Talk:Fred Borak/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 17:38, 17 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:14, 19 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:14, 19 April 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• as team captain as a senior in 1932–33-->as team captain during his senior in 1932–33
  • Done.
• and was described in the paper as-->and was reported in the paper as
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• make the varsity as-->make varsity as
  • Done.
• he struggled with grades-->he struggled academically
  • Done.
• was advised not to play by who?
  • Added who.
• "flunking"-->failing
  • Done.
• situation, and he dropped out of comma not needed
  • Done.
• and was described as having excelled
  • Done.
• but later reinstated add "were" after "but"
  • Done.
• He reportedly had his best season
  • Done.
• in football back the. --> "then"
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• after signing, sent a note add "he" before "sent"
  • Done.
• References:
  • All appear consistently formatted and reliable for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 2, 5, 6, 9, 12, 15, 19, 23, 32 all look good
  • 32 mentions he was in the city's engineering department before serving in the military. Could add that tidbit.
    • Done.

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:06, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:16, 21 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:10, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.