Talk:Road 96

Latest comment: 5 months ago by Tarlby in topic GA review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:53, 27 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Created by Lee Vilenski (talk). Self-nominated at 15:32, 25 August 2021 (UTC).Reply

To T:DYK/P6

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Road 96/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: ConfessionalKing (talk · contribs) 16:54, 11 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Tarlby (talk · contribs) 23:24, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

toby

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I've seen some clips here and there of this game, but I've never taken the time to actually look into what it's about. The premise sounds pretty interesting though. Expect me to begin soon! toby (t)(c)(rw) 23:24, 18 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Thanks so much for taking on the review, much appreciated! This may be off-topic, but it is a pretty unique game and I do recommend it if you were considering playing it. ConfessionalKing (talk) 00:45, 19 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the long delay. I've been busy with IRL stuff for the Christmas and New Year's Day season, lol. The changes seem good, so I'll start the spotcheck tomorrow. toby (t)(c)(rw) 01:19, 2 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
It's okay, it's a busy time of the year so I didn't really think too much of the break. Welcome back! ConfessionalKing (talk) 13:51, 2 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
@ConfessionalKing, we still technically have one problem to deal with here, but I'd rather just pass this now and let you fix it later. Apollogies for all the misreadings or midsjudgements I made here. Congrats! toby (t)(c)(rw)(omo) 04:12, 22 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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Gameplay

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  • Travelling by bus or taxi allows the player to rest and recover lost energy... What is energy?
    • In the game, "energy" level is effectively the player's health bar, if it runs out, game over and the player runs again as another teen. I'm a little hesitant to reword it to "health" as I feel "energy" is a more fitting description (since walking is primarily what causes it to run lower). ConfessionalKing (talk) 19:47, 19 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
      • How you word it is gonna depend on how the sources describe this energy level. If one specifically points out how this energy functions like health, you can say something like "Travelling by bus or taxi allows the player to rest and recover lost energy which functions as health..." That's assuming it even is called energy as you yourself seem hesitent. Again, it's all depending on the sources, so I have no idea. toby (t)(c)(rw) 20:55, 20 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
  • ...but cost money. Should be costs
  • Hitchhiking or walking are free, but may present danger or... What is this danger?
    • The danger in the article refers to the following sentence in the source: Whereas walking or hitchhiking are free, but the former saps you of health while you never know exactly who is going to pick you up during the latter – a lift from a truck driver might be fairly sedate, or it could spiral into violence as you're forced to help him defend his cargo from bandits. Essentially it references that the game portrays hitchhiking as unsafe and unpredictable. ConfessionalKing (talk) 19:47, 19 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Plot

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  • Stan and Mitch are twin brothers and robbers who travel around Petria to find money. -> Stan and Mitch are twin brothers and robbers who roam Petria to obtain money.

Development

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Release

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Reception

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Analysis

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  • Looks fine.

Prequel

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  • Looks fine

Other

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  • This is not in the scope of the GA criteria and is not at all something I'm forcing you to do, but I prefer when explanatory footnotes reiterate what they're supporting. For example, on Rain World, I use this text in an efn to support the claim that critics criticized the harshness of Rain World: "These critics criticized various factors of Rain World's gameplay:(insert a million citations here)". Just something to think about!
  • A lot of these citations are attributed to "Staff writer". Make sure these are accurate.

Sourcing

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Based on this revision, I will check these sources:

  • 1 Good, but I wonder why you need six sources to support the first sentence of Gameplay.
  • 2 I don't see anything on HP Omen?
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  • 5 This nor #8 describe the minigames as having strategy game elements.
    • The article reads "The segments see the player interact with one of the game's eight core non-playable characters and often incorporate strategy video game elements and minigames." Ref 5 confirms that the segments incorporate minigames ("I don’t want to give much away, but the sudden appearance of all kinds of mini-games, jobs and quizzes in Road 96 is another of its delights, along with their perfectly simple implementation.") and ref 8 confirms the minigames ("Alleviating any anxiety brought on by constant decision making are a healthy variety of fun side activities at each stop along the roadside, whether it’s bartending and petrol-pumping minigames to earn extra money, or assisting a policewoman with an investigation by interviewing motel guests and eliminating suspects based on their responses, like a game of Guess Who?") and the strategy elements ("There’s also some light strategy involved in determining exactly how you’ll proceed from one stop to the next.") ConfessionalKing (talk) 00:16, 21 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
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  • 8 This nor #5 describe the minigames as having strategy game elements.
  • 9 The Post requires a subscription, so I will have to assume good competence.
  • 10 Don't see an explicit mention of any artificial intelligence.
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  • 12 Doesn't say that the teenagers cannot change their minds; they can't change their parent's minds.
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  • 36 I do not see where the game's performance is criticized.
    • "Playing the game feels a bit clunky, unfortunately. Although the first-person perspective functions fine overall, there’s an odd floaty feeling to walking around that doesn’t feel authentic.", "During moments when dialogue occurs while running, the camera combined with the NPC bobbing up and down as they run results in challenging option selection, as it completely depends on where the mouse cursor is." ConfessionalKing (talk) 00:18, 22 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
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  • 39 I do not see where character diversity is praised. It actually looks like they criticized the game for it's non-diversity.
    • Removed "diverse", the source does openly praise the characters so it should still apply: "liked the basic humanity of the characters who are instilled with humor, warmth, and kindness — as well as the villains who feel all too familiar as the sort of people making news these days" ConfessionalKing (talk) 00:18, 22 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
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  • 41 I do not see where the game's presentation and visuals were mentioned.
  • 42 Where does this source praise the game for its diverse characters?
  • 44 I don't see where the game won a "Theme of the Year" award.
  • 45 Is this award "noteworthy" enough to mention per MOS:VGAWARDS?
  • 47 I do not see where it is mentioned that Kaito is from Lost in Harmony.
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toby (t)(c)(rw) 18:28, 19 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Tarlby: That should be everything addressed now. Thanks! ConfessionalKing (talk) 00:20, 22 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

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