I stewed over this for a bit, and honestly I don't think I can add this photo. For one thing there's not much room for it -- but it also doesn't seem especially relevant here, as the photo was not taken at Alserkal Avenue (does Jesse Lee of Design Miami have anything to do with Alserkal Avenue either?) ... Looking at this article it's clear that the PR fairy has waved her magic wand before you arrived, and if I didn't consider you a wiki-acquaintance I probably would remove the "Alserkal Arts Foundation" section at least. I won't mark your request as declined, but I think I will have to pass. Sorry, MediaKyle (talk) 20:45, 4 May 2026 (UTC)

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  1. Cite error: The named reference jewishjournal-2024 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  2. 1 2 "His Restaurants Won Awards — Then His Next Business Changed the Industry". Entrepreneur. November 18, 2025.
  3. Verry, Peter (April 6, 2022). "Chef Daniel Shemtob Launches Snibbs Work Shoes". Footwear News.
  4. Ehrlich, Michael (April 12, 2025). "This Chef-Approved 'Tank Boot' is Built to Survive Restaurant Life". Sports Illustrated.
  5. "Snibbs footwear and Nancy Silverton unveil 'utility chic' clog". Beverly Press. October 9, 2025.
  6. Knapp, Francky (October 16, 2025). "Nancy Silverton Is Still the Busiest Not-a-Chef in Los Angeles's Food Scene". Eater.
  7. Verry, Peter (March 7, 2025). "Snibbs' Collaboration With Hedley & Bennett Benefits Food and Beverage Workers Impacted by Los Angeles Wildfires". Footwear News.