Talk:Algorithmic amplification

Latest comment: 27 days ago by RoySmith in topic Peer review
Good articleAlgorithmic amplification has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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May 25, 2026Peer reviewReviewed
March 31, 2026Good article nomineeListed
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a 2021 investigation found that algorithmic amplification on TikTok could steer users towards self-harm content within hours?
Current status: Good article

Peer review

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I have enjoyed developing this article and would like a peer review with a focus on FAC preparation. Looking forward to your comments.

Thanks, Metalicat (talk) 22:35, 31 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Metalicat this hasn't seen any activity in over a month so I'm going to close it. RoySmith (talk) 17:56, 25 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

RoySmith

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I ran Citation verifier on this. The results are attached below. I have not done a deep dive into this, but I suggest you take a look at all the entries noted "partial" or "not supported" to see if there are any actual problems there. RoySmith (talk) 21:00, 12 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Most of the images are impossible to read at the default display size. On my desktop, they're fine when clicked on so they are displayed at a larger size, but on my phone, they're not comprehensible at all. See MOS:TEXTASIMAGES.
  • Amy Adler has argued that from 2007 onwards I don't know if there's a specific MOS section that talks about this, but it's conventional to introduce people with a short description of who they are, to help the reader put the person's comments in the proper context, i.e. "Law professor Amy Adler".
  • algorithm amplified emotionally charged, out-group hostile political content What does out-group" mean?
  • Algorithmic ranking structures visibility around engagement and audience retention The first time I read this, I interpreted "structures" as a noun, leading to much confusion over the rest of the sentence. Perhaps rephrase this?
  • You have a few places where entire paragraphs are cited to clusters of 3, 4 or even 5 references. I'm not a fan of that since it makes it difficult for a reader to figure out what facts came from which sources. I recommend breaking those up and providing more targeted citations.
  • These concerns have informed legislative activity. KOSA KOSA was first mentioned a long time ago, it might be worth re-introducing it here.
  • In the United Kingdom, Ofcom published ... Tell the reader what Ofcom is.
  • The DSA ... requires very large online platforms to assess What is a "very large online platform"?
  • The Act's categorisation framework I think it's OK to say "The Act" in the same paragraph where you defined it, in a new paragraph, I'd spell it out the first time.
  • China was the first country to enact legislation specifically targeting algorithmic recommendation systems. Be careful of "first" claims. They often turn out to be wrong, despite a RS which says so. I prefer to hedge a little with "believed to be first", "claimed to be first", etc.
  • Jian Xu has argued Another person who needs introducing.

Overall, I think this is pretty good. The prose is well-written and the sources look solid. My biggest complaint is the images, which really do need to be improved.


Thanks for the review RoySmith. I’m away working at the moment, but will get on this when I’m back next week. Metalicat (talk) 10:26, 14 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Drive by comment from Noleander

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  • The very first sentence is: "Algorithmic amplification is the process by which automated ranking and recommendation systems on digital platforms increase the visibility of certain content beyond its initial audience." The link to Recommender system is critical (it establishes the ecosystem within which algorithmic amplification happens) but the link is currently hidden behind the word "recommendation". I think readers will want the noun "Recommender system" clearly stated, defined, & linked in the first couple of sentences. At a minimum consider expanding the wikilink to include the word "system".
  • I suggest that the lead section contain a couple of concrete examples of these algorithms such as Tik toks feed or Twitter/X feed or Facebook feeds. Without concrete, familiar examples like those, most readers will tune out immediately and exit the article. Noleander (talk) 02:49, 16 April 2026 (UTC)Reply


Thanks RoySmith and Noleander for your reviews. I've worked through everything; a brief summary of what's been done:
Prose and clarity. Expanded the first-sentence wikilink; added Facebook, YouTube, TikTok, and X to the lead; added professional identifiers for Adler, Tufekci, Born, Diaz, Zuboff, and Xu; glossed "out-group hostile", "very large online platforms", KOSA, and Ofcom on reintroduction; rewrote "structures visibility"; and hedged the "first country" claim on China.
Political content section. Reworked the opening paragraph to frame the evidence as "Studies of X have identified directional effects, while experimental work on Facebook and YouTube has found more limited attitudinal effects", which should resolve the "mixed results" concern on the Huszár citation.
Citation clusters. Split all ref stacks of 3+ down to a maximum of 2 per claim, with each cluster supporting a distinct proposition.
Images. Bumped the sizing on the three SVGs using |upright=. Happy to redraw them if they're still not working.
Citation Verifier report. I had a look through some of the flagged citations. The ones I checked looked solid.
Ready for a second look or more reviews if desired. Metalicat (talk) 06:27, 20 April 2026 (UTC)Reply