Talk:Song 2 You

GA review

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Nominator: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 05:37, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 05:54, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Hey, I will be reviewing this. Expect comments by the end of the week :) DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 05:54, 25 June 2025 (UTC)

Hey, well done on the article! There are no copyright issues on Earwig so here are my comments:

1. "finding that it doesn't depend on material possessions like designer clothes" - This should be reworded

Done

1. "on January 17, 2011" - Could you please specify that the episode originally aired on this date?

Done

1. Could you please add Sikowitz' actor and briefly say who he is (e.g. Acting teacher?)?

Done

1. "producer, programmer, engineer, and recording engineer" - Could you please link these?

Done

1. Could you also please link "additional producer and recording engineer" and "mixed" and "mastered" please?

Done

1. "conveying that emotional connection matters more than material possessions like designer clothing: "I don't have the world, can't give it to you, girl/But all that I can do is give this song to you."" - The two sentences need to be connected - you could say (which is seen in the line "...")

Done

1. "Robyn Ross of TV Guide opined that Justice "has shown off her singing skills" while saying that Thomas "is proving he's got talent as well"" - This needs a comma before "while" and can you please clarify that it is talking about the song?

Done

1. " Tiara B. of The Shade Room ranked the song fourth on her list titled "Victorious: The Top 10 Songs That Still Have Us Hooked", describing it as a "beautiful" track and one of the show's "most iconic duets"" - This needs a ref at the end of the sentence

Done

1. "remarking that Thomas had a "wonderful performance"." - I think "had" should be replaced (perhaps with "gave"?) and can you please specify where the performance was - in the original episode?

Done

1. Could you please add a free image or two?

Done

1. Is there no information on how the song is the same tune as the Favourite Foods song? I think this is quite essential information

Unfortunately, I could not find any sources saying that it has the same toon as the Favorite Foods song.

Once these have been addressed I will do a source spotcheck :) Please let me know if you need any help at all! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 04:20, 26 June 2025 (UTC)

DaniloDaysOfOurLives Thanks once again for your review! Let me know if anything else needs to be done! Shoot for the Stars (talk) 06:43, 27 June 2025 (UTC)

Hey, thank you so much for your changes! I have spotchecked Sources #3, #11 and #13 :) Well done! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 13:57, 27 June 2025 (UTC)

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