147.161.250.103
Latest comment: 2 years ago by DoubleGrazing in topic Your submission at Articles for creation: Gernot Döllner (November 17)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gernot Döllner (November 17)
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The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.
The comment the reviewer left was:
The sources seem enough to establish notability, but the referencing is inadequate for an article on a living person (WP:BLP): the 'Education' section has only one cite early on, leaving the rest of the section unsupported, and the first half of the 'Career' section is completely unreferenced. Especially when making potentially contentious statements such as
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
"oversaw the development of the Porsche 918 Spyder and managed the entire Panamera series", we really need to see a reliable source to back that up. Anything that cannot be thus supported should be removed.
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