Pathfinder166
November 2019
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Hello, I'm Eagles247. I noticed that you recently removed content from Doug Baldwin without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an accurate edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry; the removed content has been restored. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Eagles 24/7 (C) 13:33, 6 November 2019 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for the message. Specifically, you removed the entire introductory paragraph which detailed why Baldwin is notable (his NFL career) and replaced it with information that would be better suited later in the article under the "Personal life" header. Additionally, some of the information you added does not adhere to a neutral point of view and read as promotional material. Below I have left an infographic that can help you get started here. Eagles 24/7 (C) 13:34, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
Welcome!
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