Stuartmac123

Your submission at Articles for creation: Macfarlane Brothers (June 10)

Draft declined

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Feedback

The reviewer, CopyleftEverything, left the following feedback:

This draft reads like an advertisement. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a platform for promotion or marketing. Drafts that are exclusively promotional may be deleted without notice.

Wikipedia articles must be written neutrally in a formal, impersonal, and dispassionate way. They should not read like a blog post, advertisement, or fan page. Rewrite the draft to remove:

• promotional language: see Words to watch;
• personal commentary: opinions or direct addresses to the reader;
• informal language.

Instead, only summarize in your own words a range of independent, reliable, published sources that discuss the subject.

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Article is mostly good. Still slightly too promotional. Example: "applying professional-grade VFX to relatable comedic premises". Professional-grade and relatable are a bit beyond NPOV. Please rewrite in a neutral tone and resubmit. Please also add categories and a see also section.

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CopyleftEverything (talk) 00:23, 10 June 2026 (UTC)

Hello, Stuartmac123! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CopyleftEverything (talk) 00:23, 10 June 2026 (UTC)