Mehdi Rafiei

Your submission at Articles for creation: Forg Castle (Mirza Rafi Khan Castle) (March 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

While this is a very interesting topic, there are some big issues to address:

• You need to remove all opinion terms. Wikipedia doesn't describe things as "unique", "fortunate", "wonderful", "tragic", we simply state the bare facts and let the reader make their opinion.

• What you're doing is not what footnotes are for, we use footnotes for citing WP:Sourcing, like that book or news article verifies a given fact. While there are some Wikipedia articles that also have ancillary annotations for comments, generally it's not a good idea to use footnotes for discursive explanations.

• The way Wikipedia avoids discursive explanations is through WP:Wikilinks. Rather than get into an explanation here of the Qajar era, you can just link Qajar dynasty. That helps us keep the article tightly focused on the specific topic of Forg Castle.

• The biggest issue, you haven't provided sourcing, you've just stated a very large number of facts and just asked us to trust you. That's not how encyclopedias work, you must clearly cite history books, academic journal articles, etc that prove these facts. Important note: you do not have to cite any fact that is not directly tied to Forg Castle, so a proposed construction date of the castle, yes you have to cite that, but you don't have to cite a source for the dates of the Qajar dynasty. Makes sense?

This is a cool topic, and your enthusiasm is great, but Wikipedia doesn't just publish essay-style papers from individuals, we publish as a WP:Tertiary source digesting and citing existing writings. If you're willing to work with us on that, we can move this article steadily forward. If you would like to speak to a volunteer mentor for ideas, check in at WP:Teahouse.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 12:14, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Mehdi Rafiei, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MatthewVanitas (talk) 12:14, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Forg Castle (Mirza Rafi Khan Castle) (March 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

Imaginably notable and acceptable but simply still needs any further available amount of detailed in-depth sources overall.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 07:30, 23 March 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Forg Castle (Mirza Rafi Khan Castle)

Hello, Mehdi Rafiei. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Forg Castle".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. TopCipher (talk) 14:45, 30 March 2017 (UTC)