Template:Did you know nominations/Tribalistas (2002 album)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 13:56, 12 June 2025 (UTC)
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Tribalistas (2002 album)
- ... that the cover for Tribalistas was created by Vik Muniz, who used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio after musical strings did not work?
- Source: Video source "Eu fiz todos os retratos do Arnaldo, Brown e da Marisa com cordas, antes. Era para ser uma capa completamente diferente. Eram com cordas de cavaquinho [...] Era todo um desenho baseado em dobrar cordas de aço." --> "I made all the portraits of Arnaldo, Brown, and Marisa with strings, before. It was supposed to be a completely different cover. They were with cavaquinho strings [...] It was all a design based on folding steel strings."
Improved to Good Article status by Cathodography (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
Cattos💭 02:51, 18 April 2025 (UTC).
- The current wording seems to be a bit off since it seems to focus more on Muniz than the chocolate syrup aspect. How do the following rewords sound?
- ALT0a ... that Vik Muniz used chocolate syrup to illustrate the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album after musical strings did not work?
- ALT0b ... that the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio after an earlier attempt with musical strings did not work?
- ALT0c ... that the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio?
- Admittedly, the first two new options are slightly longer than the original, but they're more intended to put more focus on the chocolate syrup fact than Muniz. Of course, if you prefer the original wording then that's fine. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:09, 19 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Personally, those suggestions sound a bit strange as I find ALT0a to focus on Muniz himself. What if I removed the "was created by Vik Muniz, who" part in my original hook? ALT0d ... that the cover for Tribalistas used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio after an earlier attempt with musical strings that did not work? Cattos💭 12:27, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Cathodography: How does ALT0c sound then? Another issue I had with the original wording is that it wasn't clear what "trio" referred to (it's supposed to refer to the Tribalistas, but the hook did not make it clear that "Tribalistas" was also the name of the group). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:29, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: "Trio" could possibly be replaced by "artists" or "members". If not, I'm fine with ALT0c and your most hookier ALT0b, though you did not link the supergroup Tribalistas in the hooks. Cattos💭 12:51, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- To be honest, I don't think substituting "trio" with either "members" or "artists" solves the issue because, ultimately, the problem is that ALT0 does not make it clear that Tribalistas is the name of both the album and the group. With regards to linking to linking to the group itself in ALT0b/ALT0c, there's really no need per WP:SEAOFBLUE. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:56, 21 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: "Trio" could possibly be replaced by "artists" or "members". If not, I'm fine with ALT0c and your most hookier ALT0b, though you did not link the supergroup Tribalistas in the hooks. Cattos💭 12:51, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Cathodography: How does ALT0c sound then? Another issue I had with the original wording is that it wasn't clear what "trio" referred to (it's supposed to refer to the Tribalistas, but the hook did not make it clear that "Tribalistas" was also the name of the group). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:29, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer needed. Z1720 (talk) 15:04, 26 May 2025 (UTC)
- Ummm... I just wanted to comment that the quote here did not yet support "[that making it with cavaquinho strings] did not work", although maybe that is absent from the later discussion. I think it is quite interesting that it's made from chocolate syrup 🙏🏽. Don't think it's necessary to state that Tribalistas is both the name of the group and the debut album, pretty peripheral to the DYK imo.User:D Kirlston - talk 23:06, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
- Doing.--Launchballer 07:27, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
Long enough, new enough. QPQ done and Earwig is clean. There were a few awkward bits that should have been picked up at GA, but I think I got them all, and can see no reason why this might deserve a maintenance template. Of the hooks, I am assessing ALT0c only, as the rest are untrimmed variations of it; this needs an end-of-sentence citation.--Launchballer 08:02, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Done Cattos💭 14:19, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
The Globo source is down, but I managed to retype a sentence of the Jornal source into Google Translate and it says "author of the cover of the CD Tribalistas, by Marisa Monte, Arnaldo Antunes and Carlinhos Brown - in which he reproduces the faces of the three musicians in chocolate syrup - the plastic artist Vik Muniq is a specialist in using exotic materials to portray celebrities". Let's roll.--Launchballer 15:38, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Done Cattos💭 14:19, 11 June 2025 (UTC)
