Talk:Historiography of the fall of the Western Roman Empire

Latest comment: 5 months ago by HKLionel in topic Short description
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The help page about "factual errors" led me to post here since this article is currently protected against vandalism.

There is a grammatical error in the article:

"A set of coins from the later years of the Western Roman Empire shows dramatic evidence of numismatic adulteration"

should say "A set of coins ... show dramatic evidence..."

"set of coins" is a singular collective noun; the verb needs be singular.

Mining, Lead, and the Environment

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Are these really reasons for the collapse or the decline of the (Western) Roman Empire? These problems might exist (and would have existed), but this would affect the East just as equally as the West.

From the various theories, the common themes seem to be

(1) The military was no longer loyal to Rome; they only fought for financial gains promised by generals with political ambitions.

(2) Change in social mores resulting from the rise of Christianity (money was no longer spent on public infrastructures, but instead on the Church)

(3) Economical collapse (hyperinflation and high taxes forced citizens to seek refuge in proto-feudal states operated by wealthy local landowners).

(4) Political instability (generals and soldiers realized they would profit better from constantly fighting one another)

(5) Invasions from Germans, and other Barbarians.

Points (1) to (4) would be prevalent to both sides of the Empire. However, point (5) affected the West much more often than the East. So the fall of the (Western) Roman Empire was really a result of its inability to fend off invaders. On the other hand, as Ward-Perkins stressed, the geographical location of Constantinople alone was enough reason for the longevity of the Eastern Empire, despite haved shared many of the same problems as its western counterpart. --Bart weisser (talk) 05:05, 29 May 2009

Classification of theories needed!

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There are now 18 various theories listed in this article. I think they should be grouped into a few 'schools' so that the reader gets a better sense of the subject; otherwise it's grapeshot.

Here's a possible list of schools: 1. invasions (heather, bury) 2. systemic decay (gibbon (?), vegetius, toynbee) 3. transformation (pirenne, late antiquity) 4. monocausal (lead poisoning, plague, demineralization or whatever).

Probably my list is patchy but the list of theories as it stands is a bit of a mess.

Anybody volunteers?

Bazuz (talk)(UTC) Bazuz, 21:00, 2 February 2011 (GMT)

Edit request on 29 January 2012

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The von Mises section would benefit from a link to this page: Roman_currency, as it gives extensive information concerning the debasement of the Roman currency. As an aside, I do not think it is accurate to have the von Mises section, which is an economic argument, under the "Decay owing to general malaise" heading. Economics is not a subset of malaise.

Request for Edit on Section About Bryan Ward-Perkins

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I believe there is a minor mistake in Bryan Ward-Perkin's section under "Theories and explanations of a fall."

In the excerpt it says: "...invasions caused long-term damage..." I believe that it shouldn't be invasions, but instead "political instability caused long-term damage...."

My edit makes more sense if you consider the context, but admittedly I'm not 100% sure.

Short description

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The current short description "Area of study on decline in antiquity" is rather baffling unless decoded in parallel with the the article title (Historiography is an area of study; the fall of the Western Roman Empire is an instance of decline in antiquity). Is it clearer than no description at all? Can we do better? I'll put an invitation on WT:CGR. NebY (talk) 16:59, 9 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

I agree. “Area of study of the collapse of the Roman Empire’s western court and administration” if you want a precise alternative. Biz (talk) 21:35, 9 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
I agree, "decline" has been used historically but I know a lot of later scholars (especially of the Mideival period) disagree with the idea that it was a "decline" overall for the whole west, many today prefer to think of it simply as change. (YMMV)★Trekker (talk) 14:36, 10 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
This is case where no short description is necessary. The title is clear. Ifly6 (talk) 15:26, 13 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
I don't see why it is baffling if, as you said, it can be decoded in parallel with the article title. I believe that the specific terms in the title are not sufficiently self-explanatory enough to the average reader such that the article warrants a blank SD, but feel free to restore one as I have no involvement with the subject matter. I have no views on whether or not "decline" is accurate, I merely took it from the hatnote as another way to describe the title. HKLionel TALK 08:50, 22 January 2026 (UTC)Reply