Talk:Liberal Party (Norway)
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Grammar: parentheses, clauses, phrasing and mismatching of terms
editThe article is generally well written, simultaneously there are several issues within it including: excessive brackets (parentheses explaining terms that are directly hyperlinked already), certain uncited claims throughout (some are fine and evident via wikilinks, others in areas like the history section I think need further citations), there is some awkward phrasing concerning who was in what government and when- such phrases also usually use several clauses to make their point (which leads to an over reliance on semicolons to try to split up sentences with several clauses that should be several distinct sentences) as well as using different phrases for concepts throughout which means you can't track or know which is being referred to e.g. using 'social-liberal' and 'liberal-social' or 'parliamentarism' and 'parliamentarianism' interchangeably- leading to potential confusion over intended meaning.
I may come back to the article and contribute edits to help improve clarity at some point.
P.S. I know I'm being a hypocrit here by using several brackets but this is the talk section, not the main article.
Best, flare Flarehayr (talk) 20:35, 8 September 2025 (UTC)