Talk:Richard Mattessich

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Mdann52 in topic Draft

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hey all, the following draft has been submitted by the subject to replace the current page. I'd be greatful for some feedback. For OTRS, Mdann52 (talk) 09:19, 11 March 2015 (UTC) Reply

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Thanks for this suggestion, which has been implemented as much as possible. Some additional remarks:

  • Forthcoming publications are not to be used as reference. They are often not even listed in the selected publication section, because Wikipedia articles want to list the most notable publications, not the latest news. Yet they can be added as a courtesy.
  • Some rearrangements have been made, also to facilitate further expansion of the article
  • Some fact tags are added, where an additional source is required

I might take another look at the article soon, and might expand it some more. -- Mdd (talk) 13:20, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

MDD, I noticed the article just now, too, and i would make at least some small changes, like to be consistent in capitalization of book and article titles, and some minor spelling & sentence-level grammar changes. Hmm, then seeing this about edits being suggested, I'd also sort of review that too if a second opinion would be okay. I'll revisit here after 8-10 hours. --doncram 13:56, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
Feel free to do whatever you wish - I'm just passing this on from the email, I'm not going to get involved for (COI/whatever) reasons. Mdann52 (talk) 17:29, 11 March 2015 (UTC)Reply