Talk:Future Days (The Last of Us)

Latest comment: 4 months ago by Rhain in topic GA review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle talk 18:46, 31 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

Craig Mazin
Craig Mazin
  • Reviewed: The Robot Revolution
  • Comment: Plenty of possible image options: Mazin with ALT0, Ramsey with ALT2, O'Hara with ALT4, Pascal with ALT5, Merced or Mazino with ALT6
Converted from a redirect by Rhain (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 90 past nominations.

Rhain (he/him) 22:40, 14 April 2025 (UTC).Reply

  • @Rhain: One reviewer's opinion about Pascal's performance in "Future Days" may well be fine, but I've added something in the filming section about Isabela Merced and Young Mazino unwittingly becoming [ronroco] thieves against Gustavo Santaolalla during filming: want to swap it out real quick?
...that during filming for The Last of Us's second season premiere, performers Isabela Merced and Young Mazino unwittingly stole composer Gustavo Santaolalla's instrument?
Source: Cosmo
BarntToust 23:23, 14 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
No offense intended—I just don't quite see the interesting aspect or uniqueness in Pedro Pascal being generously lauded—so I offer note of the (accidentally) troublesome antics of the leading performers. BarntToust 23:27, 14 April 2025 (UTC)Reply
Interesting idea—added ALT6. Rhain (he/him) 23:47, 14 April 2025 (UTC)Reply

Long enough, new enough. Earwig is clean and QPQ is complete. None of the images comply with WP:DYKDIVERT. Of the hooks, ALT2, ALT4 and ALT5 do not meet WP:DYKINT (actors frequently learn new stuff for roles, roles are always going to be inspired by something, and reviewers are always going to say things), ALT6 does not meet WP:DYKHOOKBLP as too negative, I see no reason why the writers were compelled other than personal preference so rejecting ALT1, and ALT7 is inferior to ALT7a so rejecting that one also. I therefore approve ALT0, ALT3, and ALT7a only.--Launchballer 10:59, 31 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

Appreciate the review. I genuinely have no idea how ALT6 could be perceived as being negative, but the three approved hooks are probably my preference anyway. Rhain (he/him) 11:13, 31 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Future Days (The Last of Us)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Rhain (talk · contribs) 01:00, 2 June 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Plifal (talk · contribs) 12:01, 4 February 2026 (UTC)Reply


i'll take this one. expect comments soon!--Plifal (talk) 12:01, 4 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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general comments

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Rhain, first set of comments below! sorry about the wait. what a great article! the tidbits about the spider-bite and ramsey learning jiu-jitsu were interesting too. hope you're having a lovely weekend!--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • thank you! to me this basically already satisfied the conditions for ga, i'm sorry all i could provide was a limited tune-up! this was the quickest ga review i've ever done. it was a pleasure, congratulations! promoting.--Plifal (talk) 14:51, 9 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
You have nothing to apologise for—thanks so much for taking the time! Rhain (he/him) 21:00, 9 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

plot

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  • despite being newly-introduced characters, owen, jesse and seth are name-dropped without context, it might be better to include a word or two of introduction similar to "psychotherapist Gail".--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "a group of surviving Fireflies", suggest "a group of remaining Fireflies" as "surviving" sounds as if they're in the process of dying rather than being absent at the time of the massacre (which they were, iirc).--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "She vows to kill Joel slowly.", feels a bit casual, suggest "Abby vows to take revenge on Joel" or something similar.--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
    • Valid point, but this is specifically based on Abby's dialogue: "Slowly. ... When we kill him, we kill him slowly."
  • "Jesse orders restraint against Ellie", i'm not quite sure what this is referring to? would it be possible to make it a bit more specific? it doesn't really fit with "but Ellie demands equal treatment".--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "prompting anger and a homophobic slur from Seth" > "prompting Seth to use a homophobic slur".--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

production

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reception

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  • "based on 31 reviews, with an average rating of 8.7 out of 10", if i recall correctly, it was noted in an rfc that rotten tomatoes' average rating only encompasses reviews with a score, so those without one are not included in the rating system even if e.g. in this case, they were largely negative. my recommendation would be to use the phrasing ", those with a score produced an average [...] " or something similar, but it's down to you.--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
    • A valid concern, but I prefer consistency with {{RT prose}} for now.
  • "Nathan Ingraham felt "paid tribute to the game in some lovely ways"", can probably be rephrased without a quote.--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "yearned for more", not really encyclopaedic in tone.--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "suspense of the stalker scene[1][2][3]The A.V. Club's" > suspense of the stalker scene.[1][2][3] The A.V. Club's.--Plifal (talk) 06:26, 8 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "the performer's movements[4]—and the quiet [...] " > "the performer's movements.[4] Reviews also praised the quiet [...] "

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