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Your submission at Articles for creation: Simon L. Dolan (January 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Ldm1954 were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Just because this is a translation does not make it right for the English Wikipedia. This reads like a CV, not like a concise article. It should be about 1/3 the length, with only really major achievements not everything. Sections such as "Public activity" are pretty much irrelevant.

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Ldm1954 (talk) 15:26, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Hello, Ovedc! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ldm1954 (talk) 15:26, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Sivan Rotem

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Concern regarding Draft:Yuval Dagim

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Concern regarding Draft:Ruach Tova

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Your draft article, Draft:Kobi Sitt

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 14:01, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tal Patalon (September 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by OhHaiMark was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Please trim out some of the primary sources for secondary sources instead.

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OhHaiMark (talk) 13:06, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

Thank you, OhHaiMark for your guidance! I trim out all the primary sources for secondary sources instead. Please, can you re-check the article for publishing?

Tagging User:Tavantius - Many thanks - Ovedc (talk) 03:57, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Tal Patalon has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Tal Patalon. Thanks! Tavantius (talk) 09:13, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

User:Tavantius Many thanks for all the comments, I greatly appreciate them. I have now gone through the article and removed all that might be construed as promotional. I have also deleted buzzwords. I would be most grateful if you would review the current version of the article and approve it for publication. Many thanks!
Thank you very much - Ovedc (talk) 09:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest

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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicizing, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Direct editing on the said article. Graywalls (talk) 19:43, 8 October 2024 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Bat Ella

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Concern regarding Draft:Equashield

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