Talk:Pahl Davis

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Review: August 25, 2025. (Reviewed version).

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GA review

Latest comment: 9 months ago7 comments2 people in discussion

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:10, 25 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:41, 20 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:43, 21 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:43, 21 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

the Wisconsin–Oshkosh Titans and Marquette Hilltoppers I would add another "the" before "Marquette"
He attended Oconto High School and after that, attended Oshkosh State Normal School (now known as the University of Wisconsin–Oshkosh) and Marquette University.-->He attended Oconto High School before moving on to Oshkosh State Normal School (now known as the University of Wisconsin–Oshkosh) and then Marquette University.
and according to the Ironwood Daily Globe he was considered one of the school's greatest linemen.
of the National Football League (NFL) just need "NFL" here
He worked in insurance add "also" after "He"
The last four sentences end with "He..." sentences. Can you try to change one to break up the repetition?
- Changed one to "Davis..."
References:
- All are reliable for what is being cited
- All are consistently formatted
- Spot checks: 1, 6, 11, 13
  - Why isn't there a link for reference 15?
    - It was added by User:Doremo in 2014 without a link; I'm assuming its offline (couldn't find it on Newspapers.com).

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:33, 21 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:21, 25 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
- I replaced the source with a Newspapers.com one. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:09, 25 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

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