User:Bawolff/Edit COI Summary/15 per page (alphabetical)/2


Requesting independent review of expanded article with citations

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Hi. This article is about me, but it has lacked citations and significant information. I have researched a draft and submitted here for your consideration.

DRAFT: User:CinematicComposer/sandbox

Thank you, AH CinematicComposer (talk) 21:40, 13 July 2026 (UTC)


Edit Requests for June 2026

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I have suggestions for improving this page. I have a COI as I am affiliated with Alexander Technique Canada and would appreciate the help of neutral editors.

Pinging @MrOllie:,@Tgeorgescu:, @Bon courage: as the editors most recently active on the page.

Thank you.


1. What I think should be changed:

Please move the History section from beneath the Method section to directly beneath the Lead section.

Reason for the change: Providing a historical overview of the topic before describing other aspects makes the article more readable and seems standard well-rated Wikipedia articles like Beck Depression Inventory and Bates method.

2. What I think should be changed:

In the History section, please replace the fourth paragraph:

Change from:

When considering how to classify the Alexander technique in relation to mainstream medicine, some sources describe it as alternative and/or complementary, depending on whether it is used alone or with mainstream methods. The American National Center for Complementary and Integrative Health classifies it as a "psychological and physical" complementary approach to health when used with mainstream methods. When used "in place of" conventional medicine, it is considered "alternative".[1]

Change to:

The American National Center for Complementary and Integrative Health classifies the Alexander technique as a psychological and physical complementary approach to health when used with mainstream methods.[1]

Reason for the change: The first sentence of the existing paragraph is a inaccurate (”some sources describe it…”) The sentence actually cites only a single source that describes the technique. The suggested replacement accurately reflects that. I’ve also suggested removing the third sentence because the source does not explicitly state that the Alexander technique is considered alternative when used ’‘in place” of mainstream methods. Instead,in discussing a variety of complementary techniques, the article makes the point that if a complementary approach is used in place of traditional medicine, that approach should then be considered alternative medicine. It’s inaccurate to state the article singles out the Alexander Technique. To make the broader point in the article would take the article off-topic – especially because the distinction is explained in the Wikilinked article dedicated to alternative medicine.

3. What I think should be changed:

In the Method section, please add a new first paragraph:

The Alexander technique was described in 2014 by a group of researchers in the journal Efficacy and Mechanism Evaluation as an educational approach rather than a medical treatment. Individuals who take lessons are regarded as students rather than patients, and the instruction is not considered a form of passive therapy.[2]

Reason for the change: This adds fundamental clarifying details about the technique and makes a critical distinction between educational instruction and medical treatment, based on a peer reviewed source.

4. What I think should be changed:

In the Method section, replace what should now be the third paragraph.

Change from:

In the United Kingdom, there is no regulation for who can offer Alexander technique services. Professional organisations do exist, however, typically offering three-year courses to people becoming instructors.[3]

Change to:

In the United Kingdom, there is no statutory regulation of who may teach the Alexander Technique. Professional organisations offer multi-year training and voluntary membership, with registrants expected to meet standards and follow a code of ethics.[3] A 2015 UK survey identified three main professional Alexander technique professional associations and found the majority of affiliated practitioners were university educated and typically self-employed.[4]

Reason for the change: The proposed wording is more precise. The NHS source supports that there is no statutory regulation in the UK, not that the field is wholly unregulated. The revised text also gives relevant context about professional associations, training, voluntary standards, and practitioner characteristics, supported by the 2015 UK survey.

Thank you for your time. Salamander95 (talk) 18:30, 1 June 2026 (UTC)


Request to update infobox and “Founding” subsection.

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I am a Dell Technologies employee, and I’m reaching out with an edit request for the Alienware article. I fully understand and respect Wikipedia's conflict of interest guidelines, so I will not edit the page directly. Instead, I am submitting this request here for consideration by the Wikipedia community of editors.

1. Please change the date in the “Founded” Infobox field from “October 24” to “October 15” and remove “; 29 years ago”.

  • Before:

“Founded, October 24, 1996; 29 years ago (as Saikai of Miami, Inc.)”.

  • After:

“Founded, October 15, 1996 (as Saikai of Miami, Inc.)”. Justification: This Sunbiz Division of Corporations site provides the filing date for Alienware Corporation. This source is currently the second footnote in the "Founded" infobox field.

2. Please update the https://dell.com/en-us/gaming/alienware/ website link in the Infobox to the https://www.alienware.com URL.

3. Please expand on the third sentence in the “Founding” subsection of the article.

  • Before:

“According to employees, the name "Alienware" was chosen because of the founders' fondness for the hit television series The X-Files, which also inspired the science-fiction themed names of product lines such as Area-51, Hangar 18, and Aurora.”

  • After:

“According to employees, the name "Alienware" was chosen because of the founders' fondness for the hit television series The X-Files, which also inspired the science-fiction themed names of product lines such as Area-51, Hangar 18, Aurora, MJ-12[5], Orion[6], Roswell[7], X51[8], Hivemind[9], and Bot.”[10] TL with Dell Technologies (talk) 14:30, 2 June 2026 (UTC)

Hello @DiscoursesonLivvy: Thank you again for your help earlier this year with my Dell article edit request. I appreciate it. I’m following up on my edit request above, which involves historical updates to the Alienware article. If you’re interested, then I’d value your input. Thank you for your time and consideration. TL with Dell Technologies (talk) 21:34, 16 June 2026 (UTC)
Hello @DiscoursesonLivvy: I was wondering if you could take a look at this edit request when you have a moment. Thank you and let me know if you have any questions. TL with Dell Technologies (talk) 20:55, 14 July 2026 (UTC)


Edit request (COI): updated lead, History, and Organization sections

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I have a conflict of interest as an employee of All Out (disclosed on my user page). Below is a first, well-sourced batch of corrections and updates. The expanded "Campaigns" section will follow as a separate request.

1. Please replace the introduction (from "All Out is a global not-for-profit organisation…" through "…Brazil, Colombia, Germany, Italy, Mexico, Kenya, Portugal, Spain, and the USA.") with:

All Out is a global LGBT rights advocacy organization that campaigns for the human rights of LGBT+ people worldwide. Founded in 2010, it is known for combining online petitions and digital organizing with offline protests, and for raising emergency funds to support local LGBT+ groups.[11][12] It is operated by two United States nonprofit entities: All Out Action Fund, Inc., a 501(c)(4) advocacy body, and All Out Impact Fund, Inc., a 501(c)(3) charity established in 2024. It is registered in New York.[13]

2. Please add a new section after the introduction:


Edit request

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(Disclosure: I was hired by the Office of Allen Kukovich to provide copy for an expanded page)

* Specific text to be added or removed:

Children’s Health Insurance Program (CHIP)

Kukovich was instrumental in enacting the Children's Health Insurance Program in Pennsylvania, serving as Prime Sponsor of House Bill 20, which was signed into law by Governor Bob Casey on December 2, 1992, providing health insurance to uninsured children who are not eligible for Medicaid. [citation]

In 1997, then-president Bill Clinton signed the federal CHIP program into law as part of the Balanced Budget Act of 1997, [citation] with the Pennsylvania CHIP program as a model. CHIP has provided hundreds of thousands of children in Pennsylvania with free or low-cost health insurance each year.

* Reason for the change: Expanding biography with relevant information

* References supporting change: https://www.pa.gov/agencies/dhs/resources/chip

https://www.cdc.gov/nchs/hus/sources-definitions/chip.htm


~~~~ Dpsouth (talk) 18:43, 3 June 2026 (UTC)


Request

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(Disclosure: I was hired by the Office of Allen Kukovich to provide copy for an expanded page)

* Specific text to be added or removed:

Death Penalty

Kukovich advocated repeatedly to abolish the death penalty in Pennsylvania. In a bipartisan partnership with Republican Senator Edward Helfrick, he introduced bills opposing the death penalty, including Senate Bill 12 in 2003, which proposed an amendment to the Pennsylvania State Constitution prohibiting the death penalty. [citation]

The historic hearings Kukovich and Helfrick initiated paved the way for Pennsylvania’s eventual moratorium on the death penalty.


* Reason for the change: Expanding biography with relevant information

* References supporting change: https://www.palegis.us/legislation/bills/2003/sb12 ~~~~ Dpsouth (talk) 18:48, 3 June 2026 (UTC)


Request

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(Disclosure: I was hired by the Office of Allen Kukovich to provide copy for an expanded page)

* Specific text to be added or removed: ADD TEXT HERE


Hate Crime Amendment

In 2001, Kukovich authored Pennsylvania’s historic Hate Crimes Amendment to the Ethnic Intimidation Act, expanding the language of what constituted a hate crime to include: "actual or perceived ancestry, mental or physical disability, sexual orientation, gender, or gender identity." At the time, it was the most inclusive language in any hate crime legislation in the United States. [citation]

In 2008, the Hate Crimes Amendment was struck down by the Pennsylvania Supreme Court. [citation]

Reforms

Kukovich helped create the state Ethics Act, which regulated the behavior of elected officials and created the State Ethics Commission [link]

He also led a decades-long quest to enact campaign finance reform in Pennsylvania, advocating for publicly financed elections and limits on campaign spending. [citation]

Personal Life

Allen is married to Nancy Kukovich, the CEO of Adelphoi, a nonprofit providing programs for at-risk teens. They have one daughter, Alexandra, who was born in 1994.

Allen Kukovich’s papers are held at the University of Pittsburgh Archives. [citation]

* Reason for the change: Expanding with relevant information

* References supporting change: https://digital.library.pitt.edu/islandora/object/pitt%3AUS-PPiU-ais200421/viewer#aspace_ref446_hcb

https://www.eriegaynews.com/news/article.php?recordid=pahatecrimes.htm

https://www.delcotimes.com/2008/07/28/hate-crime-amendments-are-struck-down-by-court/

Pennsylvania State Ethics Commission

https://digital.library.pitt.edu/islandora/object/pitt%3AUS-PPiU-ais200421/viewer

~~~~ Dpsouth (talk) 18:53, 3 June 2026 (UTC)


Additional image

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Abdelmonem Bin Eisa Alserkal with Jesse Lee, chairman of Design Miami, at Zayed National Museum, at the launch of the planned Alserkal/ Design Miami 2027 collaboration.

I am undertaking some paid consultancy for Sutton Communications, who act for Alserkal.

Please add the above image, with the caption as show. If a source is needed, see . Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 10:54, 28 April 2026 (UTC)

Pigsonthewing, working my way through the COIREQ backlog today ... It's not clear where you want this image to be placed, or how it's relevant to the article. Can you please elaborate? Thank you, MediaKyle (talk) 20:15, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
Location: Anywhere that it fits.
Relevance: It will introduce one of Alserkal's connections, and to visually break up the text. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 20:28, 4 May 2026 (UTC)
I stewed over this for a bit, and honestly I don't think I can add this photo. For one thing there's not much room for it -- but it also doesn't seem especially relevant here, as the photo was not taken at Alserkal Avenue (does Jesse Lee of Design Miami have anything to do with Alserkal Avenue either?) ... Looking at this article it's clear that the PR fairy has waved her magic wand before you arrived, and if I didn't consider you a wiki-acquaintance I probably would remove the "Alserkal Arts Foundation" section at least. I won't mark your request as declined, but I think I will have to pass. Sorry, MediaKyle (talk) 20:45, 4 May 2026 (UTC)

  • What I think should be changed (include citations):

Everything. The page is incomplete and lacks any context to a company that manages and operates major rail systems across the USA.

  • Why it should be changed:

See above. Every change that is proposed has an external source/citation. We are open to counsel on how to avoid 'promotional' content but with respect, this is a page for a leading, public-facing private sector business that operates in the public realm on behalf of transportation system owners, i.e. authorities at the federal, state, and regional level.

ScottDFarmelant (talk) 19:52, 7 July 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. 1 2 "Complementary, Alternative, or Integrative Health: What's In a Name?". NCCIH. 10 March 2023. Retrieved 10 March 2023.
  2. Little, Paul; et, al (October 2014). "Alexander technique and Supervised Physiotherapy Exercises in back pain (ASPEN): a four-group randomised feasibility trial". Efficacy and Mechanism Evaluation,. 1. 2. doi:10.3310/eme01020. Retrieved 2 April 2026. The Alexander technique is a taught approach. Anyone taking Alexander technique lessons is regarded as learning the technique, not as a patient; lessons are not a form of passive therapy or treatment.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: extra punctuation (link)
  3. 1 2 Cite error: The named reference NHS was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  4. Eldred, J.; Hopton, A.; Donnison, E. (June 2015). "Teachers of the Alexander Technique in the UK and the people who take their lessons: A national cross-sectional survey". Complementary Therapies in Medicine. 23 (3): 451–461. Retrieved 1 April 2026.
  5. "AlienWare MJ-12". Computer Graphics World. July 2004. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  6. Butt, Henry (September 7, 2010). "Alienware Orion Messenger Laptop Bag Review". KitGuru. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  7. Rivera, Christian (March 30, 2026). "GUNNAR Alienware Roswell [Review]". G Style Magazine. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  8. Shinde, Jayesh (August 1, 2023). "Dell Alienware X51 Review". Digit.in. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  9. "Alienware Hivemind Tech Brief". Internet Archive. 2005. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  10. "Photo: The Bot, by Alienware". CNET. November 15, 2004. Retrieved May 29, 2026.
  11. "Gay-Rights Activists Confront Corporations On Sochi Olympic Sponsorship". Radio Free Europe/Radio Liberty. Retrieved June 17, 2026.
  12. "LGBT activists protest at FIFA Museum ahead of World Cup in Qatar". Reuters. November 8, 2022.
  13. "Financials". All Out. Retrieved June 17, 2026.


COI edit request

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Hi – I have a declared WP:COI with the subject of this article. I am requesting two additions for consideration:

  • 1 - To add a blurb on the page in a new subsection under “Sub-brands” to include information about the Prime Access membership:
Prime Access is a discounted membership offering qualifying government assistance recipients and income-verified customers a Prime membership at half of the cost of regular Prime at $6.99 per month. Prime Access includes all the benefits of Prime, including fast, free delivery, everyday low prices across a vast selection including groceries, access to exclusive deals and events like Prime Day, $0 delivery with GrubHub+, access to movies, series, and live sports with Prime Video, Amazon Music, and everyday fuel savings.[1][2]
  • 2 - To add to the “2016–present” section to include Prime for Young Adults membership under “Sub-brands”, including its benefits and eligibility requirements.
On June 17, 2025, Prime Student relaunched as Prime for Young Adults, a discounted membership offering eligible 18-24-year-olds and higher education students a Prime membership at $7.49 a month or $69 per year. Prime for Young Adults includes all the benefits of Prime, including fast, free delivery, everyday low prices on a vast selection including groceries, access to exclusive deals and events like Prime Day $0 delivery with GrubHub+, movies, series, and live sports with Prime Video, Amazon Music, everyday fuel savings, and exclusive perks like 5% cash back on eligible categories.[3][4]

Thanks Mattals2026 (talk) 21:56, 2 April 2026 (UTC)

Not done: A majority of the requested changes are currently written in a promotional tone. Please review WP:Neutral point of view and ensure you follow this before submitting any edit requests. Discourses on Livvy (talk · contribs) 01:45, 3 April 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. Chen, Connie (December 18, 2024). "Everything you need to know about Prime Access, one of Amazon's discounted Prime membership". Amazon. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  2. Schoeber, Tyler (July 28, 2025). "Amazon Prime for $6.99? Meet Prime Access". TV Guide. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  3. "Score big with Prime for Young Adults—Amazon's discounted Prime membership". Amazon. August 20, 2025. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  4. Tingley, Anna (June 17, 2025). "Amazon Announces 'Prime for Young Adults' Membership at Discounted Price Following Six-Month Free Trial=". Variety. Retrieved April 2, 2026.

Mattals2026 (talk) 21:56, 2 April 2026 (UTC)

Resubmission

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Thanks for the review and feedback! I've provided some updates below for further consideration (strike outs and additions followed by clean text and references in the collapse boxes).

Prime Access is a discounted membership foroffering qualifying government assistance recipients and income-verified customers a Prime membership at half of the cost of regular Prime at $6.99 per month.It Prime Access includes all the benefits the same features as Prime. of Prime including fast, free delivery, everyday low prices across a vast selection including groceries, access to exclusive deals and events like Prime Day, $0 delivery with GrubHub+, access to movies, series, and live sports with Prime Video, Amazon Music, and everyday fuel savings.
On June 17, 2025, Prime Student relaunched as Prime for Young Adults, a discounted membership offeringfor eligible 18-24-year-olds and higher education students a Prime membership at $7.49 a month or $69 per year. It Prime for Young Adults includes the same features as all the benefits of Prime, including fast, free delivery, everyday low prices on a vast selection including groceries, access to exclusive deals and events like Prime Day $0 delivery with GrubHub+, movies, series, and live sports with Prime Video, Amazon Music, everyday fuel savings, and exclusive perks like 5% cash back on eligible categories.[3][4]

Mattals2026 (talk) 20:51, 3 April 2026 (UTC)

Partly done In reviewing the sources I don't see where it says there are eligibility requirements beyond "18-24" so I'm removing "eligible" as redundant. RedBaron214 (talk) 01:37, 5 April 2026 (UTC)


COI edit request

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Hi - I have a previously declared COI with the subject of this article. I'd like to recommend the following changes which updates some out-of-date information and corrects tenses.

  • Reason: Outdated information
In the United States and in the United Kingdom, Amazon Prime has an Amazon Household program where members of a family can share Amazon Prime delivery benefits and access to Prime Video.
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In the United States and in the United Kingdom, Amazon Prime has an Amazon Household program where members of a household can share Amazon Prime delivery benefits and access to Prime Video. Amazon rebranded Amazon Household to Amazon Family in 2025.
Sources: [7]
  • Reason: Current text unsupported by sources, uses a non-existant name, and appears to be WP:OR
Prime Music is an ad-free music streaming service that is included in the cost of the standard Amazon Prime membership. It began in 2007. In November 2022, the music catalog was significantly expanded, and the style was changed to be similar to Pandora. This means that when users choose a song, Prime Music plays something similar, rather than the specific song that was selected. When users dislike the song substituted by Prime Music, they can skip a limited number of songs per hour. Amazon offers a separate subscription service called Amazon Music, which costs $10.99 per month for Prime members and $11.99 per month for others. Amazon's music streaming services represent 10% of the market, making it far less popular than Spotify and Apple Music.
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Amazon Music is an ad-free music streaming service that is included in the cost of the standard Amazon Prime membership. It began in 2007. In November 2022, the music catalog was significantly expanded to 100 million songs. Amazon offers a separate subscription service called Amazon Music Unlimited, which costs $11.99 per month for Prime members and $12.99 per month for non-members.
Sources:[8]
  • Reason: Incorrect tense (refers to a discontinued program)
Amazon Key In-Car is a service allowing owners of vehicles with OnStar (that are 2015+ models) or Volvo on Call, to get packages delivered in their vehicle's trunk. The service is available in the same areas as Amazon Key's In-Home delivery but requires no additional hardware. Customers are provided with a four-hour delivery window. During that time, their vehicle must be located in a publicly accessible area.
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Amazon Key In-Car was a service allowing owners of vehicles with OnStar (that are 2015+ models) or Volvo on Call, to get packages delivered in their vehicle's trunk. In 2021, Amazon announced its Key In-Car Delivery is suspended indefinitely.
Sources:[9]
  • Reason: Text currently appears to violate WP:NOTHOWTO; also "Medicare" is not contraindicated by sources
Beneficiaries of government healthcare programs such as Medicare and Medicaid will not be able to sign up for RXPass.
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Beneficiaries of government healthcare programs such as Medicaid are not eligible for RxPass.
Sources: [10] [11]
  • Reason: Outdated information
In October 2017, Amazon.com added an option for Prime members to get in-home deliveries by its Amazon Flex contractors, who gain entry using a one-time code. The service, Amazon Key, became available for customers residing in 37 United States metro areas in April 2018. As of 2018, the service required a Kwikset or Yale smart lock and a special version of Amazon's Cloud Cam security camera. Customers are given a time window of four hours for the package to be delivered. Once the courier opens the door, the Cloud Cam records a clip until the door is locked, which is sent to the customer's smartphone. Participants in the service can also use the Amazon Key companion app for iOS and Android to lock and unlock the door, monitor the camera, and issue virtual keys. A month after the service was launched, a security expert found a flaw in the system which would freeze the camera and stop image transmission; this issue has since been patched.
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In October 2017, Amazon.com added an option for Prime members to get in-home deliveries by its Amazon Flex contractors, who gain entry using a one-time code. The service, Amazon Key, became available for customers residing in 37 United States metro areas in April 2018. As of 2018, the service required a Kwikset or Yale smart lock and a special version of Amazon's Cloud Cam security camera. Customers are given a time window of four hours for the package to be delivered. Once the courier opens the door, the Cloud Cam records a clip until the door is locked, which is sent to the customer's smartphone. Participants in the service can also use the Amazon Key companion app for iOS and Android to lock and unlock the door, monitor the camera, and issue virtual keys. A month after the service was launched, a security expert found a flaw in the system which would freeze the camera and stop image transmission; this issue has since been patched. As of 2026, the service is on pause; Prime members can use Amazon Key's in-garage delivery option.
Sources: [12]
  • Reason: Outdated information
In 2025 to coincide with Prime Day, Amazon launched a fuel discount program in the United States in partnership with BP, valid at participating BP, Amoco, and (in Washington, Oregon, and Northern California) ARCO locations cobranded with BP-owned ampm. The deal wasn't valid at BP-owned Thorntons or TravelCenters of America (unless the latter sold BP or Amoco gas) or ARCO stations serviced by ARCO owner Marathon Petroleum. The deal was launched to compete with a similar fuel savings program with Walmart+ for ExxonMobil stations.
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In October 2024, Amazon announced a fuel discount program allowing Prime members to save 10 cents per gallon at around 7,000 participating BP, Amoco, and ampm stations across the United States. In 2025, to coincide with Prime Day, Amazon expanded the program to more than 7,500 participating BP, Amoco, and ampm stations. The deal was launched to compete with a similar fuel savings program with Walmart+ for ExxonMobil stations.
Sources: [13]
  • Reason: Adding fact that program was discontinued (article is out-of-date and makes it sound like this is a current program)
Amazon announced Prime Wardrobe, a service that lets customers try on clothes before they pay, in June 2017.
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Amazon announced Prime Wardrobe, a service that lets customers try on clothes before they pay, in June 2017. In January 2025, Amazon discontinued its Try Before You Buy service (formerly known as Prime Wardrobe).
Sources: [14]

Mattals2026 (talk) 17:18, 9 July 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. Chen, Connie (December 18, 2024). "Everything you need to know about Prime Access, one of Amazon's discounted Prime membership". Amazon. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  2. Schoeber, Tyler (July 28, 2025). "Amazon Prime for $6.99? Meet Prime Access". TV Guide. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  3. "Score big with Prime for Young Adults—Amazon's discounted Prime membership". Amazon. August 20, 2025. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  4. Tingley, Anna (June 17, 2025). "Amazon Announces 'Prime for Young Adults' Membership at Discounted Price Following Six-Month Free Trial=". Variety. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  5. "Score big with Prime for Young Adults—Amazon's discounted Prime membership". Amazon. August 20, 2025. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  6. Tingley, Anna (June 17, 2025). "Amazon Announces 'Prime for Young Adults' Membership at Discounted Price Following Six-Month Free Trial=". Variety. Retrieved April 2, 2026.
  7. "Amazon ends a program that lets Prime members share free shipping perk with users outside household". Associated Press. 2 September 2025. Retrieved 1 July 2026.
  8. "Amazon Prime Expands its Music Offering to 100 Million Songs". Bloomberg. 1 November 2022. Retrieved 1 July 2026.
  9. Palmer, Annie (28 October 2021). "Amazon ends service that delivers packages to Prime members' cars". CNBC. Retrieved 7 July 2026.
  10. "Amazon Pharmacy expands $5 monthly subscription to Medicare patients". Reuters. 18 June 2024. Retrieved 1 July 2026.
  11. "RxPass from Amazon Pharmacy expands access to Prime members on Medicare". About Amazon. Amazon. Retrieved 1 July 2026.
  12. "Amazon Key In-Home Delivery". Amazon Customer Service. Amazon. Retrieved 9 July 2026.
  13. Isidore, Chris (24 October 2024). "Amazon Prime wants to help you save on gas". CNN. Retrieved 9 July 2026.
  14. Palmer, Annie (10 January 2025). "Amazon to shut down Stitch Fix competitor Prime Try Before You Buy". CNBC. Retrieved 9 July 2026.


Unsourced history update

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Hi editors, I'm Alex and I work for APEI, APUS's parent company. I noticed that a good chunk of the History section is unsourced, so I put together some new content to fix that.

So I propose replacing the first paragraph of History:

  • The university was founded in 1991 by Major James P. Etter (USMC, retired) as American Military University.[1] Operations began in January 1993 with the enrollment of 18 graduate students. Initially, the main goal of the university was to meet the unique educational needs of military personnel needing courses in specialized areas, such as counterterrorism and military intelligence, that were not included in typical university course offerings. In the early years, instruction was done through conventional correspondence.

With the following:

I also propose putting that new paragraph under a new subheading, Founding and early history. Please let me know what you think!

I noticed that these sourcing issues are pretty pervasive throughout, so I did write a whole new draft, in case anyone is interested in taking a look. Cheers APEI Alex (talk) 21:15, 6 March 2026 (UTC) APEI Alex (talk) 21:15, 6 March 2026 (UTC)

"I noticed that these sourcing issues are pretty pervasive throughout, so I did write a whole new draft" I'll presume that with this newer draft version, the text from this request has been superceded by the draft, making this request moot. If that is the case, I'll close the request template.  Spintendo  17:55, 22 May 2026 (UTC)
Hi Spintendo, thanks for looking at this. You’re right that the sandbox draft I linked does replace this particular request, so it’s fine to close it. Appreciate your quick attention to the matter! APEI Alex (talk) 19:08, 2 June 2026 (UTC)


History Update 2

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Hi editors, continuing with my proposals to update unsourced content, I suggest making two changes:

  • After the first paragraph, add new a subsection header, Accreditation and growth

Replace the following unsourced paragraph:

  • In June 1995 AMU became nationally accredited by the Accrediting Commission of the Distance Education and Training Council (DETC). In January of the following year, the school introduced its first undergraduate programs. The first online courses and online classrooms started in 1998. In 1999, all undergraduate classes and programs went fully online, with graduate programs shifting to online in 2000.

With the following sourced paragraph:

References

  1. "For-Profit Education In The Age Of Austerity: The APUS Story". Forbes.com. Retrieved 2016-01-20.
  2. McCarthy, Ellen (September 8, 2002). "Online School's Military Focus Nets $10 Million". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  3. 1 2 Hensley-Clancy, Molly (August 18, 2014). "As Civilian Enrollment Grows, American Public University Pledges To Stay True To Its Military Roots". BuzzFeed News. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  4. Odum, Maria E. (June 8, 1994). "For the Military-Minded, a Campus All Their Own". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  5. 1 2 3 4 O'Hanlon, Ann (January 31, 1996). "College Students are Everywhere but in Class". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  6. 1 2 3 "History". American Public University System. Retrieved October 30, 2025.
  7. Golden, Daniel (December 15, 2009). "Marine Can't Recall His Lessons at For-Profit College". Bloomberg News. Retrieved October 28, 2025.

This makes the paragraph verifiable. Please let me know what you think! APEI Alex (talk) 19:56, 22 April 2026 (UTC)

Edit request reply 22-MAY-2026

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  Edit request declined  

  • The reason given for making this change is "This makes the paragraph verifiable"—but the newer text is completely different—so that reasoning must be false. This doesn't make the existing paragraph verifiable, it only verifies the newer text mentioning newer things, all without offering reasons why that newer text ought to be added to the article. "Because it has references, while the other text does not" is not a good enough reason on its own to justify making this change. Kindly elaborate on the reasoning for the newer text's inclusion in the article.

Regards,  Spintendo  17:55, 22 May 2026 (UTC)

Hi again, and thanks for your feedback. Just wanted to clarify why I’m suggesting adding a new “Accreditation and growth” section.
The existing paragraph bundles several milestones together and lacks sources, so there’s no way for readers to verify the claims. For example, the 1996 Washington Post article I cited shows that by that year AMU had about 1,000 students and 11 staff, and that it was still running courses by mail and telephone. That’s important because the current paragraph asserts that national accreditation came in 1995, the first undergraduate programs launched in 1996, and everything went fully online in 1999–2000.
The 1996 article confirms that by the mid‑1990s the school had grown enough to justify adding bachelor’s programs, but also that it hadn’t yet shifted to online delivery, so it helps place those milestones in context. Then APUS’s 2011 annual report traces how the move from correspondence to online classrooms happened between 1998 and 2000 and explains why the institution sought accreditation first from one regional body and then from another.
By creating a separate section with citations, I’m trying to give readers a clear, sourced chronology rather than just adding footnotes. If you have suggestions on how to present it better or would prefer to keep some of the existing wording, let me know and I’ll be happy to adjust! APEI Alex (talk) 19:26, 2 June 2026 (UTC)


History Update 3

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Hi editors, for my next request I propose updating the following History paragraph:

  • In 2002 AMU expanded to become American Public University System and established American Public University, intended primarily for civilians interested in public service programs. In 2006 APUS was granted regional accreditation from the Higher Learning Commission. In 2012 American Public University System resigned its DETC accreditation.[1] In 2016, the university was listed as tied for 58th place in U.S. News & World Report ranking of online bachelor's degree Programs.[2]

References

  1. "Report from the Accrediting Commission" (PDF). Distance Training and Education Council. 10 May 2012. Archived from the original (PDF) on 22 January 2013. Retrieved 12 May 2013.
  2. "Best Online Bachelor's Programs | Online Bachelor's Rankings". US News. Archived from the original on 2016-05-27. Retrieved 2016-05-25.

With the following:

  • The organization changed its name to American Public University System and founded American Public University alongside AMU in 2002 in an effort to reach a wider student base.[1][2] APUS comprised three schools by 2002: American Public University, American Military University, and American Community College. It had approximately 5,000 students enrolled pursuing associate, bachelor, and master's degrees. The organization received US$10 million in venture capital funding from ABS Capital Partners that year.[3]

References

  1. Hensley-Clancy, Molly (August 18, 2014). "As Civilian Enrollment Grows, American Public University Pledges To Stay True To Its Military Roots". BuzzFeed News. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  2. "History". American Public University System. Retrieved October 30, 2025.
  3. McCarthy, Ellen (September 8, 2002). "Online School's Military Focus Nets $10 Million". The Washington Post. Retrieved October 28, 2025.

This keeps the focus on the history of APUS, adds context around the composition of APUS and its student body at the time, improves sourcing, and removes redundancies introduced by my last edit request. Please let me know what you think! APEI Alex (talk) 15:50, 8 May 2026 (UTC)

Edit request reply 22-MAY-2026

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  Edit request declined  

  • The provided reason for making this change merely describes the changes being made, rather than a reason. For example, the reason says "adds context around the composition of APUS". So, what is it about that added context, which makes the proposed text an ideal replacement? Please provide a reason why the newer text is superior to the existing text, including why—and in what way—this newer text would be more informative for readers.

Regrds,  Spintendo  17:55, 22 May 2026 (UTC)

Hi again, Spintendo, thanks for the follow‑up. I believe that the new paragraph is more informative because the current paragraph only lists a name change, an accreditation date and a ranking without explaining what actually happened.
The new text focuses on the 2002 reorganization itself. APUS split into two schools—American Military University for military students and American Public University for non‑military students—so that it could offer the same education to a broader audience of working adults. It also notes that the system had more than 5,000 students and raised $10 million in venture funding at that time, giving readers a sense of the scale and momentum behind the change. Those details replace unsourced statements and move the ranking information to a more appropriate section, which is why I think the new text is a clearer, more useful summary of that period in APUS’s history.
Thanks again for your consideration on all of my requests, looking forward to hearing your thoughts! APEI Alex (talk) 19:46, 2 June 2026 (UTC)


Organization and administration section

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Hi editors, my next request is to create a new section, Organization and administration, to house various operational details consistent with the guidelines for university articles. What I propose includes information about parent company APEI and a second infobox. Please let me know what you think! APEI Alex (talk) 19:50, 2 June 2026 (UTC)[1]

Governance

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American Public Education, Inc.
Nasdaq: APEI
IndustryEducation
Founded1991; 35 years ago (1991)
FounderJames P. Etter
Headquarters
Charles Town, West Virginia
,
United States
Key people
  • Angela K. Selden (CEO)
  • Richard W. Sunderland Jr. (Executive VP, CFO)
  • Eric C. Andersen (chair)
RevenueIncrease US$624.6 million (2024)
Increase US$16.1 million (2024)
Total assetsIncrease US$570.1 million (2024)
Total equityIncrease US$303.9 million (2024)
Number of employees
6,117 (2024)
Websiteapei.com
Footnotes
[1]

APUS is governed as a private, for-profit organization by a board of trustees.[2] It is a subsidiary of American Public Education, Inc.[1] Nuno Fernandes is president; Elizabeth Johnson is provost.[3][4]

APEI

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American Public Education, Inc. (APEI) is the parent company of APUS. APEI has four schools in its system: American Public University, American Military University, Rasmussen University, and Hondros College of Nursing. It is led by Chief Executive Officer Angela K. Selden and board chair Eric. C. Andersen. Richard W. Sunderland is executive vice president and chief financial officer.

APEI is headquartered in Charles Town, West Virginia. It had revenues of approximately US$625 million and a net income of approximately US$16.1 million in 2024. APEI employed approximately 6,100 people that year.[1]

References

  1. 1 2 3 "SEC Form 10-K". United States Securities and Exchange Commission. March 6, 2025. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  2. "Board of Trustees". American Public University System. Retrieved October 30, 2025.
  3. Lederman, Doug (August 16, 2022). "New Presidents or Provosts: American Public U System, LaSalle U, Northeast State CC, Saginaw Valley State U, Savannah State U". Inside Higher Ed. Retrieved October 28, 2025.
  4. Lederman, Doug (July 25, 2023). "New Presidents and Provosts: American Public U System, Los Angeles City College, Northeastern State U, Saint Paul School of Theology, Spelman College, Texas A&M U–San Antonio". Inside Higher Ed. Retrieved October 28, 2025.

APEI Alex (talk) 19:50, 2 June 2026 (UTC)

I'm happy with the governance section, however the subject of the article is APUS not its parent company. That would belong in a separate article. Aloneinthewild (talk) 21:23, 29 June 2026 (UTC)
Thanks for taking a look at it! I agree that the primary focus should remain APUS, and I don't want the article to become an article about APEI.
My thinking was that, since there isn't currently a standalone APEI article and the page only includes a link back to the APUS page, a brief summary of APEI's role provides useful context for readers. APUS is wholly owned and governed by APEI, so understanding that relationship helps explain how the university system is organized today.
I'm not suggesting a full company profile or detailed financial information, just a concise overview of APEI's relationship to APUS. If a standalone APEI article is created in the future, I'd agree this could be reduced to a short summary with a link to that page. Would you be open to refining the section so it stays focused on APUS while still providing that context? APEI Alex (talk) 18:04, 8 July 2026 (UTC)


Update the logo in the infobox

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  • What I think should be changed:

Please update the company logo in the infobox. The current file (File:American_Securities_logo.svg) is outdated and needs to be replaced with the current official logo.

Because I have a Conflict of Interest (COI) as a representative of the company, I have not uploaded the new file myself to avoid copyright/licensing complications. The new official logo can be found on our server here for an independent editor to upload under fair use: https://assets-american-securities.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/system/uploads/fae/image/asset/44/AmSec-logo-image.jpg


  • Why it should be changed:

American Securities underwent a brand redesign, and the old logo no longer accurately represents the organization. Updating the logo ensures the article remains accurate and compliant with Wikipedia's guidelines for corporate infoboxes.

  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

The new logo can be verified across all official company channels, including the homepage: https://www.american-securities.com/, LinkedIn:https://www.linkedin.com/company/american-securities/, and others


Finedoeswikitoo (talk) 20:08, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

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Edit request: update Game Design section

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COI disclosure: I am André Novoa, the subject of this article. I am not requesting these changes be made by me directly, per Wikipedia's conflict-of-interest guidelines, and am submitting them here for review instead.

I'd like to propose an update to the "Game Design" section to add sourced, current information (2025–2026) about my studio, awards, and recent projects, and to correct/remove an unsourced ENNIE Awards claim currently tagged [citation needed]. Full proposed replacement text with citations below:

Novoa has written [[role-playing game]] (RPGs) books and modules since 2015. His work has been published in the US, Brazil and Europe. In 2020, he created Games Omnivorous,<ref>{{Cite web|no-tracking=true|url=https://gamesomnivorous.com/|title=Games Omnivorous - Minimalist & Bizarre Games|website=Games Omnivorous}}</ref> a brand based in Portugal that specialised in publishing minimalist and art-house games, including ''Death Robot Jungle'', the first RPG setting in the format of a music LP vinyl <ref>{{Cite web|no-tracking=true|url=https://www.publico.pt/2020/06/20/culturaipsilon/noticia/disco-jogo-ilha-misteriosa-meio-sala-1920740|title=É um disco, é um jogo, é uma ilha misteriosa no meio da sala|first=Mário|last=Lopes|website=PÚBLICO|date=20 June 2020 }}</ref>, ''Vaults of Vaarn'', ''Frontier Scum'', ''[[Mausritter]]'' and other games and supplements. Since 2025, Games Omnivorous has operated as a game design studio led by Novoa, with his design work focused on ''The Job'' and ''FLAIL'', alongside continued work as co-creator on ''Mausritter'' and ''Frontier Scum''.<ref>{{Cite web|no-tracking=true|url=https://gamesomnivorous.com/pages/about|title=About|website=Games Omnivorous|access-date=2 July 2026}}</ref> He is the recipient of the 2020 Hartvig Award by Rolisboa, the Portuguese roleplaying convention.<ref>{{Cite web|no-tracking=true|url=http://www.elemento.pt/rolisboa/premio_hartvig.html|title=Rolisboa 2020|website=www.elemento.pt}}</ref>

The first RPG by Andre Novoa was ''17th Century Minimalist'' (2020).<ref name="TTG">{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Eggett |first=Christopher John |date=2024-05-11 |title=The Job RPG Review |url=https://www.tabletopgaming.co.uk/reviews/the-job-rpg-review/ |website=Tabletop Gaming |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519004321/https://www.tabletopgaming.co.uk/reviews/the-job-rpg-review/ |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> Novoa was a designer of ''Death Robot Jungle'' (2020), a role-playing game setting on a record.<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Eggett |first=Christopher John |date=2020 |title=Death Robot Jungle |url=https://pocketmags.com/us/the-best-games-of-magazine/the-best-games-of-2020/articles/886825/death-robot-jungle |website=Tabletop Gaming |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519005425/https://pocketmags.com/us/the-best-games-of-magazine/the-best-games-of-2020/articles/886825/death-robot-jungle |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> Novoa and Manuel Pinheiro also created ''Putrescence Regnant'' (2021) for ''[[Mörk Borg]]'', also on a vinyl record of yellow-and-black marbled wax.<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Jarvis |first=Matt |date=2020-10-16 |title=Mörk Borg's Putrescence Regnant is a grim 'bog crawl' adventure releasing as a vinyl music album |url=https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/mork-borg/news/mork-borg-putrescence-regnant-kickstarter |website=[[Dicebreaker]] |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519005321/https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/mork-borg/news/mork-borg-putrescence-regnant-kickstarter |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> Novoa was also a designer of role-playing games that use hex-shaped tiles, called ''Undying Sands'',<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Eggett |first=Christopher John |date=2021-07-14 |title=Undying Sands Review |url=https://www.tabletopgaming.co.uk/reviews/undying-sands-review/ |website=Tabletop Gaming |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519004951/https://www.tabletopgaming.co.uk/reviews/undying-sands-review/ |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> ''Bottled Sea'',<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Carter |first=Chase |date=2022-01-21 |title=Hexcrawl across sand and sea with a pair of bookless RPG settings geared towards exploration |url=https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/undying-sands/news/undying-sands-bottled-sea-kickstarter |website=[[Dicebreaker]] |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519004835/https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/undying-sands/news/undying-sands-bottled-sea-kickstarter |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> and the ''Hexcrawl Toolbox'' (2023).<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Carter |first=Chase |date=2022-12-01 |title=Hexcrawl-curious adventurers should check out this toolbox of tabletop RPG aides |url=https://www.dicebreaker.com/categories/roleplaying-game/news/hexcrawl-toolkit-worldbuilding-aide-kickstarter |website=[[Dicebreaker]] |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519005224/https://www.dicebreaker.com/categories/roleplaying-game/news/hexcrawl-toolkit-worldbuilding-aide-kickstarter |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref><ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Bassil |first=Matt |date=2022-12-09 |title=Run DnD hexcrawls in style with this RPG toolbox |url=https://www.wargamer.com/dnd/hexcrawl-toolbox-kickstarter |website=[[Wargamer (website)|Wargamer]] |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519004645/https://www.wargamer.com/dnd/hexcrawl-toolbox-kickstarter |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref> Novoa wrote the minimalist one-shot heist role-playing game ''The Job''.<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|last=Carter |first=Chase |date=2023-10-19 |title=Stack a tower of dice while pulling an Ocean's Eleven or Italian Job-style heist in one-shot RPG The Job |url=https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/the-job/news/the-job-dice-tower-stacking-heist-rpg |website=[[Dicebreaker]] |accessdate=2025-05-19 |archiveurl=https://web.archive.org/web/20250519004527/https://www.dicebreaker.com/games/the-job/news/the-job-dice-tower-stacking-heist-rpg |archivedate=2025-05-19 }}</ref><ref name="TTG"/>

Novoa's work has received multiple [[ENNIE Awards]], including a Gold Award for Best Family Game/Product (2021) for ''Mausritter: Boxed Set'',<ref>{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=2021 Nominees and Winners |url=https://ennie-awards.com/portfolio-item/2021-nominees-and-winners/ |website=ENNIE Awards |access-date=2 July 2026}}</ref> a Silver Award for Best Layout & Design (2023) for ''Frontier Scum'',<ref>{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=2023 Nominees and Winners |url=https://ennie-awards.com/portfolio-item/2023-nominees-and-winners/ |website=ENNIE Awards |access-date=2 July 2026}}</ref> and a Silver Award for Best Aid/Accessory – Non-Digital (2024) for ''Hexcrawl Toolbox''.<ref>{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=2024 Nominees and Winners |url=https://ennie-awards.com/portfolio-item/2024-nominees-and-winners/ |website=ENNIE Awards |access-date=2 July 2026}}</ref>

Novoa was part of the four-person creative team recognised with the Prémio Inovação em Banda Desenhada (Innovation in Comics Award) at the inaugural Prémio Nacional de Banda Desenhada in 2026, for ''Rumo ao Eclipse'', a role-playing game based on a pre-existing comic book, published by Chili Com Carne.<ref>{{cite news |no-tracking=true|title=1.º Prémio Nacional de Banda Desenhada distingue carreira de António Jorge Gonçalves |newspaper=Observador |date=2026-06-28 |url=https://observador.pt/2026/06/28/1-o-premio-nacional-de-banda-desenhada-distingue-carreira-de-antonio-jorge-goncalves/}}</ref>

Since 2026, Novoa has co-hosted a podcast with Johan Nohr of ''Mörk Borg'' called ''Making Games''.<ref>{{cite web |no-tracking=true|title=Making Games Podcast |url=https://podcasts.apple.com/si/podcast/making-games/id1896884077 |website=Apple Podcasts |access-date=2 July 2026}}</ref>

Thank you for reviewing! Happy to answer any questions about sourcing. Andrenovoa (talk) 16:36, 2 July 2026 (UTC)

Note: Moved to the COI edit request template. FlammablePizza (talk) 17:01, 2 July 2026 (UTC)


Proposed neutral revision of the lead and structure

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I have a conflict of interest with the subject of this article, so I am not editing the article directly. I would like to request a neutral revision of the lead and structure of the article, in order to make it more consistent with Wikipedia's standards for biographies of living persons, neutral point of view and verifiability.

The current lead presents Andrea Dalla Costa mainly as a list of professional roles. I suggest reframing the opening around his artistic practice as a visual artist, with film, illustration and art direction described as areas of his work rather than separate promotional claims.

Proposed lead:

Andrea Dalla Costa is an Italian visual artist whose practice spans painting, photography, video and multimedia projects. His work has included projects in contemporary art, film, illustration and art direction. After studying at the Accademia di Belle Arti di Venezia, he participated in the 51st Venice Biennale in 2005 with the artist group Temperaturambiente. His short film Le note di Giulia was listed in the short-film section of the 2015 David di Donatello catalogue.

I also suggest the following structural changes:

  • Replace the infobox occupation list with "Visual artist".
  • Remove "musician" from the opening sentence unless independent reliable sources are provided.
  • Move film, illustration and art direction into the body of the article as areas of practice.
  • Correct the current listing of The Giver, since available credits indicate an additional footage acknowledgement rather than a co-director credit.
  • Reword the David di Donatello sentence to avoid implying that Le note di Giulia won the award.
  • Restructure the works section into more encyclopedic sections such as:
    • Artistic practice
    • Selected projects
    • Film and video
    • Bibliography and illustration
    • Exhibitions
    • References

Suggested sources:

[1]

[2]

[3]

Thank you.

Vandra (talk) 10:16, 31 May 2026 (UTC) Vandra (talk) 10:16, 31 May 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. "Docenti – Andrea Dalla Costa". Accademia di Belle Arti G.B. Tiepolo Udine. Retrieved 31 May 2026.
  2. "Premi David di Donatello 2015 – Cortometraggi" (PDF). David di Donatello. Retrieved 31 May 2026.
  3. "The Giver credits". Metacritic. Retrieved 31 May 2026.
Thanks for your input. It should also be noted that it is likely several of the existing citations to IMDb need to be removed and replaced, per WP:CITEIMDB


COI request: replace outdated career information with sourced update

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Complete proposed replacement: User:Harms107/Andrew Harms draft

I am Andrew Harms, the subject of this article, and disclose that conflict of interest. I request that an uninvolved editor replace the outdated article with the sourced sandbox draft linked above, modifying or omitting material as needed under BLP, neutrality, and reliable-sourcing policies.

The current article incorrectly describes former ALT 98.7 and ALT 102.9 positions as current and contains dated, unsourced lists. The proposed draft updates the chronology through the Amazon Music period.

Strengthened sourcing: Variety independently confirms the 2020 Amazon Music appointment; HAPPENS lists the later Rock & Alt Programming Lead title; ABC Audio directly names Harms and Lilith Czar as Warped Tour livestream hosts; Billboard supports the 2016 ranking and programming-philosophy passage; Revolt confirms Harms as host of Sounds by the Sound; and an official Amazon Music LinkedIn employee spotlight describes his work as including playlist creation and viral billboard development.

The requested change is to replace the live article text with the sandbox draft while retaining only claims an independent editor finds adequately sourced. Harms107 (talk) 15:06, 13 June 2026 (UTC)


Following up on this COI request. I understand the full sandbox rewrite may be more than a volunteer editor can review quickly, so I would be grateful for consideration of a narrower first step focused only on correcting plainly outdated career information in the live article.

Specifically, the current article still says Harms is currently an afternoon-drive host on ALT 98.7 Los Angeles and ALT 102.9 Seattle, and assistant program director/music director for ALT 98.7. That information is outdated. Reliable sources support that he left ALT 98.7 in October 2020 and joined Amazon Music the following month as a U.S. rock and alternative programmer:

If a full replacement is too broad, I request that an uninvolved editor make only these limited updates:

1. Remove the "Harms is currently" list stating that he hosts ALT 98.7 / ALT 102.9 and serves as APD/MD for ALT 98.7. 2. Add a short sourced sentence that he left KYSR/ALT 98.7 in October 2020 and joined Amazon Music in November 2020 as a U.S. rock and alternative programmer. 3. Update the infobox/lead to avoid presenting former radio roles as current.

Suggested neutral replacement wording:

"Harms served as music director, assistant program director, and afternoon-drive host at KYSR/ALT 98.7 in Los Angeles. He left the station in October 2020 and joined Amazon Music the following month as a U.S. rock and alternative programmer."

I remain aware of my conflict of interest and am not asking to make the edit myself. Thank you for considering this narrower correction. Harms107 (talk) 13:33, 12 July 2026 (UTC)


Correct Early Life and Education

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  • What I think should be changed: Remove "a Jewish family". Instead of "Mason grew up in a Jewish family in Mt. Lebanon..." it should be changed to "Mason grew up in Mt. Lebanon..."
  • Why it should be changed: Mason did NOT grow up in a Jewish family. He DID grow up in a family in Mt. Lebanon...
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): How can I prove a negative? What source can I provide? To quote Wikipedia article on Reliable sources, "if no reliable sources can be found on a topic, Wikipedia should not have an article on it. and "Contentious material about living persons (or, in some cases, recently deceased) that is unsourced or poorly sourced—whether the material is negative, positive, neutral, or just questionable—must be removed immediately and without waiting for discussion."

~2026-39143-62 (talk) 19:02, 9 July 2026 (UTC)

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Request to update career and discography

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I have a conflict of interest because I am the subject of this article. I am requesting review from an uninvolved editor.

Suggested changes:

1. In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:

In 2022, Kotar released 12 Months, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.

Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/

2. In the same section, please add:

In 2023, Kotar released the album Hopeless Romantic.

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

3. Please add a current-career update:

In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing At The Bookstore project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.

Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/

4. In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:

  • Hopeless Romantic (2023)

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 20:51, 1 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 23-JUN-2026

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  WikiLinks are missing  

  • Your proposed text appears to be missing key H:WIKILINKs which may help to facilitate a reader's understanding of the subject matter.
  • In your proposed text, it was noted that 12 Months, Hopeless Romantic and At The Bookstoore were not WikiLinked.
  • WikiLinks provide instant pathways to locations within and outside the project that can increase readers' understanding of the topic at hand. Whenever writing or editing an article, it's important to consider not only what to put in the article, but also what links to include to help the reader find related information. Official guidance for the use of links is to avoid both underlinking and overlinking.
  • To save time, please feel free to place these WikiLinks in the text already submitted above, rather than re-writing an entirely new draft; unless there are glaring absences, in which case it might be prudent to reconsider referring to that particular term.
  • If you have any questions about this, please don't hesitate to ask. When ready to proceed with the requested information or any questions which you might have, kindly change the {{Edit COI}} answer parameter to read from |ans=y to |ans=n, or place a newer {{Edit COI}} at the beginning of any new submission offered for review below this reply post.

Regards,  Spintendo  01:41, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the note. I have added WikiLinks to the proposed text as requested.
Revised suggested text:
In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:
In 2022, Kotar released ‘’12 Months’’, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.
Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/
In the same section, please add:
In 2023, Kotar released the album ‘’Hopeless Romantic’’.
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Please add a current-career update:
In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing ‘’At the Bookstore’’ project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.
Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/
In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:
‘’Hopeless Romantic’’ (2023)
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 04:16, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

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