Talk:Sachio Ashida

Latest comment: 2 months ago by TarnishedPath in topic Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by TarnishedPath (talk) 11:58, 23 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Sachio Ashida rebuilt a guided missile computer and repurposed it for his experiments on brain tissue?
Created by ThaesOfereode (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 29 past nominations.

ThaesOfereode (talk) 19:27, 22 February 2026 (UTC).Reply

  • Really enjoyed this one. Article is new enough and long enough, it's well sourced, no copyvio issues and the language is neutral. QPQ has been completed. The hook is really interesting, though I have no access to the source. If it's not too much trouble please provide a quote, otherwise I will assume good faith.
  • Hello, thanks for the kind words! Here's the quote for ALT0, but let me know if you want quotes for any others: "This man who rebuilt piece by piece (from reading books) a guided missile computer and converted it for use in his own psychology-related experiments on brain tissue, could be considered one of the few masters of judo in the United States." (As an aside, you can always apply for Newspapers.com access at the Wikipedia Library, if you didn't already know!) ThaesOfereode (talk) 13:39, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

I found a few issues in the article itself, once you address them we can move forward:

  • "He also later worked on rebuilding an LGM-30 Minuteman missile computer as well." - "also" and "as well" are redundant.
  • "After receiving a master's degree in 1958, Ashida ultimately earned his doctoral degree in experimental psychology in 1963 Arnold." - Maybe "under Arnold"?
  • "Shortly thereafter, he was selected to be the judo coach for the United States during its participation in the 1976 Summer Olympics in Montreal." - Maybe make is more concise: "for the United States during the 1976 Summer Olympics in Montreal."?
  • "Ashida had been nominated by the consul at the Japanese consulate in Kansas City and a Japanese biochemistry professor at the University of Kansas, both of whom had been in attendance." - Maybe just "by the Japanese consul in Kansas City."?
  • "Their daughter Margaret was a STEM research administrator at the Battelle Memorial Institute and was an advocate for Asian Americans and women in STEM." - Since the previous sentence about Janet omitted "Their Daughter", I think it would be better to just begin the sentence with "Margaret".
  • Sure thing. ThaesOfereode (talk) 13:39, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • I think Selected works needs some attention. His name was omitted from most of the articles, which I understand, but the style of leaving a blank line instead is not something I've seen elsewhere in Wikipedia. I think You can just state the other bibliographical data without the names of the authors, and in the case of collaboration maybe add (with (name of second author)). I'm open to correction if there's something I'm missing.
  • The format of the References section is rather uncommon, based on what I've seen. Though the thing that stands out the most for me is the multiple pilcrows. Here too, please educate me if it's a misunderstanding on my part.
  • Uncommon maybe, but it's consistent, I think. I use it mostly to help GA reviewers find stuff quickly, though I imagine it is of help to the average reader who becomes interested in the original sources. ThaesOfereode (talk) 13:39, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

All in all - excellent article. I had a really good time reading it. TouchedWithFire (talk) 13:15, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Once again, thank you for the kind words and the review; I have fixed the above and hope you find it satisfactory. ThaesOfereode (talk) 13:39, 26 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
ALT0 approved and good to go! Sorry for the delay, I didn't get any notice that you had responded and I forgot to check in. Thanks ThaesOfereode for the explanations about the references, and thank you for the kind words too! I'll certainly be checking out Wikipedia Library. Thanks once more and may our paths cross again! TouchedWithFire (talk) 07:15, 2 March 2026 (UTC)Reply