Talk:Sontaran

Sontara?

What's the source for naming the Sontaran home planet as "Sontara"? —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 20:35, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

It's from the novels - specifically, Craig Hinton names it Sontara in The Crystal Bucephalus, so it's no less valid than putting Polymos for the Autons. Could have sworn when I added that I sourced it... --khaosworks (talk • contribs) 00:35, 26 March 2006 (UTC)

...and if I had read the entire page carefully, I would have seen that it was right there in the "other appearances" section. My bad. —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 00:50, 26 March 2006 (UTC)

Is not the word 'monogender' an oxymoron? It's got to be a Greerism.203.221.203.50 (talk) 08:55, 30 May 2016 (UTC)

Judoon resemblance: encyclopedic?

Do we really think that the fact that a few fans mistook early images of the Judoon for Sontarans is important enough to merit mention in this article? My feeling is that it's not encyclopedic. —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 04:48, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

No need. put it on the judoon one though Lollypop2 20:01, 4 November 2007 (UTC)

Lynx or 2008?

Which image should be used? The classic series image, or the new series image? We've used the new-series look on Cyberman and Dalek, but at the same time, it could be seen as recentism. Will ^(talk) 13:02, 4 November 2007 (UTC)

How about the classic image for the info box and the the new image further down the article for comparsion?62.136.107.132 16:19, 4 November 2007 (UTC)

I think are new one at top, and Lynx thurther down page. Lollypop2 19:59, 4 November 2007 (UTC)

If you're going to switch -- and it does broadly seem like a good idea, given that the show is ongoing and therefore this isn't just a historical record but a set of context for current events (see also Tennant, Simm, and the new series logo) -- you might as well wait until the first episode airs (or approaches air) and better publicity shots become available. Lynx is good enough until Sontarans become actively topical again. --Aderack 06:31, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

-- I think that putting the original at the top of the page makes more sense, I think the image of the original should be seen as definitive, seeing thats roughly what the original creators had in mind and is the basis for the newer re-incarnations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ngates87 (talk • contribs) 04:25, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

But in that case, if we're going to be consistant, we should put the original logo at the top of the Doctor Who page and an older picture of Jack Harkness on his page. The new Sontarans aren't any less canon than the original ones, and I don't know if there's any evidence to prove that the designers had intended for the Sontarans to really look like people in badly made masks. On the other hand, we could put up an image displaying all the different versions, like the Doctor's and the Master's pages. Andral (talk) 19:21, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

I like that idea —Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.247.249.41 (talk) 15:21, 17 January 2008 (UTC)

thoughts

I think we should keep the original picture —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ngates87 (talk • contribs) 17:00, 12 December 2007 (UTC)

I think that now the (great) new picture at the head of the page has been introduced, the original promotional image can be ditched; it looks a little tacky, I think. 86.136.156.205 (talk) 21:10, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Destiny of the doctors

I have removed the reference to the Sontarans and Bee stings from the TV appearances section as this should appear in the games section as it (currently) only relates to the "Destiny of the Doctors" pc game. This could of course all change after this saturday. Deckchair (talk) 11:18, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Is it even true that the game says that bees are their weakness? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.136.156.205 (talk) 08:42, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

It does seem to be true that bees are needed in the game, but i could only find a couple of sources which are possibly dated before this month so i wasnt comfortable re-instating the claim. Searching for "Bees and Sontarans" on google brings up links to a lot of sites which are referencing this article. The reference to Bees was only added to this article in the past week. Deckchair (talk) 08:56, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

I see; my concern was that it might have been an invention by someone seeking to influence speculation. If, as the article says, it's just a matter of firing bees at them, it sounds like it could be accomplished with any old bullet or whatever, presumably aimed at the vent on their necks. But so long as it's true (or verifiable), obviously there can be no objections. 86.136.156.205 (talk) 16:54, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Just tweaked it to make it sound less like Sontarans have a specific allergy to bees or something, since that's not what the source says. 86.136.156.205 (talk) 16:56, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Physical size

In the new series, it becomes clear that the Sontarans are short in length. I believe this was not the case in the old series. Could someone shed a light on this or add it to the article? Robin.lemstra (talk) 14:40, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

Series Six

There are pictures at the moment of a Sontaran on the set of the new series of Doctor Who. I suppose if we find a link to this picture within an article, we could make this comment on this article. Thefartydoctor (talk) 22:05, 30 March 2011 (UTC)

Skorr not an exception

How is the name Skorr an exception to the monosyllabic S-name theme? I'm going to move him to the list of examples unless someone tells me to move it back. Sailorknightwing (talk) 15:41, 25 August 2011 (UTC)

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Sontaran/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 19:31, 14 September 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Viriditas (talk · contribs) 12:25, 1 October 2025 (UTC)

Note: I was thinking about Sontarans all day (no, not the Roman Empire, Sontarans) and here I see it on GAN. I'm on it. Viriditas (talk) 12:28, 1 October 2025 (UTC)

This is such a vibe actually I'm gonna be very fr Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:43, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

Feedback

Infobox

Image

• The infobox image is super cool and fun, and the museum lighting is unusual, giving it a sense of depth and importance (Sontar-ha!) But, it must be admitted that the facial features are washed out due to the lighting. I brought the image into GIMP and removed the color, and immediately the face appeared. That would mean uploading a B&W version, but it has the advantage of revealing the entire face, including the features and bone structure. Something to think about?

Lead

• Excellent job on the proportion of lead size to body size. It's great.
• The Sontarans have gone on to be recurring antagonists within the series.
  • And yet, you ignore Strax? Seems an oversight, no? Don't you think the lead should be adjusted to account for our friend Strax?

• Added Strax to the lead. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

• Thank you!

• In-universe, they are a clone race, with Sontarans being a species bred for war at birth to fight a never-ending war against a species known as the Rutans.
  • How do you feel about cutting back on the redundancy of the word "war" and only using it once? Doesn't matter how you do it, but I have one example: "In-universe, they are a clone race, with Sontarans bred to fight a never-ending war against a species known as the Rutans."
• They first appeared in the 1973 serial The Time Warrior, where a member of the species uses time travel technology to try and return to his home planet."
  • Can we eliminate the wordiness of "member of the species" to just "Sontaran"? Something like: "They first appeared in the 1973 serial The Time Warrior, where a Sontaran uses time travel technology to try and return to his home planet." Or any other way you want to do it? Not a biggie if you want to keep it the way it is, but "member of the species" sounds so clinical and detached.
• A Sontaran named Strax serves as a recurring supporting character in the series as a member of the group known as the Paternoster Gang.
  • Since you used the word recurring in the previous sentence, I think it's fine to just say "supporting character" here.

• I feel it's worthwhile to mention since while the Sontarans may be recurring it's not inherently clear if this particular Sontaran is as well. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• The Sontarans were created by writer Robert Holmes. Holmes conceived the Sontarans after reading the 1832 war treatise On War.
  • I like the short sentences, but I think combining them works better here and cuts down on verbiage and gets down to business. For example: "Writer Robert Holmes created the Sontarans after reading On War (1832), a military treatise by Prussian general Carl von Clausewitz." Of course, you can write this any way you want, this is just an example of my thought process. I like the more direct nature of this version.

• Done all of the above. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• I still can't figure out what this is supposed to mean: He was also inspired by the Vietnam War, particularly by the American troops who were deployed into a conflict between other countries

• The original quote is "In part, Holmes also drew upon the Vietnam War which had waged since 1955, conceiving the Sontarans like American forces deploying into the conflict between North and South Vietnam." Tried to transliterate this as best as possible but it's a bit unclear even in the original text. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:33, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

Appearances

• Unless I'm missing it, I don't see any mention of their distinctive "Sontar-ha" war chant or phrase, which I believe was only incorporated into the character much later.

• Sontarans only have a single weak point: a "probic vent" on the back of their neck, through which they receive energy, with a single hit here dealing heavy damage to a Sontaran.
  • This sentence is slightly clunky. You could split it up like this for readability: "Sontarans have only a single weak point: a "probic vent" on the back of their neck, through which they receive energy. A single hit to this spot can cause major damage." Or however you want to write it.

• Did both. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• The "Television" section reads like a jumbled list of trivia. There should be a way to give it more narrative continuity instead of its current form which is stilted and separate. This problem resolves itself if you try to find the common thread between all the appearances. I'm currently doing another review of Saru (Star Trek: Discovery), and if you look at the appearances section there, you can see how the editor ties everything together with a ribbon and a bow. They do this by combining the backstory with the appearances, but only partially chronological. The writer uses multiple levels to give the narrative depth. The first level is the initial backstory starting from the beginning, combined with specific details about the character that gives the reader an idea as to who Saru is as a character and what makes him tick. That's what I'm asking about the Sontarans in this article. Who are they? You give us the detail of the appearance, but we don't learn anything about them. Tell us based on those series and episodes. In the Saru article, a second level of narrative emerges, that of story highlights and the most important events related to the growth of the character, their standing in relation to the other characters on the show, and the larger story they are a part of in its entirety. What the writer is doing here is creating a coherent narrative by joining the story about the character with its appearances and then expanding it outwards to encompass the character's relationship with others. That's the missing element you don't have. Instead, you're just telling us "The Sontarans appear here, here, and here." But you need to connect the dots between here and here. Why did they appear here and here? A good way to think about it is like this: what do we learn about the Sontarans between The Time Warrior, The Invasion of Time, and The Two Doctors? That's your answer for that paragraph, and you can use it that tie the narrative together for that part. Do the same for the rest and the story of the Sontarans emerges and ties the section together. Read the Saru appearances section to get some more ideas.

• The reason it's framed like this is because the Sontarans don't have a continuous narrative. Each appearance is completely unrelated to each prior appearance, barring small references irrelevant to the episode plot. The only commonality they all have is it's all for the benefit of the wider empire, but these appearances are never particularly linked to prior ones or even the wider empire (And if they are, it's a small detail unmentioned by the sources I've used). None of the appearances actually really link into later ones in any meaningful way, nor does their species have any development or growth between appearances. Saru follows a linear timeline with an established character arc, the Sontarans don't have that. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:33, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

• I understand what you are saying, but I think you missed my point. To clarify, I'm saying that in spite of the literal narrative of the show, on Wikipedia, we create or impose a narrative on the text to differentiate it from a list of indiscriminate trivia. The easiest way to do this is using a narrative structure unique to a topic, for example, biographies, military conflicts, musicians, art works, engineering projects, etc. Each of these topics has a concomitant narrative structure. If I'm writing a biography, for example, there's a natural expectation that I will have a linear structure from birth to death, even if we don't have all the details or knowledge of the intervening years. To make any kind of narrative work, we often group shared characteristics. You can see how the Doctor Who wiki did this by grouping the Sontaran character under the discussion of alien biology, society, technology, armour, and history. This is just an example. Viriditas (talk) 20:20, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

Development

• Second paragraph is a wall of text. Consider breaking it up into two paragraphs for readability.

• I don't agree that it's a text wall; it's about equivalent to the other paragraphs in terms of length. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• Understood. The reason it is classified as a "wall of text" is because it is approximately 242 words, which is 42 words over the 200 word paragraph limit of recommended readability. 25 years ago, for academic journal articles, the recommended, maximum size for paragraphs was about 150 words, but I suspect that has shrunk considerably due to the impact of social media on younger readers. It is worth it to consider that at no time in the last 25 years has 242 words been considered readable. More recently, people have recommended paragraph sizes below 100 words, but debate is still ongoing. I don't think Wikipedia has any insight into this, but a recent discussion from last year came up with a simple rule of thumb: since 75% of our readers are on mobile, check your phone to gauge readability. Checking this article on my phone shows it is much longer than any other paragraph on the page and diminishes readability. Also, it is generally recommended that paragraph sizes remain consistent. However, you are free to do what you wish and maintain the length at 242 words.

• Split. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:33, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

  Thank you. Viriditas (talk) 23:45, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

• and was additionally inspired by the Vietnam War, particularly in the form of the American troops who were deployed into a conflict between other countries
  • No idea what this means.

• See above. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:33, 4 October 2025 (UTC)

Reception and analysis

• Copyedited to remove the repetitive and redundant language.

References

• Please archive all of your sources so they don't become dead links. Run IABot.

• My Wifi is so bad that it just crashes before it can complete the archival. If you'd be willing to do it I'd be eternally grateful I fear. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

• I will try, but I think it crashes because the bot is experiencing high traffic. Viriditas (talk) 00:59, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

  504 Gateway Time-out. I've been getting this for the last two weeks. Viriditas (talk) 01:11, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

  It looks like the workaround is to manually submit a bot job from here. Viriditas (talk) 01:18, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

  I submitted the bot job. Nothing happened. I wonder if the whole thing is down. Viriditas (talk) 09:42, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• I tried it too and it wouldn't let me in. I'll try again later today and see if I can get it to work. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

  I've been trying for two weeks. I don't think it works. Viriditas (talk) 19:56, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• It only archived after I passed the review. Does it have a rule that it can't run if an article is under review? Odd.

Randomized spot check

• 5a: I think your page numbers are off? The chapter on the Sontarans is on pp. 61-68, 208-209, 243, and likely a few others I missed.
• 5b: See above.
• 5c: See above.
• 5d: See above.
• 5e: See above.

• Oops, I copied that from an old Ice Warrior draft, so the page numbers are off. Should be correct now. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

• 8: Check.
• 14a: As far as I can tell, this citation is incomplete and it isn't clear if this material appears in the 2011 issue.

• What information is missing that would be needed to complete the citation? Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

• It's a good question. Do you own the pub or have you reviewed it? I ask because there aren't any copies online to review, and the author and title don't seem to refer to the actual article or specific author within. For example, Andrew Pixley is listed as the writer and Spilbury is the editor. So from what I can tell, the entire magazine is being cited, not a specific article within about an episode or page numbers. My guess, based on the link above, is there is at least 12 separate episode articles inside the magazine, likely authored by Pixley, and perhaps a general introduction. That's why I had concerns. Viriditas (talk) 08:58, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• I think I found the issue: I copied my citation from an old Slitheen rewrite and accidentally grabbed the wrong volume. I've clarified the information you needed for the correct volume. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 14:35, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

• 14b: See above.
• 17: Check.
• 26: Check.
• 32: Check.
• 33a: This is a duplicate cite of 5a-e, which means it has the same problem. There should only be one citation for the book, or multiple for the page numbers.

• Fixed duplicate refs. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

• 33b: See above.
• 37: This is a weird one, and is the second review this week where I've seen this exact same problem. There is no "comic relief" quote. It is a paraphrase so there's no reason it should be quoted. So the source checks out, but the material shouldn't be quoted.

• Adjusted. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 21:42, 2 October 2025 (UTC)

External links

• Looks good. Link is active.

Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   After a series of copyedits, I believe this criterion is met.

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

   Looks good, but I do have minor concerns about the television subsection in appearances. However, after a copyedit, I believe my concerns no longer rise to the level of a concern but should be downgraded with caveats as I will explain in the closing comments.

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   Issues with spot-check addressed and handled.

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   Earwig report is clean. GPTZero reports the text is 99% human.

   C. It contains no original research:

   No original research.

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

   No issues detected.

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   All main aspects addressed.

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

   Excellent work here.

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

   Well done.

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

   Article is relatively stable.

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   Images are tagged appropriately with non-free rationales. See closing comments for concern about lead image.

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

   Relevant. Captions are good.

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Article wasn't in too bad a shape when it was nominated, but I did identify two minor issues that the nominator should consider in the future: 1) As expressed in the feedback section, some minor image editing could vastly improve the depiction of the Sontaran face in the current lead infobox image. Since this is mostly a minor stylistic issue, it does not have any ultimate bearing on the result of the review as its current appearance in the article is good enough. 2) As previously expressed in the feedback section, I have raised a minor concern with the narrative continuity (or lack of such) in the Appearances > Television subsection. I'm convinced that returning to the sources could vastly improve this section despite the choppy history of the character. I don't think any more needs to be said since I've covered this in some depth above. Thanks again for your work.

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