TomeRamot

March 2024

Hello, I'm TechnoSquirrel69. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to Santo DiMera because they seemed inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 06:40, 1 April 2024 (UTC)

Tomer Raved moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Tomer Raved. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources and it needs more sources to establish notability. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Xrimonciam (talk) 08:25, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Welcome!

Hello, TomeRamot, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you created or edited appears to be an article about yourself. Writing about yourself is a common mistake made by new Wikipedians.

As this is an encyclopedia, we wouldn't expect to have an article about every contributor. We require individuals to meet Wikipedia's definition of a notable person to accept articles about them. A page you created about yourself may well be deleted from the encyclopedia. If it is deleted and you wish to retrieve its contents, don't hesitate to ask anyone from this list and they will copy it to your user page.

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Hi, User:Jimfbleak. Thank you for your message. This article is not about myself. It's a sheer translation from the Hebrew wikipedia about Tomer Raved, CEO of Bezeq communication company. It might not be worthy of an entry as a notability issue, but it's not an entry I wrote about myself :) I wish. Inow see that maybe my username got you confused as it's the same first name. Anyway, since you already wrote something, I would love to hear your thoughts about the entry notability. And if you can return it back to draft so I can add the sources needed? TomeRamot (talk) 15:51, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

Hi, i've seen this message, and I'll reply in detail later Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:28, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Reply

Not so much confused as misled.

Each language wikipedia is independent and has its own rules, English probably being the strictest.

You have an obvious conflict of interest, please don't write about yourself, your friends or relatives and read the guidance below:

• When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.

• Most of your text is completely unsourced, and must be verified or removed. I'm not familiar enough with Hebrew publications to know if Calcalist is a reputable source, I'll leave that to others
• He's probably notable, but that notability must be based on verified facts.

• You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.

• Basically a promo, with unsourced claims and opinions like led numerous mergers, acquisitions... played a key role... completing large transactions... Among his notable deals... Among his key achievements... played a significant role... implementing various structural and financial transformations within the company.

• There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
• You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

• I didn't check.

Also, your text needs far more wikilinks.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:14, 25 April 2025 (UTC)

Thanks! can you please undelete it from the draft space so I can work on it and make it better before submitting it to publish review? TomeRamot (talk) 13:06, 27 April 2025 (UTC)