M.parvage
Joined 5 February 2023
Latest comment: 3 months ago by M.parvage in topic Hello
Hello
editHello, thank you for your review of this article . Could you please point out which specific sentences or sections appear promotional? I would be happy to revise or remove them to ensure the article fully complies with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view guidelines.CJNJSOne (talk) 15:05, 26 February 2026 (UTC)
- I have revised the article to remove promotional phrasing and trimmed role descriptions.
- Could you please review the changes and advise if the maintenance tag can now be removed?
- CJNJSOne (talk) 15:26, 26 February 2026 (UTC)
- Thank you for your interest in improving the article.
- The Career section needs to be rewritten. Right now, it talks more about the company than about his own professional or musical career. It should focus on his work, achievements and contributions instead of promoting the company.
- Also, the Early Life and Education section is too detailed and does not have proper inline citations. From other available sources, such detailed information does not seem to be supported. This part should be shortened and properly referenced to follow Wikipedia’s neutral point of view rules. PARVAGE talk! 23:19, 27 February 2026 (UTC)