Talk:HMS Victor Emmanuel/GA1
Latest comment: 4 days ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA review
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Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 11:30, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 19:51, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
I'll take this! Time to get back in the saddle. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 19:51, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
- Victor Emmanuel was not "ordered on 4 April 1851 as a 91-gun second rate" - she was ordered on 4 April 1851 as an 80-gun ship, and re-classed as 91 guns on 15 November 1852
- Oops, good catch
- Link Pembroke Dockyard rather than Pembroke Dock
- Can't imagine what I was thinking
- Suggest replacing the Clifford link with his personal red link, he's notable enough for an article to appear at some stage
- Done
- Do we know what the grounding damage was?
- No, only that it cost 79 pounds to fix, so could not have been very consequential
- Also which type of guns were removed for the reduction to 79?
- Unknown
- Explain that between 1862 and 1873 Victor Emmanuel remained at Portsmouth
- See if the current wording is satisfactory
- "there from on 11 December 1874." needs a little rejig
- Fixed
- "was serving as the receiving ship at Hong Kong by 1886" I think better wording would be to say that she became Hong Kong RS in 1866, seems closer to Winfield's words
- Reworked with a better source
- Can we confirm if the ship was paid off at the end of Church's tenure in 1890, or continued in some other role/with another captain until 1899?
Almost positive that the ship remained there until replaced by Tamar in 1897, but no source for that.Just kept on trawling through the Navy Lists until I produced a complete list of her Commodores.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:40, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
- Further commodores; William Henry Cuming 2 May 1881 - 13 June 1884, George Digby Morant 14 February 1884 - 1887?
- Do you know whether the crew formed part of the naval brigade during the Ashantee War? I see Clowes (p.262 vol 7) has Captain Parkin being mentioned in despatches as part of the campaign.
- Almost positive that it didn't; there's no mention of anyone from the ship in the Naval Landing Brigade in Lloyd. I'd bet that Parkin earned his MiD for simply commanding his ship in trying conditions.
- The VC Edward St John Daniel deserted Victor Emmanuel at Corfu on 27 June 1861 after being arrested for sodomising junior officers - looks like this was a major factor in his being removed from the VC register?
- A minor extra point, but The Drums of Kumasi p. 89 has the ship fitted for 240 hospital beds
- According to Early China Coast Meteorology p.52 she was still the base ship at Hong Kong in March 1882 when she was fitted with a time ball to be dropped every day until an observatory could be built
- Added
- Sourcing is reliable if limited - no issues with what has already been used
- Thanks for pointing me to all the other sources.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 07:53, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Hi, let me know about these. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 20:28, 10 June 2026 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: See my recent responses regarding extra sources. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:51, 11 June 2026 (UTC)
- See how it reads now--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:06, 11 June 2026 (UTC)