User:Talvaro993/Piracy in the Caribbean/Arianasainz72 Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? FalkenCSUCI, JoHdez, Talvaro993
• Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Talvaro993/sandbox

Lead

Guiding questions:

• Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
• Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
• Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
• Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
• Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Lead evaluation

I am not sure if the lead has been updated. The Lead does include a concise and clear introductory sentence as well as a brief description of the article's major sections.

Content

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added relevant to the topic?
• Is the content added up-to-date?
• Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
• Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Content evaluation

The content added is up-to-date with working sources. I noticed in the Sandbox draft the editors are adding more to the End of an Era section. The content is in relation to the topic.

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added neutral?
• Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
• Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Tone and balance evaluation

The content added has a neutral tone. There are not any claims that are biased towards a particular position. All viewpoints are balanced and would not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

• Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
• Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
• Are the sources current?
• Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
• Check a few links. Do they work?

Sources and references evaluation

All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source. The sources are thorough and reflect the topic of piracy in the Caribbean. The links work.

Organization

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
• Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
• Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Organization evaluation

The content is well-written and easy to read. I do not see any grammatical or spelling errors. I do see words bolded but I am assuming this group is still editing those bolded pieces. Everything is well organized.

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
• Are images well-captioned?
• Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
• Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation

The images included are a good amount to enhance the understanding of the article's topic. All images are well-captioned and laid out in a visually appealing way. None of the images violate the copyright regulations.

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

• Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
• How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
• Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
• Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

New Article Evaluation

The new article meets the Nobility requirements. The list of sources is just right and accurately represents all available literature on the subject of piracy in the Caribbean.

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

• Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
• What are the strengths of the content added?
• How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation

Overall, the Sandbox article draft is in its works. Every source works and anything that needs to be cited is. The sources' links work and grammar is perfect. The article is neutral and does not make me favor a specific idea. I see that the draft is also waiting to be cleaned up in terms of font and size. The article is more complete and improved.