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Lead sentence review
editI removed ethnicity from the lead, unless that is related to his notability? Malerooster (talk) 02:54, 12 June 2023 (UTC)
Cadet in what force?
editWhat uniformed service was he cadet in - Army Cadet Force, Combined Cadet Force, Air Training Corps, Sea Cadet Corps, Police Cadets? Needs making clear as the sport event, though a national distinction is not as widely known as say the FA Cup.Cloptonson (talk) 11:56, 24 December 2024 (UTC)