Talk:Travis Dermott/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look over the next few days. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• Lead needs more on his professional career. Done
• Probably should link minor ice hockey to timbits hockey.  Done
• "After being named to the OJHL's 2nd Team All-Stars[11] and Fan Favourite[12] he committed to play for the Erie Otters on May 4, 2013." Comma before ref 12.
• No need to relink OHL and Erie Otters one paragraph after. Done
• "before they were ultimately eliminated." By who? Done
• Link Utica Comets. Done
• De-link Kapanen's second mention. Done
• Dash needed for 7-game. Done
• "However" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
• Awards and honours section needs the references (Ref.) label for the column of the table. Done

That's about it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Nova Crystallis, done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:24, 14 April 2020 (UTC)