Talk:Sahar Ajdamsani
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Jeeputer in topic Original research
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Original research
editSome parts of the Biography section contains original research. for example, the third paragraph says "many countries have written about her" and then refers to 2 sources in different languages showing that "many countries" are pointing to her.
Another example is where stating that "Although music in Iran is forbidden and prohibited for women, she has had many concerts". there's nothing about "forbidden musical activity for women in Iran" in sources. We know that this is true, but we need sources stating that this limits are related to her activity.
I did not review the rest, but there may be more examples.
Pinging Djm-leighpark because of reviewing paid contributions last year. Jeeputer Talk 12:52, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
