Talk:Morgan Frost
Latest comment: 4 years ago by HickoryOughtShirt?4 in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
- I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:04, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
Review
edit- Are acronyms (OHL, AHL) needed in the lead if they are never used again? They are explained in the body anyways.
Removed — GhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
- Fix the dash on 2018-19 OHL season WL so it bypasses the redirect
- Fix WL on hat trick to bypass redirect
- Recommend changing All-Star in Awards and honours to All-Star Game or All-Star Classic
HickoryOughtShirt?4 I have also changed the lede to reflect that (for the time being, at least) he's a prospect in the Phantoms and not a full-fledged Flyer. Really thought he'd make the team out of camp, but... — GhostRiver 17:57, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
Continued review
edit- Please mention Frost's mother Dana
- You do not need ETA in brackets because it is never used again
- Change Zach Senyshyn to Zachary Senyshyn to bypass the redirect
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 Everything has been addressed; thank you! — GhostRiver 19:57, 9 November 2021 (UTC)



