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COI edit request

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1) I would like to propose we remove this sentence: “The organization has funded a wide range of studies and programs in health care, education reform, criminal justice, and initiatives in open science and metascience.[2]” from the first paragraph of our page as it could be perceived as promotional.

2) Remove “efficiently and” from the end of the 2nd sentence in the History section, as it can be perceived as promotional.

3) Remove this sentence from the 3rd paragraph in the History section: “Since 2008, the organization has invested more than $1 billion in philanthropic efforts, focusing on using expert research and statistical analysis to drive systemic social change.[7]” given the numbers are outdated and could be seen as promotional. And remove this from the 5th paragraph: “In 2018, the organization donated $204.3 million.[10]” for the same reason.

5) Add this sentence to the Partnerships subsection of the Areas of focus section. I might recommend including a more recent partnership example such as Arnold Ventures’ partnership in March 2025 with Oklahoma Governor Stitt: https://www.insidephilanthropy.com/home/how-arnold-ventures-seeks-to-help-policymakers-implement-programs-that-work

6)And to remove the 2nd sentence: “By November 2020, the organization had committed $48 million to the partnership.[15]” which could be seen as promotional.

Thank you in advance for your review and help, and the opportunity to provide factual information. AL at AV (talk) 18:17, 7 May 2025 (UTC)

Hi again, editors. I’m following up from May 7th to see if there are any concerns with me implementing the proposed edits I shared earlier, particularly the Partnerships subsection of the Areas of focus section and sourcing updates. I’m happy to adjust the language or approach based on your feedback, but wanted to check if I have permission to proceed or if there’s anything else I should revise before doing so. Thanks again for your time and input. @Marquardtika @Catnapper100 AL at AV (talk) 17:04, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
@AL at AV: I took a look and I think we're moving in the right direction. Thanks for your work on this. I think we should try to expand the lede to give a summary of the article and of the major giving areas. Let me know if you have any suggestions. Marquardtika (talk) 16:16, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
Hi @Marquardtika, following up on your suggestion to expand the lede, I’d like to propose adding one sentence to reflect Arnold Ventures' main areas of focus:
My proposed sentence to follow the first two sentences in the current lede:
The philanthropy funds research and advocacy in public policy areas including education[1], criminal justice [2], health [3], infrastructure[4], and public finance[5][6].
Proposed citation for the new material:
[1] https://philanthropynewsdigest.org/news/arnold-ventures-invests-35.6-million-to-ncccs-workforce-program
[2] https://www.cnn.com/2024/10/26/us/crime-stats-delay-fbi
[3]​​https://www.insidephilanthropy.com/home/how-arnold-ventures-is-backing-cost-cutting-in-health-without-cutting-care
[4]https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2024-06-20/john-arnold-on-why-it-s-so-hard-to-build-things-in-america?sref=M5E7r486&embedded-checkout=true
[5] https://qz.com/trump-republican-tax-spending-bill-cost-debt-deficit
[6] https://www.politico.com/newsletters/weekly-tax/2024/09/30/time-to-talk-about-baseline-games-00181611
Thank you for this collaborative improvement to the page and to ensure this information is up to date! As you can see, there is not much on this page that has been updated in the last decade. My goal is to provide current information. AL at AV (talk) 17:13, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
Thanks--I'll take a look. Marquardtika (talk) 17:17, 25 June 2025 (UTC)


Update for Education

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Hi again. 👋 In my posts above, I introduced myself and disclosed my COI, but in case any editors are new to this page or hadn't spotted it: I work for Arnold Ventures and am here in an official capacity to ask for edits to this page on the organization's behalf. Earlier this year, the page was cleaned up significantly to resolve some valid concerns about promotional content from before I got involved on the page. With the page in good shape after my last request above, I'd like to help provide current information to be added to the article.

In the Education section, the most recent information is from 2020, however there are education initiatives from the last several years that have been well covered. My proposed update is:

In 2025, the organization provided a $35.6 million grant to fund a program in the North Carolina Community College System aimed at helping low-income students complete their studies if they are enrolled in programs with areas of study related to in-demand careers in the state. The NC Community Colleges Boost program was launched in 2025. It was based on a program developed by the City University of New York. The program included financial support for college-related expenses and support from academic advisors.[1][2] Arnold Ventures also matched state funding to launch a similar program in two Colorado community colleges in 2025.[3]

References

  1. Weissman, Sara (6 February 2025). "North Carolina Community Colleges Launch Program Modeled After CUNY ASAP". Inside Higher Ed. Retrieved 23 September 2025.
  2. Scutari, Mike (21 April 2025). "How Arnold Ventures Seeks to Help Policymakers Implement Programs That Work". Inside Philanthropy. Retrieved 23 September 2025.
  3. Gonzales, Jason (27 March 2025). "Colorado will bring NYC community college support program to two state rural campuses". Chalkbeat. Retrieved 23 September 2025.

Thanks in advance for reviewing this. 🤓 I'm happy to revise anything based on feedback, let me know. Thanks! 🙏 AL at AV (talk) 16:49, 1 October 2025 (UTC)

Done Likeanechointheforest (talk) 17:32, 12 October 2025 (UTC)


Update for Data-Driven Justice

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First, 👋 I want to thank User:Likeanechointheforest for handling my last edit request. I know that non-COI Wikipedia editors are volunteers, so I really appreciate the help. 🙏 This next request is pretty similar to my previous one. I'd like to add a short paragraph to the Data-Driven Justice section about the Real-Time Crime Index, which has been covered by a few news outlets, two of which are cited below. Here's my suggested content:🤓

Arnold Ventures provides funding for the Real-Time Crime Index, an interactive tool that analyzes crime data collected from approximately 350 law enforcement agencies.[1][2] The index contains data that is several months more recent than the data contained in regular FBI crime reports, which are more comprehensive and consequently take longer to assemble.[2] The RTCI launched in September 2024 and is operated by AH Datalytics.[1]

References

  1. 1 2 Smith, Carl (September 26, 2024). "A New Tool Allows Governments to Track Crime Data in Real Time". CNN. Retrieved October 15, 2025.
  2. 1 2 Levenson, Eric (October 26, 2024). "The FBI releases crime stats months after the fact. This new crime tracker is trying to be more timely – and the FBI is too". CNN. Retrieved October 15, 2025.

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to review! AL at AV (talk) 14:29, 11 November 2025 (UTC)

Partly done but the article is trash because I only see them spend money but I don't see what the effect of their money is. Did it reduce crime? Made better school outcomes? Led to savings in healthcare costs or some innovative breakthroughs? If there is a third party source that tracks the efficacy of their interventions, these would be most welcome. Szmenderowiecki (talk · contribs) 16:59, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing 🙏 and implementing my request User:Szmenderowiecki. I will look 👀 for opportunities to suggest more content that demonstrates the impact made. I'll try to make that happen via future edit requests. ✅
One small thing: in the last sentence of the Crime section, the Real-Time Crime Index is referred to as "RCTI." Would you mind fixing that typo?
Again, thanks very much for your help! AL at AV (talk) 16:08, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
Yeah, sure, that's my fuck-up. Szmenderowiecki (talk · contribs) 22:42, 20 November 2025 (UTC)


Update for Health Care section

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Hello again, 👋 I'm back to ask for a few additions to the Health care section, which is solid overall but doesn't contain information about some of Arnold Ventures' more recent work in the space. I've assembled a draft below. It doesn't revise any existing content. My suggested additions are highlighted in yellow.

I would also like to ask about changing the section title from "Health care" to "Healthcare." I know folks write it both ways, but I feel like I see the latter much more frequently than the former. Anyway, that's a minor quibble.

If editors have any feedback for me on the draft, please reply below and I'll do my best to address your comment. Thanks! 🙏🤓 AL at AV (talk) 20:37, 16 December 2025 (UTC)

Partly done: Added first highlight. Second felt too specific to be notable overall. Likeanechointheforest (talk) 19:24, 20 December 2025 (UTC)


Adding new Sports betting subsection

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Hello again! 👋 In 2026, Arnold Ventures has funded quite a bit of research on sports betting, its effects on consumers, and how policymakers might go about effectively regulating it. There's now enough press circulating that I thought it might be a good idea to add a "Sports betting" subsection to the "Areas of focus" section. ⚽️ Below is a draft I put together. It cites Bloomberg, CNBC, and Inside Philanthropy, which I believe are reliable sources.

=Arthur W. Toga=


Request edit on 21 June 2026

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  • What I think should be changed:
  • Why it should be changed:
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):


I have a disclosed conflict of interest because I work in communications at the USC Mark and Mary Stevens Neuroimaging and Informatics Institute, which Arthur W. Toga directs. I am not editing the article directly. I would like to propose the following neutral, sourced additions to improve the article’s coverage of Toga’s research contributions in neuroimaging, brain mapping, neuroinformatics, and data sharing. I welcome review, revision, or rejection by independent editors.


COI edit request: addition to Republic of Gamers section

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I work for ASUS and am disclosing a conflict of interest per WP:COI. I am not editing the article directly and am instead proposing the following addition for review by a neutral editor. The Republic of Gamers section currently does not mention ROG's gaming mouse products. I'd like to propose adding two sentences after the existing ROG Ally paragraph, before The Ultimate Force section:

"In 2023, ROG partnered with Aim Lab, a popular aim-training software platform, to release the Harpe Ace Aim Lab Edition, a lightweight wireless gaming mouse whose settings could be automatically tuned using Aim Lab's training software.[1][2] The following year, ROG released the Harpe Ace Extreme, a carbon fiber variant of the mouse weighing around 47 grams.[3]"

Both claims are sourced to independent third-party hardware publications. Happy to adjust wording or sourcing if needed.

SenatorSenna (talk) 03:55, 1 July 2026 (UTC) SenatorSenna (talk) 03:55, 1 July 2026 (UTC)


Request to add "Digital Products / Credit-IQ" subsection

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{{Connected contributor (paid)}} should only be used on talk pages.

Hello. I am disclosing that I have a paid connection to Atradius / Credit-IQ and am therefore not editing the article directly, in accordance with Wikipedia's conflict of interest guidelines (WP:COI) and the WP:PAID policy.

I would like to request that an independent editor consider adding the following subsection to the existing Atradius article, under a new "Digital Products" or "Technology Solutions" section, after the existing "Atradius Collections" subsection.

I believe this addition meets Wikipedia's neutral point of view and verifiability standards, as the content is drawn from publicly available, factual product descriptions and does not use promotional language.

Thank you for considering this request. KamilDawidKamil (talk) 18:28, 15 April 2026 (UTC)

 Not done Hi KamilDawidKamil. Please do correct me if I am mistaken, but did you use AI to generate this edit request? While reviewing your proposed additions, I found that several of the references you added do not appear to exist or have no relation to the claim that you cited them for.
AI is well known for hallucinating references and I strongly suspect that occurred here based upon the mixup with the similar AU Group URLs. Wikipedia policy prohibits the use of AI-based Large Language Models to generate article content. If you did use AI to generate this request, I won't hold it against you this time, but please do not use AI to generate edits going forward. In any event, I cannot accept this draft given that several of the cited sources failed verification. Thank you for your understanding. Altamel (talk) 03:29, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Hello Altamel,
Thank you for your thorough and fair review. You were correct on all counts. I used AI assistance to draft that previous request, and the hallucinated URLs wasted your time. I apologize sincerely.
I have since conducted manual research and found the following independently-verified sources. Before making another formal edit request, I would like your advice on whether these meet Wikipedia's bar, and whether the right path is an expanded section in this article or a standalone article for Atradius Collections.
Verified sources for Atradius Collections:
Verified sources for Credit-IQ:
My specific questions:
= Would the above sources support adding a short "Digital Products / Credit-IQ" subsection to the existing Atradius article under [[WP:V]] and [[WP:NPOV]]? =
= Does Atradius Collections, operating in 40+ countries and with the 2023 acquisition of Pro Kolekt Group extending reach into Eastern Europe, have sufficient independent coverage to qualify for a standalone article under [[WP:ORG]]? =
I am asking before submitting a new formal request to avoid repeating the same mistakes. I confirm this message was written by me personally, not generated by AI.
Thank you again for your patience and guidance. ~2026-25578-47 (talk) 07:27, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Okay, thank you for being honest and owning up to it. Re: Atradius Collections, you would have to review the notability guidelines at WP:ORG, as you identified above. I have not reviewed sources for Atradius Collections and do not know whether they have attained a significant level of coverage in multiple independent sources. But I would advise against writing a standalone article because it can be difficult for subsidiaries to demonstrate they have coverage specific to them as opposed to the parent company. That's just my gut opinion; you are free to submit a draft for review at Wikipedia:Articles for Creation if you so wish. As for the other sources, I'll come back to them if I have time, but at the moment I'm tied up with handling other edit requests. Best, Altamel (talk) 03:14, 28 April 2026 (UTC)


Proposed "Collections" section — paid-editor request (WP:COIEDIT)

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I am employed by Atradius Collections, the B2B debt collection subsidiary of Atradius N.V., and am therefore a paid editor under WP:PAID. I am requesting that an uninvolved editor review the proposed section below and add it if they consider it appropriate, modifying or removing any sentence they cannot verify.

About the sources: Citations are primarily to Atradius's own corporate website (used only for uncontroversial, non-promotional descriptors per WP:ABOUTSELF) and one independent third-party developer case study (iO Digital). One citation is a PR Newswire press release, used solely to verify the date and scope of the Pro Kolekt Group acquisition.

Proposed markup to add under a new == Collections == heading:



Edit Request: Add Leadership to Infobox (CEO Patrick Dennis)

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Description: The Infobox currently does not list any key personnel. I propose adding the current CEO, Patrick Dennis, to the Infobox.

Proposed Change: Please add the following line to the Infobox: | key_people = Patrick Dennis (CEO)

Supporting Sources:

Archer15000 (talk) 13:28, 3 March 2026 (UTC)

Done Discourses on Livvy (talk · contribs) 03:13, 22 March 2026 (UTC)
I see a volunteer editor has implemented this change in the Infobox. Thank you very much for the assistance in keeping the article accurate! I am marking this request as fulfilled. Archer15000 (talk) 17:19, 27 March 2026 (UTC)


Edit Request: Update Lead Paragraph (Outdated 2019 Stats)

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  • Description:

The current lead paragraph for Avaya relies on 2019 data and obsolete terminology. This request updates the section to reflect the company's 2026 status as a private, enterprise-focused entity with its current Infinity and Nexus architectures.


  • Current Text:

"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is an American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey,[4] that provides cloud communications and workstream collaboration services. The company's platform includes unified communications and contact center services.[5][6][7] In 2019, the company provided services to 220,000 customer locations in 190 countries.[8]"


  • Proposed Text:

"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey, that provides enterprise customer experience (CX), unified communications (UC), and critical communications infrastructure solutions. The company's core portfolio includes the Avaya Infinity platform for AI-powered workflow orchestration and Avaya Nexus, a platform designed for mission-critical voice environments supporting on-premises, hybrid, and cloud deployments. Avaya provides communication services to over 90,000 customers worldwide, including approximately 90% of the Fortune 100, with a strategic focus on large global enterprise clients."


  • Supporting Sources:

No Jitter (Nov 6, 2025): Avaya Infinity Architecture

CX Today (April 17, 2024): Verifies 90% of Fortune 100 base and private status

The Futurum Group (Mar 19, 2026): Avaya Nexus Launch & Hybrid Support


  • Rationale: Per WP:LEAD, the lead must summarize the current state of the subject. The proposed text replaces outdated marketing jargon and seven-year-old statistics with third-party verified facts regarding the company's 2026 business model and product architectures.


Archer15000 (talk) 17:04, 30 March 2026 (UTC)

Hi Archer15000. I am declining this edit request: while you are right to identify marketing jargon as a concern, the updated paragraph is even more reliant on marketing speak and does not adhere to Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. For instance, why say "strategic focus on large global enterprise clients" when you could go with something much more plainspoken, like "Avaya's customer base consists mainly of large corporate entities?" That's just one example, and I would recommend rewriting the rest of the paragraph if you intend to resubmit it. Thank you for your understanding. Altamel (talk) 04:35, 25 April 2026 (UTC)
Thank you for the detailed feedback and examples, Altamel. I have revised the draft to better align with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view and verifiability standards. I removed product-specific and promotional language, and I updated the lead paragraph to use more neutral, descriptive wording based on the sources.
Proposed Text:
Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey. The company provides software and services for customer experience, contact center, and unified communications. It serves more than 90,000 customers worldwide, including around 90% of the Fortune 100.
Supporting Sources:
Rationale:
This revision is intended to reflect the company’s current description in a neutral, source-based way.
Archer15000 (talk) 16:07, 5 May 2026 (UTC)
The first two sentences as revised look fine to me. I'm on the fence about the third sentence: I believe it's OK to include the customer stats if they can be verified, but I am not familiar with cxtoday.com and whether it is a reliable source. I'll leave it up to another reviewer to assess. You are free to submit the revised request back into the queue for someone else to take a look. Altamel (talk) 15:12, 9 May 2026 (UTC)


Revised Lead Paragraph Update (COI)

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Please can the Lead paragraph be updated as follows to remove outdated 2019 stats and a simplified description.

Current Text: "Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is an American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey,[4] that provides cloud communications and workstream collaboration services. The company's platform includes unified communications and contact center services.[5][6][7] In 2019, the company provided services to 220,000 customer locations in 190 countries.[8]"  Preceding unsigned comment added by Archer15000 (talkcontribs) 11:41, 26 June 2026 (UTC)

Proposed Text:

"Avaya LLC (/əˈvaɪ.ə/), formerly Avaya Inc., is a privately held American multinational technology company headquartered in Morristown, New Jersey. The company provides software and services for customer experience, contact center, and unified communications."


Supporting Sources:

  • Avaya LLC - Company Profile (Bloomberg) — Verifies company name (LLC) and core business focus on software and services for contact centers and unified communications.
  • Internal Consistency: The company's private status and Morristown headquarters are already established and sourced within the existing "History" section and the article's infobox.

Rationale:

This revised request follows guidance from Altamel and focuses on the first two sentences previously reviewed as acceptable. It uses a high-authority Bloomberg profile to verify the LLC designation and core software focus, while maintaining consistency with the private status and headquarters location already documented elsewhere in the article.

Archer15000 (talk) 07:32, 14 May 2026 (UTC)

Hello reviewers! I am removing the "answered" parameter to place this request back into the active queue. This is a revised version of a previous request. Based on prior feedback from another editor, I have dropped the third sentence regarding customer statistics to avoid any reliable sourcing issues.

The proposed text now only includes the first two sentences (which were previously reviewed as acceptable), supported by a Bloomberg company profile. Thank you for your time! Archer15000 (talk) 12:09, 29 June 2026 (UTC)


Edit request on behalf of article subject: update outdated stub

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This request is posted by an assistant acting on behalf of Avi Yashchin, the subject of this article — conflict of interest is hereby disclosed per WP:COI; the subject is not editing the article directly for that reason. The article is a 2015-era stub whose statements are now outdated (the subject is no longer a General Assembly instructor, and CleanEdison ceased operating under that name). The following changes are requested, each supported by an independent source. Nothing is requested that could not be sourced independently.

  1. Replace the sentence describing the subject as "currently" an instructor with General Assembly (cited to a 2015 instructor page) with: "He is the founder and chief executive officer of Subconscious.ai, a company that applies large language models to market research." — Source: Polsky Center for Entrepreneurship and Innovation, University of Chicago, November 15, 2023: https://polsky.uchicago.edu/2023/11/15/meet-the-transform-cohort-2-startups-subconciousai/
  2. Repair the dead Bloomberg citation by pointing it at the Internet Archive copy: https://web.archive.org/web/20150402194409/http://www.bloomberg.com/research/stocks/private/person.asp?personId=117969449&privcapId=117969424
  3. Add education (BS in computer science, Johns Hopkins University; MBA, New York University Stern School of Business) — supported by the same archived Bloomberg profile.
  4. Add the Lehman Brothers detail consistent with the existing Crain's citation (seven years at the firm, Global Credit Products group): https://www.crainsnewyork.com/article/20090902/SMALLBIZ/909029989/ex-lehman-execs-set-up-their-own-shops
  5. Update the Entrepreneur citation URL to the current slug: https://www.entrepreneur.com/leadership/how-to-make-the-move-from-big-business-employee-to/222959

Proposed replacement wikitext incorporating these changes:

Avi Yashchin is an American entrepreneur. He is the founder and chief executive officer of Subconscious.ai, a company that applies large language models to market research.[1]


Updating the infobox

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Hello editors! I'm here to request a few updates to the Avis Budget Group article via Coyne through my work at Beutler Ink.

I have a diff in my userspace if you'd like to see what changes I have in mind for the article. To begin, I'm hoping to update this infobox with updated leadership and financial figures, using the most recent 10-k.

  • Key people:
  • Number of locations: Approx. 10,000[2]:4
  • Number of locations year: 2025[2]
  • revenue: Decrease US$11.652 billion (2025)[2]:36
  • net income: Decrease US$−995 million (2025)[2]:36
  • assets: Decrease US$31.2 billion (2025)[2]:F-8
  • equity: Decrease US$−3.1 billion (2025)[2]:39
  • number of employees: Approx. 25,000 (2026):14
  • footnotes: [2][3]

References

  1. "Meet the Transform Cohort 2 Startups: Subconscious.AI". Polsky Center for Entrepreneurship and Innovation, University of Chicago. November 15, 2023. Retrieved July 4, 2026.
  2. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 "UNITED STATES SECURITIES AND EXCHANGE COMMISSION FORM 10-K". Avis Budget Group. Retrieved 23 April 2026.
  3. "Avis Budget Group". Forbes.

Let me know what you think! Thanks! BatBINK (talk) 17:52, 22 June 2026 (UTC)


Proposed updates — new accolades and missing information

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The current article is missing several significant facts. I am proposing the following replacement text:

Avize is a fine dining restaurant located at 956 Brady Avenue NW in the West Midtown neighborhood of Atlanta, Georgia, United States. The restaurant was founded by chef Karl Gorline and sommelier Taurean Philpott and opened in October 2024 in the space previously occupied by Nick’s Westside.Bakshi, Henna (2024-09-24). "A First Look at Avize: Atlanta's Newest Alpine Restaurant". Eater Atlanta.

Avize draws from the culinary traditions of France, Northern Italy, Switzerland, Austria, and Germany, presenting a hyper-seasonal menu sourced from local farms and fine imports."Avize is for long dinners with rarely seen Alpine dishes". The Infatuation. 2024-12-11.


Key people and finances update

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Hi editors, I work for Azrieli Group and keeping in mind the rules for COI editors I propose some updates to the infobox.

First, in Key people, Danna Azrieli has been appointed CEO, as covered by this source, so I propose making that update.

Second, I propose adding some financial figures based on our most recent annual report (pages 262 and 264):

  • Net income: Increase NIS 1.9 billion (2025)
  • Assets: Increase NIS 5.7 billion (2025)

Please let me know what you think! RM Azrieli (talk) 09:54, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

Edit request reply 8-JUN-2026

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  Unable to review  

  • The paragraphs have not been included with the annual report's request to be used as a source. (Page numbers were provided, but there are 14 paragraphs on page 262 and 8 paragraphs on page 264.) As a result, your request is unable to be reviewed.
  • When ready to proceed with the missing information, kindly change {{Edit COI}} answer parameter to read from |ans=y to |ans=n.

Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  00:23, 9 June 2026 (UTC)

@Spintendo: Sorry about that! I see that I included the link to the 2024 annual report, not the 2025 report. The correct link is here. That should make the page numbers correct. It may be easier to find if you look at Part C, page 7 for assets and Part C, page 9 for net income. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks for taking a look! RM Azrieli (talk) 20:10, 9 June 2026 (UTC)


History update

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Hi editors, I wanted to propose an update to the first two paragraphs of the History section to make them more complete and add sources where they currently are none.

I propose changing:

*Azrieli Group started its activities in 1982, developing the Ayalon Mall in Ramat Gan, which opened in July 1985. Azrieli Group opened its second mall, Hanegev Mall, in Beersheva in 1989. The opened a third mall, the Jerusalem Mall, in 1993.

To

References

  1. "Periodic Report as of December 31, 2025" (PDF). Azrieli Group. 31 December 2025. pp. 262, 264. Retrieved 10 April 2026.
  2. Shnidman, Ronen (9 July 2014). "David Azrieli, Canadian-Israeli Shopping Mall Pioneer, Dies at 92". Haaretz. Retrieved 18 February 2026.
  3. Yamin, Guy (8 May 2005). קניון הנגב: הכנסות של 500 מיליון שקל בשנה, 100% תפוסה [Negev Mall: Revenue of 500 million shekels per year, 100% occupancy]. Globes (in Hebrew). Retrieved 20 February 2026.
  4. Holtzman, Michal (12 March 1990). "The mall in Be'er Sheva will be inaugurated tomorrow". Maariv. Retrieved 20 February 2026 via The National Library of Israel.
  5. Hagay, Rafi (10 January 2018). השיפוץ בקניון מלחה הסתיים: השקעה של כ-80 מיליון שקלים [Renovation at Malha Mall Completed: Investment of Approximately 80 Million Shekels]. Kol Ha'ir (in Hebrew). Retrieved 20 February 2026.
  6. Winston, Alex (22 June 2024). "Malha: Jerusalem's regenerated jewel". The Jerusalem Post. Retrieved 20 February 2026.

Please let me know what you think. Thanks. ~~~~ RM Azrieli (talk) 11:54, 1 July 2026 (UTC)


Edit request: lead paragraph wording

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Continuing from my disclosure on User talk:RainRiverWater.

Please change: "Azède Jean-Pierre is an American fashion designer known for her innovative designs and contributions to the fashion industry. She is the founder of the Azède Jean-Pierre label, which has garnered international acclaim and has been showcased at prestigious fashion weeks in New York and Paris."

To: "Azède Jean-Pierre is an American fashion designer. She is the founder of the Azède Jean-Pierre label, which has been shown at New York Fashion Week and Paris Fashion Week.[1]"

Reason: "known for her innovative designs," "garnered international acclaim," and "prestigious" aren't supported by the cited source, per WP:PEACOCK. The factual claim about the two fashion weeks is kept and cited. RainRiverWater (talk) 17:22, 1 July 2026 (UTC) RainRiverWater (talk) 17:22, 1 July 2026 (UTC)


Edit request: add AJP Consulting founding to lead

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Continuing from my disclosure on User talk:RainRiverWater.

Please add to the lead paragraph: "She is also the founder of AJP Consulting, a design and product studio.[2]"

Note on sourcing: this cites the subject's own website per WP:ABOUTSELF, for a simple, uncontroversial factual claim (that the company exists and who founded it). Happy to use a different source if editors prefer one. RainRiverWater (talk) 17:24, 1 July 2026 (UTC) RainRiverWater (talk) 17:24, 1 July 2026 (UTC)


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I would like to add the Belimo logo that it looks like all the other pages but it somehow doesn't work. I tried it with this: | Logo =

It does work in German but not in English...


  • What I think should be changed: The History section, after the sentence "The company was founded in 1975 as BELIMO Automation AG in the Swiss town of Gossau, Zürich". Add a sentence: In January 1975, Walter Burkhalter, Heinz Hutte, Walter Linsi, and Karl Stocker had a meeting where they decided to establish Belimo. The founders had worked together at Magnet Regelsystem GmbH (MRS) in Stuttgart, Germany.
  • Why it should be changed: To supplement information on Belimo's founders.
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): [3]

Tminhng (talk) 18:22, 17 March 2026 (UTC)

Done Discourses on Livvy (talk · contribs) 19:27, 17 March 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. Nnadi, Chioma (2016-09-29). "Azede Jean-Pierre and Shala Monroque Bring French Caribbean Flair to Paris". Vogue.
  2. azedejeanpierre.com
  3. Burkhalter, Walter (June 15, 2013). The Secret of Belimo's Success (Second ed.). Danbury, CT 06810 USA: Belimo Aircontrols (USA), Inc. p. 16. ISBN 9780989367004.{{cite book}}: CS1 maint: location (link)


  • What I think should be changed: Adding 3 sentences

1. After the sentence "In the meantime, BELIMO Automation AG became a public company in 1995.", please add: In 1997, Belimo assembled its 10-millionth actuator and co-founder Heinz Hutte retires from all duties at age 65.

2. After the sentence "In 1998, the company's name was changed to BELIMO Holding AG.", please add: In 1999, co-founder and CEO Walter Burkhalter retires at the age of 66. He is succeeded by Dr. Andreas Steiner from the company ABB.

3. After the sentence "International expansion continued into the 2000s, with the establishment of subsidiaries in Singapore, Poland, Sweden, Australia, India and China.", please add: In 2000, the Technology department was founded as a corporate division headed by Peter Schmidlin.

  • Why it should be changed: Adding historical context to the lives of Belimo's co-founders (Heinz Hutte, Walter Burkhalter) and organizational structure changes since Belimo's founding.
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button): [1]

Tminhng (talk) 20:20, 18 March 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. Burkhalter, Walter (June 15, 2013). The Secret of Belimo's Success (Second edition 2019 ed.). Connecticut, USA: Belimo Aircontrols (USA), Inc. pp. 254, 255. ISBN 9780989367004.


Proposal to expand the “Distance learning programmes (WILP)” section

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Hello editors,

I would like to propose a neutral expansion of the existing “Distance learning programmes (WILP)” subsection in the BITS Pilani article. My earlier direct edit was reverted/deleted, so I am bringing the proposed change here for independent editor review instead of restoring it myself.

Disclosure: I may have a conflict of interest because I am working on improving publicly available information about BITS Pilani WILP. I will not edit the article directly and request independent editors to review, modify, accept, or reject the suggested wording.

Reason for the request: The current WILP section is very brief. BITS Pilani’s Work Integrated Learning Programmes appear to be a long-running academic offering, and a short neutral summary may improve the completeness of the “Academics” section without making the article promotional.

Suggested replacement text:

According to BITS Pilani, its Work Integrated Learning Programmes (WILP) were introduced in 1979 for employed professionals pursuing higher education while continuing full-time work.[1] The programmes use a technology-enabled format that includes online lectures, recorded learning material, virtual or remote laboratory components, workplace-linked assignments, projects or dissertation work, and continuous assessment.[2]

The institute lists WILP offerings across engineering, technology, management, analytics and related professional fields, including B.Tech., M.Tech., MBA, M.Sc., postgraduate diploma, postgraduate certificate and postgraduate programme formats.[3] BITS Pilani states that, on the recommendation of the Empowered Expert Committee, the University Grants Commission approved the continued offering of these programmes at its 548th meeting held on 9 September 2020.[4]

I have kept the proposed text short and avoided programme-by-programme promotional details. Editors may further shorten or modify the wording as needed to comply with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view and reliable sourcing policies. Sanjaymonukr (talk) 10:31, 25 June 2026 (UTC)


BPC-157 has 4 human studies done or registered

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The article claims no human studies, but BPC-157 has at least 4 human studies done in the past and/or registered/ongoing. Data is bloody difficult to find however.

I found e.g. these:

Veljaca M, Pavic-Sladoljev D, Mildner B, et al. Safety, tolerability and pharmacokinetics of PL 14736, a novel agent for treatment of ulcerative colitis, in healthy male volunteers. Gut 2003; 51: A309.

Ruenzi M, Stolte M, Veljaca M, Oreskovic K, Peterson J. A multicenter, randomized, double blind, placebo-controlled phase II study of PL 14736 enema in the treatment of mild-to-moderate ulcerative colitis. Gastroenterology 2005; 128: A584.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Bstard12 (talkcontribs) 22:06, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

I deleted the "no human studies" part as it clearly has human studies, at least 2 of them published, one of them (IBS study) even mentioned in title of ref 2, and I want to stop the spread of this popular piece of misinformation. I or someone should later add a comment and ref to said studies (above).--Bstard12 (talk) 11:59, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
Tried to look into these references, and I don’t think they’re published papers. I think the former is an abstract from a talk at a Croatian conference. The latter only appears as a citation from another paper, and I can’t find it listed in the purported journal. My guess would be that the latter reference is also supposed to be citing an abstract to a conference talk, maybe to the same conference in a later year since the conference name references gastroenterology. There doesn’t appear to be any information about how the studies went online, at least in English, which is kind of suspicious. Hopefully there have been citable clinical studies since then Pabnau (talk) 17:38, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

Could an uninvolved editor please review this request? I am proposing that the following External links section be added near the bottom of the article, after References, if it is considered appropriate under WP:EL and WP:ELNO:


Edit request 13 April 2026

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Please add this filmography table to this page, as this shows the person projects done and undergoing. Find the table below to add.

==Filmography== Following is the selected list of Film and TV series Produced and Directed by Javed:[5]
Film
Year Film AS
2015 Manto Producer
TV Series and shows
Year Title AS Channel Number of Episodes References
2001 Game Director PTV World
2002 Ishq Director Hum TV
2003 Koi Lamha Gulaab ho Director Hum TV
2005 Tere Jane ke Baad Director Hum TV
2006 Khamosiyaan Director Hum TV
Kuch Dil Ne Kaha Director GEO TV
2007 The Ghosts (TV Series) Director Hum TV
Manay Na Ye Dil
Jhumka Jaan
Man-o-Salwa
2008 Meri Zaat Zarra-e-Benishan Director GEO TV
Meri Jaan Hum TV
Meri Un Suni Kahani Hum TV
Tere Liye ARY Digital
2009 Ishq Junoon Dewaangi Director Hum TV
2010 Diya Jaley Director and Producer Ary Digital
Haal e Dil Director and Producer
Shehre Dil Key Darwazay Producer
Saraab Producer
Mera Saaein (Season 1) Director and Producer
Qaid-e-Tanhai Director and Producer Hum TV
Main Abdul Qadir Hoon Director and Producer
yariyan Director and Producer Geo TV
2011 Pul-sirat Producer Ary Digital
Khushboo Ka Ghar Producer
Maaye Ni Director and Producer
Main Haari Producer
Main Chand Si Director and Producer
Qissa Chaar Darvesh Producer
Kaala Jadu Season 1 Producer
Khushboo Ka Ghar Producer
Umm-e-Kulsoom Director and Producer
My Dear Sautan Producer
Sandal Director and Producer Geo TV
Ruswa Producer
Tootay Huway Per Producer
Aik Hatheli Par Hinna Aik Hatheli Par Lahoo Director and Producer
Meri Subha Ka Sitara Producer
Kis Din Mera Viyah Howay Ga (Season 1) Producer
Jo Chale To Jaan Se Guzar Gaye Producer
Khuda Or Mohabbat Producer
Meray Khwab Raiza Raiza Producer Hum TV
Meray Khwab Raiza Raiza Producer
2012 Mera Saaein (Season 2) Director and Producer Ary Digital
Sabz Qadam Producer
Meri Ladli Producer
Topi Drama Producer
Thakan Producer
Khushi Ek Roag Producer
Aks Producer
Mera Yaqeen Producer
Shadi Mubarak Producer
Mera pehla pyar Producer
Kaliyan Mere Angan Ki Producer Express Entertainment
Tishnagi Director and Producer
Mere Huzoor Producer
Baat Hai Ruswai ki Producer
Larka Karachi Ka Kuri Lahore Di Producer
Sirat-e-Mustaqeem Producer
Teri Raah Mein Rul Gai Producer Urdu 1
Jahez Director and Producer Geo TV
Bano Bazar Producer
Sabz Pari Laal Kabootar Director and Producer
Aik Nayee Cinderella Producer
Kis Din Mera Viyah Howay Ga (season 2) Producer
Mi Raqsam Producer
Bano Bazar Producer
2013 Kaala Jadu (Season 2) Producer Ary Digital
Teesri Manzil Producer A-plus
Meri Dulari Producer Geo TV
Dil Muhallay Ki Haveli Producer
Teri Berukhi Producer
Meri Zindagi Hai Tu Producer
Meri Maa Producer
Kalmohi Producer
Adhoori Aurat Producer
Dil Muhallay Ki Haveli Producer
Ghaao Producer
Mann Ke Moti Producer
Aasmano Pe Likha Producer
Meri Dulari Producer
Meri Zindagi Hai Tu Producer
Meri Maa Producer
2014 Uff Yeh Mohabbat Producer Geo TV
Bikhra Mera Naseeb Producer
Ghar Aik Jannat Producer
Rukhsati Producer
Iqrar Director and Producer
Rasam Producer
Malika-e-Aliya (Season 1) Producer
Mazaji Khudaa Producer
Choti Producer
Chhoti Chhoti Khushiyan Producer
Aap Ki Kaneez Producer
Saltanatey Dil Producer
Do Qadam Dur They Producer
Ladoo Mai Pali Producer
Uff ye Mohabbat Producer
Bashar Momin Producer
Bikhra Mera Naseeb Producer
Deemak Producer
Chandni Producer Express Entertainment
2015 Sasural Meri Behan Ka Producer Geo TV
Malika-e-Aliya (Season 2) Producer
Sada Sukhi Raho Producer
Maikey Ko Dedo Sandes Producer
Sila Aur Jannat Producer
Dil Ishq Producer
Mera Yaha Koi Nahi Producer
Ishqaaway Producer
Mujhe Kuch Kehna ha Producer
Rishtoo Ki Door Producer
Dil Fareeb Producer
Kaanch Ki Gurya Producer
Ali Ki Ammi Producer
Saas Bahu Producer
Dua Producer
Anaya Tumhari Hui Producer
Bari Bahu Producer
2016 Kahan tum chale gaye Producer
Maikay Ki Yaad Na Aaye Producer
Manchali Producer
Marzi Producer
Mera Dard Bayzuban Producer
Shaam Dhaley Producer
Thoda Sa Aasman Producer
Yeh Chahatein Yeh Shiddatein Producer
Meri Saheli Meri Bhabi Producer
Babul Ka Angna Producer
Maikey Ki Yad Na Aaye Producer
Chahat Hui Tere Naam Producer
Manjhdhar Producer
Joru Ka Ghulam Producer
Sangdil Producer
Roshni Producer
Bechari Mehrunnisa Producer
Marzi Producer
Iss Khamoshi Ka Matlab Producer
Wafa Producer
Mannat Producer
Noor Jahan Producer
Dekho Chaand Aaya Producer
ManChahi Producer
Manchali Producer
Dhaani Producer
Mor Mahal Producer
2017 Mein Akeli Producer
Aao Laut Chalein Producer
Hina Ki Khushboo Producer
Rani Producer
Zoya Sawleha Producer
Mera Haq Producer
bedardi saiyaan Producer
Adhora Bandhan Producer
Kabhi Socha Na Tha Producer
Sawera Producer
bholi bano Producer
Malkin Producer
Tere Bina Producer
Khan Producer
2018 Kaif-E-Baharan Producer
Naik Parveen Producer
Silsilay Producer
Saaya Producer
Kis Din Mera Viyah Howey Ga (Season 4) Producer
Bayrehem Producer
Beti Jaisi Producer
Umm-e-Haniya Producer
Zamani Manzil Key Maskhrey Producer
Shayad Producer
Khalish Producer
2020 Tarap Producer Hum TV
Mein Rani
Mala Mir A-Plus Entertainment
2022 Meri Gurya Producer Aan TV
Ilzaam
Bas Kar (Satire Show) Express News
2023 Meri Betiyaan Producer Aan TV
Yeh Dooriyaan
Ahsas (Ramzan Special) Express Entertainment
Main Kahani Hoon [6]
2024 Dayain Producer Express Entertainment
Main Kahani Hun Season 2
Saraab Aurlife TV
Suhana
Chand Nagar Bol Network
Bol Kahani
Raaz Horror Series Green TV
Nasihat Ramzan Series
Life Green Hay Ramaz Show
Rafta Rafta
Let's Try Mohabbat
Dil Manay Na
Dua Aur Azaan
Mere Ranjhna
Yaar-e-Mann
Mooray Piya
2025 Raaja Rani Producer HUM TV
Judwaa

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  • The table was there before now its removed or gone in backcode.:
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AnymourusUser611 (talk) 13:07, 13 April 2026 (UTC)

Not done: IMDB is not usable as a source. --AntiDionysius (talk) 20:38, 14 April 2026 (UTC)

References

  1. "About WILP". BITS Pilani WILP. Retrieved 25 June 2026.
  2. "Innovative Learning Methodology". BITS Pilani WILP. Retrieved 25 June 2026.
  3. "Explore Programmes". BITS Pilani WILP. Retrieved 25 June 2026.
  4. "UGC Approval". BITS Pilani WILP. Retrieved 25 June 2026.
  5. "Babar Javed | Producer, Director". IMDb. Retrieved 2023-12-02.
  6. "mein-kahani-hun-aims-to-serve-different-flavours-of-human-emotions". pakistanicinema.net. 1 September 2023.
  7. "Babar Javed | Producer, Director". IMDb. Retrieved 2023-12-02.
  8. "mein-kahani-hun-aims-to-serve-different-flavours-of-human-emotions". pakistanicinema.net. 1 September 2023.


  • Please update the Filmography table with latest updated tv series and properly formated table withh new colum of status.
  1. Qu, Kaixian; Wang, Han; Klemm, Victor; Cadena, Cesar; Hutter, Marco (2026). "An efficient beam search algorithm for active perception in mobile robotics". The International Journal of Robotics Research. doi:10.1177/02783649261455911.