SimonC404

Your submission at Articles for creation: Professor David Clutterbuck (August 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Curb Safe Charmer were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 15:46, 16 August 2019 (UTC)

Hello, SimonC404! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 15:46, 16 August 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Professor David Clutterbuck (November 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

The declining rationale, in particular the advertising issues, have still not been addressed. Appears to have been copied and pasted from *somewhere*. but could not determine a source from a search.

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Utopes (talk) 02:18, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Professor David Clutterbuck (November 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

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Theroadislong (talk) 14:04, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Clutterbuck (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

This is over-personal and over-detailed. Focus on the key events of his life.

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DGG ( talk ) 10:18, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Clutterbuck (November 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Issues have not been addressed. Large paragraphs of biography are not supported by any references. The bibliography is a mess and should either be reduced only to the most notable works, or split off as a bibliography later.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 17:40, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Clutterbuck (November 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

The biography section still needs to be referenced, even if it's to offline sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 23:29, 20 November 2019 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:David Clutterbuck has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:David Clutterbuck. Thanks! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 22:01, 21 November 2019 (UTC)

Draft:David Clutterbuck concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:David Clutterbuck, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Draft:David Clutterbuck concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:David Clutterbuck, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Your draft article, Draft:David Clutterbuck

Hello, SimonC404. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "David Clutterbuck".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! UnitedStatesian (talk) 05:03, 17 July 2020 (UTC)