Talk:Episode 6944/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 05:43, 9 August 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 00:36, 1 September 2025 (UTC)

Lead

• Leads a little short
• "Chris Clenshaw revealed that he had chosen Anna for the storyline as she was part of the demographic most affected by spiking" reveal seems like the wrong word here, explained might be better

Plot

• Plot is over 400 words,

Background and production

• This seems a little long, can it be broken up into sub headings?
• "Back in 2014, Jane had covered up Bobby's killing of Cindy and Ian's daughter" this feels very in universe
• "The episode aired on 16 July 2024.[8][4] It was released on BBC iPlayer earlier in the day.[9]" this isnt production information, it should probably be under a broadcast section
• "said that that QR code in the episode, which had never been done before in EastEnders, " already said previously
• The first "Bobby Beale (EastEnders)" link needs to be piped
• "Bobby Beale" is linked twice in the section
• The images in the section have a discrepency, only one of them says "(pictured)"
• Links should be added to the captions of the imaegs
• Alt text is needed for the images

Reception

• This seems a little long, can it be broken up into sub headings?
• Any viewership info?
• "Knight" is used to open a sentence three times at the beginning of paragraph 2, it should probably "he" one of those times"

References

• Several refs need to be marked as being alive, refs 11 and 13 for example but possible others
• Alot of unnecessary duplicated refs across the page, for example Ref 9 is duplicated several times in a row, it only needs to be used once at the end of Knights section
• Why is "Rayo" a reliable source?

Thoughts

• Immediately a lot of problems, it might be worth withdrawing this and taking it to WP:GOCE/R or just doing a look yourself. I'll have more info later Olliefant (she/her) 15:23, 2 September 2025 (UTC)

  @DaniloDaysOfOurLives: Olliefant (she/her) 22:31, 11 September 2025 (UTC)

  Hey, sorry, I thought you were going to write more comments so I was waiting. I will address the above in a few days, I am just extremely busy now. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 23:43, 13 September 2025 (UTC)

  I am really sorry, I need a few more days as I am dealing with health issues and university right now. I will try to finish ASAP DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:31, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

  Hey its been a month, do you still plan to procceed with this or should I fail it? Olliefant (she/her) 22:13, 27 October 2025 (UTC)

  @DaniloDaysOfOurLives: Olliefant (she/her) 06:45, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

  Hey, sorry I did not see your reply! I have been working on it - including a few days ago and also just now. I think I have addressed mostly everything. Regarding Rayo, I believe it is reliable as it is a Radio show, but I can remove it if needed. Please let me know if I need to do anything else DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 06:57, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

  Alot of the "Background and production" still seems pretty in universe Olliefant (she/her) 07:02, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

  @DaniloDaysOfOurLives: also the plot is still well over the 400 word limit Olliefant (she/her) 18:29, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

  I will finish this on Friday by trimming the plot and trying to trim the production section. I do not think the production section is really in universe as most of it is about the production or storyline development, but I will try to trim it to reduce this issue. It is my birthday today so I will work on it afterwards DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:31, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

  Happy birthday, when you have a chance I'd note things like the first two sentences of the final paragraph "Storyline development" seem pretty in universe. But no pressure there is no deadline Olliefant (she/her) 03:25, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

  Thank you so much for your support! I have cut down the plot a lot and it is now less than 400 words. Regarding the storyline development, I had a look again and tweaked some things, but the in-universe sentences are there in the context of the wider information and it is clear that it is regarding the plot rather than real life. Please let me know if I need to do anything further. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 19:16, 20 November 2025 (UTC)

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