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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Weiwei961208 in topic Weiwei’s peer review

Great Train eXpress

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Great Train Express is a planned higher-speed commuter rail network in the Seoul Capital Area project consisting of three separate lines, named GTX A, GTX B and GTX C, and scheduled for completion in 2025.[1][2][3] The project was first envisioned in the late 2000s, and construction of GTX Line A began in 2017.

GTX A

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The line has been approved and is scheduled to start construction in late 2018. The section between Samseong Station and Suseo Station is already under construction, and service is expected to start between Samseong Station and Dongtan Station as early as 2023.

Station
number
Station name
English
Station name
Hangul
Station name
Hanja
Transfer
Line name
Distance
in km
Total
distance
Location
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Unjeong 운정
GTX A
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KINTEX 킨텍스킨텍스
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Daegok 대곡 Gyeongui–Jungang Line
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Yeonsinnae 연신내연신내
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Seoul Station 서울역서울 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Korail KTX
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Samseong 삼성역
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Suseo 수서역西 Suin–Bundang Line
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Seongnam 성남역 Gyeonggang Line
SRT
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Yongin 용인역 Suin–Bundang Line
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Dongtan 동탄역
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GTX B

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Station
number
Station name
English
Station name
Hangul
Station name
Hanja
Transfer
Line name
Distance
in km
Total
distance
Location
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Songdo Station 송도 File:Seoul Metro Line ic1.svg
GTX B
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Incheon City Hall 인천시청市廳 File:Seoul Metro Line ic1.svg File:Seoul Metro Line ic2.svg
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Bupyeong 부평 File:Seoul Metro Line ic1.svg
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Dangarae 당아래당아래
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Sindorim 신도림
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Yeouido 여의도
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Yongsan 용산 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Korail KTX
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Seoul Station 서울역서울 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Korail KTX
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Cheongnyangni 청량리 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Korail
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Mangu 망우 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Gyeongchun Line
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Byeollae 별내 Gyeongchun Line
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Pyeongnae–Hopyeong 평내호평 Gyeongchun Line
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Maseok 마석 Gyeongchun Line
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GTX C

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Final plans are currently being reviewed by the government. There are plans to extend the line to Suwon Station and to Yangju New City.

Station
number
Station name
English
Station name
Hangul
Station name
Hanja
Transfer
Line name
Distance
in km
Total
distance
Location
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Geumjeong 금정
GTX C
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0.0
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Gwacheon 과천
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Yangjae 양재 Shinbundang Line
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Samseong 삼성
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Cheongnyangni 청량리 Gyeongui–Jungang Line Korail
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Kwangwoon University 광운대 Gyeongchun Line
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Chang-dong 창동
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Uijeongbu 의정부
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References

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Category:Higher-speed rail Category:Rapid transit in South Korea Category:Rail transport in Seoul Category:Proposed railway lines in Asia Category:Proposed public transport in South Korea

Weiwei’s peer review

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1. No. I didn’t see the importance of the GTX, why it matters, what it contributes to the Korea society.

2. Yes. The author is introducing three lines of GTX, and she said it in the very first sentence.

3. No. The author didn’t talk too much about the following parts.

4. The importance of the GTX.

5. The history and development of GTX. Maybe could be a separate section.

6. Yes. The author talked about GTX A,B, C separately.

7. Yes. The three lines are of equal importance and equal length.

8. Yes.

9. No. The author is simply descibing the ongoing progress.

10. No.

11. No.

12. No.

13. No. I think the author did pretty well.

14. Yes. They are all from journals and worldwide news.

15. Yes. The 8th citation is cited quite frequently.

16. No.


The article is in a neutral tone and the sources are reliable. One thing I like is that the author provides detailed forms of the trail lines. (Is this original or adapted from other sources? If so, any citations?) Some drawbacks, however, are that the article is unbalanced in terms of citations--the 8th citation is cited several times and is much more than the others. Also some citations are repeated, the author could use cite from existed source instead of creating a new one. And the last sentence in section GTX B saying the mayor’s claims need to have a clear citation connected. There are some grammar mistakes needed to fix. What's more, at the begining of the article, the author introduces the history/development of the GTX, which could be a separate section or a separate pragraph. Overall, the draft is in a good shape! Weiwei961208 (talk) 22:41, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply