Talk:Through the Valley (The Last of Us)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 months ago by Vestrian24Bio in topic GA review
GA review
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Nominator: Rhain (talk · contribs) 01:00, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 14:08, 8 February 2026 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 14:08, 8 February 2026 (UTC)
- Courtesy ping for Vestrian24Bio. --PresN 20:02, 25 February 2026 (UTC)
- will finish this weekend. Vestrian24Bio 02:59, 26 February 2026 (UTC)
Comments
- Through the Valley (The Last of Us) (as of this rev)
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|via=YouTubeto refs 1, 18 & 27. - NYPost (ref 17) is an unreliable source.
- It's marginally reliable for entertainment coverage per WP:NYPOST, though this ref is an interview anyway. ☔
- There ia an unnecessary list markup in the infobox; not sure which but I think it might be the Guest appearances list.
- No need for refs in image captions, when the matter is covered in adjacent prose.
- Image captions should be referenced just like any other part of an article per WP:WHYCITE. ☔
- What's a "previs supervisor" - does previs supposed to be previous or previsual..?
- It's clarified about six words later—previsualization—but I've removed it anyway. ☔
- Could split the ref 73 to be two separate refs.
(will add more) Vestrian24Bio 09:36, 23 March 2026 (UTC)
- Typo - "Ned Stark's or the Red Wedding in [...]" - on the Red Wedding.
- Not a typo—Ned Stark's death and the Red Wedding are separate events. ☔
- Could add a {{see also}} hatnote in the accolades section to List of accolades received by The Last of Us (TV series).
Vestrian24Bio 10:04, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- @Rhain: that's all I got, ping me when you're done addressing these.. Vestrian24Bio 10:04, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, Vestrian24Bio! I believe I've addressed all of your concerns; please let me know if there's anything else. – Rhain ☔ (he/him) 10:09, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
Final review
- EARWIG shows 20.6% - violation unlikely.
According to link-dispenser (permalink),tool not working right.
Vestrian24Bio 10:40, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- Plot summary word count: 299 words. Vestrian24Bio 10:40, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- Media usage:
- File:The Last of Us - Through the Valley.jpg
- File:Craig Mazin, co-director, at SXSW 2025 03 (cropped).jpg
- File:Gabriel Luna, actor, at SXSW 2025 03 (cropped).jpg
- File:Rutina Wesley by Gage Skidmore (cropped).jpg
- File:Shawn James - Zum Wackinger - Wacken Winter Nights 2017 01 (cropped).jpg
- File:Ashley Johnson at IGN Live 2024 (further cropped).jpg
- File:The Last of Us - Squamish set 1 (cropped).jpg
- File:The Last of Us - Squamish set 4 (cropped).jpg
- File:The Last of Us - Through the Valley - bloater VFX.gif
- File:Timothy A. Good, Nordiske Mediedager (52891929070).jpg
- File:Pedro Pascal at SXSW 2025 01 (cropped).jpg
- File:Bella Ramsey, actor, at SXSW 2025 03 (cropped).jpg
- File:Kaitlyn Dever at SXSW 2025 03 (cropped).jpg
- All files have proper copyright tags, captions and alt texts. Vestrian24Bio 10:40, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- Source spot-check: pass. Vestrian24Bio 10:51, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
- All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 10:51, 24 March 2026 (UTC)
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