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Anja Kotar


Request to update career and discography

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I have a conflict of interest because I am the subject of this article. I am requesting review from an uninvolved editor.

Suggested changes:

1. In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:

In 2022, Kotar released 12 Months, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.

Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/

2. In the same section, please add:

In 2023, Kotar released the album Hopeless Romantic.

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

3. Please add a current-career update:

In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing At The Bookstore project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.

Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/

4. In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:

  • Hopeless Romantic (2023)

Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz

Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 20:51, 1 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 23-JUN-2026

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  WikiLinks are missing  

  • Your proposed text appears to be missing key H:WIKILINKs which may help to facilitate a reader's understanding of the subject matter.
  • In your proposed text, it was noted that 12 Months, Hopeless Romantic and At The Bookstoore were not WikiLinked.
  • WikiLinks provide instant pathways to locations within and outside the project that can increase readers' understanding of the topic at hand. Whenever writing or editing an article, it's important to consider not only what to put in the article, but also what links to include to help the reader find related information. Official guidance for the use of links is to avoid both underlinking and overlinking.
  • To save time, please feel free to place these WikiLinks in the text already submitted above, rather than re-writing an entirely new draft; unless there are glaring absences, in which case it might be prudent to reconsider referring to that particular term.
  • If you have any questions about this, please don't hesitate to ask. When ready to proceed with the requested information or any questions which you might have, kindly change the {{Edit COI}} answer parameter to read from |ans=y to |ans=n, or place a newer {{Edit COI}} at the beginning of any new submission offered for review below this reply post.

Regards,  Spintendo  01:41, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the note. I have added WikiLinks to the proposed text as requested.
Revised suggested text:
In the “Career” section, after the sentence about Earmilk covering “Fun For You”, please add:
In 2022, Kotar released ‘’12 Months’’, a project structured around one song for each month of the year. The project was described by musicto as “a musical version of the calendar,” with each song named and themed after a month.
Suggested source: https://www.musicto.com/news/in-the-spotlight/in-the-spotlight-anja-kotar/
In the same section, please add:
In 2023, Kotar released the album ‘’Hopeless Romantic’’.
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Please add a current-career update:
In 2026, Kotar continued releasing music as part of her ongoing ‘’At the Bookstore’’ project. LOUD WOMEN described the project as being released song by song, with each track inspired by a different book genre, title, cover, or bookstore find.
Suggested source: https://loudwomen.org/2026/05/28/track-of-the-day-anja-kotar-shares-bookish-bop-writers-lovers/
In the “Albums and extended plays” section, please add:
‘’Hopeless Romantic’’ (2023)
Suggested sources: https://music.apple.com/us/album/hopeless-romantic/1708459010 https://open.spotify.com/album/0t693lqDk1XlU8avBNrCKz
Thank you. Anjakotar97 (talk) 04:16, 24 June 2026 (UTC)

Anja Mihr


Proposed rewrite to resolve maintenance tags

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Conflict of interest disclosure

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I am proposing a substantial rewrite of this article. Before doing so, I wish to disclose a conflict of interest per WP:COI: I knew Dr Mihr personally as a student in a master's programme she directed. I do not have a financial or professional relationship with her. In accordance with COI guidelines, I am not editing the article directly and am instead posting the proposed text here for review and implementation by an independent editor. I am tagging this accordingly.

Summary of proposed changes

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The rewrite addresses the existing maintenance tags by:

  • replacing all bare URLs and malformed citations with properly formatted {{cite web}}: Empty citation (help) and {{cite book}}: Empty citation (help)templates
  • restructuring the career section into chronological sub-sections with prose narrative
  • adding citations for all previously unsourced claims, drawn from DAAD, Schader-Stiftung, HRE USA, the Berlin Governance Platform, and the OSCE Academy
  • updating the article to include appointments, programmes, and publications from 2023-2024 not currently covered

Proposed article text

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The full proposed wikitext is below. It is ready to be copied into the article as-is once an independent editor has reviewed it.


Anja Mihr, 2015

Anja Mihr (born 1969) is a German political scientist. She specializes in international human rights law, transitional justice, and governance. Mihr is the founder and director of the Center on Governance through Human Rights at the Berlin Governance Platform.[1] Her research addresses democratic transitions, the implementation of international human rights norms at the local level, and the intersection of digitalisation with human rights frameworks. Throughout her career, she has held academic positions at universities in Germany, the Netherlands, the United States, Italy, China, and Kyrgyzstan, and most recently in Kyiv, Ukraine.

Anna Delvey


Redundant pejoratives in lead

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I'm the subject of this article therefore this is a

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Con artist and fraudster in my opening description are two contentious and redundant pejoratives that are also not legally accurate - I was convicted of larceny, not fraud (public record). There is also no mention that my conviction is currently on direct appeal (also public record). I request that the lead instead use neutral and factual language to describe me and my conviction and note the pending appeal. Theannadelvey (talk) 09:29, 1 July 2026 (UTC)

According to Marie Claire and The New York Times, Sorokin was sentenced to four to 12 years in prison on one count of attempted grand larceny, three counts of grand larceny, and four counts of theft of services.[2] The NYTimes also states that the subject was acquitted of stealing $60K from a friend for a trip to Morocco.[3] If the subject were convicted of larceny alone, then WP:BLPCRIME should, in theory, limit the descriptors used in the article to those involving larceny and theft of services. New York State defines larceny using an array of descriptors, including:

By conduct heretofore defined or known as common law larceny by trespassory taking, common law larceny by trick, embezzlement, or obtaining property by false pretenses

Since the term "con artist" describes using confidence to obtain property, that would seem to be covered by "trick, embezzlement, or false promises". Theft of services in New York ranges from a Class A misdemeanor to a Class E felony. As far as the term "fraud", New York State similarly lists a large volume of crimes under the term "fraud" but since the subject apparently wasn't convicted for any of them, we can safely dispose of the term "fraudster". I think it's important to mention continuing appeals until they run their course, but "as of" would be a far better preposition to use than "currently". I'll leave this open to invite discussion from the community. Regards,  Spintendo  11:20, 3 July 2026 (UTC)


Request to correct emigration date and age

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The article currently states: "Born near Moscow, Delvey emigrated from Russia to Germany with her family at the age of 16 in 2007." This is factually incorrect, I permanently moved to Germany with my dad, not entire family, at the end of 2005, at the age of 14. My traveling and school records corroborate this timeline. Update the article accordingly. Theannadelvey (talk) 05:22, 9 July 2026 (UTC)

Hi Anna, it looks like whoever put that sentence in was basing it off of this article, which does say "Anna Sorokin was born in Russia in 1991, and moved to Germany in 2007, when she was 16, with her younger brother and her parents" and then goes on to give a short sketch of your childhood that it says is based on interviewing your family in Germany. Even if that article on The Cut is incorrect it will be hard to change that without another source that contradicts it. Is there anywhere editors could read some of these records that corroborate the timeline? -- LWG talk (VOPOV) 16:05, 9 July 2026 (UTC)
Partly done I removed the information about your mother since the sources citing in the article didn't say anything about your mother's occupation. -- LWG talk (VOPOV) 16:21, 9 July 2026 (UTC)
LWG you claim to strive to maintain a policy of neutrality on controversial issues and to believe in civility and assuming good faith, but your edits on my profile from July 9th 2026 show otherwise. I don't agree with the rationale given that it is
"not completely clear" whether sources discuss my paintings or exhibitions. That is something that should be resolved by examining the sources themselves more closely or looking for better ones, not by deleting the material without discussion.
There are so many articles documenting my work as an artist, including coverage of exhibitions and reporting on hundreds of thousands of dollars in art sales, and removing any mention of that work from the first paragraph gives readers an incomplete picture of my post-2017 career. The lead again continues to emphasize redundant insulting pejoratives "con artist" and "fraudster," both of which are meant to publicly humiliate and degrade me, despite the related events already being covered in extensive detail later in the article. Per Wikipedia's neutrality policy, the lead should summarize the full scope of the subject's notability rather than focus almost exclusively on criminal conduct, which currently is the case.
Happy to provide a list of sources supporting the above, let me know how. Theannadelvey (talk) 04:32, 11 July 2026 (UTC)

Anna Ranta


Requesting some updates

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Kia ora. As the University of Otago Wikimedian in Residence, I have a conflict of interest with this page. I would like to request some changes, as follows:

1. Add maiden name: Could the first sentence begin "Annemarei Ranta (known as Anna, nee Wittman)" to cover off the mismatch between proper name and article title (subject uses both), and to include her maiden name, as she has published under that (e.g. [4])

2. Add missing career information: At the end of the first paragraph of Academic career section, after "She moved to New Zealand in 2007, where she was initially a consultant neurologist and lead stroke physician at the MidCentral District Health Board." add "In 2014 she moved to Wellington and has been working as a consultant neurologist at Wellington Hospital/Capital Coast and Hutt Valley District.(source already used in article: CCDHB profile) From 2024 to 2018 she held the role of Executive Clinical Director for the Medicine Directorate at Capital and Coast District Health Board and has served in several regional and national stroke leadership roles for the New Zealand Ministry of Health and Te Whatu Ora. She is the current Medical Director for Stroke Aotearoa.(source:CCDHB profile, and new source[5])

3. Add finish date to role: At end of second paragraph of academic career section, change "As of 2024, she is head of the Department of Medicine at the University of Otago's Wellington campus." to "She was head of the Department of Medicine at the University of Otago's Wellington campus from 2018 to 2025." I cannot find a proper published announcement, but you can see that the current head of medicine is Rebecca Grainger (https://www.otago.ac.nz/wellington/about/senior-leadership) and Ranta's Orcid profile shows her end date as 2025 (https://orcid.org/0000-0002-3223-3330) so the current wording is inaccurate.

4. Updates to research section.

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Ranta's research is focused on stroke care and the development of interventions to improve stroke care.[6] Ranta led Health Research Council-funded research that showed significant variations in stroke care across New Zealand, for instances some patients received follow-up care within 1–2 weeks while others waited up to five months.[7] There were also differences in care received by Māori and Pacific patients.[7] Ranta has worked on decreasing such inequities in stroke care, leading the development of tools such as electronic decision support tools for stroke prevention, for use by GPs, and ways to improve access to stroke specialists from rural healthcare services.[6]

New (insert 'optimisation', expand, fix broken link for "26 new professors" ref)

Ranta's research is focused on stroke care optimisation and the development of interventions to improve stroke care access and outcomes with a focus on resource constrained settings and reducing health inequities.[6] Ranta led Health Research Council-funded research that showed significant variations in stroke care across New Zealand, for instances some patients received follow-up care within 1–2 weeks while others waited up to five months.[7] There were also differences in care received by rural, Māori and Pacific patients resulting in differential health outcomes.[7] Ranta has worked on decreasing such inequities in stroke care, leading the development of tools such as electronic decision support tools for stroke prevention, for use by GPs, co-ordinating national level hyper-acute stroke care services to improve access thrombectomy, and ways to improve access to stroke specialists from rural healthcare services using telestroke (telemedicine for stroke patients).[8][9][10] Other work includes co-designing stroke interventions to address ethnic inequities, developing models of stroke care for LMIC in the South Pacific, advancing the use of tenecteplase and idarucizumab in acute stroke,[11] and the use of telestroke across international borders and within the pre-hospital ambulance setting.[12] She has also led neuroepidemiology research using big data and data linkage and has published on the associations between stroke, indigenous peoples, greenspace exposure, and climate change as well as the neurology workforce.(Source:University profile) She collaborates with researchers across the globe including the Global Burden of Disease Group.[13]

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Ranta leads the New Zealand National Stroke Registry and Stroke Strategy.[14] Ranta is a on the boards of the World Stroke Organisation and the Australian and New Zealand Association of Neurologists.[6] She has been President of the Neurological Association of New Zealand.[15] She is on several editorial boards, including those of Stroke and Neurology.[6]

New (fix broken link for university page, expand, add sources):

Ranta leads the New Zealand National Stroke Registry and has authored several national NZ Stroke Strategies.[14] Ranta is on the boards of the World Stroke Organisation, the Asia Pacific Stroke Organisation, Stroke Aotearoa and the Australian and New Zealand Association of Neurologists (ANZSO).[16][6][17] She has been President of the Neurological Association of New Zealand, is the current President-elect of ANZSO, and co-chairs the WSO Telestroke Committee.[6][18][19][20] She is on several editorial boards, including those of Stroke, Neurology and Journal of the American Heart Association,[16] and serves as stroke section editor of Springer Nature’s Current Neurology and Neuroscience Reports.[21]

5. Changes to publication list. To update publications and give a better representation of the work Ranta does, remove the first two publications of the publication list and replace with these (or as many as you think reasonable):

This was a complicated request to format so if anything is unclear let me know, and of course happy to discuss requested changes as necessary, many thanks. DrThneed (talk) 01:35, 5 May 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. ↑ "Center on Governance through Human Rights". Berlin Governance Platform. Retrieved 17 July 2023.
  2. ↑ LeGardye, Quinci (15 March 2022). "For Anna Delvey's Next Scheme, the Convicted Scammer Will Appear on 'Dancing with the Stars'". Marie Claire.
  3. ↑ Ransom, Jan; Palmer, Emily (25 April 2019). "Fake Heiress Who Swindled N.Y.'s Elite Is Found Guilty". The New York Times.
  4. ↑ A. Wittmann; G. F. Wooten (1 November 2001). "Amoxicillin-induced aseptic meningitis". Neurology. 57 (9): 1734. doi:10.1212/WNL.57.9.1734. ISSN 1526-632X. PMID 11706130. Wikidata Q30308272.
  5. ↑ "Prof Anna Ranta". www.stroke.org.nz. Retrieved 2026-04-28.
  6. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 Board, Otago Bulletin (2020-12-08). "Otago announces 26 new professors". www.otago.ac.nz. Retrieved 2024-03-02.
  7. 1 2 3 4 Lewis, John (2022-06-13). "Stroke victims asked about care experience". Otago Daily Times. Retrieved 2024-03-02.
  8. ↑ Annemarei Ranta; Alan Barber (22 January 2016). "Transient ischemic attack service provision: A review of available service models". Neurology. 86 (10): 947–953. doi:10.1212/WNL.0000000000002339. ISSN 1526-632X. PMID 26802089. Wikidata Q38708571.
  9. ↑ New Zealand Ministry of Health. Stroke Clot Retrieval: A National Service Improvement Programme Action Plan (14 January 2021) ISBN 978-1-98-859707-2
  10. ↑ Annemarei Ranta; Jeremy Lanford; Suzanne Busch; et al. (1 November 2017). "Impact and implementation of a sustainable regional telestroke network". Internal Medicine Journal. 47 (11): 1270–1275. doi:10.1111/IMJ.13557. ISSN 1444-0903. PMID 28742223. Wikidata Q38662494.
  11. ↑ Karim Mahawish; John Gommans; Timothy Kleinig; Bhavesh Lallu; Alicia Tyson; Annemarei Ranta (October 2021). "Switching to Tenecteplase for Stroke Thrombolysis". Stroke. 52 (10). doi:10.1161/STROKEAHA.121.035931. ISSN 0039-2499. PMID 34465202. Wikidata Q124714675.
  12. ↑ "REGIONS II - Reducing stroke inequities for rural Māori | Health Research Council of New Zealand". www.hrc.govt.nz. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  13. ↑ Valery L Feigin; Melsew Dagne Abate; Yohannes Habtegiorgis Abate; et al. (October 2024). "Global, regional, and national burden of stroke and its risk factors, 1990–2021: a systematic analysis for the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021". Lancet Neurology. 23 (10): 973–1003. doi:10.1016/S1474-4422(24)00369-7. ISSN 1474-4422. PMID 39304265. Wikidata Q137152537.
  14. 1 2 University of Otago, Wellington (2023-06-30). "Professor Anna Ranta". www.otago.ac.nz. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  15. ↑ "ANZCA | Professor Anna Ranta". www.anzca.edu.au. Retrieved 2024-03-02.
  16. 1 2 "About APSO: Council members". Asia Pacific Stroke Organization. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  17. ↑ "Who we are". www.stroke.org.nz. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  18. ↑ "ANZCA | Professor Anna Ranta". www.anzca.edu.au. Retrieved 2024-03-02.
  19. ↑ "ANZSO Presidents and Office Bearers". Australian and New Zealand Stroke Organisation. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  20. ↑ "Committees". World Stroke Organization. Retrieved 2026-05-05.
  21. ↑ "Current Neurology and Neuroscience Reports". SpringerLink. Retrieved 2026-04-28.

DrThneed (talk) 01:35, 5 May 2026 (UTC)

Anthony D. Romero


More concise/accurate "Early life and education" section

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Hello editors! My name's Sara and I work for the ACLU. I have drafted an updated version of this article, with improved sourcing, that I'm seeking updates to this page from.

  • Request: I would like to replace the current first paragraph of the Early life and education section with the following paragraph. All of the information listed here is factually correct, more concise, and backed by sourcing. It also removes ACLU as a primary source from the current paragraph:
Anthony D. Romero was born on July 9, 1965, in The Bronx, New York City, to Puerto Rican parents Demetrio and Coralie Romero. He grew up in a public housing project in The Bronx. His father worked at a Manhattan hotel and was initially denied higher-paying work as a banquet waiter due to limited English proficiency. After filing a grievance with his labor union's attorney, his father won the case. The family later moved to New Jersey, where Romero completed high school.[1][2]

References

  1. ↑ Lewin, Tamar (May 1, 2001). "Civil Liberties Union Chooses New Executive". The New York Times. Retrieved February 5, 2025.
  2. ↑ "Anthony Romero Biography and Interview". www.achievement.org. American Academy of Achievement.

Let me know if you have any questions, and thanks! ACLUSara (talk) 15:39, 18 May 2026 (UTC)

 Done pburka (talk) 17:53, 7 June 2026 (UTC)


Early career section with improved sourcing

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Hello editors! My name's Sara and I work for the ACLU. Would anybody be willing to take a look at my next request?

  • Request: I would like to take what is currently in the Early career section, and replace it wholesale with the following version. The section mainly uses primary sourcing from the ACLU website, and contains a dead Wikilink. My proposed version is completely re-written based on a reliable source from the New York Times. See below:
Early career

Romero worked at the Rockefeller Foundation, where he led a study that investigated future directions in civil rights advocacy. In 1992, Romero began working as an executive for the Ford Foundation, developing its human rights and international cooperation program. Under his leadership, this program became the foundation’s largest, granting $90 million in support of projects including affirmative action, immigrant rights, and gay rights.[1]

References

  1. ↑ Lewin, Tamar (May 1, 2001). "Civil Liberties Union Chooses New Executive". The New York Times. Retrieved February 5, 2025.

Let me know what you think, and thanks! ACLUSara (talk) 22:32, 22 June 2026 (UTC)

Reply 1-JUL-2026

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  Edit request declined  

  • A verbatim description of the text and references to be removed was not included with the request.[1]

References

  1. ↑ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: Describe the requested changes in detail. This includes the exact proposed wording of the new material, the exact proposed location for it, and an explicit description of any wording to be removed, including removal for any substitution.

Regards,  Spintendo  21:57, 1 July 2026 (UTC)

As mentioned earlier, I am requesting that we replace the current live section, which relies mainly on an ACLU source and a little on a Boston Globe article, with my proposed version that uses the New York Times as its primary source. The current section also contains a dead Wikilink, which I am proposing we fix with my version above. If there are any questions you might have, feel free to ask them here. Thanks ACLUSara (talk) 17:36, 8 July 2026 (UTC)

Anxiety disorder


Proposed addition to "Treatments for children" section: parent-based treatment (SPACE)

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Disclosure: I am Eli Lebowitz, the developer of the SPACE treatment discussed below, so I have a conflict of interest and am proposing this change here rather than editing the article directly. I would be grateful if an uninvolved editor could review the proposal and the sources and add the content (in whatever revised form seems appropriate) if it is judged suitable.

Proposed text (2–3 sentences for the end of the "Treatments for children" section):

Parent-based treatment has also been developed for childhood anxiety. Supportive Parenting for Anxious Childhood Emotions (SPACE) is delivered entirely to parents and targets family accommodation of the child's symptoms; a randomized noninferiority trial found it comparable to cognitive behavioral therapy for childhood anxiety disorders,[1][2] and the CANMAT/ICOCS 2025 international guidelines state that it has shown efficacy in pediatric anxiety disorders.[3]

Sources:

[1] Lebowitz ER, Marin C, Martino A, Shimshoni Y, Silverman WK. Parent-Based Treatment as Efficacious as Cognitive-Behavioral Therapy for Childhood Anxiety: A Randomized Noninferiority Study of Supportive Parenting for Anxious Childhood Emotions. J Am Acad Child Adolesc Psychiatry. 2020;59(3):362-372. doi:10.1016/j.jaac.2019.02.014. PMID 30851397. (Note: I am the first author of this trial; it is offered to describe the study, with the independent sources below supporting due weight.)

[2] McKelvey R. Editorial: Parent-Based Treatment for Childhood Anxiety. J Am Acad Child Adolesc Psychiatry. 2020;59(3):342-343. doi:10.1016/j.jaac.2019.04.025. PMID 31128270. (Independent editorial accompanying the trial.)

[3] Van Ameringen M, Fineberg NA, Ravindran A, et al. Canadian Network for Mood and Anxiety Treatments (CANMAT) and International College of Obsessive-Compulsive Spectrum Disorders (ICOCS) 2025 international guidelines for the management of patients with obsessive-compulsive disorder. J Psychiatr Res. 2026;199:404-488. doi:10.1016/j.jpsychires.2025.12.039. (Independent international clinical practice guideline; discusses SPACE in section 6.4.4.1, including its Level 4 evidence rating for OCD-specific outcomes.)

Additional independent secondary coverage, if useful for assessing due weight: the International OCD Foundation's treatment guide entry on SPACE (https://iocdf.org/about-ocd/ocd-treatment-guide/space/); The Atlantic, "What Happened to American Childhood?" (May 2020); The Wall Street Journal, "The Right Way for Parents to Help Anxious Children" (Dec. 2017); The Philadelphia Inquirer (March 2019); Medscape Medical News (2019, including independent expert commentary).

I am happy to answer questions or provide full text of sources. Thank you for considering. Abramides (talk) 16:40, 7 July 2026 (UTC)

April Masini


Request edit — disambiguation of "Masini" per MOS:SAMESURNAME (BLP accuracy issue)

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I am April Masini, the subject of this article, so per WP:COI I am requesting corrections here rather than editing directly.

The problem: This article discusses two different people with the surname Masini — me (the subject) and Al Masini, my former husband, who appears throughout the early part of the article (as co-producer of the 1998 Miss Universe Pageant, in the "Al and April Masini Day" proclamation, and as my former spouse). Despite this, the article refers to me as "Masini" alone in dozens of places.

Why this matters: It violates Wikipedia's own style guideline. MOS:SAMESURNAME provides that when multiple people who share a surname are discussed in an article, they should be referred to by first name or full name to avoid ambiguity. It creates factual misattribution on a biography of a living person. Sentences such as "Masini was the first to use Hawaii's newly passed Act 221" and "producers Masini and Adam Fields" describe work in which Al Masini had no involvement whatsoever. On a page where "Al Masini" appears prominently, "Masini" alone makes my documented, cited work ambiguous — a reader cannot reliably tell which Masini is meant.

An independent scholarly source resolves the ambiguity by first name. A peer-reviewed Duke University Press article states: "…whose production was brokered by April Masini, also behind Baywatch: Hawaii and bringing the Miss Universe pageants to Hawai'i in 1998—Masini made Blue Crush the first film to exploit then-new special tax breaks designed to draw 'high tech' industry [to] Hawai'i." (Environmental Humanities, vol. 16, no. 1, 2024; publisher: Duke University Press; ISSN 2201-1919; hosted at read.dukeupress.edu: https://read.dukeupress.edu/environmental-humanities/article/16/1/19/386273/ — the journal is indexed in DOAJ and SCImago with Duke University Press listed as publisher). This peer-reviewed source attributes the Blue Crush brokering — and the Act 221 first — to April Masini by name, and does not mention Al Masini at all. Suggested citation, should editors wish to add it: "Blue Crush: Cinema, Oceanic Feeling, and Settler Colonialism". Environmental Humanities. 16 (1). Duke University Press. 2024. ISSN 2201-1919. Requested edit: Throughout the article, refer to the subject as "April Masini" (or "April" where repetition is awkward), and to Al Masini as "Al Masini" (or "Al"), consistent with MOS:SAMESURNAME. This is a style-guideline-compliance and accuracy request only; no content or sourcing changes are requested.

One additional error: In the Blue Crush section, the wikilink on "Sylvester" points to Sylvester (singer). The law firm mentioned (Bloom Hergott Diemer) represented Sylvester Stallone, the actor. The link target is incorrect and should point to Sylvester Stallone.

Concretely: where "Masini" alone refers to me, please change "Masini" to "April Masini" (or "April"); where it refers to Al Masini, please change it to "Al Masini" (or "Al"); and please change the wikilink Sylvester (singer) to Sylvester Stallone.

Thank you for your consideration. — April Masini (article subject) AprilMasini (talk) 08:59, 12 July 2026 (UTC)

Arab Medical Center

Requested addition: Stem cell and bone marrow transplant unit

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I have a conflict of interest with Arab Medical Center. Per WP:COI, I am requesting that an uninvolved editor add the following content. This is supported by a peer-reviewed publication in a major academic journal.

Proposed addition

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Add to the "Medical services" section, after the existing first paragraph:

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The hospital's stem cell and bone marrow transplant unit performs hematopoietic cell transplants for conditions including leukemia, lymphoma, and thalassemia. A 2019 study published in Bone Marrow Transplantation (Nature Publishing Group) identified AMC as one of three centers in Jordan providing this service, alongside King Hussein Cancer Center and Jordan University Hospital.

--- END PROPOSED TEXT ---

Source

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 * Peer-reviewed, published in Nature Publishing Group journal
 * Independent of AMC (international academic research)
 * Explicitly identifies AMC as one of three transplant centers in Jordan
 * Data covers March 2003 to September 2017

Rationale

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  • This is the strongest independent source found. A Nature-affiliated journal explicitly naming AMC as one of three transplant centers in Jordan establishes significant notability.
  • The study is independent (not funded by AMC, not written by AMC staff).
  • Per WP:V and WP:NORG, this directly supports AMC's notability as a medical institution.
  • The claim is factual and neutral, avoiding any promotional language.
  • Does not remove or modify any existing content.

Thank you for your time and consideration. ~2026-36338-32 (talk) 13:06, 22 June 2026 (UTC)

Arada (company)


Updating the Arada Page - Support Requested

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Hello, as I am associated with the topic of this page, I am adding suggested changes here, so that we get consensus before any changes are. made to this page moving forward. Suggested amendments to make maintain accuracy / completeness of this page:

Suggested changes / amendments: Change the second line under History to read: Arada has 55,000 homes and AED130 billion ($35 billion) of projects in its existing and future pipeline, as of early 2026. (https://www.agbi.com/construction/2026/02/arada-to-deploy-australian-construction-arm-in-gulf-and-uk/)

Add an additional line after to para 3. Other acquisitions and partnerships in the food and beverage sector include Australian cookie and bakehouse brand Brooki (https://www.afr.com/companies/retail/brooke-bellamy-survives-cookbook-scandal-eyes-100-bakery-expansion-20251112-p5neqe) and South Africa’s Tashas Group (https://businesstech.co.za/news/business/837089/popular-south-african-restaurant-chain-expanding-internationally/).

For the second to last line in this section, can we change to: In 2025, Arada completed several acquisitions to build up its industrial vertical, including the New South Wales operations of Australian contractor Roberts Co (use existing link), Italian crane manufacturer Raimondi and three crane divisions belonging to US-listed Terex Corporation (https://vertikal.net/en/news/story/46872/raimondi-to-acquire-terex-cranes).

In the projects section can we add the latest launch at the bottom. In January 2026, Arada launched Inaura Downtown, a 210-m tall hospitality and branded residences tower designed by Dutch architects MVRDV. (https://www.dezeen.com/2026/01/19/inaura-skyscraper-mvrdv-dubai-uae/)

Change number of staff to 2,600 (this is as per brand rep confirmation)

Change the category to UAE real estate companies and UAE companies founded in 2017. It’s not a KSA company

In addition, ARADA has another new acquisition announced last week, I am suggesting to add this sentence after the sentence about acquiring the three gym brands: The company also purchased Abu Dhabi-based Reem Hospital from a consortium including private equity firm Investcorp, and is planning to add an additional three hospitals in the UAE source here: https://www.agbi.com/construction/2026/05/arada-bought-reem-hospital-to-break-revenue-cycle-says-ceo/

OmarKattan (talk) 06:34, 25 March 2026 (UTC)

Hello , can anyone support here, another edit needed George Flooks is no longer CEO of the Gyms brand and the article that was added to support that is now not live (404)
Can I go ahead and make all these changes or does anyone have any input, as I am associated with this brand I would rather that other editors update with my input here. thank you
OmarKattan (talk) 06:47, 5 April 2026 (UTC)
It's likely no-one saw your request, because you didn't tag it with {{Edit COI}}. I have now done so, at the top of this section. Please note the stated backlog. We recommend you ask for changes by using the Wikipedia:Edit Request Wizard, which will handle the formalities for you. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:44, 17 May 2026 (UTC)


  • What I think should be changed:

After this: In December 2024, Arada acquired three gym brands in the UAE, FitnGlam, The Platform Studios, and Fitcode. [16]

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The company also purchased Abu Dhabi-based Reem Hospital from a consortium including private equity firm Investcorp, and is planning to add an additional three hospitals in the UAE (Arada bought Reem Hospital to break revenue cycle, says CEO | AGBI).

  • Why it should be changed:

UPdate to make the page more useful

  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

Arada bought Reem Hospital to break revenue cycle, says CEO | AGBI

OmarKattan (talk) 14:54, 27 June 2026 (UTC)

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Arias with a Twist


Edit request: correct infobox official website (COI)

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Declaring a conflict of interest per WP:COI: I worked on the original production and built the current official site; I am unpaid. Requesting a neutral editor evaluate the following.

The infobox |website= currently points to an archived snapshot of a HERE listings page, which was never the show's own site:

{{official|https://web.archive.org/web/20080914033253/http://www.here.org:80/see/now/}}

The production's current official website is https://ariaswithatwistreturns.com/. Per WP:ELOFFICIAL the current official site is the appropriate value here. Proposed change — replace the infobox |website= value with:

{{Official website|https://ariaswithatwistreturns.com/}}

The original production's archival site (http://ariaswithatwist.com/) in ==External links== should remain unchanged as a historical record of the 2008 run. idledebonair (talk) 17:39, 8 July 2026 (UTC)

Arnold Ventures


COI edit request

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1) I would like to propose we remove this sentence: “The organization has funded a wide range of studies and programs in health care, education reform, criminal justice, and initiatives in open science and metascience.[2]” from the first paragraph of our page as it could be perceived as promotional.

2) Remove “efficiently and” from the end of the 2nd sentence in the History section, as it can be perceived as promotional.

3) Remove this sentence from the 3rd paragraph in the History section: “Since 2008, the organization has invested more than $1 billion in philanthropic efforts, focusing on using expert research and statistical analysis to drive systemic social change.[7]” given the numbers are outdated and could be seen as promotional. And remove this from the 5th paragraph: “In 2018, the organization donated $204.3 million.[10]” for the same reason.

5) Add this sentence to the Partnerships subsection of the Areas of focus section. I might recommend including a more recent partnership example such as Arnold Ventures’ partnership in March 2025 with Oklahoma Governor Stitt: https://www.insidephilanthropy.com/home/how-arnold-ventures-seeks-to-help-policymakers-implement-programs-that-work

6)And to remove the 2nd sentence: “By November 2020, the organization had committed $48 million to the partnership.[15]” which could be seen as promotional.

Thank you in advance for your review and help, and the opportunity to provide factual information. AL at AV (talk) 18:17, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

Hi again, editors. I’m following up from May 7th to see if there are any concerns with me implementing the proposed edits I shared earlier, particularly the Partnerships subsection of the Areas of focus section and sourcing updates. I’m happy to adjust the language or approach based on your feedback, but wanted to check if I have permission to proceed or if there’s anything else I should revise before doing so. Thanks again for your time and input. @Marquardtika @Catnapper100 AL at AV (talk) 17:04, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
@AL at AV: I took a look and I think we're moving in the right direction. Thanks for your work on this. I think we should try to expand the lede to give a summary of the article and of the major giving areas. Let me know if you have any suggestions. Marquardtika (talk) 16:16, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
Hi @Marquardtika, following up on your suggestion to expand the lede, I’d like to propose adding one sentence to reflect Arnold Ventures' main areas of focus:
My proposed sentence to follow the first two sentences in the current lede:
The philanthropy funds research and advocacy in public policy areas including education[1], criminal justice [2], health [3], infrastructure[4], and public finance[5][6].
Proposed citation for the new material:
[1] https://philanthropynewsdigest.org/news/arnold-ventures-invests-35.6-million-to-ncccs-workforce-program
[2] https://www.cnn.com/2024/10/26/us/crime-stats-delay-fbi
[3]​​https://www.insidephilanthropy.com/home/how-arnold-ventures-is-backing-cost-cutting-in-health-without-cutting-care
[4]https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2024-06-20/john-arnold-on-why-it-s-so-hard-to-build-things-in-america?sref=M5E7r486&embedded-checkout=true
[5] https://qz.com/trump-republican-tax-spending-bill-cost-debt-deficit
[6] https://www.politico.com/newsletters/weekly-tax/2024/09/30/time-to-talk-about-baseline-games-00181611
Thank you for this collaborative improvement to the page and to ensure this information is up to date! As you can see, there is not much on this page that has been updated in the last decade. My goal is to provide current information. AL at AV (talk) 17:13, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
Thanks--I'll take a look. Marquardtika (talk) 17:17, 25 June 2025 (UTC)


Update for Education

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Hi again. 👋 In my posts above, I introduced myself and disclosed my COI, but in case any editors are new to this page or hadn't spotted it: I work for Arnold Ventures and am here in an official capacity to ask for edits to this page on the organization's behalf. Earlier this year, the page was cleaned up significantly to resolve some valid concerns about promotional content from before I got involved on the page. With the page in good shape after my last request above, I'd like to help provide current information to be added to the article.

In the Education section, the most recent information is from 2020, however there are education initiatives from the last several years that have been well covered. My proposed update is:

In 2025, the organization provided a $35.6 million grant to fund a program in the North Carolina Community College System aimed at helping low-income students complete their studies if they are enrolled in programs with areas of study related to in-demand careers in the state. The NC Community Colleges Boost program was launched in 2025. It was based on a program developed by the City University of New York. The program included financial support for college-related expenses and support from academic advisors.[1][2] Arnold Ventures also matched state funding to launch a similar program in two Colorado community colleges in 2025.[3]

References

  1. ↑ Weissman, Sara (6 February 2025). "North Carolina Community Colleges Launch Program Modeled After CUNY ASAP". Inside Higher Ed. Retrieved 23 September 2025.
  2. ↑ Scutari, Mike (21 April 2025). "How Arnold Ventures Seeks to Help Policymakers Implement Programs That Work". Inside Philanthropy. Retrieved 23 September 2025.
  3. ↑ Gonzales, Jason (27 March 2025). "Colorado will bring NYC community college support program to two state rural campuses". Chalkbeat. Retrieved 23 September 2025.

Thanks in advance for reviewing this. 🤓 I'm happy to revise anything based on feedback, let me know. Thanks! 🙏 AL at AV (talk) 16:49, 1 October 2025 (UTC)

Done Likeanechointheforest (talk) 17:32, 12 October 2025 (UTC)


Update for Data-Driven Justice

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First, 👋 I want to thank User:Likeanechointheforest for handling my last edit request. I know that non-COI Wikipedia editors are volunteers, so I really appreciate the help. 🙏 This next request is pretty similar to my previous one. I'd like to add a short paragraph to the Data-Driven Justice section about the Real-Time Crime Index, which has been covered by a few news outlets, two of which are cited below. Here's my suggested content:🤓

Arnold Ventures provides funding for the Real-Time Crime Index, an interactive tool that analyzes crime data collected from approximately 350 law enforcement agencies.[1][2] The index contains data that is several months more recent than the data contained in regular FBI crime reports, which are more comprehensive and consequently take longer to assemble.[2] The RTCI launched in September 2024 and is operated by AH Datalytics.[1]

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  1. 1 2 Smith, Carl (September 26, 2024). "A New Tool Allows Governments to Track Crime Data in Real Time". CNN. Retrieved October 15, 2025.
  2. 1 2 Levenson, Eric (October 26, 2024). "The FBI releases crime stats months after the fact. This new crime tracker is trying to be more timely – and the FBI is too". CNN. Retrieved October 15, 2025.

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to review! AL at AV (talk) 14:29, 11 November 2025 (UTC)

Partly done but the article is trash because I only see them spend money but I don't see what the effect of their money is. Did it reduce crime? Made better school outcomes? Led to savings in healthcare costs or some innovative breakthroughs? If there is a third party source that tracks the efficacy of their interventions, these would be most welcome. Szmenderowiecki (talk · contribs) 16:59, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing 🙏 and implementing my request User:Szmenderowiecki. I will look 👀 for opportunities to suggest more content that demonstrates the impact made. I'll try to make that happen via future edit requests. ✅
One small thing: in the last sentence of the Crime section, the Real-Time Crime Index is referred to as "RCTI." Would you mind fixing that typo?
Again, thanks very much for your help! AL at AV (talk) 16:08, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Yeah, sure, that's my fuck-up. Szmenderowiecki (talk · contribs) 22:42, 20 November 2025 (UTC)


Update for Health Care section

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Hello again, 👋 I'm back to ask for a few additions to the Health care section, which is solid overall but doesn't contain information about some of Arnold Ventures' more recent work in the space. I've assembled a draft below. It doesn't revise any existing content. My suggested additions are highlighted in yellow.

I would also like to ask about changing the section title from "Health care" to "Healthcare." I know folks write it both ways, but I feel like I see the latter much more frequently than the former. Anyway, that's a minor quibble.

If editors have any feedback for me on the draft, please reply below and I'll do my best to address your comment. Thanks! 🙏🤓 AL at AV (talk) 20:37, 16 December 2025 (UTC)

Partly done: Added first highlight. Second felt too specific to be notable overall. Likeanechointheforest (talk) 19:24, 20 December 2025 (UTC)


Adding new Sports betting subsection

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Hello again! 👋 In 2026, Arnold Ventures has funded quite a bit of research on sports betting, its effects on consumers, and how policymakers might go about effectively regulating it. There's now enough press circulating that I thought it might be a good idea to add a "Sports betting" subsection to the "Areas of focus" section. ⚽️ Below is a draft I put together. It cites Bloomberg, CNBC, and Inside Philanthropy, which I believe are reliable sources.

=Arthur W. Toga=


Request edit on 21 June 2026

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  • What I think should be changed:
  • Why it should be changed:
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):


I have a disclosed conflict of interest because I work in communications at the USC Mark and Mary Stevens Neuroimaging and Informatics Institute, which Arthur W. Toga directs. I am not editing the article directly. I would like to propose the following neutral, sourced additions to improve the article’s coverage of Toga’s research contributions in neuroimaging, brain mapping, neuroinformatics, and data sharing. I welcome review, revision, or rejection by independent editors.

Asus


COI edit request: addition to Republic of Gamers section

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I work for ASUS and am disclosing a conflict of interest per WP:COI. I am not editing the article directly and am instead proposing the following addition for review by a neutral editor. The Republic of Gamers section currently does not mention ROG's gaming mouse products. I'd like to propose adding two sentences after the existing ROG Ally paragraph, before The Ultimate Force section:

"In 2023, ROG partnered with Aim Lab, a popular aim-training software platform, to release the Harpe Ace Aim Lab Edition, a lightweight wireless gaming mouse whose settings could be automatically tuned using Aim Lab's training software.[1][2] The following year, ROG released the Harpe Ace Extreme, a carbon fiber variant of the mouse weighing around 47 grams.[3]"

Both claims are sourced to independent third-party hardware publications. Happy to adjust wording or sourcing if needed.

SenatorSenna (talk) 03:55, 1 July 2026 (UTC) SenatorSenna (talk) 03:55, 1 July 2026 (UTC)

Atradius


Request to add "Digital Products / Credit-IQ" subsection

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{{Connected contributor (paid)}} should only be used on talk pages.

Hello. I am disclosing that I have a paid connection to Atradius / Credit-IQ and am therefore not editing the article directly, in accordance with Wikipedia's conflict of interest guidelines (WP:COI) and the WP:PAID policy.

I would like to request that an independent editor consider adding the following subsection to the existing Atradius article, under a new "Digital Products" or "Technology Solutions" section, after the existing "Atradius Collections" subsection.

I believe this addition meets Wikipedia's neutral point of view and verifiability standards, as the content is drawn from publicly available, factual product descriptions and does not use promotional language.

Thank you for considering this request. KamilDawidKamil (talk) 18:28, 15 April 2026 (UTC)

 Not done Hi KamilDawidKamil. Please do correct me if I am mistaken, but did you use AI to generate this edit request? While reviewing your proposed additions, I found that several of the references you added do not appear to exist or have no relation to the claim that you cited them for.
AI is well known for hallucinating references and I strongly suspect that occurred here based upon the mixup with the similar AU Group URLs. Wikipedia policy prohibits the use of AI-based Large Language Models to generate article content. If you did use AI to generate this request, I won't hold it against you this time, but please do not use AI to generate edits going forward. In any event, I cannot accept this draft given that several of the cited sources failed verification. Thank you for your understanding. Altamel (talk) 03:29, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Hello Altamel,
Thank you for your thorough and fair review. You were correct on all counts. I used AI assistance to draft that previous request, and the hallucinated URLs wasted your time. I apologize sincerely.
I have since conducted manual research and found the following independently-verified sources. Before making another formal edit request, I would like your advice on whether these meet Wikipedia's bar, and whether the right path is an expanded section in this article or a standalone article for Atradius Collections.
Verified sources for Atradius Collections:
Verified sources for Credit-IQ:
My specific questions:
= Would the above sources support adding a short "Digital Products / Credit-IQ" subsection to the existing Atradius article under [[WP:V]] and [[WP:NPOV]]? =
= Does Atradius Collections, operating in 40+ countries and with the 2023 acquisition of Pro Kolekt Group extending reach into Eastern Europe, have sufficient independent coverage to qualify for a standalone article under [[WP:ORG]]? =
I am asking before submitting a new formal request to avoid repeating the same mistakes. I confirm this message was written by me personally, not generated by AI.
Thank you again for your patience and guidance. ~2026-25578-47 (talk) 07:27, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Okay, thank you for being honest and owning up to it. Re: Atradius Collections, you would have to review the notability guidelines at WP:ORG, as you identified above. I have not reviewed sources for Atradius Collections and do not know whether they have attained a significant level of coverage in multiple independent sources. But I would advise against writing a standalone article because it can be difficult for subsidiaries to demonstrate they have coverage specific to them as opposed to the parent company. That's just my gut opinion; you are free to submit a draft for review at Wikipedia:Articles for Creation if you so wish. As for the other sources, I'll come back to them if I have time, but at the moment I'm tied up with handling other edit requests. Best, Altamel (talk) 03:14, 28 April 2026 (UTC)

References


Proposed "Collections" section — paid-editor request (WP:COIEDIT)

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I am employed by Atradius Collections, the B2B debt collection subsidiary of Atradius N.V., and am therefore a paid editor under WP:PAID. I am requesting that an uninvolved editor review the proposed section below and add it if they consider it appropriate, modifying or removing any sentence they cannot verify.

About the sources: Citations are primarily to Atradius's own corporate website (used only for uncontroversial, non-promotional descriptors per WP:ABOUTSELF) and one independent third-party developer case study (iO Digital). One citation is a PR Newswire press release, used solely to verify the date and scope of the Pro Kolekt Group acquisition.

Proposed markup to add under a new == Collections == heading:



Avaya






Edit Request: Add Leadership to Infobox (CEO Patrick Dennis)


    
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Description: The Infobox currently does not list any key personnel. I propose adding the current CEO, Patrick Dennis, to the Infobox.



Proposed Change: Please add the following line to the Infobox: | key_people = Patrick Dennis (CEO)



Supporting Sources:




Archer15000 (talk) 13:28, 3 March 2026 (UTC)



 Done  Discourses on Livvy (talk · contribs) 03:13, 22 March 2026 (UTC)

I see a volunteer editor has implemented this change in the Infobox. Thank you very much for the assistance in keeping the article accurate! I am marking this request as fulfilled. Archer15000 (talk) 17:19, 27 March 2026 (UTC)







Edit Request: Update Lead Paragraph (Outdated 2019 Stats)


    
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  • Description:


The current lead paragraph for Avaya relies on 2019 data and obsolete terminology. This request updates the section to reflect the company's 2026 status as a private, enterprise-focused entity with its current Infinity and Nexus architectures. 






  • Current Text:


"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is an American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey,[4] that provides cloud communications and workstream collaboration services. The company's platform includes unified communications and contact center services.[5][6][7] In 2019, the company provided services to 220,000 customer locations in 190 countries.[8]" 






  • Proposed Text:


"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey, that provides enterprise customer experience (CX), unified communications (UC), and critical communications infrastructure solutions. The company's core portfolio includes the Avaya Infinity platform for AI-powered workflow orchestration and Avaya Nexus, a platform designed for mission-critical voice environments supporting on-premises, hybrid, and cloud deployments. Avaya provides communication services to over 90,000 customers worldwide, including approximately 90% of the Fortune 100, with a strategic focus on large global enterprise clients."






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No Jitter (Nov 6, 2025): Avaya Infinity Architecture



CX Today (April 17, 2024): Verifies 90% of Fortune 100 base and private status



The Futurum Group (Mar 19, 2026): Avaya Nexus Launch & Hybrid Support






  • Rationale: Per WP:LEAD, the lead must summarize the current state of the subject. The proposed text replaces outdated marketing jargon and seven-year-old statistics with third-party verified facts regarding the company's 2026 business model and product architectures.







Archer15000 (talk) 17:04, 30 March 2026 (UTC)



Hi Archer15000. I am declining this edit request: while you are right to identify marketing jargon as a concern, the updated paragraph is even more reliant on marketing speak and does not adhere to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. For instance, why say "strategic focus on large global enterprise clients" when you could go with something much more plainspoken, like "Avaya's customer base consists mainly of large corporate entities?" That's just one example, and I would recommend rewriting the rest of the paragraph if you intend to resubmit it. Thank you for your understanding. Altamel (talk) 04:35, 25 April 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the detailed feedback and examples, Altamel. I have revised the draft to better align with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view and verifiability standards. I removed product-specific and promotional language, and I updated the lead paragraph to use more neutral, descriptive wording based on the sources.


Proposed Text:


Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey. The company provides software and services for customer experience, contact center, and unified communications. It serves more than 90,000 customers worldwide, including around 90% of the Fortune 100.


Supporting Sources:



Rationale:


This revision is intended to reflect the company’s current description in a neutral, source-based way.


Archer15000 (talk) 16:07, 5 May 2026 (UTC)

The first two sentences as revised look fine to me. I'm on the fence about the third sentence: I believe it's OK to include the customer stats if they can be verified, but I am not familiar with cxtoday.com and whether it is a reliable source. I'll leave it up to another reviewer to assess. You are free to submit the revised request back into the queue for someone else to take a look. Altamel (talk) 15:12, 9 May 2026 (UTC)







Revised Lead Paragraph Update (COI)


    
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Please can the Lead paragraph be updated as follows to remove outdated 2019 stats and a simplified description.



Current Text:
"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is an American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey,[4] that provides cloud communications and workstream collaboration services. The company's platform includes unified communications and contact center services.[5][6][7] In 2019, the company provided services to 220,000 customer locations in 190 countries.[8]"  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Archer15000 (talk • contribs) 11:41, 26 June 2026 (UTC)
 


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"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey. The company provides software and services for customer experience, contact center, and unified communications."





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  • Avaya LLC - Company Profile (Bloomberg) — Verifies company name (LLC) and core business focus on software and services for contact centers and unified communications.
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  • Internal Consistency: The company's private status and Morristown headquarters are already established and sourced within the existing "History" section and the article's infobox.



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This revised request follows guidance from Altamel and focuses on the first two sentences previously reviewed as acceptable. It uses a high-authority Bloomberg profile to verify the LLC designation and core software focus, while maintaining consistency with the private status and headquarters location already documented elsewhere in the article.



Archer15000 (talk) 07:32, 14 May 2026 (UTC)



Hello reviewers! I am removing the "answered" parameter to place this request back into the active queue. This is a revised version of a previous request. Based on prior feedback from another editor, I have dropped the third sentence regarding customer statistics to avoid any reliable sourcing issues. 



The proposed text now only includes the first two sentences (which were previously reviewed as acceptable), supported by a Bloomberg company profile. Thank you for your time! Archer15000 (talk) 12:09, 29 June 2026 (UTC)





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