Moved to mainspace by VersaceSpace (talk). Self-nominated at 19:59, 12 July 2022 (UTC).
Not sure if this hook makes sense to people unfamiliar with either artist. Maybe something else can be proposed here? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:11, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5, do you perhaps think that a hook about cardi b or minaj might be better? Also I'm gone until the 23rd, could you hold this as long as possible? Thanks —VersaceSpace 🌃 05:10, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
- I suppose that's possible, although personally I'd prefer a hook that wasn't reliant on an association with a more famous artist, at least if it's possible. If not, then a hook involving either could work. As for the 23rd thing, sure I can wait. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 05:21, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
- How does this one look? —VersaceSpace 🌃 11:14, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
It seems better, but it might be better to have another editor do the full review. My main concern here was the original hook and that has already been addressed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:25, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
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ALT1 approved. I edited one section so that opinionated statements are attributed. This is gtg. Z1720 (talk) 00:27, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
- I'm adding a second tick because sometimes DYK doesn't pick up the one used in this template. Z1720 (talk) 00:27, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
ALT1 approved. I edited one section so that opinionated statements are attributed. This is gtg. Z1720 (talk) 00:27, 31 July 2022 (UTC)