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FeedbackThe reviewer, ChrysGalley, left the following feedback:
provide significant coverage: discuss the person in detail, not brief mentions or interviews lacking independent analysis;
are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
are independent: not connected to the person, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.
Please add references that meet all three of these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.
There are repeated signs of AI or Grammarly usage here, which isn't allowed. There are also WP:citebomb which isn't helpful to readers. One source is usually sufficient. The NYT source is good but rather short (which wasn't unusual in those days), it would be good to have a few more sources that contribute to notability with in-depth coverage.
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