Talk:Chet Adams/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:03, 15 November 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:14, 17 November 2025 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:14, 17 November 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• Adams was put out on loan to the Green Bay Packers,-->Adams was loaned to the Green Bay Packers,
• When Adams returned from duty-->When Adams returned from his military duty
• In his first season with the rams, capitalize "rams"
• He started all 11 games in 1941 as well while serving as the team's placekicker, and his play led to his first selection to the NFL's All-Star game.-->The next season he again started all 11 games while also serving as the team's placekicker; his play that season led to his first selection to the NFL's All-Star game.
• from the Rams after the Rams suspended operations-->from the Rams after the team suspended operations
• move to Los Angeles with the team, and the Rams sued him in federal remove comma
• described as the Cleveland Rams, and its name had remove comma
• had ceased to exist, and that Adams therefore remove comma
• In the last few paragraphs, you could section link to All-America Football Conference playoffs for the individual championship games. Just a recommendation.
• References:
  • All appear appropriate for what is being cited
  • All are consistently formatted
  • Spot checks: 3, 6, 8, 12, 16, 21

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:55, 17 November 2025 (UTC)

All issues fixed, thanks for the review! Hopefully in the coming months I can jump back into rewriting articles from scratch, I think I'm running low on the almost done ones in any case. Wizardman 02:43, 20 November 2025 (UTC)

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:39, 21 November 2025 (UTC)

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