Talk:Shaun Graf/GA1
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Arconning in topic GA review
GA review
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Nominator: AssociateAffiliate (talk · contribs) 15:43, 19 April 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 04:18, 25 April 2026 (UTC)
Shall review. Arconning (talk) 04:18, 25 April 2026 (UTC)
- @AssociateAffiliate Here shall be my review. Arconning (talk) 15:08, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
Lead and infobox
Early life and career
- "New South Wales", should instead be wikilinked to the New South Wales cricket team.
- Done. Good spot! AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "Sydney Cricket Ground (SCG)", you can remove "SCG" as it is not mentioned in the body afterwards that mention.
- Done. AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "appearances in the McDonald's Cup", add something along the lines of "now known as the Dean Jones Trophy"
- Done. Now reads "...making four appearances in the McDonald's Cup, the forerunner of the modern-day Dean Jones Trophy". AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
International call-up
- Wikilink selectors to Selector (cricket).
- Done. Must confess, I never knew this page existed! AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- " with Graf replacing Trevor Chappell", Chappell rather than his full name as it is mentioned beforehand in the body.
- Comment. There are two Chappell's mentioned before: Trevor, and his brother Greg. Might it be better to name Trevor Chappell in full, to avoid any confusion as to which of the Chappell's he replaced? AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- Hmm good point, stay as is. Arconning (talk) 16:43, 28 April 2026 (UTC)
- "he took the only five wicket haul", "five-wicket haul" should have a hyphen.
- Done. AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- "playing against Western Australia at The WACA", "the" should be lowercase as it is not part of the original term.
- Done. Nice spot. AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
Move to Western Australia
- No issues here, all good.
Playing style and statistics
- No issues here, all good.
Later life
- No issues here, all good.
References
- Earwig checks out alright.
- Reference checks: 1, 3, 7, 18. All good here.
Miscellaneous
- No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
- @Arconning: Many thanks for your review. Please find my responses above. AA (talk) 21:14, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.