Talk:WPPX-TV/GA1
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Nominator: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:00, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 02:40, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
Taking this on as part of my pledge. Will get to comments soon. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 02:40, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Pokelego999: Done. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 20:37, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
Six GA Criteria
edit1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.
2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.
3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the subject.
4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.
5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.
6. Article uses no media files.
Lead
edit-I'd split up the second sentence of paragraph one since it runs for a while.
- Removed the office mention. Ion stations generally don't have much in the way of local offices, and I can't figure out if they have one now. Main studio for all Scripps-owned Ion stations is in Cincinnati.
-"but found itself with too little cash, as a result of nonexistent carriage on local cable systems," I feel "cash" is a bit informal, perhaps reword? I'd also clarify carriage, or hyperlink if possible.
- The only hyperlink is Carriage dispute. It's a common enough term in the industry that I can't really reword it.
History
edit-"and at least one group was conducting ascertainment studies in the community in February 1979" What is an ascertainment study? Could this be clarified?
- Reworded. Ascertainment was an FCC-required practice of surveying the community to figure out its needs. The point is that groups were laying the groundwork to apply.
-Why is April a relevant date for the channel?
- Reworded. They had promised April 1986 as a start date which one article mentions.
-Is there anything on this post-2007 as Ion Television?
- No, because Ion is a national network. Very little relevant information would exist.
Technical information
edit-Looks good
Spotcheck
editSpotchecked sources 27, 18, 38, 8, 16, 22, 7. My big gripe is with 7. "However, channel 61 would be beset by a year of delays and other changes" is not stated in the source on either clipping, and the way "Best of Television" is phrased in the article implies this is a proper title/name, when in actuality is just meant to symbolize a figure of speech. I would suggest fixing both of these.
- Removed the former and then decapitalized the latter.
Overall
edit@Sammi Brie: ping me when the issues above are addressed. Looking pretty solid so far. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 18:03, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie looks good. Happy to pass. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 20:51, 10 August 2025 (UTC)