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Submission declined on 17 May 2026 by ChrysGalley (talk). This draft is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Wikipedia's verifiability policy requires that all content be supported by reliable sources.
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Comment: I don't think this is quite ready. There are just two sources here, which are Polybius and Lazenby. I've added in the online access to Polybius, and it's quite short anyway so that's OK. However Lazenby is 224 pages long and essentially offline. It is OK to use offline sources, but the onus is on the editor to make it easy for verification, specifically page numbers. Are you in a position to put in those page numbers? I could probably do it but presumably you are familiar with this source and thus easier for you?Your summary of Polybius seems accurate but a little adrift from an encyclopedic tone. That is not a reason to decline though, but any improvements would be welcome. ChrysGalley (talk) 19:31, 17 May 2026 (UTC)
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The Fighting at Mount Eryx was a lengthy military engagement and encirclement that happened from 244 to 241 BC during the First Punic War between Carthage and the Roman Republic.[1] Hamilcar Barca conducted a sustained guerrilla campaign from fortified positions on Mount Eryx between 244 and 242 BC.[2] Polybius describes the fighting around Mount Eryx as small engagements in difficult and rugged terrain, rather than a single pitched battle.[3] He adds that Hamilcar kept the Romans in continual alarm through constant skirmishes and harassment, using the rough and mountainous ground to limit Roman mobility.[4]
Background
editAfter the Battle of Drepanum, the war had reached a stalemate on land in Sicily.[5] In 247 BC, Hamilcar Barca was given the full command of Carthaginian forces[6] He spent 247-244 BC operating from Mount Hercte.[7] In 244 BC he decided to march west and seize the city of Eryx after raiding the Italian coast,[8] a strategic advantage that allowed him to threaten the Roman supply lines.[9]
The Three-Tiered Siege
editThe standoff at Mount Eryx was unusual in ancient warfare because the mountain was occupied by three different forces simultaneously, just in different parts of the mountain:[10]
- The summit: A Roman garrison had control over the summit of the mountain and the Temple of Venus.[11] It is notable that the Romans gained this position right before Hamilcar arrived.[12]
- The mid-slope position: Hamilcar Barca and his Carthaginian army occupied the city of Eryx, which was about halfway up the mountain.[13]
- The base: The main Roman army held the base of the mountain and also the terrain leading up to Drepanum.[14]
Hamilcar was enmeshed between Roman forces positioned from above and below, yet he managed to maintain that spot for years[15] by setting up night attacks against the Roman positions.[16]
Hamilcar's objective
editHamilcar’s goal at Eryx wasn’t to win a single battle that would end the war, but rather to prolong the war[17] in order to drain Rome's resources. By holding his mid-slope position on the mountain, he forced the Romans to keep a large force there instead of using those troops elsewhere in Sicily.[18] Eryx’s proximity to Drepanum and Lilybaeum also made it strategically important, since the Carthaginian resistance on the mountain protected those strongholds from a Roman attack.[19] As long as Hamilcar controlled the mid‑slope position, Rome wouldn't have full control over western Sicily, and the war would remain stuck in a stalemate.[20]
Aftermath
editHamilcar was never defeated at Mount Eryx.[21] He only abandoned it in 242 BC after Carthage lost the Battle of the Aegates, which cut off Carthage's ability to supply his army in Eryx.[22] As part of the peace treaty, Hamilcar's troops were allowed to leave Sicily with their weapons and freedom preserved.[23]
Sources
- Polybius, The Histories, Book I, Chapters 56–58.
- Lazenby, J.F. The First Punic War: A Military History. Stanford University Press, 1996.
- Goldsworthy, Adrian. The Fall of Carthage: The Punic Wars 265–146 BC. Cassell, 2000.
- Hoyos, Dexter. Mastering the West: Rome and Carthage at War. Oxford University Press, 2015.
- Encyclopaedia Britannica. First Punic War.
- Oxford Reference. Hamilcar Barca. Oxford University Press.
- ↑ "Hamilcar Barca". Livius.org. Retrieved 17 May 2026. Hamilcar occupied Mount Eryx from 244 to 241 BCE.
- ↑ "Punic Wars". Encyclopaedia Britannica. Hamilcar Barca waged a guerrilla war from Mt. Ercte and Mt. Eryx (244–242).
- ↑ The fighting around Eryx consisted of small engagements in difficult terrain. Polybius, Histories 1.57 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ Hamilcar kept the Romans under constant pressure through repeated skirmishes. Polybius, Histories 1.56 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ The war in western Sicily had reached a deadlock. Oxford Classical Dictionary, "First Punic War" (2012).
- ↑ Hamilcar was appointed to command in Sicily in 247 BC. Polybius, Histories 1.56 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ Hamilcar established his base at Mount Hercte and operated from there for several years. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 154.
- ↑ Hamilcar launched raids along the Italian coast. Polybius, Histories 1.56 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ Moving from Hercte to Eryx gave Hamilcar a more threatening position against Roman supply routes. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 159.
- ↑ The mountain was simultaneously held at three levels by different forces. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 160.
- ↑ The Romans seized the summit of Eryx and its sanctuary. Polybius, Histories 1.58 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ The Romans secured the summit shortly before Hamilcar arrived. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 160.
- ↑ Hamilcar held the city of Eryx halfway up the mountain. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 160.
- ↑ The Romans controlled the lower approaches to the mountain. Polybius, Histories 1.58 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ Hamilcar maintained his position at Eryx despite facing superior Roman forces. Oxford Classical Dictionary, "Hamilcar Barca" (2012).
- ↑ Hamilcar carried out frequent night attacks against Roman positions. Polybius, Histories 1.58 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
- ↑ Hamilcar’s strategy focused on prolonging resistance rather than seeking a decisive battle. Oxford Reference, "Hamilcar Barca".
- ↑ Hamilcar’s position at Eryx forced Rome to commit significant manpower to contain him. Goldsworthy, The Fall of Carthage (2000), p. 152.
- ↑ Drepanum and Lilybaeum were Carthage’s remaining strongholds in western Sicily during the final phase of the war. Encyclopaedia Britannica, "First Punic War".
- ↑ The struggle at Eryx became a prolonged stalemate in which Rome could not dislodge Hamilcar. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 196.
- ↑ Hamilcar’s forces at Eryx were never defeated in direct battle. Goldsworthy, The Fall of Carthage (2000), p. 153.
- ↑ The defeat at the Aegates Islands cut Carthage’s supply line and forced Hamilcar to withdraw from Eryx. Lazenby, The First Punic War (1996), p. 197.
- ↑ After the peace treaty ending the First Punic War, the Carthaginian troops in Sicily were permitted to withdraw safely with their personal freedom intact. Polybius, Histories 1.62 (1889), trans. Shuckburgh.
