Talk:Branston (brand)

Latest comment: 4 months ago by MCE89 in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 19:15, 12 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: MCE89 (talk · contribs) 04:19, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hello, I'll review this. I'll add my comments shortly. MCE89 (talk) 04:19, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

MCE89: Many thanks. I've responded to all the comments to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:32, 5 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Looks great — I really like what you've done with the "Brand history" section, it feels like it flows much more clearly now with the information from the lead integrated. Will pass this now. MCE89 (talk) 08:14, 7 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Initial checks

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  • Images: Green tickY Images are all free or have appropriate NFURs, and are relevant, well-captioned and well-placed
  • Copyright: Green tickY No issues apparent on Earwig. Will do further checks for close paraphrasing as part of my source spotchecks
  • Stability and authorship: Green tickY No issues

Prose review

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  • I don’t think the lead is really serving as a summary of the article body at the moment. Most of the information about the brand’s history within the lead is not contained in the body, and the lead doesn’t say anything about the product itself, which takes up much of the article
    • Described product in lead; moved history out of lead, and merged and reorganised body to accommodate it; summarized history in lead.
  • ”producing Branston Relishes in four different flavours” - Could a date be added for this?
    • Done.
  • ”Walkers once produced a variety of crisps called "Cheese and Branston Pickle”” - Do we know when this was introduced and discontinued?
    • Edited, added refs.
  • I think the "Brand management" section borders a little on feeling like a list of disjointed announcements about various product lines — is there anything that could be added to give a bit more of a narrative to this section, i.e. some context for the brand's broader strategy and sales over this period?
    • The section already discusses the baked beans campaign against Heinz, and the updates in flavour to its pickles; the brand sales are obviously key facts too.

Source review

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  • The sources all seem appropriately reliable for the information they are used to cite
    • Noted.
  • Not a GA requirement, but ref 14 and 19 are dead links - suggest adding archive URLs
    • FoodBev and KamCity archived.
Spot checks
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This table checks 4 passages from throughout the article (16.0% of 25 total passages). These passages contain 6 inline citations (20.7% of 29 in the article). Generated with the Veracity user script. MCE89 (talk) 04:41, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reference #LetterSourceArchiveStatusNotes
at which time it ceased to be labelled as Crosse and Blackwell because in Europe this name was sold separately to Princes Group. Over 17 million jars a year are sold in the UK.
6abooks.google.com ?The source says In 1960 Crosse and Blackwell was bought by Nestlé who in turn sold the Crosse and Blackwell brands to Premier Foods in 2002. In October 2012 Premier Foods sold Branston Pickle to Japanese food empire Mizkan but production continues at Bury St Edmunds, which I'm not sure quite supports the claim that it ceased to be labelled as Crosse and Blackwell at that point. --- Edited.
Branston Pickle was first made in 1922 in the village of Branston near Burton upon Trent, Staffordshire, by Crosse & Blackwell.
9atelegraph.co.uk Good
10books.google.com Good
11books.google.com Good
Additional Branston products include mayonnaise, tomato ketchup, piccalilli, brown sauce, salad cream, and baked beans.
15independent.co.uk FailI don't see piccalilli, brown sauce or baked beans in this source (although they are mentioned in other sources used in this section). This source is also relatively old — are all of these products still sold by Branston? I'm wondering if this should be changed to Additional Branston products have included... --- Done, and fixed.
In 2017, Branston launched its tomato ketchup, mayonnaise and brown sauce lines in single-serving sachet packaging.
19kamcity.com Good
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