Removed inaccuracies

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Removed factually inaccurate and biased information, including the inaccurate claims that Issue One does not disclose its donors (see https://www.issueone.org/get-involved/donate-2/), that it engaged in the defeat of a political candidate in violation of its 501(c)(3) tax status, or that it is a 'liberal' organization. Lbroberts3 (talk) 19:43, 15 June 2015 (UTC)Lbroberts3Reply

I have reverted your edits because they deleted reliably sourced information from the article. Sources in the article, including this Mother Jones piece report that Issue One is a liberal group, that it does not disclose its donors, and that it targeted McConnell for defeat. The link you provided as evidence of Issue One disclosing its donors does not verify that statement, it goes to the group's donation page. If you'd like to change the information here, please add reliable secondary sources. Thanks. Safehaven86 (talk) 20:06, 15 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
On the donor page linked above: "All donations made to Issue One are tax-deductible as provided by section 501(c)(3) of the Internal Revenue Code. Please know that, consistent with our commitment to full transparency in giving, Issue One discloses upon request the names of our donors." The Mother Jones article does not say Issue One is a liberal group, but that the Democracy Alliance which co-hosted an event is. Please re-read and restore edits. The About Page of Issue One's website explicitly describes its nonpartisan bent. Additionally, the Mother Jones article does not include any supporting evidence that Jonathan Soros is a donor, and excluding other funders such as The Hewlett Foundation (http://www.hewlett.org/grants/14523/issue-one), or the Democracy Fund (http://www.democracyfund.org/portfolio/entry/issue-one) is deliberately misleading and biased. Finally, the Mother Jones article states that c4 arm of Fund for the Republic (aka not the same group as Issue One) "plans" to spend money targeting politicians, not that it actually did, making such a claim false.
From the MJ article: "A little-known liberal group backed by the Democracy Alliance, the exclusive club of several hundred wealthy donors that funds an array of progressive causes, has adopted an unusual strategy to achieve its mission of ridding US politics of the corrupting influence of big money..." The "About Us" page is not a reliable source for making the claim that the group is nonpartisan, please see WP:SPS. Feel free to add other donors to the article along with reliable secondary sources. Good distinction on the McConnell spending being planned (not necessarily executed) by the c4 arm, I will make that distinction in the article. Finally, the source that says Jonathan Soros is a funder is the New York Times: . Safehaven86 (talk) 20:46, 15 June 2015 (UTC)Reply
The MJ portrayal is inaccurate. Here are 2 separate sources describing it as nonpartisan (http://www.newyorker.com/news/news-desk/will-roberts-court-strike-another-campaign-finance-law) and (http://www.desmoinesregister.com/story/news/politics/2015/06/09/iowa-pays-the-price-pushes-campaign-finance-reform/28749841/). And once again, as it states CLEARLY on its website and the Vogel Politico piece, Issue One DOES disclose its donors: "The group, which launched in late 2012, has raised $5.5 million, according to Penniman. Both Fund for the Republic and Action for the Republic are registered under sections of the Tax Code that don’t require the disclosure of donors, but Penniman said the groups would voluntarily disclose the names of donors who gave after Jan. 1 http://www.politico.com/story/2014/02/fundraising-campaign-contributions-money-in-politics-103350.html#ixzz3dCAZMkpm). Finally, the linked NY Times article makes no mention of Soros funding Issue One; the only reference is to a former Soros-funded super PAC called Friends of Democracy. Removing clear and obvious inaccuracies AGAIN. Lbroberts3 (talk) 04:16, 16 June 2015 (UTC)lbroberts3Reply
Right in the Politico article you link to it says "Penniman said the groups would voluntarily disclose the names of donors who gave after Jan. 1, including finance heir Jonathan Soros and children’s shoe mogul Arnold Hiatt..." It says the group planned to disclose its donors on Jan. 1, but do we have a source that says it did disclose them? Safehaven86 (talk) 15:45, 16 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Yes. Once again, it says so on its Donate page. Anyone who asks can receive a list of donors.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Lbroberts3 (talkcontribs) 17:46, 16 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

The organization's own website saying that it will disclose donors upon request is different than a reliable secondary source saying "the organization discloses it donors." Please see WP:ABOUTSELF. I don't know if you saw the message I posted on your talk page, but please familiarize yourself with Wikipedia's conflict of interest policy. Thanks. Safehaven86 (talk) 17:58, 16 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Request for infobox update

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Hello Wikipedia editors. I'm part of the comms team at Issue One and I'd like to propose a few updates to this article, beginning with the infobox.

Right now the infobox includes a category for Membership, with a corresponding data point of "100+". This information is misleading, as Issue One is not a membership-based organization, and thus does not have "members" as that term is generally understood.

The cited source (archived here) is actually referencing the ReFormers Caucus, which was a program launched by Issue One in 2015 that brought together over 100 former members of Congress.

So while the Reformers Caucus does indeed have members (200+ now), it is misleading to say that Issue One as an organization does—or at least not in the sense that other organizations with that Infobox category do (e.g. AARP has 38 million members, AAA has 61 million members, et cetera).

I will not be making any changes to the page myself due to my conflict of interest, so I'm hoping that editors are able to review and hopefully implement this request. Thanks! EOttenfeld (talk) 18:41, 23 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

I've removed the content in the infobox field. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:22, 31 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Request for updates to History

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Hi Wikipedia editors. Like my former colleague, above, I am from the comms team at Issue One and I'm now stepping into his shoes to make some requests here. I was working with him on putting together some draft updates for the page, which is not as clear as it could be about the organization's founding and its activities. As well, some of Issue One's major activities aren't mentioned and I'd like to suggest adding them.

In case it is helpful or someone wants to see all my changes together in one place, I have put a draft of everything (minus the infobox) into my user space here: User:AR at Issue One/Full Issue One Updates

This first request, however, is for the History. I have two main suggestions for this part of the article:

  • Retitling it to "Formation" since this really covers just the forming of the organization and other updates fit better under the Activities heading
  • Simplifying the details down to the basic points that Issue One formed from the two predecessor organizations. Since Issue One was a new organization formed from these two, the details about their previous goals and funding are too in the weeds and given too much weight, especially with there being no other details in the History

Is someone willing to make these two updates? Here is the draft for quick reference:

Appreciate the help from Wikipedia editors to review this. Thanks. AR at Issue One (talk) 15:52, 22 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Request for updates to Organization

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Hi Wikipedia editors. I'm from the comms team at Issue One. I previously made a request for edits to the History section of the Issue One page. That request remains outstanding, but I'd like to also make a request here regarding edits to the Organization section of the page. Generally, these edits reorganize the section to make it clearer as well as update the page to reflect more of Issue One's major activities.

In case it is helpful or someone wants to see all my changes together in one place, I have put a draft of everything (minus the infobox) into my user space here: User:AR at Issue One/Full Issue One Updates

Here's a bit more detail about the suggested edits:

  1. Placing the "Activities" and "Key Personnel" sections under the "Organization" heading, because these are the major components of the organization.
  2. Making a few changes to the key personnel listed:
    • To reflect that Nick Penniman is Issue One's CEO, not its executive director.
    • Adding additional information about the organization's board. Issue One has a board as well as a separate advisory board, and the current article includes only information about the advisory board. The new draft clarifies this, adds that Whitney Hatch is chair of the board, adds the names of a few key board members, and amends that the advisory board has two co-chairs (Bill Bradley and Alan Simpson), not three.
  3. Reorganizing the "Activities" section into five subsections, which better reflect Issue One's core areas of work. These core areas have expanded since the organization's founding. The proposed new subsections are: "Campaign Finance Reform," "Congressional Reform," "Election Protection and Voting Rights," "Social Media," and "Research". Each new subsection contains relevant information about Issue One's activities in these topic areas.
  4. Moving information about the ReFormers Caucus under the Campaign Finance Reform subheading, because most work from the ReFormers Caucus centers around campaign finance reform.
  5. Removing "Blueprints for Democracy" from the page, as it's a report from 2015, and other reports do not have their own sections. The proposed "Research" section now includes an overview of major research reports published by Issue One.
  6. Removing the "Trump Administration" section, which reflects just one mention of Issue One in the media from several years ago, and other similar mentions do not have their own sections.
  7. Placing information about the Council for Social Media under the new proposed "Social Media" section, which contains the same information with just a bit more detail.

Is someone willing to make any/all of these updates? Here is the draft for quick reference:

Appreciate the help from Wikipedia editors to review this. Thanks. AR at Issue One (talk) 19:56, 14 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

No one has responded to this in 2 and a half months, so I'm going to assume that there are no regular contributors to gain consensus with. Reviewing... Snowmanonahoe (talk) 15:11, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
compare pages Snowmanonahoe (talk) 15:29, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
The proposed changes seem reasonable to me and the sources are all reliable (although I haven't fact-checked them individually). I don't have any objections. --Tserton (talk) 16:22, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Change to mission:  Done
  • Change title to CEO: Already done
  • Change subsection from ReFormers Caucus to Campaign Finance Reform:  Not done Readers looking for information specifically on the ReFormers Caucus will be able to find it much easier with the current name. The subsection names don't need to be general, the first sentence can explain that. I also find the proposed subsection title not quite neutral. I would consider it if you had more than one "initiative" of this type.
  • Change to second paragraph of above subsection:  Not done That sentence is a copyright violation in its current state. It is within quotes in the current version of the article.
  • Congressional reform section
    • Stock trading ban:  Not done Politico is the only site to have covered this proposal, which was not really a full proposal and more of just a communication to the press, and Issue One's presence in the Politico article is trivial. This is therefore undue.
    • Fair Pay report:  Done
Will continue this later. Snowmanonahoe (talk) 17:32, 26 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Election protection and voting rights:
  • National Council on Election integrity:  Done That sentence looks somewhat promotional at first glance, but considering how the press seems to only give this council glowing praise, it's fine.
  • Count Every Vote:  Not done This Inside Philanthropy source is at best an opinion piece and at worst a conflict of interest (and that's assuming the site is reliable in the first place, which I'm not sure of either). It also makes a mere passing mention of this movement, and doesn't directly state the movement is fighting disinformation.
  • Election concession ad:  Done The top of the article says it's presented by the National Association of Realtors. I'm reasonably sure they didn't have control over the article content. ...right...?
  • Jan 6th commission:  Done
Will continue shortly. Snowmanonahoe (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
It's worth noting that this article is now almost entirely written by people at Issue One (although all following the correct processes). I haven't done a deep dive for omissions yet. Snowmanonahoe (talk) 16:40, 27 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Election disinformation and voting rights:
  • Truthtellers:  Done
  • Faces of Democracy:  Done
  • Electoral Count Act:  Not done I don't see why Issue One merely expressing support for something  and getting one passing mention about it in one article  is worth including.
  • Council for Responsible Social Media:  Done
Guess what. I'll be continuing this review later! Wow, right? Snowmanonahoe (talk) 17:14, 27 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
There hasn't been recent progress, thus, I will finish this:
  • Research:  Done
  • Key personell:  Done
Best regards, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 12:01, 6 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Right, I had forgotten about this. Thank you. Snowmanonahoe (talk) 13:36, 6 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your edits to the Issue One page

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Hi Snowmanonahoe, thank you so much for your edits to the Issue One article! I really appreciate your help and your close look at each of our proposed edits. I have just a few other things I’m wondering if you might have the time to take a look at. First, there are a few minor edits:

1. The formation date in the Issue One box should say October 2014, not September 2014. This matches the formation date in the “Formation” section.

2. The title for “Key Personnel” is spelled wrong (personell).

Second, a few more substantive concerns:

1. The Blueprints for Democracy section, which we previously recommended deleting, is still on the page. It’s a fairly short report from eight years ago, so it just doesn’t seem particularly necessary for it to have its own section. If you’d rather not delete it, perhaps it could fall under the “Research” section.

2. Similarly, we recommended deleting the “Trump Administration” section, which points to a mention of Issue One in one article that highlights the work of more than 20 organizations, most of which were in existence before Trump was elected and which merely continued doing the same good government/“watchdog” work during the Trump administration. Other organizations mentioned in the article do not have similar mentions on their Wikipedia pages. I’d really appreciate if you’d take a look at the article and see if you think it merits the inclusion.

Thank you so much! AR at Issue One (talk) 17:27, 9 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

I will take a look at this when I have time. Snowmanonahoe (talk) 17:34, 9 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you! AR at Issue One (talk) 17:49, 9 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Minor edits  Done. Feel free to make something very minor like a typo fix yourself in the future. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 12:08, 12 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
 Done. I've moved the bit on Blueprints for Democracy to the research section. It's gotten some news coverage so seems worth keeping to me. If someone wants to restore the NPR list somewhere without its own subsection, I wouldn't be opposed, but it's just one random list so I agree it's not worth including. We don't put subjects on every top ten list published by a reliable source.
By the way, from the research I've done, you guys seem pretty cool. Keep up the good work. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 12:14, 12 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hi @Snowmanonahoe, thank you so much for all of your help! I really appreciate it. I was just taking a look at your previous notes, and wanted to address a couple of sentences you expressed concern about: “Ahead of the election, the council launched a campaign called 'Count Every Vote' which supported election integrity and countered disinformation. The council also spent $6 million on an advocacy campaign that ran after the election and focused on ensuring all remaining ballots were tallied.” You noted that Inside Philanthropy isn't a good source, and that the article makes just a passing mention of the campaign. Here are a couple of additional sources in case you'd be willing to take another look at that section: a Washington Post op-ed from NCEI members announcing the Count Every Vote Campaign, an Axios article with bit more detail about the campaign, and more coverage from the Wall Street Journal. I assume the source for the second sentence wasn't an issue, but happy to send over more sources if you have concerns about that as well. Thank you again! AR at Issue One (talk) 16:43, 12 May 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hi again, @Snowmanonahoe. I just want to make one final request. I'm wondering if you could look into adding one more sentence to the final paragraph under the Election Disinformation and Voting Rights section (which might be more aptly named Election Protection and Voting Rights if you include this additional sentence): "Issue One also advocated for an update to the Electoral Count Act." There was a similar sentence in our draft, which you chose not to include because there was only a passing mention of our support in the article we linked to. I wanted to share another article that shows that Issue One actually launched an ad campaign to update the Electoral Count Act. Of course, feel free to include whatever you think is appropriate, I just wanted to share this additional context. Thank you again for all the help! AR at Issue One (talk) 15:31, 17 May 2023 (UTC)Reply

Change to About Issue One Section at The Top

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Hi, I am on Issue One's communications team! At the top, could you please change "Issue One is an American nonprofit organization that seeks to reduce the role of money in politics. It aims to increase public awareness of what it views as problems within the present campaign finance system, and to reduce the influence of money in politics through enactment of campaign finance reform," to something that mentions our work on money in politics, constitutional defense, election protection, and tech reform? Issue One has expanded our work since our founding in 2014: https://issueone.org/issues/ GWikiJL1997 (talk) 15:47, 31 March 2026 (UTC)Reply