Talk:Shaun Graf

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Arconning in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: AssociateAffiliate (talk · contribs) 15:43, 19 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 04:18, 25 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Shall review. Arconning (talk) 04:18, 25 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

@AssociateAffiliate Here shall be my review. Arconning (talk) 15:08, 27 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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Early life and career

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  • "Sydney Cricket Ground (SCG)", you can remove "SCG" as it is not mentioned in the body afterwards that mention.
  • "appearances in the McDonald's Cup", add something along the lines of "now known as the Dean Jones Trophy"

International call-up

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  • " with Graf replacing Trevor Chappell", Chappell rather than his full name as it is mentioned beforehand in the body.
  • Comment. There are two Chappell's mentioned before: Trevor, and his brother Greg. Might it be better to name Trevor Chappell in full, to avoid any confusion as to which of the Chappell's he replaced? AA (talk) 21:13, 27 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
Hmm good point, stay as is. Arconning (talk) 16:43, 28 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "he took the only five wicket haul", "five-wicket haul" should have a hyphen.
  • "playing against Western Australia at The WACA", "the" should be lowercase as it is not part of the original term.

Move to Western Australia

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  • No issues here, all good.

Playing style and statistics

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  • No issues here, all good.

Later life

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  • No issues here, all good.

References

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  • Earwig checks out alright.
  • Reference checks: 1, 3, 7, 18. All good here.

Miscellaneous

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  • No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
@Arconning: Many thanks for your review. Please find my responses above. AA (talk) 21:14, 27 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
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