Talk:Saskatchewan Marshals Service

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Crisco 1492 in topic GA review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Launchballer talk 13:13, 30 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

Also, there's no free images of the SMS in Commons.

5x expanded by Ominae (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

Ominae (talk) 10:14, 30 June 2025 (UTC).Reply

  • A bit tricky to review, some work is needed on the article side and the DYK side. The article is long enough. A QPQ was done, although it would be better if it specifically noted the process of review. It does not qualify for a 5x expansion as submitted, but does qualify as a new article (courtesy ping Aŭstriano). Not seeing any copyvio. However, the article needs copyediting before it is main-page ready. The prose is choppy, and I'm not sure some of the wording (eg. "legalize the existence of the SMS" is accurate. The tesnses need looking at (eg. "In June 2025, SMS Marshals are deployed in Saskatchewan"), very clearly and as stated in sources the force did start operating in 2025, so the lead is already outdated. The hooks are not sufficient, naming legislation doesn't really pass DYKINT, and the RCMP angle seems to be mostly a rather banal political claim. I would suggest entirely new hooks would be needed. CMD (talk) 11:45, 14 August 2025 (UTC)\Reply
I'd think of something sharpish. This times out soon.--Launchballer 23:31, 27 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
            • Slapping this idea.

ALT1: ... that the Saskatchewan Marshals Service is mandated to investigate crimes related to agriculture?

ALT2: ... that the Saskatchewan Marshals Service ‘s first operation was to conduct joint patrols with the Prince Albert Police Service? Ominae (talk) 10:31, 28 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

Article has reached the WP:DYKTIMEOUT limit; as we are currently handling many more nominations than we can run, marking this for rejection. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:10, 30 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Saskatchewan Marshals Service/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Ominae (talk · contribs) 16:40, 2 September 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 8 April 2026 (UTC)Reply


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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Written comments

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Comprehensiveness and prose

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  • Two big problems that I'd like to see addressed before going any further with this review. First, the article still uses the present tense to refer to late 2025 (i.e., more than four months ago), and thus the information is out of date; it either launched or got delayed (second one seems accurate). Second, there are significant WP:PROSELINE issues, as well as multiple paragraphs and sections which are single sentences. As such, the quality of the text is far from "reasonably well written". Recognizing that you have not had much experience working on GAs, I'm going to forego a quick fail and wait for a week to see if there can be some work towards addressing these issues before continuing with a more detailed review.   Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:20, 8 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • Hi Ominae, this has sat for a little under a week, with no work towards addressing concerns. If I don't see any movement within a couple days, I will have to fail this nomination.  Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:23, 15 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Verdict

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