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Arab Medical Center

Requested addition: Stem cell and bone marrow transplant unit

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I have a conflict of interest with Arab Medical Center. Per WP:COI, I am requesting that an uninvolved editor add the following content. This is supported by a peer-reviewed publication in a major academic journal.

Proposed addition

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Add to the "Medical services" section, after the existing first paragraph:

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The hospital's stem cell and bone marrow transplant unit performs hematopoietic cell transplants for conditions including leukemia, lymphoma, and thalassemia. A 2019 study published in Bone Marrow Transplantation (Nature Publishing Group) identified AMC as one of three centers in Jordan providing this service, alongside King Hussein Cancer Center and Jordan University Hospital.

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Source

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 * Peer-reviewed, published in Nature Publishing Group journal
 * Independent of AMC (international academic research)
 * Explicitly identifies AMC as one of three transplant centers in Jordan
 * Data covers March 2003 to September 2017

Rationale

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  • This is the strongest independent source found. A Nature-affiliated journal explicitly naming AMC as one of three transplant centers in Jordan establishes significant notability.
  • The study is independent (not funded by AMC, not written by AMC staff).
  • Per WP:V and WP:NORG, this directly supports AMC's notability as a medical institution.
  • The claim is factual and neutral, avoiding any promotional language.
  • Does not remove or modify any existing content.

Thank you for your time and consideration. ~2026-36338-32 (talk) 13:06, 22 June 2026 (UTC)

Jacob Jizchak Biderman


COI edit request - larger update (June 2026)

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Hello. I have a conflict of interest with this subject and am requesting changes here rather than editing directly, per WP:COI. Disclosure: I work for Lauder Business School, which Rabbi Jacob Isaac Biderman co-founded and where he serves as honorary vice president. He is not my direct employer, I have no personal connection with Rabbi Biderman. We hope that our modificaitons meet WP:RS or WP:NPOV.

The article's history stops at 2013. Two later foundations are missing:

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In 2013 another Chabad center was opened in the 2nd district.
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In 2013 another Chabad center was opened in the 2nd district. In 2022 he initiated the establishment of the Austro-Hungarian Tomchei Tmimim yeshiva, and in 2023 he revived a Chabad women's seminary in Austria.

Reviewer note: these are Chabad-community outlets.

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He also received ordination from the Union of Orthodox Rabbis of the United States and Canada under the leadership
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The Rabbinical Alliance of America (in Hebrew, Igud HaRabbonim)

--- Parents

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Biderman was born in Jerusalem to Rabbi David Zvi Israel, son of the Lelover Rebbe Moshe Mordechai Biderman, and Esther Chana, daughter of philanthropist Abraham Pershan of Toronto.
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Rabbi Jacob Isaac Biderman was born in Jerusalem to Rabbi David Zvi Yisrael Biderman, son of the Lelover Rebbe, Rabbi Moshe Mordechai Biderman, and Esther Chana, daughter of Rabbi Abraham Parshan, a philanthropist from Toronto, Canada, and a Chabad Hasid.


--- 1981 founding + immigrant work + Kreisky letter ---

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He established kindergartens, after-school programs and summer camps for the Jewish community. In the 1980s he focused particularly on Jewish immigrants from Bukhara, Georgia and the Caucasus, helping them to establish their own congregations.
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In 1981 he established kindergartens and a Talmud Torah school for the Jewish community; the network later grew to about ten institutions. In the 1980s he worked extensively with Jewish immigrants from the Soviet Union, helping organise Bukharian, Georgian and Caucasian congregations in the city. His work was acknowledged in a letter from Austrian Chancellor Bruno Kreisky to the Lubavitcher Rebbe.


--- Olam Hadash land + donors ---

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In 1992 the "Olam Chadasch" kindergarten was established in the Prater.
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In 1992 the "Olam CHadash" day-care center was established in the Prater on land allocated by the city, with support from Alexander Kohane and Reuven Lishka.

Source needed: ____ --- Campus: dates + Lauder biography + city land ---

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In the 1980s and 1990s he founded an elementary and middle school, followed in 2000 by a high school. These institutions were later consolidated into the "Lauder Chabad Campus" in the Augarten, funded by donations from Ronald S. Lauder.
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Between 1984 and 1994 he founded an elementary and middle school, followed in 2000 by a high school. These were later consolidated into the "Lauder Chabad Campus" in the Augarten, on land allocated by the city and funded by Ronald S. Lauder, formerly United States Ambassador to Austria and later president of the World Jewish Congress.

Source needed: ____ (note: the Lauder biographical clause may be seen as WP:UNDUE here)

--- 2005 Wiesenthal / JLI workshops (not in the article) --- Add: "In 2005 he organised the educational workshops 'The Holocaust as a Message for Future Generations' (Jewish Learning Institute), with the involvement of Simon Wiesenthal." Source needed: ____

--- Beit HaLevi facilities ---

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In 2006 he initiated the community center "Beit Halevi – Chabad" in Vienna, named after Lev Leviev.
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In 2006 he initiated the community center "Beit Halevi – Chabad" in Vienna, named after Lev Leviev; it houses a synagogue, mikveh, kollel, women's organisation, youth movement and event hall.

Source needed: ____ --- 2012 kindergarten named for Sarah Schlaff ---

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In 2012 he founded another kindergarten and a Talmud Torah school in Vienna's 19th district, supported by Martin Schlaff.
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In 2012 he founded another kindergarten and a Talmud Torah school in Vienna's 19th district, named in honour of Sarah Schlaff, with a donation from her son Martin Schlaff.

Source needed: ____

--- Additional centers (Vienna + Salzburg) --- Add: "He also oversaw four Chabad centers in Vienna and two in the Salzburg region." Source: 1.   Der Standard — Jüdische Schule in Wien — https://www.derstandard.at/consent/tcf/story/1332323376435/juedische-schule-in-wien-nach-wie-vor-latenter-antisemitismus-vorhanden

--- 2001 Academy opening detail ---

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In 2001 he founded, in cooperation with the ministries of education of Austria and Israel, the "Academy for the Training of Jewish Teachers". In 2002 he received the title of professor and became rector.
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In 2001 he founded, in cooperation with the ministries of education of Austria and Israel, the "Academy for the Training of Jewish Teachers"; the opening was attended by about one hundred rabbis, Austrian and Israeli ministers, and Romano Prodi, then President of the European Commission. In 2002 he received the title of professor and became rector.

Source needed: ____ --- Family: Musia and Mina roles ---

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His daughter Musia is married to Rabbi Mordechai Segal, head of the central Chabad House in Vienna. His daughter Mina is married to Rabbi Jechiel Michel Butman, head of Judaism-TV and Chabad children's programs.
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His daughter Musia is married to Rabbi Mordechai Segal, director of Chabad centers in Vienna and a board member of the girls' seminary in Austria and of Lauder Business School. His daughter Mina is married to Rabbi Jechiel Michel Butman, a board member of the Talmud Torah, director of Judaism-TV and coordinator of the Chabad summer camp.

Source: Matanel Foundation — Chabad Youth Center in Vienna — https://www.matanel.org/project/chabad-youth-center-in-vienna/

List of Sources:

1.   Chabad.org — Agudas Chasidei Chabad Austria Headquarters, Vienna — https://www.chabad.org/jewish-centers/117785/Vienna/Synagogue/Agudas-Chasidei-Chabad-Austria-Headquarters

EcaterinaLBS (talk) 15:54, 22 June 2026 (UTC)

Avis Budget Group


Updating the infobox

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Hello editors! I'm here to request a few updates to the Avis Budget Group article via Coyne through my work at Beutler Ink.

I have a diff in my userspace if you'd like to see what changes I have in mind for the article. To begin, I'm hoping to update this infobox with updated leadership and financial figures, using the most recent 10-k.

  • Key people:
  • Number of locations: Approx. 10,000[1]: 4 
  • Number of locations year: 2025[1]
  • revenue: Decrease US$11.652 billion (2025)[1]: 36 
  • net income: Decrease US$−995 million (2025)[1]: 36 
  • assets: Decrease US$31.2 billion (2025)[1]: F-8 
  • equity: Decrease US$−3.1 billion (2025)[1]: 39 
  • number of employees: Approx. 25,000 (2026): 14 
  • footnotes: [1][2]

References

  1. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION FORM 10-K". Avis Budget Group. Retrieved 23 April 2026.
  2. ↑ "Avis Budget Group". Forbes.

Let me know what you think! Thanks! BatBINK (talk) 17:52, 22 June 2026 (UTC)

Dave Zeltserman


Page incomplete

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The page is missing the following easily verified information:

winner of the 2026 Edgar Award for Best Short Story[1]

novel titles:

Alles Endet Hier -- published this February in Germany by Pulp Master, and making Germany's Crime Jury top 10 list in March and April:[2][3]

As well as Trust Nothing[4]

Also, why are there issues being displayed? All the information on the page has citations. If there are any issues that need to be addressed, please let me know. I'd rather have this page removed than have incomplete/wrong information DaveZeltserman (talk) 03:15, 2 May 2026 (UTC)

References

This does not require the use of the admin toolset, so I am making it a standard help request; any editor may help you with these concerns. Administrators have no more authority than any other editor, just extra tools that would be irresponsible for the entire community to possess.
Article content is only as good as those who provide it and how timely they do so. Please see WP:ABOUTYOU. 331dot (talk) 08:26, 3 May 2026 (UTC)
And I have changed it to {{edit coi}}, which is what seems to be being requested.
Note that there is a backlog of requests for such edits, and it may take a while for a volunteer to get around to it. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 11:39, 3 May 2026 (UTC)
I have added the award and removed the issue tags. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 11:44, 3 May 2026 (UTC)
 Done: Thank you for the request. I have added the missing novels. I think that covers everything here, so I'm marking this as answered. Cheers, MediaKyle (talk) 19:28, 3 May 2026 (UTC)


COI Request

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I am the subject of this article. The current 'official site' under external links points to a gambling website that has parked under a domain using my name. Could an editor please remove this? DaveZeltserman (talk) 12:30, 11 May 2026 (UTC)

 Done SpencerT•C 18:11, 13 May 2026 (UTC)


COI Request

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I am the subject of this article. The link for reference 8 to RUSA doesn't work and should be replaced by this link:

https://www.ala.org/news/press-releases/2011/01/top-genre-fiction-titles-named-2011-rusa-reading-list

thanks in advance, DaveZeltserman (talk) 22:49, 22 May 2026 (UTC)

I've added the edit request tag for you. This needs to be done to draw attention to the request. 331dot (talk) 19:37, 24 May 2026 (UTC)
Done DiscoursesonLivvy (talk · contribs) 02:47, 25 May 2026 (UTC)
thanks! DaveZeltserman (talk) 04:34, 25 May 2026 (UTC)


COI Request

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I am the subject of this article. I'd like to add the following to the page to get a photo added:

Dave Zeltserman
GenreCrime, mystery, horror, thriller fiction
Notable worksSmall Crimes, Pariah, Killer, The Caretaker of Lorne Field, Monster: A Novel of Frankenstein, the julius Katz mystery series
Notable awardsEdgar Award (2026)
Shamus Award (2010)
Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine Readers Award (2010, 2013)
Derringer Award (2009)

I'd also like to add the Writing Style and Hardluck Stories sections below, and replace the introductory paragraph with the following:

Dave Zeltserman (born May 23, 1959 in Boston, Massachusetts) is an American novelist and short story writer known for his works in noir, crime, mystery, thriller, and horror genres. A former software engineer, Zeltserman has published more than 20 novels, and has gained widespread critical acclaim for his gritty, uncompromising spin on contemporary noir. His Small Crimes (2008) was selected by NPR as one of the five best crime and mystery novels of 2008[1], by the Washington Post as one of the best novels of the year[2], and was later adapted into a 2017 Netflix original film of the same title starring Nikolaj Coster-Waldau [3]. His extensive short fiction includes the celebrated Julius Katz mystery series, which won the Edgar Award for Julius Katz Draws a Straight Flush[4], Shamus and Derringer awards for Julius Katz[5], and Ellery Queen Readers Awards for Archie’s Been Framed and Archie Solves the Case [6]. His horror writing, such as The Caretaker of Lorne Field (2010) and Monster: A Novel of Frankenstein (2012), has also earned year-end accolades from the ALA [7], Booklist [8], and WBUR [9].

Nikola Biller-Andorno


Proposed expansion and sourcing update

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I am Nikola Biller-Andorno, the subject of this article, and therefore have a conflict of interest. I am not editing the article directly.

The current article is very short and has a notice requesting additional citations. I would like to propose the following expanded and better-sourced version for review by an uninvolved editor. The proposed text adds sourced information on education, academic appointments, research areas, advisory roles, awards, and selected publications. I would welcome any trimming or rewording needed to meet Wikipedia’s standards for biographies of living persons.

=Smart bond (finance)=


Edit request: factual updates per May 2026 discussion

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This follows up on my proposal above, open since 11 May 2026 with no objections. As I have a disclosed conflict of interest, I am requesting an uninvolved editor implement the two factual, additive updates below. No existing content is removed; the only changes to existing text are the table caption and restructuring the US paragraph into a sub-section.

Change 1 — History/issuance table

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(a) Caption: change the visible text "as of August 2021" to "selected, 2017–2026". Leave the existing citation on that line unchanged.

(b) Rows: insert these four rows immediately before the closing |} (after the existing EIB / 27 April 2021 row):

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|[[European Investment Bank]]
|November 29, 2022
|104
|"Project Venus", 2-year Bond
|Private Blockchain (GS DAP)
|Luxembourg
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|[[Siemens]]
|February 14, 2023
|64
|1-year Bond (crypto-security under eWpG)
|Polygon
|Germany
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|[[KfW]]
|July 2, 2024
|N/A
|Crypto-security under eWpG
|Polygon
|Germany
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|[[DZ Bank|DZ BANK]] / [[KfW]]
|March 2026
|N/A
|Smart Bond Contract pilot (crypto-security under eWpG)
|Polygon
|Germany

(c) Paragraph: insert immediately after the closing |} and before the existing "As early as 2014, …" paragraph:

The European Investment Bank's "Project Venus" of November 2022 was the first euro-denominated digital bond on a private blockchain (Goldman Sachs' GS DAP platform), a €100 million two-year issue settled against a tokenised representation of central bank money provided by the Banque de France and the Banque centrale du Luxembourg.<ref name="eib-venus-2022">{{cite press release |no-tracking=true|title=EIB innovates further with Project Venus, the first euro-denominated digital bond on a private blockchain |publisher=European Investment Bank |date=2022-11-29 |url=https://www.eib.org/en/press/all/2022-448-eib-innovates-further-with-project-venus-the-first-euro-denominated-digital-bond-on-a-private-blockchain |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref> In February 2023, [[Siemens]] issued a €60 million one-year bond on the public [[Polygon (blockchain)|Polygon PoS]] blockchain — the first digital bond issued by a German corporate on a public blockchain under the country's ''Gesetz über elektronische Wertpapiere''.<ref name="siemens-2023">{{cite press release |no-tracking=true|title=Siemens issues first digital bond on blockchain |publisher=Siemens AG |date=2023-02-14 |url=https://press.siemens.com/global/en/pressrelease/siemens-issues-first-digital-bond-blockchain |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref> In July 2024, [[KfW]] issued its first blockchain-based digital bond under the same framework.<ref name="kfw-2024">{{cite press release |no-tracking=true|title=KfW issues its first blockchain-based digital bond under the German Electronic Securities Act (eWpG) |publisher=KfW |date=2024-07-02 |url=https://www.kfw.de/About-KfW/Newsroom/Latest-News/Pressemitteilungen-Details_812800.html |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref>

In March 2026, [[DZ Bank|DZ BANK]] (as issuer) and [[KfW]] (as investor) conducted a primary-market transaction using a "Smart Bond Contract" protocol on [[Polygon (blockchain)|Polygon PoS]], mapping the entire bond life cycle — issuance, delivery-versus-payment, coupon payment and redemption — through a set of interconnected smart contracts. Settlement in central bank money was performed via the [[Deutsche Bundesbank|Bundesbank]]'s trigger solution, with ISIN assignment by WM Datenservice and the crypto-securities register maintained by Cashlink.<ref name="dzbank-sbc-2026">{{cite press release |no-tracking=true|title=Premiere: DZ BANK and KfW fully map the lifecycle of a crypto security on a public blockchain |publisher=DZ BANK AG |date=March 2026 |url=https://www.dzbank.com/content/dzbank/en/home/we-are-dz-bank/press/news_archive/2026/premiere--dz-bank-and-kfw-fully-map-the-lifecycle-of-a-crypto-se.html |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref><ref name="fintechnews-sbc-2026">{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=DZ BANK and KfW Complete German Digital Bond Issuance via Blockchain |work=Fintech News Switzerland |date=March 2026 |url=https://fintechnews.ch/fintechgermany/dz-bank-kfw-digital-bond-blockchain/82763/ |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref>

Change 2 — Legislative Considerations

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Keep the intro paragraph, add two sub-sections before the existing US paragraph, and turn the US paragraph into a "North America" sub-section. Insert verbatim:

=== European Union ===
Regulation (EU) 2022/858, the so-called "DLT Pilot Regime", has applied since 23 March 2023 and establishes a time-limited framework allowing market infrastructures based on distributed ledger technology to operate for tokenised financial instruments, including bonds, within specified volume thresholds.<ref name="eu-2022-858">{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=Regulation (EU) 2022/858 of 30 May 2022 on a pilot regime for market infrastructures based on distributed ledger technology |url=https://eur-lex.europa.eu/eli/reg/2022/858/oj |website=EUR-Lex |publisher=Publications Office of the European Union |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref>

=== Germany ===
Germany's [[Gesetz über elektronische Wertpapiere|Electronic Securities Act]] (''Gesetz über elektronische Wertpapiere'', eWpG), in force since 10 June 2021, removed the requirement for a physical certificate for bearer bonds. Securities may be issued as "crypto-securities" (''Kryptowertpapiere'') recorded in a register maintained by a registrar licensed by [[BaFin]].<ref name="ewpg">{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=Gesetz über elektronische Wertpapiere (eWpG) |url=https://www.gesetze-im-internet.de/ewpg/ |website=Bundesministerium der Justiz |language=de |access-date=2026-06-23}}</ref> An early issuance on a public blockchain under this framework was a €60 million [[Siemens]] bond in February 2023 on [[Polygon (blockchain)|Polygon PoS]]; the framework has subsequently been used by [[KfW]] and others.<ref name="siemens-2023" />

=== North America ===

The existing US sentences then follow unchanged as the body of the "North America" sub-section.

Ivan-Vanja Kablar (talk) 14:14, 23 June 2026 (UTC)

Mark Edwin Robinson


COI edit request: update career section and biographical details

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I have a conflict of interest as the subject of this article and would appreciate review by an uninvolved editor.

Recent independent coverage exists regarding the film Hal, written by Mark Edwin Robinson, and I believe the article would benefit from expansion to reflect more recent professional work.

Sources include:

Deadline (February 5, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/02/alexander-ludwig-emma-roberts-to-star-hal-1236710425/

Deadline (February 19, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/02/leslie-bibb-jeffrey-donovan-aidan-quinn-join-hal-1236729993/

Deadline (April 29, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/04/hal-movie-casts-matthew-goode-kate-walsh-garret-dillahunt-more-1236876096/

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Elionfire001 (talk) 04:50, 30 May 2026 (UTC)

Reply 21-JUN-2026

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🔼  Clarification requested  

  • To expedite your request, it would help if you could provide the following information:
  1. Please state each specific desired change and accompanying reference in the form of verbatim statements which can then be added to the article (if approved) by the reviewer.
  2. The exact location where the desired claims are to be placed should be given.
  3. Exact, verbatim descriptions of any text and/or references to be removed should also be given.[10]
  4. Reasons should be provided for each change.[11]
  • In the section of text below titled Sample edit request, the four required items are shown as an example:
  • Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with all four items from your request.

References

  1. ↑ NPR Books Top Five Crime and Mystery Novels of 2008
  2. ↑ Washington Post Best Books of 2008
  3. ↑ Small Crimes (2017), retrieved 2018-03-29
  4. ↑ "2026 Edgar Award Winners announced". Mystery Writers of America. 30 April 2026. Retrieved 3 May 2026.
  5. ↑ [ https://privateeyewriters.com/2025/06/03/150/ Private Eye Writers of America] Shamus Award, 2010
  6. ↑ "Readers Awards - About EQMM | Ellery Queen". www.elleryqueenmysterymagazine.com. Retrieved 2018-03-31.
  7. ↑ "Top genre fiction titles named to 2011 RUSA Reading List". American Library Association. Retrieved 25 May 2026.
  8. ↑ Booklist Magazine 2013 Top 10 Horror Fiction
  9. ↑ WBUR Favorite Books of 2012
  10. ↑ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: Describe the requested changes in detail. This includes the exact proposed wording of the new material, the exact proposed location for it, and an explicit description of any wording to be removed, including removal for any substitution.
  11. ↑ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.

Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  10:20, 21 June 2026 (UTC)


COI edit request: Add Hal writing credit

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I have a conflict of interest as the subject of this article and am requesting review by an uninvolved editor.

Please add the following sentence to the end of the Career section, immediately after the paragraph ending with: "He graduated from Linfield Christian School and began writing scripts when he was 16."

Proposed addition: "Robinson wrote the upcoming biographical drama film Hal, directed by Mark Williams and starring Alexander Ludwig, Emma Roberts, Matthew Goode, Leslie Bibb, Aidan Quinn, and Kate Walsh."

References supporting the proposed addition: Deadline (February 5, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/02/alexander-ludwig-emma-roberts-to-star-hal-1236710425/ Deadline (February 19, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/02/leslie-bibb-jeffrey-donovan-aidan-quinn-join-hal-1236729993/ Deadline (April 29, 2026): https://deadline.com/2026/04/hal-movie-casts-matthew-goode-kate-walsh-garret-dillahunt-more-1236876096/

Text to be removed: None.

Reason for change: The Career section currently concludes with information regarding Robinson's early career. The proposed addition reflects more recent independently sourced professional work and is supported by multiple reliable secondary sources.

Thank you for your time and consideration. Elionfire001 (talk) 17:42, 23 June 2026 (UTC)

IntraLinks


Some proposed changes

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My name is Katherine Velez (www.linkedin.com/in/kgbvelez) and I work for Intralinks. I would like to request an edit to the Intralinks page because it is out of date and no longer accurate. I have provided suggested text below which I believe to be both factual and neutral. Third party references have been included where possible. Thank you for your help in updating the page with the current information. I hope that this update will also remove the templated issue messages. I would be happy to provide additional supporting information, if necessary. Regards and Happy New Year, KV

2602:306:C5CF:24D0:44ED:1632:9920:1F15 (talk) 22:21, 4 January 2018 (UTC)


no Declined

  1. You mentioned that much of what has been deemed in the article as notable is now outdated. But this is not a reason to alter the information, per: WP:NOTTEMPORARY. Specific details which may be outdated, such as names, dates, and locations, may be updated as necessary. If this is the case, please provide these specific examples under another edit request, and be assured that our reply to you will be expedited.
  2. Portions of your proposal are insufficiently paraphrased from the source material, as shown here. Please note that beyond the use of quotes in your proposal, other areas of close paraphrasing were evident in the request. All text submitted for edit requests must be in your own words, or else properly attributed. Close paraphrasing is not acceptable. Please see WP:CLOP for more information about this requirement.

For these two reasons I am declining your request overall. If you wish to propose specific sections of the article to be added (beyond—or if revised, including—sections covered by the two provisions above) you may do so at your earliest convenience. Regards,  Spintendo  00:07, 5 January 2018 (UTC)



Some proposed changes

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FYI Company name = Intralinks NOT IntraLinks
Update to Intralinks Infobox (shown in extended content)

2600:1702:F80:8670:205D:3C95:6A02:5B7C (talk) 14:13, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

References

Reply 05-APR-2018

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Infobox changes

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 Done The infobox was updated. A few of the items in the infobox were either altered or left unchanged. Those include:

  1. Company as a public entity versus private. The older infobox said the former and the newer infobox said the latter. The former was retained. In redoing the subheadings from the older request above (so that they would not impact this page's table of contents) I noticed that in 2017 the company was transitioned back to a private company. I will change this in the infobox.
  2. The employee count. The newer infobox said 600, the older said 1000. The older number was retained.
  3. The designation of Leif O'Leary as President and CEO. The company website lists him as CEO only, and that designation was kept in the new infobox.

Name change

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The paperwork filed by the company with the SEC states their title with a capitalized L. The company's website on the other hand uses either full capitalization of the entire name, or capitalizes only the first letter 'I' in 'Intra' and not the 'L'. I don't see any press releases definitively stating one way or another. There may be some editors who are attached to one version over another, so I would think that a change in the name would therefore require consensus. Editors are asked to give their input on the change from IntraLinks to Intralinks.  Spintendo  9:07 am, 5 April 2018 (UTC−7)


Rewrite to overhaul article for multiple issues.

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Hi, I've spent the last 6 months researching and rewriting this article to address its multiple flaws. The improved draft is here: User:ColbyBurkeSSC/sandbox. I would greatly appreciate a rigorous and neutral review to update the flawed article with the new version. Thanks, Colby ColbyBurkeSSC (talk) 21:01, 26 May 2026 (UTC)

Unfortunately, when only the draft version is submitted we can't see what is asking to be removed. It's important that we see this in order to determine whether anything is being removed that shouldn't be. My suggestion is that you make suggestions for change one section at a time, taking care to delineate what is being requested to be added and what is being requested to be deleted. One example is shown below:
Please open a new request when ready to proceed. Regards,  Spintendo  01:44, 20 June 2026 (UTC)
Hi @Spintendo, I did precisely what you asked and cataloged 23 changes in the XYZ format that you requested. That is documented here: User:ColbyBurkeSSC/sandbox/diff. Thank you for taking a closer look at this. I hope it makes it easier for you to review the suggested changes.
ColbyBurkeSSC (talk) 18:26, 23 June 2026 (UTC)

Milton Packer


This page is about me. I am Milton Packer. The content has not been updated in 8 years. Please help!

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Please help. I am 75 years old and am not very tech-savvy. Please help me get through this. My motivation is to make sure that the page is written clearly and is up to date. The last update was 8 years ago. I identified several sources, and I can provide others.

1 CHANGE #1 Replace the following text: "Milton Packer (b. ca 1951) is an American cardiologist who is known for his clinical research concerning heart failure."

Replace it with the following text Source: https://hfsa.org/milton-packer-md Source: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/1351488/ Source: https://www.acc.org/latest-in-cardiology/articles/2026/03/01/01/cover-story-the-adipokine-hypothesis Source: https://academic.oup.com/eurheartj/article/46/4/337/7915815

"Milton Packer, MD (born 1951) is an American cardiologist who has made important contributions to the field of heart failure, both in understanding its mechanisms and defining its rational management. Over more than 40 years, his work established the cornerstone of the current modern treatments for heart failure, including ACE inhibitors, beta-blockers, angiotensin neprilysin inhibitors and SGLT2 inhibitors. He also raised concerns about the safety of positive inotropic agents, calcium channel blockers and antiarrhythmic drugs in patients with left ventricular systolic dysfunction.

"He proposed the neurohormonal hypothesis of heart failure with reduced ejection fraction in 1992 and the adipokine hypothesis of heart failure with preserved ejection fraction in 2025. He has been the overall Principal Investigator for 20 large-scale international trials of novel interventions in heart failure. He was a Founding Member and served as President of the Heart Failure Society of America (2000-2002), and he has served on numerous guidelines and standards committees for the American Heart Association and American College of Cardiology. Since 1986, he has been a primary consultant to the FDA on matters related to the design of clinical trials and the interpretation of clinical trial evidence. He is currently Distinguished Scholar in Cardiovascular Science at Baylor University Medical Center at Dallas and Visiting Professor at Imperial College in London."

2 CHANGE #2 Replace the following text "In 1992 he published a paper on a neurohormonal hypothesis to explain heart failure that synthesized ideas that were percolating at the time; the paper made him known as the father of that idea.[1][6]"

Replace it with the following text: "In 1992, Packer published a formal proposal for the neurohormonal hypothesis of heart failure, which argued that neurohormonal activation was deleterious to heart failure progression. This hypothesis became a foundational concept in contemporary cardiology and heart failure management, and he is considered the "father of the neurohormonal hypothesis of heart failure"."

Source: Original sources: [1] [6] Also Source: https://hfsa.org/milton-packer-md Source: Gold standard: Milton Packer honoured for pioneering work European Heart Journal, Volume 46, Issue 4, 21 January 2025, Pages 337–338, https://doi.org/10.1093/eurheartj/ehae723 Published: 03 December 2024 Source: https://academic.oup.com/eurheartj/article/46/4/337/7915815


3 CHANGE #3 Please add the following text:

"Dr. Packer was the recipient of the Jesse H. Neal Award for Best Commentary/Blog in 2018 for his column "Revolution and Revelation" on MedPage Today, an award that is considered the Pulitzer Prize for specialized and business journalism."

Source: Milton Packer receives Jesse H. Neal award European Heart Journal, Volume 39, Issue 23, 14 June 2018, Page 2127, https://doi.org/10.1093/eurheartj/ehy262


4 CHANGE #4 Please add the following text:

Dr. Packer received the Lewis Katz Lifetime Achievement Award from Columbia University College of Physicians and Surgeons (2010) and the Eugene Braunwald Lifetime Achievement award from the Heart Failure Association of the European Society of Cardiology (2021). He has also been honored with the Silver Medal (2023) and Gold Medal (2024) from the European Society of Cardiology."

Sources: 1 Source: Gold standard: Milton Packer honoured for pioneering work European Heart Journal, Volume 46, Issue 4, 21 January 2025, Pages 337–338, https://doi.org/10.1093/eurheartj/ehae723 Published: 03 December 2024 Source: https://esc365.escardio.org/person/24777 Source: https://www.escardio.org/news/news-room/congress-news/2024-gold-medallists-packer/ Source: Gold standard: Milton Packer honoured for pioneering work European Heart Journal, Volume 46, Issue 4, 21 January 2025, Pages 337–338, https://doi.org/10.1093/eurheartj/ehae723 Published: 03 December 2024


5 CHANGE #5 Please add the following text:

"Dr. Packer was the Principal Investigator for the EMPEROR-Reduced trial (2021), which demonstrated the efficacy of empagliflozin in patients with heart failure with reduced ejection fraction and for the SUMMIT trial (2024), which showed the efficacy of tirzepatide in patients with heart failure with preserved ejection fraction."

Sources https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMoa2022190 https://www.nejm.org/doi/abs/10.1056/NEJMoa2410027 ~2026-36328-95 (talk) 18:32, 23 June 2026 (UTC)


6 CHANGE #6 Please add the following text:

"In 2024, Dr. Packer published a formal proposal for the adipokine hypothesis of heart failure with preserved ejection fraction, which posited that an imbalance in the secretion of signaling molecules from dysfunctional adipose tissue drives the disease. The hypothesis represents the complement to his neurohormonal hypothesis for heart failure and a reduced ejection fraction, which had been published 33 years earlier. Source: https://www.acc.org/latest-in-cardiology/articles/2026/03/01/01/cover-story-the-adipokine-hypothesis Source: J Am Coll Cardiol. 2025 Oct, 86 (16) 1269-1373. doi: 10.1016/j.jacc.2025.06.055.

Verkada


Connected edit request

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I'm with Verkada and am following Wikipedia's editing guidelines by making this edit request and not editing myself. Thanks for your help.

  • Please add mailroom management to the list of products in the infobox, and change the items to lower case so it looks better. Here's the suggested text: "| products = security cameras, access control, environmental sensors, intrusion alarms, guest management, mailroom management" I add a source for mailroom management below.  Done
  • Please add operating systems to the first sentence in the lead. Here's the requested revised text: " '''Verkada Inc.''' is a [[San Mateo, CA]]-based company that develops [[cloud computing|cloud]]-based building security and operating systems." This Forbes source which is already in the article describes the software operating system. Done
  • I noticed that there's no source for environmental sensors in the second sentence of the lead. Please add this one: <ref>{{cite web|no-tracking=true|url=https://www.messengernews.net/news/local-news/2022/04/fd-school-board-approves-bathroom-vape-sensors/ |title=FD school board approves bathroom vape sensors|website=MessengerNews.com |last1=Wingert|first1=Kelly|date=April 26, 2022|access-date=January 20, 2023}}</ref> Done
  • Please update the history with more recent product and funding news. Here's suggested text with sources: "In August 2022, the company announced a mailroom product to help companies keep track of mail packages and shipments coming into their facilities.<ref>{{cite web|no-tracking=true|url=https://www.securitysales.com/product-news/verkada-mailroom-cloud-management/ |last=Archer |first=Bob |title=Verkada Mailroom Solution Brings Cloud Management to Mail, Shipments |date=August 30, 2022 |website=Security Sales & Integration |access-date=January 12, 2023}}</ref> In September, the company raised $205 million in Series D funding, bringing its valuation to $3.2 billion.<ref>{{cite web|no-tracking=true|url= https://www.wsj.com/articles/building-security-startup-raises-capital-boosts-valuation-amid-downturn-11663149603|last=Vartabedian |first=Marc |title=Building-Security Startup Raises Capital, Boosts Valuation Amid Downturn |date=September 14, 2022 |website=Wall Street Journal |access-date=January 12, 2023}}</ref>" Done Seakittea (talk) 20:57, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
Connected edits implemented and request marked as answered. Emikey-34 (talk) 02:50, 5 March 2023 (UTC)



COI request: Updating the History section

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Hey there, I'm a Verkada employee looking to make improvements to this article. I'd like to start by requesting a few updates to the History. The section is in pretty good shape overall, but I noticed that it's got a few unsourced and outdated claims, and it doesn't contain information about some more recent developments in the company's history. I've put together a draft that I hope remedies those issues.

Here is the draft:

And here is a diff, so that it's easy for editors to tell what I've changed and what I've left alone:

One more note: my draft doesn't include the Data breach subsection because I'm not suggesting any changes to it. Obviously, as a Verkada employee, I don't love it, but I understand why it exists.

If anyone has feedback on my draft, please leave me a note below and I'll do my best to address your concerns. Thanks! Seakittea (talk) 16:17, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

Honestly it's mostly a straightforward improvement. Some areas I don't love:
1. Can you compress the funding rounds? It doesn't need three paragraphs. Further, the sources are mixed about $205mm (including WSJ) and $305mm. I'm sure it'll get changed to $205 if it isn't clarified- I assume the $100mm was a follow-on to the $205.
2. Office locations aren't terribly encyclopedic, they can be omitted.
3. Are there reliable neutral secondary sources talking about the mailroom product? It seems to only be echoed by republishing of the press release.
tedder (talk) 16:51, 14 April 2026 (UTC)
Hey, User:Tedder: Thanks for the thoughtful feedback. I've made some revisions:
  • Deleted the claim about Verkada Mailroom, since I don't have better sourcing for it.
  • Condensed the funding round content, so that it's one paragraph.
  • Got rid of the WSJ citation for the Series D funding round. (You're right that it confuses things a bit.)
  • Deleted the passages about American offices opening. I did keep mention of the Dubai office opening because I think it illustrates how Verkada has expanded geographically, but I defer to your judgment on that one.
Here is my revised draft:
Let me know what you think. And thank you again for taking the time to work with me on this! Seakittea (talk) 20:11, 16 April 2026 (UTC)
Done- I made a few minor changes, mostly around "valuation grew significantly". tedder (talk) 22:04, 16 April 2026 (UTC)
User:Tedder: If I could ask for one more small thing, I just realized there's a typo in the first sentence of the third paragraph. It reads:
"In January 2020, the company raised $80 million in a Series C funding found led by Felicis Ventures, giving the company a $1.6 billion valuation."
Obviously, "funding found" should be "funding round." Other than that, the section looks great now. Thanks for your help! Seakittea (talk) 21:33, 20 April 2026 (UTC)
Done- good catch. tedder (talk) 00:02, 21 April 2026 (UTC)


COI request: Adding a Products section

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Hello! Now that the History section is in good shape, I'd like to request that a new Products section be added to the article. I've composed a draft, which the community can review by clicking the dropdown here:

I've tried to answer two basic questions with this section draft: 1.) What kind of products does Verkada make? and 2.) What kind of organizations use Verkada's products? I hope I've done so without veering into promotional/marketing territory, but more experienced editors can let me know. Thank you in advance to anyone who takes the time to review this request! Seakittea (talk) 20:45, 28 April 2026 (UTC)

User:Tedder: Would you be interested in reviewing this draft? Don't feel obligated, just thought I would ask. Thanks! Seakittea (talk) 22:52, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
I'm going to reach out to User:Guninvalid, who has made productive edits to this article in the past. Guninvalid, if you have the time and inclination to review the request above, I would really appreciate it. And if not, no worries. Thank you! Seakittea (talk) 23:14, 28 May 2026 (UTC)
I'm generally uncomfortable with having a "Products" section for a currently operating company; it leans really heavily toward being promotional. If you can source the dates when Verkada began offering these products though, it might be okay to fit into the History section. Something like "At its founding, Verkada offered security cameras, access controls, and alarms." guninvalid (talk) 02:21, 29 May 2026 (UTC)
While I'm here, oftentimes with COI edit requests, less is more. It's often much easier and much less likely to be promotional if your edit request is only one or two sentences with a bunch of sources. It's one less thing for me to check; I can just focus on evaluating sources and weight. Writing more risks veering into promotional territory, plus it means I have to already really care to read through your paragraphs. If it's worth elaboration, I'm happy to write my own prose based on your sources and any others I may find. guninvalid (talk) 03:23, 29 May 2026 (UTC)
I see what you're saying, User:Guninvalid. In that case, would you be against adding one sentence about Verkada platform's AI capabilities to the History? That feels like a significant development, in terms of the evolution of the company's products, and it's been covered in a CNBC piece. This is the second-to-last paragraph of the History, with my suggested new sentence highlighted in yellow:
Verkada's Series D funding round closed in October 2023 and raised $305 million at a $3.2 billion valuation.[1] In February 2025, Verkada's Series E funding round raised another $200 million at a $4.5 billion valuation.[2] In July 2025, Verkada added AI capabilities to its platform, including a "unified timeline" tool that automatically organizes images from multiple cameras to give users several angles of a single incident.[3] A December 2025 funding round led by Alphabet's venture capital arm CapitalG brought in $100 million at a $5.8 billion valuation.[3] At the end of 2025, Verkada had approximately 30,000 active customers.[4]
Please feel free to either shoot me down or revise that sentence. I'll defer to your judgment. Thanks for taking time to discuss this request with me. Talk soon, I hope! Seakittea (talk) 23:06, 3 June 2026 (UTC)
The sentence is fine, but the source itself isn't the best. WP:CNBC is generally considered a reliable source, but this is an WP:INTERVIEW with the CEO, and reads more like a breathless press release than objective reporting. It would be best to provide 1-2 more sources for this claim, though it's probably okay to add as is. guninvalid (talk) 01:33, 4 June 2026 (UTC)
User:Guninvalid: I think that CNBC source is the highest-quality one I have, in terms of the reliability of the outlet itself and the depth of the coverage, but I'll give you a few more. At worst, maybe these provide some additional context:
  • Silicon Angle (Dec. 2025): "The [Verkada] platform also provides other AI features. It can review data from the Verkada sensors at a given location and activate an on-site alarm when suspicious activity is detected. Administrators can also activate the alarms manually via an app."[5]
  • Reuters (Dec. 2025): "San Mateo, California-based Verkada, founded in 2016, makes cloud and AI-powered physical security platforms that consolidate cameras, access control and alarms on a central dashboard [...] The company said the investment will accelerate its AI capabilities and may also provide liquidity for employees."[6]
  • Security Sales & Integration (Sep. 2025): "Building on its suite of AI features like People and Vehicle Analytics and AI-Powered Search, Verkada introduced a new tool to visually reconstruct the entire journey of people and vehicles across a property. With the new AI-Powered Unified Timeline, Verkada Command will unify video events from all cameras onto a single, map-based timeline. Paired with expanded AI-Powered Alerts that include activity- and industry-specific detections and an Operator View that centralizes alerts into a ticket-based system with a structured workflow."[7]
  • The Tech Buzz (Dec. 2025): "Verkada just became the latest poster child for AI's march into physical security, with Google's CapitalG leading a $100 million round that values the startup at $5.8 billion. The valuation jump of $1.3 billion since February shows how quickly investors are warming up to AI-powered security solutions [...] The secret sauce lies in Verkada's cloud-based platform that connects cameras, alarms, and sensors into a single AI-powered system. Instead of just recording footage, these devices actively analyze what they see. The company processes over 20 million images per hour, extracting insights about foot traffic, occupancy rates, and security violations that traditional systems miss entirely."[4]
Hope that gives you something to work with If you need anything else, please let me know! Seakittea (talk) 17:24, 5 June 2026 (UTC)
 Done in revision Special:Diff/1359685995. guninvalid (talk) 16:56, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
Thanks for the help, User:Guninvalid! Seakittea (talk) 00:44, 18 June 2026 (UTC)

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COI request: Revising the Controversies section

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Hello again! I'd like to place another edit request, this time for revisions to the Controversies section. I'm aware that, as a COI editor, other folks are going to be rightly skeptical of any changes I propose to this section. Please know that I'm not trying to sweep negative content under the rug. The company has been involved in a few controversial developments covered by reputable press publications, and so I understand that discussion of these things on our Wikipedia page are fair game.

My draft, which you can review side-by-side with the current section and/or by itself below, attempts to do two basic things:

  1. Clean up the description of the Motorola lawsuit so that it's easier to follow
  2. Reframe the facial recognition technology passage so that it covers specific criticisms of Verkada in the cited Washington Post article, rather than more general criticisms of facial recognition technology

And here is the draft by itself:

Happy to discuss this draft with other editors. Thanks in advance to whoever takes a look! Seakittea (talk) 19:27, 23 June 2026 (UTC)

Kenneth S. Kosik

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Addition of Research section (new)

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  • What I think should be changed (include citations):

Research section (new):

- Addition of research section that outlines the multiple topics researched by Kosik lab.

Updated version:

Kenneth Kosik’s research focuses on the underlying molecular basis of plasticity, particularly how protein translation at the synapse affects learning and how impairments of plasticity lead to neurodegenerative diseases[1]. Beginning in the early nineties, Kosik contributed toward the characterization of the largest familial Alzheimer kindred in the world, a large family in Colombia with dementia onset at an early age. At that time none of the current research facilities existed there. This began a longterm collaboration with Francisco Lopera in which the family trees were assembled, the neuropathological proof of Alzheimer’s disease obtained, the gene mutation discovered, the first brain imaging performed, and specialized neuropsychological testing devised. Kosik’s work with early onset familial Alzheimer’s disease in Colombia was the basis for a novel prevention trial to treat Alzheimer’s disease, and his efforts stimulated many discoveries and catalyzed research by a diverse group of experts who contributed to elaborating complex facets of this unique population[2].

In 1986, Kosik was one of several groups that independently discovered Tau protein in the Alzheimer neurofibrillary tangle, followed up with many studies on the biology and pathobiology of Tau[3]. Kosik showed the loss of polarity in tangle-bearing neurons and published the first cloning of human tau, identification of its microtubule binding domain, the first description that tau splicing was developmentally regulated, the localization of tau mRNA, and the identification of a human tau promoter [4]. He defined a role for tau in axonal elaboration and neuronal polarity, and he discovered that the inhibition of farnesyl transferase ameliorates tau pathology in animal models[5].

Most recently, he discovered the receptor LRP1 is involved in tau uptake and spread, which are looked upon as the basis for target identification and drug discovery[6]. Kosik’s research has also described how RNA moves in neurons as RNA granules called droplets that contain a distinct liquid-liquid phase separated state[7][8]. Furthermore, he has identified a role for miRNAs in exit from pluripotency and discovered a set of cellular programs that harbinger a neuro-ectodermal fate[9]. Kosik has also identified one of the earliest expression dysfunctions in Williams syndrome using induced pluripotent stem cells[10], and his detailed studies of delta-catenin all directly from the Kosik lab revealed a remarkable set of findings[11][12].

  • Why it should be changed:

- Addition of Research section to expand upon research background.

NRI-gaucho (talk) 02:38, 26 September 2025 (UTC) {{reftalk}}

{{Respond|xmark|Not done:}} Duplicate request. Please avoid making duplicates as it won't speed up the request, but it does clog up the queue. Thanks Encoded  Talk 💬 17:35, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
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Addition of Biography section

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Biography section (new):

- Addition of biography section that summarizes education, positions, and appointments.

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Kenneth Kosik completed a B.A. and M.A. in English literature from Case Western Reserve University in 1972 and an M.D. from the Medial College of Pennsylvania in 1976. He served as a resident in neurology at Tufts New England Medical Center and was Chief Resident in 1980. From 1980 to 2004, he held a series of academic appointments at the Harvard Medical School and achieved the rank of full professor there in 1996. Kosik also held appointments at McLean Hospital, Brigham and Women’s Hospital, the Massachusetts General Hospital and the Dana-Farber Cancer Institute between 1980 and 2004. In 2004, Kosik became the Harriman Professor of Neuroscience Research, where he also serves as Co-Director of the Neuroscience Research Institute at the University of California, Santa Barbara. Kosik also currently co-directs the Tau Consortium, co-founded the Learning and the Brain Conference, and has a longstanding interest in the interface between neuroscience and education[13].

  • Why it should be changed:

- Addition of Biography section to summarize professional background.

NRI-gaucho (talk) 02:41, 26 September 2025 (UTC) {{reftalk}}

{{Respond|xmark|Not done:}} The changes are not supported by neutral, independent, reliable sources. Please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made.  Likeanechointheforest (talk) 16:58, 29 September 2025 (UTC)
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Addition of Biography section

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Kenneth Kosik completed a B.A. and M.A. in English literature from Case Western Reserve University in 1972 and an M.D. from the Medial College of Pennsylvania in 1976. He served as a resident in neurology at Tufts New England Medical Center and was Chief Resident in 1980. From 1980 to 2004, he held a series of academic appointments at the Harvard Medical School and achieved the rank of full professor there in 1996. Kosik also held appointments at McLean Hospital, Brigham and Women’s Hospital, the Massachusetts General Hospital and the Dana-Farber Cancer Institute between 1980 and 2004. In 2004, Kosik became the Harriman Professor of Neuroscience Research, where he also serves as Co-Director of the Neuroscience Research Institute at the University of California, Santa Barbara. Kosik also currently co-directs the Tau Consortium, co-founded the Learning and the Brain Conference, and has a longstanding interest in the interface between neuroscience and education[14].

  • Why it should be changed:

- Addition of Biography section to summarize professional background.

2600:6C52:7E7F:FA18:986D:540A:595C:EF1B (talk) 18:36, 29 September 2025 (UTC) {{reftalk}}

{{Respond|xmark|Not done:}} duplicate request. GoldRomean (talk) 06:29, 18 December 2025 (UTC)
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Addition of Research section

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- Addition of research section that outlines the multiple topics researched by Kosik lab.

Updated version:

Kenneth Kosik’s research focuses on the underlying molecular basis of plasticity, particularly how protein translation at the synapse affects learning and how impairments of plasticity lead to neurodegenerative diseases [15]. Beginning in the early nineties, Kosik contributed toward the characterization of the largest familial Alzheimer kindred in the world, a large family in Colombia with dementia onset at an early age. At that time none of the current research facilities existed there. This began a longterm collaboration with Francisco Lopera in which the family trees were assembled, the neuropathological proof of Alzheimer’s disease obtained, the gene mutation discovered, the first brain imaging performed, and specialized neuropsychological testing devised. Kosik’s work with early onset familial Alzheimer’s disease in Colombia was the basis for a novel prevention trial to treat Alzheimer’s disease, and his efforts stimulated many discoveries and catalyzed research by a diverse group of experts who contributed to elaborating complex facets of this unique population [16].

In 1986, Kosik was one of several groups that independently discovered Tau protein in the Alzheimer neurofibrillary tangle, followed up with many studies on the biology and pathobiology of Tau [17]. Kosik showed the loss of polarity in tangle-bearing neurons and published the first cloning of human tau, identification of its microtubule binding domain, the first description that tau splicing was developmentally regulated, the localization of tau mRNA, and the identification of a human tau promoter [18]. He defined a role for tau in axonal elaboration and neuronal polarity, and he discovered that the inhibition of farnesyl transferase ameliorates tau pathology in animal models[19].

Most recently, he discovered the receptor LRP1 is involved in tau uptake and spread, which are looked upon as the basis for target identification and drug discovery [20]. Kosik’s research has also described how RNA moves in neurons as RNA granules called droplets that contain a distinct liquid-liquid phase separated state [21][22]. Furthermore, he has identified a role for miRNAs in exit from pluripotency and discovered a set of cellular programs that harbinger a neuro-ectodermal fate [23]. Kosik has also identified one of the earliest expression dysfunctions in Williams syndrome using induced pluripotent stem cells, [24] and his detailed studies of delta-catenin all directly from the Kosik lab revealed a remarkable set of findings [25][26].

  • Why it should be changed:

- Addition of Research section to expand upon research background, which has changed over career.

NRI-gaucho (talk) 19:06, 20 October 2025 (UTC) {{reftalk}}

{{Respond|yellowcheck|Partly done:}} Reworded slightly Encoded  Talk 💬 17:33, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
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Addition of Biography section

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Kenneth Kosik completed a B.A. and M.A. in English literature from Case Western Reserve University in 1972 and an M.D. from the Medial College of Pennsylvania in 1976. He served as a resident in neurology at Tufts New England Medical Center and was Chief Resident in 1980. From 1980 to 2004, he held a series of academic appointments at the Harvard Medical School and achieved the rank of full professor there in 1996. Kosik also held appointments at McLean Hospital, Brigham and Women’s Hospital, the Massachusetts General Hospital and the Dana-Farber Cancer Institute between 1980 and 2004. In 2004, Kosik became the Harriman Professor of Neuroscience Research, where he also serves as Co-Director of the Neuroscience Research Institute at the University of California, Santa Barbara. Kosik also currently co-directs the Tau Consortium, co-founded the Learning and the Brain Conference, and has a longstanding interest in the interface between neuroscience and education [27].

  • Why it should be changed:

- Addition of Biography section to summarize professional background.

NRI-gaucho (talk) 19:07, 20 October 2025 (UTC) {{reftalk}}

{{Respond|orangeexclamation|Not done for now:}} This content is almost word-for-word the same as the source, which may introduce copyright issues. Please re-write the section to help us avoid this. Many thanks, Encoded  Talk 💬 17:29, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
Would be great to have some more reliable sources as well! :) Encoded  Talk 💬 17:30, 21 December 2025 (UTC)
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Update to Awards section on Kenneth S. Kosik page

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2021, Potamkin Prize[28] 2017, Elected American Association for the Advancement of Science Fellow[29] 2004, Harriman Chair in Neuroscience, University of California, Santa Barbara[30] 2002, Premio Aventis-Academia Nacionale de Medicina, Colombia[31] 1991, Zenith Award, Alzheimer Association[32] 1990, Derek Denny-Brown Neurological Scholar Award[33] 1988, Moore Award, American Association of Neuropathologists[34]


  • Why it should be changed:

Inclusion of citations for Awards section.

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Edit Request: Removal of page errors

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  • What I think should be changed (include citations): Request for removal of Excessive Links warning and Biography of a Living Person References.
  • Why it should be changed: Issues have been resolved.


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MS NOW

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Add MS NOW logo to History "Rebranding" section?

{{Edit COI|D}} The History section includes inset images of logos in use at the time for each period covered. Should it also include the new logo for the 2024-present period at the "Rebranding" subheading? WeekdayUpdate (talk) 06:26, 21 January 2026 (UTC)

{{Respond|xmark|Not done:}} Looking at the page's history, the previous logo was only moved down after the rebrand. MetalBreaksAndBends (talk) 03:37, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
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Post-rebrand programming milestones

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The article covers the MS NOW rebrand in detail but has limited coverage of the network's post-rebrand operations. Two independently sourced milestones may be worth noting:

{{green check}} Partially done 1. Independent election coverage branding: For the 2026 midterm primaries, MS NOW debuted "We the People" as its election coverage brand — replacing the "Decision" branding the network had shared with NBC News since its launch. This is the first election cycle in the network's nearly 30-year history under its own coverage identity. The debut aired March 3, 2026, covering primaries in Arkansas, North Carolina, and Texas.

NewscastStudio: "MS NOW puts 'We the People' at the center of its election night brand" The Hill: "MS Now shakes up lineup ahead of midterm elections"

{{Nay}} Not Done 2. GLAAD Media Award: The Weekend — which was MS NOW's first program to air under the new name — won Outstanding TV Journalism Segment at the 37th Annual GLAAD Media Awards for its interview with Laverne Cox.

Deadline: "GLAAD Media Awards 2026 Winners List" Variety: "Heated Rivalry, Stranger Things and Traitors Win GLAAD Media Awards"

Both items illustrate the network establishing an independent editorial identity after the spin-off. Would editors consider whether either or both are appropriate for the article? WeekdayUpdate (talk) 03:25, 15 April 2026 (UTC)

{{green check}} Partially completed - I completed part of your request. I added a reworded version of the new election coverage brand using the source that verified. The second part of your request failed to verify with the sources provided.
Thank you! S1mply.dogmom (talk) 21:55, 18 May 2026 (UTC)
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Update Anchors and hosts list to reflect June 15, 2026 lineup

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The article body already documents MS NOW's June 15, 2026 lineup overhaul in the "Rebranding as MS NOW" section, but the Notable personnel → Anchors and hosts list still reflects the pre-overhaul roles, so the two sections now contradict each other. Would an editor consider making the changes below to harmonize the list with the body and with independent trade reporting? Each item is sourced individually so they can be considered separately.

1. Ana Cabrera — remove. She has departed the network.

Current: * Ana Cabrera – Ana Cabrera Reports anchor (2023–present)
Proposed: remove the line.[36][37]

2. Chris Jansing — move to "American-based correspondents and reporters." Chris Jansing Reports has ended; she has moved to a reporting role as chief political correspondent.

Current (under Anchors and hosts): * Chris Jansing – Anchor, Chris Jansing Reports (2022–present) and MS NOW senior national correspondent (1998–present)
Proposed (move to correspondents): * Chris Jansing – Chief political correspondent (1998–present)[36][38]

3. Stephanie Ruhle — update show. She moved from The 11th Hour to a new 9–11 a.m. daytime program.

Current: * Stephanie Ruhle – Host of The 11th Hour (2022–present), senior business analyst (2016–present)
Proposed: * Stephanie Ruhle – Host of Money, Power, Politics (2026–present), senior business analyst (2016–present)[37][36]

4. Ali Velshi — update show. The weekend program Velshi ended; he now hosts The 11th Hour on weeknights.

Current: * Ali Velshi – Anchor of Velshi, correspondent (2016–present)
Proposed: * Ali Velshi – Host of The 11th Hour (2026–present), correspondent (2016–present)[37][36]

5. Katy Tur — update show title. Katy Tur Reports was rebranded as a standalone program.

Current: * Katy Tur – Katy Tur Reports anchor (2012–present)
Proposed: * Katy Tur – Host of The Moment with Katy Tur (2026–present)[37][36]

6. Alicia Menendez — update show. She left The Weeknight for a new daytime program.

Current: * Alicia Menendez – The Weeknight co-host (2019–present)
Proposed: * Alicia Menendez – Host of On the Line with Alicia Menendez (2026–present)[37][36]

7. Luke Russert — update role. He took Menendez's seat as co-host of The Weeknight.

Current: * Luke Russert – Host of MS NOW Live and director of creative services (2008–2016; 2023–present)
Proposed: * Luke Russert – The Weeknight co-host (2026–present) and director of creative services (2023–present)[37][36]

8. Jacob Soboroff — add to Anchors and hosts. He now hosts a new weekend program (he is already listed under correspondents and can remain there).

Proposed (add): * Jacob Soboroff – Host of Connect with Jacob Soboroff (2026–present)[37][36]

9. Peter Alexander — add to Anchors and hosts. He joined MS NOW to anchor the weekday 11 a.m. hour and serve as chief national reporter.

Proposed (add): * Peter Alexander – Anchor of MS NOW's 11 a.m. weekday program and chief national reporter (2026–present)[38][37]
(Note for editors: the network's public schedule lists the 11 a.m. weekday hour generically as "MS NOW Reports" without naming a host; Alexander's anchor role is supported by the Variety and Deadline citations below.)


Thank you for considering these. WeekdayUpdate (talk) 00:53, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

USA Sports (2025–present)

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PGA of America extension and Firethorn Productions venture

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Two developments related to USA Sports' golf portfolio that have third-party coverage:

1. PGA of America media rights extension through 2033: NBC Sports and USA Sports extended their media rights agreement with the PGA of America through 2033. The deal covers the Ryder Cup, KPMG Women's PGA Championship, Senior PGA Championship, and PGA Professional Championship, with coverage airing across USA Network, Golf Channel, NBC, and Peacock. This is the second major golf rights partnership struck between NBC Sports and Versant since the spin-off.

Front Office Sports: "PGA of America Extends Ryder Cup Deal With NBC and Versant" Sportcal: "NBC Sports, Versant, retain US Ryder Cup rights in PGA of America extension"

2. Firethorn Productions: In December 2025, Versant and Rory McIlroy launched Firethorn Productions — described as Versant's first-ever joint venture. The company will produce original content across GolfPass, Golf Channel, and other Versant properties, including documentary storytelling, branded campaigns, and live fan experiences. McIlroy's GolfPass partnership was also extended through 2038.

The Hollywood Reporter: "Rory McIlroy and Versant Are Launching a Production Company" Sports Video Group: "Versant Announces Long-Term Partnership Extension with Rory McIlroy"

The article currently covers the PGA Tour and Golf Channel rights in the Current rights section. Would editors consider whether these developments warrant inclusion? WeekdayUpdate (talk) 03:32, 15 April 2026 (UTC)

Reply 9-JUN-2026

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  1. {{nay}} The proposed text regarding the PGA deal appears to contain WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE material. The text is short, just 3 sentences long, however, the text still needs to be sufficiently variegated so that it adheres to our guidelines on close paraphrasing.
  2. {{aye}} The proposed text concerning Firethorn Productions can be added if that company is independently notable in Wikipedia. Please provide the H:WIKILINK for the company to proceed.
  3. When ready, kindly change {{tlx|Edit COI}} answer parameter to read from {{para|ans|y}} to {{para|ans|n}}.

Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  15:00, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

Thanks, Spintendo. To address the WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE concern on item 1, here is fully reworded text for the PGA of America extension, drawing on the two independent trade reports. I'm advancing only this item for now; the Firethorn Productions item (your point 2) remains on hold while I work out the WP:N notability question you raised, so please disregard it in this pass.
Proposed addition to the Overview section:
In March 2026, the PGA of America renewed its United States media-rights partnership with NBC Sports and USA Sports, carrying forward through 2033 an arrangement that had previously been set to conclude in 2031. The renewal keeps the biennial Ryder Cup as its anchor event and also spans the KPMG Women's PGA Championship, the Senior PGA Championship and the PGA Professional Championship, with telecasts distributed across USA Network, Golf Channel, NBC and Peacock; the men's PGA Championship is not part of the agreement, as those rights are held separately by CBS and ESPN. As a result of the extension, the 2033 Ryder Cup at the Olympic Club in San Francisco will fall under USA Sports and NBC Sports coverage. It was the second golf renewal the partners completed following Versant's spin-off, after an August 2025 USGA agreement that runs through 2032.[1][2]
I've updated the section's edit-request template to {{para|ans|n}} per your note. Thank you! WeekdayUpdate (talk) 01:21, 24 June 2026 (UTC)
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Current rights: add Olympics and DP World Tour; correct WNBA citation

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Would an editor consider three small updates to bring the Current rights list into line with the article's own infobox and Overview? Each of these includes independently sourced citations:

1. Add the 2026 Winter Olympics. The Olympics appear in the infobox and are described in the Overview, but are absent from the Current rights list.

Proposed (add bullet): * 2026 Winter Olympics (2026) — NBC Sports–produced coverage of the Milan Cortina Games on USA Network and CNBC, sublicensed from NBC Sports[3]

2. Add the DP World Tour. It is named among the golf properties in the November 12, 2025 launch announcement in the Overview, but is missing from the list. Front Office Sports reports the deal was extended through 2030.

Proposed (add bullet): * DP World Tour (2026–present) — coverage on Golf Channel through 2030[4]

3. Correct the WNBA citation. The Women's National Basketball Association entry currently cites a Sports Video Group article about the League One Volleyball (LOVB) deal — not the WNBA. The correct source is the Deadline report already used in the Overview.

Proposed: repoint the WNBA entry's citation to:[5]
(Note: the same name=SVG reference is also attached to the Babe Ruth League "U.S., International and World Championship on CNBC" line, where it likewise doesn't match; editors may wish to repoint that to the Sports Business Journal source already cited on the Babe Ruth entry.)

Thank you for considering these.

WeekdayUpdate (talk) 01:18, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Anja Kotar

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Request to update career and discography

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I have a conflict of interest because I am the subject of this article. I am requesting review from an uninvolved editor.

Suggested changes:

1. In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:

In 2022, Kotar released 12 Months, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.

Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/

2. In the same section, please add:

In 2023, Kotar released the album Hopeless Romantic.

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

3. Please add a current-career update:

In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing At The Bookstore project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.

Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/

4. In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:

  • Hopeless Romantic (2023)

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 20:51, 1 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 23-JUN-2026

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  • In your proposed text, it was noted that 12 Months, Hopeless Romantic and At The Bookstoore were not WikiLinked.
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Regards,  Spintendo  01:41, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the note. I have added WikiLinks to the proposed text as requested.
Revised suggested text:
In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:
In 2022, Kotar released ‘’12 Months’’, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.
Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/
In the same section, please add:
In 2023, Kotar released the album ‘’Hopeless Romantic’’.
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Please add a current-career update:
In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing ‘’At the Bookstore’’ project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.
Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/
In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:
‘’Hopeless Romantic’’ (2023)
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 04:16, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Jack Logan (filmmaker)

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Update on “Social media” subsection under “Career”

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I would like to suggest expanding the “Social media” subsection under “Career” to reflect newer independent coverage of Jack Logan’s revived #JackLoganRealtalks series in 2026. The proposed wording is neutral and based on coverage from Daily Tribune, Manila Bulletin, and ABS-CBN Lifestyle. Please feel free to edit the proposed text if necessary. Thank you very much!

Proposed text:

In 2026, Logan revived #JackLoganRealtalks as a short-form social commentary series focused on Philippine social and political issues.{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=Jack Logan on purpose, platform, and speaking out |url=https://mb.com.ph/2026/04/30/jack-logan-on-purpose-platform-and-speaking-out |work=Manila Bulletin |date=30 April 2026 |access-date=20 June 2026}} The series was covered by Daily Tribune, which described its vertical-format episodes as direct and relatable discussions of everyday issues affecting Filipinos.{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=Laughing through the truth: Jack Logan’s ‘Realtalks’ sparks conversations online |url=https://tribune.net.ph/2026/04/27/laughing-through-the-truth-jack-logans-realtalks-sparks-conversations-online |work=Daily Tribune |date=27 April 2026 |access-date=20 June 2026}} Manila Bulletin described the project as a return to short-form commentary blending satire, humor, and social observation,{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=Jack Logan on purpose, platform, and speaking out |url=https://mb.com.ph/2026/04/30/jack-logan-on-purpose-platform-and-speaking-out |work=Manila Bulletin |date=30 April 2026 |access-date=20 June 2026}} while ABS-CBN Lifestyle profiled Logan’s use of humor in discussing political issues.{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=Why content creator Jack Logan uses humor to tackle political issues |url=https://www.abs-cbn.com/lifestyle/people-culture-events/2026/5/18/why-content-creator-jack-logan-uses-humor-to-tackle-political-issues-1602 |work=ABS-CBN Lifestyle |date=18 May 2026 |access-date=20 June 2026}}

Thank you very much.

Suggested sources:

RavenFireblade (talk) 14:12, 18 May 2026 (UTC)

Reply 16-JUN-2026

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  • Your edit request could not be reviewed because it is unclear which references are connected to which claim statements in the text of your proposal. When proposing edit requests it is important to highlight in the text, through the use of ref tags, which specific sources are doing the referencing for each claim. The point of these inline ref tags is to allow the reviewer and readers to check that the material is sourced; that point will be lost if the ref tags are not clearly placed. Note the examples below:

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

References

      1. Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.
      2. Harinath, Paramjit. (2019) "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.
      3. Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.

In the first example above there are three references provided, but the claim statements do not contain ref tags indicating which reference applies where. The references instead have been placed outside of the text, bundled together towards the bottom. Your edit request similarly bundles references together outside of the area of the requested text. These links between material and their source references must be more clearly made, as shown in the next example below:

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,{{green|<ref>}}{{red|{{cite book|no-tracking=true|last1=Sjöblad|first1=Tristan|title=The Sun|url=http://www.booksource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2020|page=1}}}}{{green|</ref>}} while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.{{green|<ref>}}{{red|{{cite journal|no-tracking=true|last1=Harinath|first1=Prisha|title=Size of the Moon|journal=Science|issue=78|volume=51|url=http://www.journalsource.com|date=2020|page=46}}}}{{green|</ref>}} The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.{{green|<ref>}}{{red|{{cite book|no-tracking=true|last1=Uemura|first1=Shu|title=The Sun's Heat|url=http://www.websource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2020|page=2}}}}{{green|</ref>}}

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The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

References

  1. ^ Sjöblad, Tristan. {{blue|The Sun}}. Academic Press, 2020, p. 1.
  2. ^ Harinath, Prisha. {{blue|"Size of the Moon"}}, Science, 51(78):46. 2020.
  3. ^ Uemura, Shū. {{blue|The Sun's Heat}}. Academic Press, 2020, p. 2.

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  • In the second example above, the links between the provided references and their claim statement ref tags are perfectly clear. Kindly reformulate your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience.

Regards,  Spintendo  11:23, 16 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the guidance. I have revised the proposed text above to include inline ref tags showing which sources support each claim. Please feel free to edit the wording if necessary for neutrality, style, or due weight. RavenFireblade (talk) 14:24, 20 June 2026 (UTC)

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