Talk:Sexuality in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

• 1

  1.a Y

  1.b Y

• 2

  2.a Y

  2.b Y

  2.c Y

  2.d Y

• 3

  3.a Y

  3.b Y

• 4

  4.a Y

• 5

  5.a Y

• 6

  6.a Y

  6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

• from not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship. suggest from close but not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship.
  • Done.

Tolkien's background

• and educated at boys' grammar schools suggest and educated at male-only grammar schools
  • Done.

Shieldmaiden

• Jackson does however make Aragorn far more romantic than do either Tolkien or Bakshi must mention how Bakshi directed The Lord of the Rings (1978 film), and link to him.
  • Done.

Officer-batman relationship

• The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality suggest The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality, in the eyes of scholars,
  • Added.

• @Chiswick Chap: That is all my suggestions, once information regarding Bakshi is added, I will pass the article. Additionally, feel free to revert any of my edits. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:25, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Thank you very much for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:58, 20 September 2021 (UTC)