Talk:Pikmin Finder

Latest comment: 7 months ago by Arconning in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: Captain Galaxy (talk · contribs) 14:35, 16 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 10:16, 18 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Shall review. Arconning (talk) 10:16, 18 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Captain Galaxy Here are some of the comments I can see on a first look! Arconning (talk) 13:37, 24 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Captain Galaxy Some more comments:
  • On December 31, 2024, Nintendo announced on the game's webpage that its services had been discontinued", considering this game was made for a promotion, would that be the reason why it shut down?
I think that would count as WP:NOR as Nintendo themselves never mentioned what the reason for discontinuation was. CaptainGalaxy 11:24, 26 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
 Done
Arconning (talk) 10:07, 26 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Arconning: I have gone ahead and answered the suggestions above. CaptainGalaxy 11:24, 26 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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  • " It is the second mobile game in the Pikmin franchise, following Pikmin Bloom, and is the seventh installment in the series overall.", I don't see this anywhere in the body?

Gameplay

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  • "Pikmin Finder is an augmented reality mobile game, utilising AR gameplay", should specify what AR means. Basically "augmented reality (AR)" then use "AR" for every mention after.
  •  Done

Development and release

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  • "The game was originally release to coincide", "released"
  •  Done
  • "Nintendo Live in Seattle, Washington ", just add a comma after this. Sorry if it's nitpicky
  •  Done
  • " to allow for easier play in whilst", wondering why "in" is here?
  •  Done Removed.

Reception

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  • "deemed nothing more", "deemed it nothing more"
  •  Done
  • "but acknowledge the game's", "but acknowledged the game's"
  •  Done

Media

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  • Images are properly licensed and are relevant to the article. All good here.

Refs

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  • Earwig's alright.
  • Ref checks: 2, 3, 7, 9. All good.

Misc

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  • No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.
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