Talk:Edward Watkin

Latest comment: 4 years ago by 2A00:23C7:6E0D:A401:C199:E19F:C101:174C in topic Introduction

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Added some references from http://www.oxforddnb.com/view/article/36762 (if you are in the UK your library ticket number will almost certainly get you free access to it).

I removed some excess stuff about the London Extension - it wasn't about Watkin - and has an own article anyway eg Great_Central_Main_Line.

Some bit remain unreferenced - I've marked most of these.

One part I question is the bit about the Canadian Pacific - the odnb article doesn't mention it at all - but does mention the Grand Trunk Railway. Can someone else check this out.. If he was involved in both then both should be mentioned - or is there some mix up??

Prof.Haddock (talk) 20:47, 30 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

The article Manchester, Sheffield and Lincolnshire Railway also contains a lot of political detail about Watkin, which might be better dealt with here.Prof.Haddock (talk) 20:48, 30 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

Extensive additions and amendments.

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GScargill (talk) 15:03, 31 July 2018 (UTC) GEOFF SCARGILLReply

Reply 02-AUG-2018

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Opening section: "nine different British Railway companies" should be "six". These were East London; Manchester Sheffield & Lincolnshire; Metropolitan; Aylesbury & Buckingham; Neath&Brecon; South Eastern. See loc cit Hodgkins pp706-720. Biography: "mill business" should be "cotton warehouse". See loc cit Hodgkins p2. Biography: "at Rose Hill, Northenden, a suburb of Manchester, in a house..." should be "in Northenden, then a village in Cheshire, now a suburb of Manchester, in Rose Hill House". Railways (final sentence): "creation of the MS&LR's 'London Extension, Sheffield to Marylebone, the Great Central Main Line, opened in 1899" should be "creation of the 'London Extension', which linked the MS&LR to the Metropolitan Railway between Annersley, north of Nottingham, and Quainton Road, north of Aylesbury, to form the Great Central Railway, opened in 1899." See loc cit Hodgkins p603 and Greaves loc cit p139 Channel Tunnel (second paragraph): "Liberal Pary Leader" should be "Prime Minister" Notes: "12 Greaves etc". This is a substantial biography of Watkin (just reprinted) and should be listed in the Reference section, along with the other biography listed, by Hodgkins.GScargill (talk) 08:17, 10 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Introduction

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'He was an ambitious visionary' sounds a bit obsequious.  Preceding unsigned comment added by 2a00:23c7:6e0d:a401:c199:e19f:c101:174c (talk) 14:00, 11 April 2022 (UTC)Reply