Talk:Eric Gilbertson (climber)/GA1

Latest comment: 7 months ago by It is a wonderful world in topic GA review

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Nominator: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 14:44, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply


Seems like a relatively quick one. Will review. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Hey @Buidhe, I am happy with all your changes and am promoting this to GA. Nice work! :) IAWW (talk) 14:31, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) Magenta clockclock

Lead

Lead is good and an appropriate size for a short article like this.

Mountaineering

What is the "MIT Outing Club" and why is it notable enough for inclusion? IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Not only is this mentioned in multiple independent sources, the Gilbertson brothers state that they "attribute much of their success and interest in mountaineering to the MIT Outing Club (MITOC). While at MIT, Matthew and Eric were active members of the MITOC, and held various positions including president and members of the board of directors." (t · c) buidhe 01:52, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
Definitely notable for inclusion. I'm not sure why I raised this tbh IAWW (talk) 14:26, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Gilbertson said that climbing Pobeda was more difficult than climbing K2 without supplementary oxygen: Did he climb Pobeda with or without supplementary oxygen? That should be clearer. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Source does not say. It would be original research, but oxygen is rarely used on peaks under 8000m. (t · c) buidhe 23:33, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
Fair IAWW (talk) 14:27, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Surveying

He discovered that the summit of Mount Saint Helens has been eroding at a rate of 4 inches (100 mm) annually since 1989, and had lost so much elevation it was no longer one of the 100 highest peaks in Washington: WP:CINS error. Suggest adding "it" rather than removing the comma as the sentence is quite long. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

In this survey, he worked with Larry Signani, who had conducted three earlier surveys of the mountain for the Lands Surveyors Association of Washington: Cut or move to a footnote as unnecessary detail IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

determining that East Crestone 14,299.3 feet (4,358.4 m) high: Missing verb IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

 Done (t · c) buidhe 02:20, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Sources Magenta clockclock

Citation numbers based on this version.

I think some of the more exceptional claims like:

  • Along with Matthew, Gilbertson discovered the high points of Togo, Guinea-Bissau and Ivory Coast
  • Gilbertson became the third American to achieve the Snow Leopard award by summiting all five peaks above 7,000 metres (23,000 ft) in the former Soviet Union
  • Gilbertson and his brother were the first to climb the high points of all 50 states in the United States

Should have more than one citation if at all possible. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) checkY

No issues for GA

Reliability (Criterion 2b) checkY

I think all the web sources can be considered reliable enough. Most are subject specialized news sources, which appear reliable based on their staff.

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) checkY

[7a]: checkY

[7b]: checkY

[10]: checkY

[16]: checkY

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) checkY

Earwig finds nothing. I found no issues on the spot check.

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) checkY

Seems to include pretty much all the information available

Stable (Criterion 5) checkY

It's quite new and I read the two previous deletion discussions. It seems that this page is now notable though, as several new sources mention him, including two which have his name in the title. I don't see any reason to suspect this won't be stable post GA review.

Media checkY

No images unfortunately

Tags (Criterion 6a) checkY

Captions (Criterion 6b) checkY

Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

Suggest archiving non-dead links to prevent link rot. It's a tedious task, but in a year or two, some of the links will almost certainly be dead. Also it means people outside the US (like me!) will be able to access [14] and [17]. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Usually there is a bot that comes around and does this across the entire GA corpus. (t · c) buidhe 02:18, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
Oh this is good to know! Do you know what it is by any chance? IAWW (talk) 14:29, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

The first sentence I think would be a bit better if his most notable activities (mountain climbing and surveying) were mentioned first, before his other positions. IAWW (talk) 16:36, 24 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

I have partly implemented this, I don't entirely agree but it's the custom for the person's day job to be placed first even if it's not what they're notable for. (t · c) buidhe 02:18, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
Sorry for the changes, I just found that he had donated some files to Commons and one of his papers was published today (t · c) buidhe 02:15, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
I looked through these changes and found no issues. IAWW (talk) 14:30, 25 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
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