Talk:Cheyenne Mountain High School

GA review

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Nominator: Tokeamour (talk · contribs) 19:10, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Bgsu98 (talk · contribs) 21:42, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

Hello... I will do this review. Bgsu98 (Talk) 21:42, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Drive-by comments (9/20/25)

General User:Tokeamour: This article has several glaring issues.

• "History", "mathematics", and "science" should not be capitalized. Y
• "High school" is not a hyphenated term. Y
• "Alumni" should not be capitalized. Y
• "Red-Tailed Hawk" should not be capitalized. Y
• AP does not offer French Literature or German Literature.Y
• The alumni section is a mess. I strongly recommend restructuring this section into either a list format or a table format. Either one would be appropriate.Y Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:29, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

Understood, the issues will be addressed immediately Tokeamour (talk) 22:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Do you mind using the format "P" (paragraph) "S" (sentence) ? so for example PS1 would be first paragraph 1st sentence. Tokeamour (talk) 22:41, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Errors fixed, please assess the format of the beginning of the list and I will continue formatting all of it, thanks. Tokeamour (talk) 23:00, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

That is better, but the names should be listed alphabetically by last name.In addition, if they are an Olympic or World Championship medalist, that can also be mentioned. For example:

• Jeremy Abbott, 2014 Olympic bronze medalist

Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:06, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 that was an issue already and there was a maintenance tag saying use surname Tokeamour (talk) 23:09, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

I understand and totally agree though. Tokeamour (talk) 23:10, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

I like the idea you have I will do that but for the alphabetical format it might be out of the conversation as I don't have control over it. See maintenance tag in this link as it is not present as I have done what it requested https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cheyenne_Mountain_High_School&oldid=1309958393, again I totally understand I'm just being bold. Tokeamour (talk) 23:14, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

YNothing in that maintenance tag says anything about how to alphabetize. The standard is to alphabetize persons by last name. Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:18, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 It does check source edit its invisible comment prior to my edits Tokeamour (talk) 23:25, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

You can ignore that invisible comment.Y Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:38, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Understood, thanks for getting back! Tokeamour (talk) 23:43, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Alphabetized list as required will do the same to pargraph Tokeamour (talk) 23:53, 20 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Complete with additional request (Jeremy Abbott, 2014 Olympic bronze medalistParagraph still not done. Tokeamour (talk) 00:22, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

Y You will want to remove those skaters from the paragraph above the list. You will also want to reformat those other paragraphs into lists. Bgsu98 (Talk) 00:26, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Understood task will be done soon Tokeamour (talk) 00:31, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Please check my progress Tokeamour (talk) 01:03, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 additional image inserted and will complete the next task when ready. Tokeamour (talk) 01:32, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Addressed a total of four citations requested from the other rater as I had it independently rated by a wikiproject by prior to nomination, this should make it easier for you to. Tokeamour (talk) 18:50, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 User NeoGaze's concerns have been addressed, who rated the article a day prior to nomination and your review. Tokeamour (talk) 19:13, 21 September 2025 (UTC)

Comments (9/22/25)

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User:Tokeamour: I have numerous comments and concerns. Article Quick Link: Cheyenne Mountain High School

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Lead

The yellow highlighted parts are parts reassessed blue is not

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• You say the school "specializes" in "courses such as English, history, mathematics, and science." Literally every high school in the U.S. offers courses in English, history, mathematics, and science. Unless there is something unique about their offerings, this sounds like just another typical high school.
• Recommend removing "entire" from "the entire district".
• Recommend wikilinking equestrian.
• "Alumni" should not be capitalized unless it is the first word in the sentence.
• Remove "a total of" from "a total of one Medal of Honor recipient".
• The citation for Lindstrom belongs in the alumni section toward the end of the article, not in the lead. Only include citations in the lead if they are for statements that do not appear later in the text.
• Rewrite "United States Olympic God Medalists" as "U.S. Olympic gold medalists".
• How is the "International Championship of Whatever" a "national" competition? International-national
• "The Cheyenne Mountain High School has participated..." unless they have stopped participating.

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History (Development)

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• Small numbers should be written out (ie. "one", "three", "nine").
• "In 1876, the school had more families settling in the Colorado Territory, and District 12 constructed an additional 6 classrooms." Recommend rewriting as "In 1876, as more families settled in the Colorado Territory, District 12 constructed an additional six classrooms."
• * Change "and brought" to "bringing".
• Change "during 1889" to "in 1889".
• Change"would go underway" to "began".
• "during which the trolley, still remained operations from downtown Colorado Springs, and later The Broadmoor, and the Broadmoor Golf Club, built by Spencer Penrose, and golf course architect Donald Ross, in 1918." I literally have no idea what this is trying to say.
• change "During 1945" to "In 1945".
• Change "the students increased..." to "the student population increased..."
• "During 1945, the students increased to around 200 allowing for opportunities in nature which the teachers incorporated into their daily education for their students." Holy whiplash, Batman. The phrase that comes to mind when I read this sentence was post hoc ergo propter hoc. The two halves of the sentence do not go together. Why would taking classes outdoors depend on an increased student population? Also, this sentence is unsourced.

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History (Mascot)

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• The Cheyenne Mountain Indian was the mascot, since the text goes on to explain that they've changed mascots. Also, find an appropriate wikilink for this particular tribe so the reader will know which tribe the mascot was based on.
• "High school" should not be capitalized unless it is part of the name of the school.
• Change "has been" to "had been".
• Put a period after "controversy" and start a new sentence afterward, or rewrite to make the sentence flow better.
• "Limited due to the COVID−19 pandemic (2019–2023)..." Huh, what? What does this have to do with a protest?
• Recommend removing "taking place at night" from the end of the sentence.
• Capitalize "school board" as it is part of a proper noun.
• Capitalize "Native American" and supply an appropriate wikilink.
• Change "the traditional headdress" to "a traditional headdress" as there are more than one. Also recommend finding an appropriate wikilink so readers will know what type of headdress is being described.
• No source given for the $25,000 penalty.
• Make "red-tailed hawk" singular.

More to come. Bgsu98 (Talk) 15:39, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

Image review (9/22/25)

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Comment:_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _  Article Quick Link: Cheyenne Mountain High School

Images have appropriate licenses and captions, but two images lack alt-text. Please add appropriate alt-text (MOS:ALTTEXT).

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Comments (9/22/25)

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Enrolment... Enrollment

• First, it's Enrollment. Y
• Recommend deleting "the student population annual enrolment being relatively stable."
• Change "five school years" to "five years".
• "five years since 2025" means 2030.There's something wonky about this sentence.
• Recommend removing "at Cheyenne Mountain" from the second paragraph.

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Awards

• Insert "of" after U.S. News & World Report.
• Lower-case High School Rankings.
• De-wikileak Colorado.

Curriculum

• Lower-case "social science".
• How many units of phys ed?
• Change "AP Language courses" to "language courses".
• What is meant by "withdraw fail, withdraw pass"?

User:Tokeamour: I have removed the strikethroughs for items above that remain unfixed. It's unfortunate that some of your corrections were lost. I have also added additional comments. Bgsu98 (Talk) 21:46, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

Hey, @Bgsu98! Don't worry about it! As a I feel bad I even mentioned it! (note:it did stress me out) What matters is you were able to find the ones not able to go through due to it! Just keep being bold and that's all the thanks I need. Tokeamour (talk) 22:32, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 And if any images would be better from another angle that can be provided and at a better resolution as I have a professional camera. Tokeamour (talk) 22:34, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

(this is completely extra) Tokeamour (talk) 22:58, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

Drive-by comment (9/22/25) =

Merge the second and third paragraphs of the lead as they both deal with the school’s history. Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:04, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

Article Quick Link: Cheyenne Mountain High School

Y Done @Bgsu98 Addressed Tokeamour (talk) 23:11, 22 September 2025 (UTC)

More edits to come! Tokeamour (talk) 23:14, 22 September 2025 (UTC)}}

Comments (9/23/25)

Lead

• Remove this sentence: "The school has academic courses such as English, history, mathematics and science." Literally every high school in the United States has this; it is nothing special.
• "Operated by the Cheyenne Mountain..."
• Recommend then merging the first two paragraphs.
• Recommend removing this sentence: "Major constructions and renovations were undertaken in 1874, 1876, 1962, and 2016."
• Clarify "the children of ranchers" because ranchers themselves weren't going to school.
• Recommend removing "known for its dairy farms" as it has no bearing.
• Recommend splitting this section – "Cheyenne Mountain has educated a Medal of Honor recipient, Floyd K. Lindstrom. Notable alumni include multiple U.S. Olympic gold medalists, and professional athletes, such as former NFL player Matt Darwin and MLB players Brandon McCarthy and Dave Mlicki.[10]" – and moving it to after the last paragraph.
• Then combine the second and third paragraphs as they both deal with extracurriculars and school recognitions. The new third paragraph will be about alumni. The lead will have only three paragraphs total.

History (Development)

• "...named after the Cheyenne Mountain"
• "The school hosted grades one through twelfth grade. But by 1890 the school year was expanded to about seven months." — Recommend rewriting as "The school hosted grades one through twelfth. By 1890, the school year was expanded to about seven months."
• Remove the years following Railway System.
• "In 1899, proposal and construction of a new school would begin due to the growing number of students." — Recommend rewriting as "In 1899, construction of a new school began due to the growing number of students." Also, this statement is unsourced.
• Recommend deleting this entire section: "In 1906, land was purchased that would become the site of Cheyenne Mountain Junior High, during which the trolley, part of the Colorado Springs and Interurban Railway System, still remained operations from downtown Colorado Springs. This later would become The Broadmoor Hotel, and the Broadmoor Golf Club, built by Spencer Penrose, and the golf course by architect Donald Ross, after the end of the trolleys operations.[15][16]" as it has nothing to do with the high school.

History (Mascot)

• You don't need to continue repeating "Cheyenne Mountain School Board" over and over. After the first use, simply use "school board" instead.
• "On July 7, 2021, the Cheyenne Mountain School Board changed the mascot to the red-tailed hawk." — Recommend rewriting as "On July 7, 2021, the school board adopted the red-tailed hawk as the new mascot."

User:Tokeamour: Please take a look at these additional comments. Bgsu98 (Talk) 20:01, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Thanks I apologize I was taking photographs I will have completed everything needed by end of day if you can add anything else it would make it go quicker i'm a fast editor, (when not taking photos) Tokeamour (talk) 22:14, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

also got diagnosed with a trauma related stress disorder today, so im taking today slow, and photography makes me happy Tokeamour (talk) 22:20, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

But regardless back to fixing the task at hand! Tokeamour (talk) 22:20, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

Do what makes you happy. 😃 Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:21, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

If you have things ready, throw it at me! Tokeamour (talk) 22:52, 23 September 2025 (UTC)

Comments (9/25/25)

Okay, let's talk about the formatting of the list of figure skaters. That's how I got this GA; I recognized the name of this school from its skating alumni. When establishing a skater's notability, the highlights are: 1) an Olympic medal, 2) a World Championships medal, and 3) a U.S. national championship medal. A medal at the Four Continents Figure Skating Championships or the ISU Grand Prix of Figure Skating Final are maybes. Anything else is a no. The wikilinks need to be to the specific competition (not just U.S. Figure Skating Championships, for example. So, Jeremy Abbott, for example, should be credited as such:

• Jeremy Abbott: 2014 Olympic bronze medalist, 2008 Grand Prix of Figure Skating gold medalist, two-time Four Continents Championships bronze medalist (2007, 2011), four-time U.S. national champion (2009–10, 2012, 2014)

User:Tokeamour: Work on cleaning up that formatting. Additionally, each skater will need a source that verifies their medals and that they are a Cheyenne Mountain alumnus. These may be two separate sources. Bgsu98 (Talk) 16:02, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

Okay, I will begin to get that done some time today Tokeamour (talk) 18:20, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Anything I should know about Jeremy Abbott, (I saw you know him, through your userpage) Tokeamour (talk) 18:22, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 The citation for the Colorado Governor is kind of sketchy I did not add it your thoughts? I wanted to leave it up to the reviewer. Tokeamour (talk) 20:58, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

I did Jeremy's formatting for you, so you can just copy/paste the code. You can also use it as an example of how to do the other skaters. Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:50, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

Also, the World Junior Figure Skating Championships are good, too. I forgot about that one. Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:52, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

got it. Tokeamour (talk) 23:04, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Done. Tokeamour (talk) 23:46, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

If you find an error please let me know and I will fix it immediately. Tokeamour (talk) 23:47, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

I have fixed the formatting for the figure skaters. Bgsu98 (Talk) 10:29, 28 September 2025 (UTC)

Understood, as I didn't know what you meant, respectfully when you siad formating Tokeamour (talk) 19:04, 28 September 2025 (UTC)

For future reference, how should it be formatted? Tokeamour (talk) 20:52, 28 September 2025 (UTC)

I’m sorry, I didn’t mean for that to sound snippy. It was just easier to fix myself rather than explain how, but you can look at the coding and formatting for future use. The other section of athletes will also need fixed up. Since they’re not sentences, they shouldn’t end with periods. Also, you don’t want to use acronyms like MLB without having already used the full expression (Major League Baseball). You also want precise wikilinks (as precise as possible). Bgsu98 (Talk) 23:20, 28 September 2025 (UTC)

This makes more sense, thanks! Tokeamour (talk) 23:25, 28 September 2025 (UTC)

I realized that MLB is in the lead so I can change it to Major League Baseball and NFL. Tokeamour (talk) 01:49, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

Y MLB without having already used the full expression Y fixed Tokeamour (talk) 01:51, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Alright I did some formatting you can assess if it needs more of course cause your the reviewer Tokeamour (talk) 03:13, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

Comments (9/29/25)

We are close to being able to wrap this up!

• * You can delete the entire section See also. All of those links are already part of the article. See also is for related topics that are not linked as part of the article.

Athletics

Let's look at the Athletics section, which I believe is the only one we haven't tackled yet.

• "Cheyenne Mountain has offered athletic programs since the 20th century." That is an extremely vague timeframe. Probably best to just delete it.
• "...the school offers 28 varsity sports.".
• "...for the sports program"
• "tennis" is misspelled in the second paragraph.
• There is a lot of confusion with the listing of sports in the second paragraph, since it includes many sports not listed in the first paragraph. In addition, you talk about having won titles in certain sports (like basketball) without clarifying whether it was boys or girls.
• There is mention of an a capella championship in the middle of a paragraph about sports, in a subsection about athletics. That needs to be separated out into a separate paragraph, in a separate subsection about other extracurriculars. Also, what other extracurricular activities does this school offer? Band, choir, orchestra? The article's lead mentions several activities like theater and yearbook. This is where that information should go. In addition, everything here needs full sourcing.

Olympic and professional athletes

• No comma needed between Major League Baseball and pitcher.
• What position was Matt Darwin when he played for the Philadelphia Eagles? Use that instead of "player". Also, no need to include National Football League since the team is already specified.
• You say Amro El Geziry qualified to represent the U.S. at the 2020 Summer Olympics. Does that mean he competed at those Olympics?

• Steve Johnson was number one in what national rankings? Additional, what team did he play for? (If it's multiple teams like those baseball players, then there's no need to be more specific; but if his career was dominated by playing for one team, you would want to specify that team.)

This was rescued from the original articles list of Alumni's it is not adequately sourced, as the citation used is not the right person in good faith I am going to delete it in the effort of Wikipedia:Bold, and to keep the article's current quality (not to be confused with Wikipedia:Content Assessment.) I would also like to mention that the citation is a dead link upon further investigation further decreasing quality standards.(Note:I did search online with no result), in addition a individual near the school working at the elementary school is named the same name and I asked if the individual is an alumni, the individual is not (note technically asking the local's is Wikipedia:ORIGINALRESEARCH but I had a strong hunch bro wasn't an alumni and I have looked for a possible reference I believe a kid put this in in the original article prior to my edits to GA. The individual is allegedly a GYM teacher at Pinion Valley Elementary School, in Colorado Springs as someone who knows him personally, in good faith this has been removed from the alumni section, I cant imagine what this would of caused if it were left unchecked)Tokeamour (talk) 23:00, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

User:Tokeamour: Let me know if you have any questions! Bgsu98 (Talk) 13:52, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Hey if your available, I will try to get this done today, and you can review my contributions made to the article and your suggestions, for this area. Tokeamour (talk) 22:36, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Please review my comment thanks, I have done further research into Steve Johnson. Tokeamour (talk) 23:03, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 What position is T-C, (Matt Darwin's Position) as I am unable to figure that out (I'm not good with football)? Tokeamour (talk) 23:36, 29 September 2025 (UTC)

I got that for you. (I had to look it up.) Bgsu98 (Talk) 01:30, 30 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 90% done or something with requested stuff btw Tokeamour (talk) 02:13, 30 September 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for your help. Tokeamour (talk) 02:19, 30 September 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Complete, let me know if there are any significant issues to be fixed. Tokeamour (talk) 02:33, 30 September 2025 (UTC)

If you need a couple more days it's totally okay assuming your busy Tokeamour (talk) 03:46, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Feel free to take longer if your busy Tokeamour (talk) 03:47, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

@Tokeamour We're going to get this done this weekend! 😃 Bgsu98 (Talk) 06:41, 3 October 2025 (UTC)

Comments (10/4/25)

• The provided source (and his own wikipedia article) do not support the statement that Canyon Barry was a student at Duke University or on a NCAA championship team.

Athletics

• "tennis" is misspelled.
• Are tennis, cheer, cross country, soccer, swimming, golf, lacrosse, track and field, and basketball coed?
• "boy's and girl's basketball" should be "boys and girls basketball" (get rid of the apostrophes). Ditto for all sports.
• The provided source only supports the statement that CMHS won a fourth title in boys golf; it says nothing about all of those other sports you have listed. All of those need sources.

User:Tokeamour: Please see the above comments. Bgsu98 (Talk) 00:50, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Read Y Tokeamour (talk) 17:10, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 "tennis, cheer, cross country, soccer, swimming, golf, lacrosse, track and field, and basketball" I will look into it, and the source for the 100 state titles should be easy. Tokeamour (talk) 17:11, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

"Tennis" Tokeamour (talk) 17:11, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Canyon Barry has been removed thank you for informing me. Tokeamour (talk) 17:23, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

He has a wikipedia article, so he is notable. Is he a Cheyenne Mountain alumnus? If so, then he should be listed. Just clarify what he is actually notable for. Bgsu98 (Talk) 17:25, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

Understood @Bgsu98 I will revert my edit in a second. Tokeamour (talk) 17:26, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

Got it one second. Tokeamour (talk) 20:57, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 "Teams at CMHS have won 114 Colorado State Championships since 1958! Click here to view All CMHS State Team Championships! Girls Tennis Singles State Champions."-cmhs.org Tokeamour (talk) 17:25, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Canyon Barry now cited with proper school. Tokeamour (talk) 17:32, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Both cited and are now true and factual statements. Tokeamour (talk) 17:33, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

Tennis is how you spell it... oops Tokeamour (talk) 17:41, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 All are done. Tokeamour (talk) 17:41, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Cheer is and the rest are not Tokeamour (talk) 18:37, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

As there is no proof of Cheyenne Mountain saying boys cant join. Tokeamour (talk) 18:37, 5 October 2025 (UTC)

Image review (10/7/25)

All images have appropriate licenses, captions, and alt-text. Bgsu98 (Talk) 20:55, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

If there is anything that needs better descriptions let me know. Tokeamour (talk) 21:26, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

(alt-text) Tokeamour (talk) 21:26, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

Final comments (10/7/25)

Let's get this wrapped up tonight.

• The last sentence in the section titled Civic engagement and clubs needs a source.
• Under Music, what is Slate?

Bgsu98 (Talk) 21:34, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

Fair enough I will get that done in the next hour unless I lose internet ^Humour Tokeamour (talk) 21:38, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Just so you don't need to switch tabs: "The Cheyenne A Cappella Slate was the International Championship of High School A Capella runner-up in 2006." Fixed Tokeamour (talk) 21:58, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Citations are done Tokeamour (talk) 22:05, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

@Bgsu98 Complete. Tokeamour (talk) 22:08, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

I have finished polishing up the prose. Random spot-check of sources also checks out. Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:29, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.